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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am writing it at very first time if there is any mistake pardon me
part 1
sanchi is working at kitchen when dhruv came hugs her from behind
sanchi:ye tum kya kar rahe ho
dhruv:kya kar raha hoon
s:chodo mujhe koi dekhlega toh kya sochega
dv:unko jo sochna hai sochne do mujhe koi farak nahi padta
s:dv please chodo mujhe
dv:theek hai ek sharath par aapko chod deta hoon
s:kounsi sharath
dv:yahi ki mujhe kiss chahiye
s:kiss nahi milega
dv:dena hain toh deejiye warna apki marji
s:nahi dungi matlab nahi dungi
dv:theek hai then he starts kissing her from jaw line to neck and he kissing passionately and moving to her more closer
s:dhruv chodo mujhe ye tum kya kar rahe ho
dv:kya kar raha hoon main toh mere janeman ke sath flirt kar raha hoon aapko koi problem hain after listening this sanchi feels shy
and she is trying hardly to push him and he pulls her back hugs her passionately and sanchi hugs him tightly
part 2
s:i love u dv
dv:i love u too i can't live without you sanchi hugs him more tightly
s:tum mujhe chod ke kabhi mat jana
dv:agar aapki izazat ho to main hamesha aapko mere bahon mein bharloonga
sanchi beta kya kar rahi ho kitchen mein itni dher thak after hearing this they became a part from their passionate hug
nani:sanchi tum kyo itna kam karti hain jao aram karo
s:bas abhi jaa rahi hoon nani then nani noticed dv
nani:are dv tum kab aye ho
dv:bas abhi naniji kaisi hai aapki tabiyat
nani:behetar hain abhi lekin tum kitchen kya kar rahe ho
dv:main toh sanchiji se halwa recipe mang raha tha hai na sanchiji
s:ha...haan nani
nani:batado bathado ache se bathado saying this nani goes to her room
s:dv aaj toh hamari band baj jati nani ne hume ise dekhliya toh socho kya hota
dv:kya hota hamuri shaadi kardete then dv hugs her from behind
s:chodo mujhe shaadi ke bare mein baad mein socho pehle hamare ghar walon ko kaise manana hain woh socho
dv:woh toh mujh par chodiye pehle aap mujhe ek...ek..ek...(he is moving close to her then sanchi slaps him literally)
s:aur kuch chahiye
dv:mujhe tappad nahi kiss chahiye
s:dv yeh kya bachpana hain chodo mujhe
dv:sachiji isme bachpana wali kya baat hain mein toh ek kiss hi toh mang raha hoon de dona please...he is moving closer and sanchi is feeling shy and pushes him
s:mujhe toh bahut kaam hain tum bhi jake tumhara kaam karlo mein jati hoon
dv:bhago bhago kitna bhaagna hain bhaglo aaj toh mein jo mang raha hoon woh toh aapko denahi padega janeman
to be continued
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mdivyarayudu

i am writing it at very first time if there is any mistake pardon me
sanchi is working at kitchen when dhruv came hugs her from behind
sanchi:ye tum kya kar rahe ho
dhruv:kya kar raha hoon
s:chodo mujhe koi dekhlega toh kya sochega
dv:unko jo sochna hai sochne do mujhe koi farak nahi padta
s:dv please chodo mujhe
dv:theek hai ek sharath par aapko chod deta hoon
s:kounsi sharath
dv:yahi ki mujhe kiss chahiye
s:kiss nahi milega
dv:dena hain toh deejiye warna apki marji
s:nahi dungi matlab nahi dungi
dv:theek hai then he starts kissing her from jaw line to neck and he kissing passionately and moving to her more closer
s:dhruv chodo mujhe ye tum kya kar rahe ho
dv:kya kar raha hoon main toh mere janeman ke sath flirt kar raha hoon aapko koi problem hain after listening this sanchi feels shy
and she is trying hardly to push him and he pulls her back hugs her passionately and sanchi hugs him tightly


to be continued


very nice, you have created a magical saruv moment...love is care at first but physicality is also very important...as its only one relation which is that of lovers that physicality is involved...all other kinds of love is only care...and this is also the deepest of all relations.i loved your post.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinee_vinee


very nice, you have created a magical saruv moment...love is care at first but physicality is also very important...as its only one relation which is that of lovers that physicality is involved...all other kinds of love is only care...and this is also the deepest of all relations.i loved your post.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oyee hoyeee... really nice... plzz continue.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great OS, keep posting such.👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awesome that was. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am writing it at very first time if there is any mistake pardon me
sanchi is working at kitchen when dhruv came hugs her from behind
sanchi:ye tum kya kar rahe ho
dhruv:kya kar raha hoon
s:chodo mujhe koi dekhlega toh kya sochega
dv:unko jo sochna hai sochne do mujhe koi farak nahi padta
s:dv please chodo mujhe
dv:theek hai ek sharath par aapko chod deta hoon
s:kounsi sharath
dv:yahi ki mujhe kiss chahiye
s:kiss nahi milega
dv:dena hain toh deejiye warna apki marji
s:nahi dungi matlab nahi dungi
dv:theek hai then he starts kissing her from jaw line to neck and he kissing passionately and moving to her more closer
s:dhruv chodo mujhe ye tum kya kar rahe ho
dv:kya kar raha hoon main toh mere janeman ke sath flirt kar raha hoon aapko koi problem hain after listening this sanchi feels shy
and she is trying hardly to push him and he pulls her back hugs her passionately and sanchi hugs him tightly

to be continued


Now u have increased my expectations!!!! am really hoping to see this in the show now :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg..its superb..u never mentioned its oss orss or ff, still by chance I read itnd Iits awesome..
this dv hs made me madabt him..I cant live widout thnkngabt saruv...
superb..plx continue soon nd ifpossible pm mecxi love 2 read abt saruv nd m nt gud at cmptrsso tend2 lose thelinks I read prvsly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunzara2405

I am also waiting for this type of scenes that's y I am writing it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it..please continue...👏

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