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Very interesting! I can't wait to see the reactions. I'm glad Najma and Ayaan are also involved.

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Najma n Ayaan vl be there throughout d entire story😉
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hmm both r in love alredy

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Asad is in love n Zoya is falling for him😃
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Part 1

Asad comes home wid a card in his hand. Zoya was alone in d house.

"Ammi aur Najma kaha hai?" asks Asad.

"Vo market gaye hai," replied Zoya.

"Ye kya hai?" asks Asad showing her d card.

Zoya gets shocked to see d card as it was her n Akram's wedding invitation card.

"Asad, ye mera shaadi ka card hai," replied Zoya.

"Jis shaadi me se aap bhaag gayi thi?" asks Asad raising his voice.

"Asad, muje vo ladka aur uske gharwaale thik nahi lag rahe the isliye...," replied Zoya but she cut by Asad.

"Isliye aap apne hi nikaah se bhaag gayi," said Asad angrily, "Aap jaise jeans pehennewaali ladki se aur kya umeed kar sakte hai? Aap jaise jeans pehennewaali aur modern ladki me tameez hoti hi nahi hai. Aap jaise logon ka to character hi kharab rehta hai. Aaj aapke vajah se Najma ne mujse jeans pehenne ki izzazat maangi thi. Aapke vajah se uspar galat asar pad raha hai. Aap to jail tak jaa chuki hai. Aapne meri Najma ko bhi bigaad diya hai. Pata nahi ammi aur Najma ko aap me kya achha lagta hai? Aapko aapke gharwaalon ne tehzeeb bilkul nahi sikhaayi hai. Agar aapke ammi-abbu aapke saath hote to unhe aapke vajah se bahot sharminda hone padta tha. Aap pata nahi yaha se kab jaayegi?"

Zoya had enough of him.

"Just shut up," said Zoya angrily, "Aap samajhte kya hai khud ko jo muje itna sab bolte jaa rahe hai? Aapko kya lagta hai ki main aapki bakwaas baatein sunte rahungi. Maine apne nikaah se bhaagkar kuch galat nahi kiya tha. Vo ladka aur uske gharwaale muje thik nahi lag rahe the. Agar aisa hota to vo gunde mere peechhe nahi pade hote mera jabardasti nikaah karvaane k liye. Aapne socha hai ki agar mera nikaah ho jaata aur vo ladka aur uske gharwaale thik nahi rehte to main kya uss ghar me khush reh paati thi? Mere saath kuch galat bhi to ho sakta tha na? Aap ye sab nahi samjhenge. Aapko to sirf tehzeeb aur tameez par badi badi baatein karni aati hai. Aap to bade hi bewakuf aur beakkal insaan hai jo itna padha likha aur successful businessman hone k bavajood kisi ko unke kapde se judge karta ho. Aapko mera character kharab lagta hai qki main modern hu aur jeans pehenti hu. Kya salwar-suit pehennewaali sabhi logon ka character achha hota hai? Kya unme koi buraai nahi rehti hai? Aapne kabhi khudko dekha hai kya? Aap 21st century se belong nahi karte hai. Aap 17th century k regressive aur narrow-minded insaan hai jo galti se 21st century me phas gaye hai. Aap mere aur mere gharwaalon k baare me kitna jaante hai? Aap mere gharwaalon se kabhi mile hai kya? Aap mere ammi-abbu k baare me kya jaante hai? Aap usne kabhi mile hai kya? Rahi baat, phuphi aur Najma ki to vo aapki tarah narrow-minded nahi hai jo logon ko unke kapdon se judge karte hai. Aapko to sirf doosron ko hurt karna aata hai. Aap kabhi sochte bhi nahi hai ki aapki baaton se muje kaisa feel hoga. Najma college k fashion show me part lena chaahti thi aur main uski help kar rahi thi. Aur main jail me isliye gayi ki...rehne dijiye aap nahi samjhenge. Aapko to sirf logon ko kapdon se judge karna aata hai aur aapke lagta hai ki mere jaise modern log kharab hote hai. Main hi stupid thi main iss ghar me aane se pehle jo aapse jhagda hua karta tha vo sab bhulaakar aapse dosti karna chaahti thi. Par aap mere dosti k laayak hi nahi hai. Aap mere baare me jo samajhna hai samajhiye. I don't care. Aaj se main aapse kabhi nahi baat karungi. Vaise bhi aapko usse kya farak padega? Muje aapse jaise narrow-minded logon se allergy hai. Aur haan, main jis kaam k liye aayi hu vo poora hone par chali jaaungi. Muje aise ghar me rehne ka koi shauk nahi hai jaha aap jaise stupid thoughtswaale narrow-minded log rehte hai. U need to get a life."

Zoya stormed 4m there to her room while Asad lukd on. He lukd @ d door n was shocked to see his ammi n Najma standing in d doorway.

"Ammi, Najma, aap dono kab aaye?" asked Asad.

"Humne sab sun liya hai, Asad," replied Dilshad, "Tumne Zoya se aise baat karke achha nahi kiya. Uss bechaari ko kitna bura laga hoga."

"Ammi, vo bechaari nahi hai. Usne bhi to muje kitna kuch sunaaya," said Asad.

"Shuruvaat to tumne hi ki na. Tum uske baare me humesha galat sochoge aur use kuch bhi bologe to vo sumkar legi kya," said Dilshad, "Tum usse jaakar maafi maango."

"Maafi aur usse? Kabhi nahi," said Asad, "Achha hi hai ki vo mujse baat nahi karegi. Muje uss Zoya se baat karne ka koi shauk nahi hai. Main usse maafi nahi maangunga."

Asad went to his room while Dilshad n Najma lukd on unhappily.

In d evening, Zoya came in d hall wearing a red shirt.

"Phuphi, main baahar jaa rahi hu," said Zoya.

"Thik hai jao," said Dilshad.

"Zoya, main bhi aapke saath chalu?" asks Najma wid a smile.

"Najma, tum mere saath mat chalo qki Asad ko lagta hai ki main tumhe bigaad rahi hu. Sorry Najma, hum dono abhi dost nahi reh sakte hai," replied Zoya.

Najma's smile faded. She, Dilshad n Asad got shocked. Zoya went out of d house.

"Zoya abhi bhi gusse me hai. Ab to vo mujse bhi baat nahi karegi," said Najma sadly.

Zoya goes to d mall. Nuzhat, Humeira, Nikhat also went to d mall. Zoya went to a cloth store. D Zingo Hotties also went there. Neither noticed each other.

"Main mere ek friend se milkar aata hu," said Ayaan n went 4m d shop.

After some time, Ayaan was cumn to d shop. Nuzhat spotted Zoya.

"Baaji, ye to Zoya hai jisne humaare college me gundo ki pitaayi ki thi," said Nuzhat.

Ayaan got shocked hearing dat lukn @ Zoya.

"Madam, ye green shirt aur vo white top pack kar dena," said Zoya.

"Ye to kitni modern hai. Humaare ghar me to ye sab pehenne hi nahi dete hai," said Humeira.

"Khoda pahaad nikli chuhiya. Main jis Zoya se milne k liye betaab tha vo ye ladki hai. Isne meri bahot band bajaayi hai. Aaj main ise nahi chhodunga," thinks Ayaan annoyingly.

Ayaan came to d girls.

"Bhaijaan, Zoya yaha hai," said Nuzhat.

"Kaha?" asks Ayaan pretending dat he did not their convo.

Nuzhat showed Ayaan where Zoya is but she was not there.

"Abhi to yahi thi. Shaayad chali gayi," said Nuzhat.

"Koi baat nahi. Vaise, tum teeno jao. Muje ek jaruri kaam hai," said Ayaan seeing Zoya going out of d shop.

"Thik hai, jaldi aa jaana," said Humeira. D girls went out of d shop.

"Aaj main Miss Zoya ko sabak sikhakar hi rahunga. Par use to karate bhi aata hai. Koi baat nahi main use handle kar loonga," said Ayaan brushing his hair in his usual style.

Zoya sat in an auto. She told d driver to take her to a cafe. Ayaan was following d auto on his bike. Zoya reached d cafe n sat on 1 of d table in d outside garden area of d cafe. While lukn in d menu, Zoya was thinking abt Asad's words dat he said 2day n got upset. Wen she lukd up 4m d menu, she was shocked to see Ayaan sitting before her n smiling @ her. Zoya was shocked.

"Tum," said Zoya shockingly.

"Aakhir tum muje firse mil hi gayi," said Ayaan wid a smile, "To tum hi Zoya ho jiske baare me sab college me baat kar rahe the. Tum Zoya ho ya koi bhi ho par tum aaj mujse nahi bachogi. Aaj main tumhe sabak sikhakar hi rahunga, Miss Zoya."

Zoya was not in a mood to fight as she was upset due to Asad. She got up n turned to go. Ayaan also got up n came in her way.

"Itni jaldi kya hai jaane ki?" asks Ayaan wid a smirk.

"Dekho, main ladaayi jhagda karne k mood me nahi isliye tum please mere raaste se hat jao," said Zoya calmly.

"Waah! Darr lagne par please karke request karne lagi," said Ayaan circling her, "Tumhaara ladaayi jhagda karne ka mood nahi hai to mood bana lo qki tum to gayi aaj."

Ayaan stood before her. Zoya got pissed.

"Look, mera mood pehle se hi bahot kharab hai isliye behtar hoga muje irritate mat karo," said Zoya firmly.

"Irritate to main tumhe aise hi karunga jab tak tum mujse tumhaari har galti k liye maafi nahi maangogi," said Ayaan brushing his hair as he charged 2wards her.

Zoya tuk out d pepper-spray 4m her pocket n armed it @ Ayaan.

"Ek insaan k vajah se mera dimaag pehle se hi bahot kharab to kahi aisa na ho jaaye ki main uska gussa tumpar nikaal du iss pepper spray se," said Zoya in an anger tone.

Ayaan backed off a little.

"Jao yaha se varna main tumhaari aankh me pepper spray daal dungi aur muje karate bhi aata hai," threatened Zoya crossing her hands in d air to show him dat she knows karate.

"Darr gaya main," said Ayaan wid a laugh.

Zoya stomped on his foot n hits his head by giving him a karate chop. Ayaan got shocked wid her move.

"Dobaara mera raaste me aaya to main," threatened Zoya pointing d pepper-spray @ him.

Ayaan got scared while Zoya smirked @ him.

"Allah Miya, aaj to mera poora din hi kharab hai," Zoya muttered to herself.

Zoya went 4m there while Ayaan lukd on shockingly.

"Kis kambhakt k vajah se Zoya itne gusse me hai ki vo saara gussa mujhpar nikaal rahi hai?" asked Ayaan annoyingly.

Zoya came home n went to her room widout talking to any1.

"Asad, Zoya abhi bhi upset hai. Tumne aaj sahi nahi kiya aur kal bhi sahi nahi kiya tha Zoya ko ulti-seedhi baatein karke hurt karne k liye," said Dilshad, "Tumhe andaaza bhi hai ki Zoya ko kitna bura laga hoga. Zoya ka yaha koi nahi hai. Uske gharwaale New York me hai. Uske aapi aur jiju ne Zoya ko iss umeed se yaha bheja ki vo yaha khushi se sabke saath rahegi aur use lonely nahi feel hoga par tum Zoya ko lonely feel karva rahe ho qki vo abhi Najma se bhi baat nahi kar rahi hai. Zoya bahot achhi ladki hai. Tum usse maafi maango."

Asad's face softened a little n he said, "Thik hai, ammi."

Zoya was crying in her room thinking abt Asad's words dat he said yesterday after he brought her home 4m jail n 2day after he showed her d wedding card. Asad came in d doorway of her room n saw her crying. Zoya saw him n wiped her tears.

"Zoya, main aapse kuch kehne aaya hu," said Asad.

"Aap firse meri insult karne aaye hai na?" asks Zoya.

"Zoya, aisa nahi hai," replied Asad.

"Aap yaha se chale jaaiye qki muje aapki koi baat nahi sunni hai," said Zoya.

Asad went 4m there. During d dinner, Zoya was quiet all d time.

"Zoya, I am...," said Asad but Zoya ignored him.

"Phuphi, roti paas kijiye na," said Zoya.

Dilshad, Najma n Asad felt unhappy. Zoya tuk her plate of food to her room.

"Zoya aise q behave kar rahi hai?" asks Najma sadly.

Next morning, Zoya was still quiet throughout d breakfast.

"Zoya, tum itni shaat q ho?" asks Dilshad.

"Qki Asad ko jyaada bolnewaale log bahot irritating lagte hai. Unhe lagta hai ki main sabhi ladkiyon k liye bad example hu aur Najma meri tarah na bane," replied Zoya.

All got shocked hearing dis. He recalled teln dat Zoya is a bad example for girls n he don't want Najma to become like her.

Precap: As Zoya is abt to enter her room, Asad comes to her.

"Zoya, I am sorry. Muje aapse vo sab nahi kehna chaahiye tha," apologized Asad.

"I am sorry, Asad. Galti to mujse huvi hai qki maine socha ki aap doosron ko unke kapdon se judge karna band karenge par aisa kabhi ho hi nahi sakta hai," said Zoya.

"Zoya, main aapse dosti karna chaahta hu," said Asad extended his hand for her.

"Main aise insaan dosti nahi karna chaahti hu jo doosron ki dosti todta ho jaise aapne mere aur Najma k dosti k saath kiya hai," said Zoya n went to her room shutting d door.

Asad got unhappy wid his hand still extended. He puts his hand down n went 4m there.

Wen Dilshad n Najma were out, Ayaan comes 4m window to meet Ayaan. Zoya heard some noise n went out of her room.

"Bhaijaan, muje aapki bahot yaad aa rahi thi," said Ayaan.

"Muje bhi tumhaari bahot yaad aa rahi thi, Ayaan," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, muje aapse aise chhup-chhupkar milna achha nahi lagta hai. Hum sautele bhai hai to kya hua par sage se badhkar hai. Mere gharwaale muje aapse milne nahi dete hai. Kaash! hum ek saath rehte the jaisa bachpan me raha karte the. Kaash! hum alag nahi hote. Par humaare milne ki baat kisi ko pata chala to gadbad ho jaayegi," said Ayaan.

As Ayaan said dat, he n Asad were shocked to see Zoya standing in d doorway.

"Tum?" asked Ayaan shockingly.

"Zoya, aap please kisi se kuch mat kehna," requested Asad.

"As if muje aapke issues k siva koi aur kaam hi nahi hai. Aapko jo karna hai karo. Jisse milna hai milo. I don't care. Main kisi ko aapke aur Ayaan k baare me nahi bataaungi qki mujse aapse koi lena dena nahi hai. I am out of dis," said Zoya n stormed out 4m there.

Asad lukd on shockingly watching her go.

"Bhaijaan, ye ladki yaha rehti hai?" asked Ayaan shockingly.

"Haan, yahi hai humaari guest Zoya Farooqui," replied Asad n asks, "Tum ise jaante ho?"

"Bahot achhi tarah se," replied Ayaan teln him abt all his encounter wid Zoya.

"To tum bhi Zoya se panga le chuke ho?" asks Asad.

"Bhaijaan, Zoya bahot hi dangerous ladki hai," said Ayaan n says annoyingly, "Pata nahi kal Zoya ne kis kambhakt insaan ka gussa mujhpar nikaala tha?"

Asad got puzzled hearing dat.

"Zoya ne mera gussa Ayaan par nikaal daala," thinks Asad.

"Kahin Zoya kisi ko bata na de ki hum chhup-chhupkar milte hai," said Ayaan.

"Muje nahi lagta hai ki Zoya kisi se kuch kahegi fir bhi main usse baat karunga," said Asad.




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AWESOME DEAR...REALLY NICE UPDATE...THANK U SO MUCH FOR THE PM...AND PLS CONTINUE SOON..,ITS REALLY INTERESTING...
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AWESOME DEAR...REALLY NICE UPDATE...THANK U SO MUCH FOR THE PM...AND PLS CONTINUE SOON..,ITS REALLY INTERESTING...


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