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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Aaah this is getting worse, I dont know how will he explain her the reason of his outburst. But now I am frustrated that they are all skirting around the big issue, she should now be able to trust him and tell him, and he should let her know his intentions to bring her here, to keep her secure, and also about Akash and all. Its just time that things come out in open, or else it will just keep messing all of their lives.

I hope nothing bad happens.

I particularly loved the scene when he watches her having a nightmare, and slowly soothes her. It was brilliantly written.

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Shalini

@tvmania

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

that was a great update
I don't understand y khushi is still not telling him the past? its high time she reveals only then he can help her out...
I hope she starts telling about abt this soon

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arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

In case you haven't read my comment on the previous chapter, it is here:

Chapter 21 (part 1)

My comment on Chapter 21 (part 2) coming soon!

Seriously, one moment you make us feel happy and then the next moment, you tear apart the joined pieces. Why do you always do this Dee? But I can't deny all of this is adding up to the already suspended mystery! I fear if I'll get buried deep under the layers if this mystery doesn't start unfolding now!

I'll be back to drop by a comment!

---Edited---

Arnav's thought processes and the replaying of the day's events and Khushi's statement over and over again gives away much of his pent up frustration, and a feeling of depreciation for being unable to provide her the assurance and comfort and a feeling of completeness that she needed. And most of all, being unable to decode her past and give it a finish once and for all. And probably visualize a safe future for Khushi and even maybe, with Khushi!

And that little moment when he presses his lips to her forehead, a promise for protecting her always has been made. Yes, I am waiting to see how it evolves into true love!

Though Khushi has got more comfortable with her being around Arnav, she hasn't exactly opened up to him. It is quite clear that she has been hiding something from him about her past and Shyam's call got me thinking and, somehow, confirmed my assumptions. Waiting to see where you take this!

Aman's call about the rejection of the deal must've somehow been connected with the Singhanias and I feel they're not just after Khushi but more than that. I might be wrong, however! Why exactly are they behind her?

Arnav's anger might've been due to the building frustration inside him and his inability to find solid answers and Khushi wasn't making it any easy for him either, but I do not support venting out one's anger on the other. But when has he been good with anger management? And then he regrets! *sigh* All Arnavs have some major issues, really!

"Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured."

- Mark Twain

"Holding on to anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned."
- Buddha

Edited by arpitasharma - 12 years ago

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Awesome update...
Just like Arnav I too was thinking about khushi's statement about her first kiss... Her statement and her words are totally contrasted... What happened with her?
Feeling really bad for Arnav ... He is a complete ness right know... So many thoughts going on in his mind... And that is the reason he lash out on Khushi...
I m relieved that at least now Arnav knows that Akash is in London... He will take care of Khushi's safety...
Continue soon...

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

taking out someone else' anger on her.. idiot..

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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Getting complicated. Time for revelations

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Ooohhh its getting even more interesting!!!! Shyam seems to be getting close to the truth ( I can't believe how for once he isn't annoying me !!!😆) But then the equation between Arnav and Khushi has changed too!!! I wish they'd speak openly about their feelings! I think Arnavs freaking out because for once he's caring for someone more than himself and he's scared about losing Khushi because she means so much for him... I don't blame him for lashing out at Khushi, he's emotionally fragile because he's struggling with his feelings for Khushi, not really admitting how much she means to him, coping with her not really telling him what happened in the past and then on top of that she's wanting to go out by herself, not knowing that Aakash is out there in London!

So messy, but brilliant!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Chapter 26 Part 1...
Fantastiiicc Diwali Update...
So akash singhania n rohan singhania are behind Khushi...mystery revolves around them...By reading about Their illegal activies,,I just thought that maybe they were involved in a business like trapping n selling orphan girls or something like that...N myabe Khusi comes to knw something abt the,,thats why they want to kill her...*mysteries n guesses*
Well Their kiss was awesome fantastiiicc one...i just loved reading that part...Dedee u r brilliant writer...I literally felt my heart sink,,When Arnav mmade her sit on board railing n Khushi's realization about it...uuufff...the sinking feeling only went away with their Kiss...
Going to read chapter 26 part 2...

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Chapter 26 Part 2...
Yeaaahhh I was somehow right in my guess becoz shyam also pointed towards same thing...I think I m falling for this story...heheh...
Loved this chapter...so Richie Rich needs to set up security in his london house too...i think he will not tell Khushi about Akash singhania's presence in London...first his thoughts were wandeing in negative areas about Khushi's past,,then shyam's ''bomb-dropping'' phone call...Aman's call regarding '' Deal Rejection news'',,then Khushi's desicion to go for a walk alone,,,n His overwhelming need to protect her...All these things lead to his outburst on her...Khushi's right in her reaction to his outburst...Arnav would have to work hard to earn forgiveness although he is already in a big mess...Waiting for next Update restlessly...I m entwined to tale of entwined souls...uuff...plzzz update soon...