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sansu

@sansu

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

hi!!!...(im giving out so many hi's to you today..😉)...

did you hear the official announcement??..no??...here it is---im a fan girl now!!!...

of whom you ask??..."yours"!!!

loved it!!!...

he was confusing me with his behavior at the begining...shows up suddenly...makes coffee or i must say "ravishing coffee"..then,blabbers about getting himself kicked out!!!...

i loved the interactions between him n khushi!!!...

the part where you described about the "heaven"...after a tired day...was beautiful...i could just feel myself wanna hit the bed for a cozy nap!!!

but, it turned out so cute!!!...heart cake with "apple of my eye"??...no wonder his reactions were such!!!...he was such a sweetheart in this one!!!...

i have not read your ff yet...will catch up with it soon

but, this one was awesome just as a stand alone!!!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

very nice os masam

i havent read STB yet but i have heard about it - thx to NB's link

i wanted to finish reading all the OSs first before i went in for the longer one i.e the FF

i think i almost finished all the OS - lemme recheck and then will go the ff

wonderful writing masam

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

I read it again to understand it better :)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

I read it again today on your birthday to remind myself of the good old days when you were writing STB. Miss it though I love the new story too.

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Khushi and Arnav are so adorable!!

Arnav fighting with his mom over his bday- hahahaha and then the heart-shaped bday cake.. lol..

love the way Arnav teases Khushi with his wicked smile and frustrating "orders". Love that he doesn't take her crap and just annoys the hell out of her by doing whatever he wants. hehehehe.. super chemistry they share.

in STB, after he read her "little black diary" I am sure he is always going to be curious about reading it again and again.. and knowing him some day he might manage to read it again too. He absolutely does not respect her personal space, rather makes himself a part of her personal space - hahahhahahah..

nice one!