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A TAAYAM OS!!!- LAMHA TERA MERA...

HEY GUYS!!!

I NO U THINK THAT I SAID K IM LEAVING if temporarily!!!hainaa???

Bt kya kaaru Taani k waapish aane ki khushi mein mein bhi aagayii!!!

Now the OS

Swaron ka Class showdown k baad Sharon swayam ke ghar aati hai wohi discussion hoti hai unke beech mein!!!!

Same as shown in D3...

Then after sharon left swayam's house... swayam was all broken!!! He started to cry badly and he saw his phone he took his phone searched for a name in his cell then he at last found the person's name and call that person!!!

The person with the angelic voice received it and said with a huge smile pasted in her lips- Hellow bhai

He didn't speak anything he was just listening to his baby sis (Taani)...

She was a little worried... she again said to him - hellow bhai!!!! U there???

Now he couldn't stop crying...and was sobbing hard!!! Really hard

Taani heard it so she said - (in a worried tone) bhai u okay???

He didn't utter a word again!!!

Taani - bhai plz tell me huwa kya hai!!!! Plz!!! Aap roo kyun rahe hooo????

Swayam finally said- T..a...a..n..i...

She was a little happy that his brother spoke to her bt was broken down totally coz of his sad voice

She hurriedly said - haan bhai!!! Batao kya huwa aapko???

Swayam explained all the thing to Taani and at last he said - I BROKE UP WITH SHARON!!!!

He cried really hard... she said- plz bhai don't cry!!!!

Bt he was he... he was crying more hard now!!! She was so worried now!!! He suddenly realized wat he was doing he not himself was crying bt he was making his angel to cry too...

He then said- Taani!!! Abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai soo Bye!!!!

He disconnected the call... and again cried!!! He was crying really hard!!!

There with Taani...

Taani to herself- yeh toh bohot bura huwa hai bhai ke saath!!! I guess mujhe unke pass hona chaheye unke saath unke pass!!!

She started packing her stuff...she then was all prepare to leave... she called her driver and started her journey to her bhai!!!

There in Mumbai...

The boy was really sad...bt still he gets ready and he goes to college and showed as if nothing has happen to him!!!!

His day at college was somehow over and he came to his home!!!

He comes he actually had invited the D3 team in his house as he wanted to show he was happy!!!!

Then, all of them comes inside the house...

PS- the first enterer was Swayam and he switches the light of the house On and founds the house was decorated and some1 suddenly closes his eyes from behind with his/her house... He touches the Hand which was covering his eyes and says- Taani!!!!

He took her hands from his eyes and pulls her in a Tight hug...they both were hugging each other tightly and finally after abt 5 min they broke it!!! And all the D3 gang came and hugged her... also Rey hugged her and wishper in his ears - I Love u Taani and I missed u sooo muucchhh!!!!

She too whisper in his ear... meine bhi aako bahot miss kia and I LOVE U TOO!!! He broke the hug and both of them were smiling like idiots!!!!

Then after dinner the D3 gang were abt leave bt not rey he was just staring Taani!!!! He actually wanted to hug his angel of love!!!

But how could he do that infront of Swayam ... Swayam was somehow was aware of Rey's feeling bt now bichara Rey

Sw - Rey tu nahi jaa raha???

Re- haan jaa raha hun naa

Bt stil he was staring at Taani...now the over possessive bhai was awaken!!!!

Sw - rey tu jaa raha hai yaa...(with a I kill u wala look!!!)

Re- haan jaa raha hun and with a sad expression he left...

Now only Taayam/Swani r left in the house

Swayam says to her - Taani tum yaha aise accha nak kaise???

Taa- kal aako itna sad sunke bohot dukh hoo raha tha n I though k I should be with u in this tym issi liye chali aayii!!

Swayam again pulled her in a hug and said with full teary eyes- I'm sorry Taani

She was a little surprise so she broke the hug and asked him- sorry par kyun bhai???

Sw- Sorry Taani k meine tumhe kabhi support nahi karta hun!!! Tumehein kabhi bhi khush nahi kar sakka sorry Taani sorry!!!

She wiped his tear and said - aap mujhe hamesha he toh support karte hoo!!! Mujhe hamesa he samajhte hoo!!! Plz don't say that!!! Aapna world k sabse best bhai hoo (Not more than my bhai!!! )

He make his sis to sit in the cozy sofa and says - Taani thank u for coming here !!! I was fully broken bt tumse baat karke Im feeling soo light !!! thanks!!!

She stood up from her place and said - Bhai mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni hai!!!

He was soo shocked and he said - par meine kya kia???

Taani - aapne mujhe sorry bola!!! And then both started to laugh and

Swayam said - tum naa cutely weird hoo (Pulling her cheecks!!)

Taani again said - woh toh mujhe already pata hai!!!

Bt again something stocks his mind and again he becomes sad!!!

Taani understood he was sad coz of his breakup decision with Sharon... he said- bhai plz don't be sad aapko Sharon Bhabhi mil jayengii!!!

Swayam said - Taani sayad hum uss duniya k liye bane he nahi hai!!!

Taani - bt bhai aap aisa kyun sooch rahe hoo???

Swayam - kyunkii mujhe kabhi bhi aapna pyaar he nahi milta hai!!! Meine use kitna pyaar kia bt ussne mera pyaar ko eak min mein sabke saamne jutla diya!!!

Taani - bhai aisa nahi hai saayad woh daar gayi thi issi liye unhone aisa kaha!!!!!

Swa - par Taani!!!

Taani - ufo bhai koi par war nahi ab chalo n soo jao

She pulled her to his room and now she was abt to go but he caught her hand andshe turned back to see Swayam and she said - kya huwa bhai???

Swayam - woh Taani!!!

And he made her sit in his bed and he sat in floor she was a little confused with his behavior and he putted his head in her lap and slept in her lap where she was continuously caring his hair...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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A DREAM WHICH I HOPE IT COMES TRUE!!!!!

A OS on me and my brother (Anmol bhai) in IF!!! And it's a true dream so no criticisms for the story bt u can criticize in my writing...

A gal woke up in a morning. She then got up from her cozy bed and moved towards her washroom and got freshen up... then she started to do her morning works after sometimes the doorbell was rang by a person..she peeped from the window and asked that person who he was???

He answered he was a postman and he hav something to give her!!! She went down to the main gate and opened the door and that postman handed her a letter it was wrapped by a yellow paper... she took it from his hand and closed the door and went to her room and now she started to unpack the yellow papper she found a white paper in the paper it was something written in it she started to read it was written something like

"we are really glad that we are inviting you to our college in full scholarship in nursing course " she almost jumped in happiness... she went to her dad and informed abt this news and then he hugged her and congratulated her... then she again ran to her mom and informed her and she too hugged her and congratulated her... she then ran to her room and opened her laptop and opened a website www.india-forums.com and opened her profile there "QTPie99"and entered her password "***********"

And then she searched for some1's profile "swaronlove001"and went to his scrapbook and posted there-" Prince!! We r going to meet!!! Im coming there"

She was happy!!! The Prince and Princess are going to meet finally!!!

Then abt 1 week she left her country and went more than her new collegeand new country she was happy that she is going to meet her Prince!!! Wow!! How exciting that would be!!!

She have to go to at Kurukshetra , Harayana where her prince lives!!! Wow how excited she was!!!

She called him to a caf and now she was waiting for him in that caf ... after abt 5 mins some1 kept hand on the gals shoulder she turned and found her bhai there!!!!!

Done!!!! I no I no bohot he chutku update tha par kya kaaru it was a dream !!! but I hav extended it as much I can!!!

And.

Sorry prince I no I am two days late!!!!! So eak bada wala sorry to u!!! hope u will like it and plz its not over!!! Scroll down for more surprise!!!

Edited by QTPie99 - 11 years ago
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HAPPY BHAI DUJH
THE SURPRISE WHICH I PLANNED FOR MY WORLD'S BEST BROTHER ANMOL BHAI (swaronlove001) !!!! 😊



Hey Brother,
When The World Goes Dark,
Stars R There
When The Journey Breaks Up,
Hope Is There
When the Entire World Is Vanished,
And U Feel Left Alone
Tilt Ur Head & Look Beside You,
Will Bring U Comfort Feeling Of
Care Nd Affection Molds On U,
As Ur Sister Is Alwayz Beside You
To Pour The Special Love Nd Affection 4ever
Happy Bhai Dhujh


There's no other love like the love for a brother. There's no other love like the love from a brother.


Door Ho Jaaney Sey Bhai-Behan

Ka Pyaar Kbhi Kam Nhi Hota

Tujhey Yaad Naa Krun Aesa

Tho Koi Mausam Nhi Hota

Yeh Woh Rishta Hai Jo

Umar Bhar Mehak Tha Hai

Tera Haath Sar Par Ho Tho

Mushkilon Mein Bhi Gham Nhi Hota





Jhula Bahon Ka Aaj Bhi Do Na Mujhe
Jhula Bahon Ka Aaj Bhi Do Na Mujhe
Bhaiyaa Goud Mein Uthao Na Aaj Mujhe
Kad Se Hoon Badi Mann Se Chhoti Main
Aaj Bhi Maan Lo Na Zid Meri.


Edited by QTPie99 - 11 years ago
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HAPPY BHAI DUJH ONCE AGAIN PRINCE!!!!




SO NEVER-EVER LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!


YOU MOST ADORABLE GIFT EVER!!!


THANXS FOR MAKING ME FEEL SOO







ITS ACTUALLY US...😉

AND I AM STILL LAUGHING WHEN U SAY U LIKED MY EDIT


LOVE U A LOTS PRINCE!!!
HEY, NOW ITS UR TURN
WAITING FOR 12TH NOV!!!😃
NOW PLZ SAY HOW WAS IT????😕




URS PRINCESS AND URS LAADLI SIS
SURABHI

Edited by QTPie99 - 11 years ago
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Res
unres
super se upar wala os
sweet cute and adorable
Taayum part was super b
reyam were funny
loved it to the core

PS me first 😃
Edited by taarey_vrimar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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luvly chutki!!
taayam r sucha cuteis..!!

the end was adorable !!

awwie i lyk the dream !!

well i hope u cm 2 india smday n v also meet soon :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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IT was awsum story dear ... so cut e ... realy i wanted 2 see taayam again just like this having n sharing emotional bond ... but cv's kaha aise aishaan karege ... well i m missing taayam alot ... n wish top see them onscreen soon after taani re-ntry ... 😉😉 !!!!!!
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Res/unres
Awwie such a wonderful os sweetu
Deir phone convo was so emotional
Luved taani concern towards swayam
Taarey part was so luvly
Reyam were funny
Then our cute bto sis convo...
It was so adorable
Too gud yr
Edited by -Sweet_Soumya- - 11 years ago
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ON BEHALF OF MY SWEET PRINCE AKA ANMOL BHAI!!!!
as he cannot comment in it coz he hav exceed the limit of posts😆
"i see it its is adroable i have tears
in ny eyes 2 see how much u love
me... d poem was brillient nd ur
lines was asowm... i lucky 2 have u
dear...u very special 2 me... its best
gift... edits muje bhi sikhao na
plzz... so i hope dis dream come
true...love princess... "
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