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wow amazing I love the anger and passion they need to fight it out
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Thank u so very much...😃
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wow amazing I love the anger and passion they need to fight it out
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Originally posted by: Mayeesha2217
I love how you portrayed Asad's angst...he is the one who had been wronged by both his mother and wife,though he still does not have any idea about the mother part...but please make it TURNAROUND soon😉
Originally posted by: mariam1368
Super awesome update
Nice going...loved the Zoya gave back...
Waiting for the
next update
Thnx 4d Pm
it is amazing and I am glad zoya stopped dilshad
becaue asad would have been shattered
do continue loving it
Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Heya,
Thank you sooo much for the shout out. a tight wala hug from my side too just for you, 🤗.okay now before I come to the part, tell me how do you get songs so similar to your chaps, like yaar I fall in love with the lyrics. they just say it all in a jist. I could so feel Zoe saying all this to Asad. just awesome.now coming to the part, why were you uncertain about it? it of course was progressive & as good as all have been, 👍🏼I seriously feel sad for Asad, poor thing is so vulnerable at this point in life. he wants to move on in life holding her hand but the past keeps hindering their way to it. his tears & words just made me so upset. I really can never see Asad cry, it's heart breaking, 🥺. he felt to me as a lost baby, who had his favorite thing in the world in front of him but still couldn't have it.even in his deep sleep his mind & body can recognize, feel & be in sync with Zoe's. of course it must have been soothing to have her like this in his arms while sleeping after ages. but then of course Akdu was supposed to bounce back.well have to give it to Zoe for giving him back his attitude. I know he's hurting but still his words were disgusting. how can he even say that about her?Ayaan, poor thing. being new to the whole AsYa fights is worried. I agree with Dilshaad, Asad needs to let it all out in his arguments to get back in peace.I just loved Zoe's outburst as she came out of the room & couldn't stop laughing as she burst on Ayaan.okay the flashback part. it was beautiful. I really coud get the feel of how elated AsYa must have been at their wedding, though simple, it meant the world to them just being together.now where is Asad off to?that heading on the top, of updating in an hour, kab se lagayi hui hai? I mean, like seriously you're updating in this day?? 😵lots of love till then..
Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Aashna,
Okay before I start with anything, there's a request. 🤔 Can I have Mango for a day, please, pretty please. I am in love with her! God, how can she be soo cute??hmm now to the part, waisey I wasn't expecting you to post right after my comment, I thought it would you a bit longer. but I'm all too glad to read it. took time kyunki this story gets to my head & in this one, by the end of it, I had tears rolling down. Gosh, how do you write so well??So now Zoe has all the support & help she needs to straighten that Akdu, great 😉.You gave me a shock when you said he didn't return home for 10 days 😲 . I understand his situation. so it does affect him if Zoe doesn't call him n ask about his whereabouts.the part where Humi tells him that Zoe left the house, I knew she meant settled in her own house, but never had I thought she'll come to stay in his house itself. that's a wow. well this really is her HOME. couldn't help but laugh at Asad's response.so typical Asad-Zoe to fight, kill the other with their constant bickering but looking out for each other's well being.these thugs proved out to be even cheap than what I thought. I thought Asad's punch had taught them a lesson but nopes. okay but Asad but this is being unfair. how can you blame all on her, you were equally involved in whatever she was doing to you.I know you are hurt & Zoe is responsible for it, whatever be the reason but still it doesn't mean you insult her so much. everything you said was pure frustration & the rage building up in you. I know once you cool down, you'll realize your folly but still it did hurt, a lot.I appreciate Zoe's attempt to stop Dilshad from speaking the truth.👏 how much ever I want Asad to know the truth & stop accusing Zoe, I agree that this isn't the time for it. because it will not do any good, instead Asad's going to break beyond repair.He needs time to face everything & besides that the most important thing he requires is Zoe's constant love & presence in his life to cure all the pain. he wants her to take his pain away, like he himself said in drunken state but isn't acknowledging now. so all that is needed is to fall for again, crazily like he was earlier.okay now enough of my bakbak. you are supposed to bring in the next part soon. I know its not going to be real happening cox it wud look odd for Asad to be all okay so soon but yup when Zoe's there, some excitement is bound to be there & that too with Ayaan 😛. hey its going to be fun seeing both driving Akdu insane, if you plan on doing so.lots & lots of love 🤗.
Originally posted by: starslinedup
HAAI...kya kiya maine??😕😭..PULEASE tell me...y so sad???..update nai achi lagi.....Gumsum ho kyun???😭... tell me tell me tell me...Lagta hai the update disappointed u..🥺..
Ch17a
My pain, your tears!!
Just leave me alone,Let me die
O don't you care ,Why say goodbye?
I want you near,Just let me go
You were my yesterday..Now be my tomorrow..
We push and pull,We fight, we love
I drag you down,You pull me above
O what is this ..,The bond we share
I wanna let you go..,But my heart cant dare..
When I am in pain,Why do you cry
When you are hurt,Why does my soul die??
Just give me the answers,To my questions so frail
O heal my wounds,Let our love prevail.
She cried, she cried herself to sleep not letting anyone in, in her room or in her heart. For the second time in her life a pain as such surfaced within her, ripping her to the core, leaving her shattered. Asad's words ran through her head..his accusations slit her heart open.She wanted to justify his actions, as she knew he was hurting, but today he had surpassed his reasons of hurt,today it seemed he did it on purpose, wanting to uproot her from his life and that made Zoya cry even more.
Asad was in the washroom, trying to wash away the guilt he felt for his actions earlier in the evening when he heard her sound.She was sobbing, ceaselessly..her wails echoing in his ears, his self loath making him mad. He punched on the mirror of the sink,shards of glass bruising his hand, blood starting to ooze, but he didn't care.He had hurt her and it was not even a dollop of the pain he had inflicted upon her. He had no justification whatsoever for his actions, and he didn't want to justify it. He hated himself for waking the demon inside of him, allowing him to run the show. He didn't mean any of it, he was equally responsible for what conspired on the night at the beach, but somehow in the spur of the moment, when he heard the thug call Zoya a S**T he lost it...he was mad at her, because he was mad at himself for not being able to shield her from the world. He barked the words, not thinking of the consequence, acting the way he did in the past, when Zoya understood his reason, allowing him to take it out..being patient with him...but today she didn't..she spoke back...n she did the right thing..he accepted it...He was wrong..
There was blood in the sink, his hand soaked in it. Shards of glass were stuck in his knuckles but he didn't care. All he cared about was Zoya, and how to make it up to her. He disregarded his hand and walked up to his desk and wrote a small note.walking out of his room he slowly sneaked into Zoya's. She was finally asleep, her blanket curled up in her hands, her lips and eyes swollen, her hair in a disarray. His heart cried looking at what his cruel words had done to her.He wanted to touch her, wanted to hold her, as he knew, she seeked him even when he was the reason for her tears. But tonite he wanted to punish himself, so he didn't allow him the privilege of touching her. He bent down and put the note by her nightstand, a drop of his blood falling on it, and he walked out, ready to face the demons of his doing.
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Zoya woke up at 5am, way earlier than usual,her eyelids heavy with the after effects of last night. Dragging her body up..she went to the bathroom to wash her face before she headed to the kitchen to grab something to eat.Barefeet, and disoriented Zoya made her way to the kitchen, her eyes barely staying open, her stomach growling, when suddenly her feet felt a little damp. She rubbed her eyes and looked down, unable to see anything in the dark. Whatever she thought and opened her door, and again her feet stepped on something damp.She looked down, the light from outside helping her view and she couldn't believe what she saw..Was it for real?? She bent down and wiped the floor with her finger, her finger instantly turning red. It was blood, her eyes widening with worry, as she followed the trail of the blood.It started from her bed and ended by... She ran..in the direction, her heart panicking, her mind playing heartwrenching secnerios...She didn't bother to knock as she barged into Asad's room, the sight in front of her making her scream.
Asad was seated in a chair, his head slopped back, and his hands hanging on the side..there was a small pool of blood on the floor under his injured hand...
ASAD..shrieked Zoya as she ran up to him shaking him...panicking...Asad wake up, wake up...please...she slapped him a few times..
Oww..why are you hitting me?? Have you lost it woman..Asad graoned, being jerked out of his sleep..he stood up, rubbing his eyes, trying to wake up when Zoya crashed into him, hugging him tight,her tears...soaking his shirt in a matter of seconds.
Zoya- Tum theek to ho...she looked at him..her hands moving all over hom examining him..assuring herself that he was alright...Thank allah you are alright...OMG I was so worried...she kissed him on his face..all over..leaving no spot unattended...Damn it...Asad..u scared me...
Asad was at a loss of words..Zoya's actions taking him by surprise..what the hell just happened...and how come..he couldn't understand anything..
OUCH..he winced as Zoya's hand brushed by his injured hand
Zoya panicked..-kya hua Asad..OMG..yeh kya hua...OMG..your hand,...OMG Asad..there are glass pieces in ur skin..OMG Asad we need to ge to the doctor...
Asad-Zoya calm down..I am ok...Just calm down..
Zoya- Just shut up you moron just get the F**K up..we are going to the doctor and don't you dare argue with me...pata nai kal ke baad bhi is bande ko ...GET UP..MR ASAD AHMED KHAN and don't test my patience..
Asad couldn't help but smile...DON'T YOU DARE...laugh...this is just coz you are hurt..I still remember each and every word you said last night..and kasam khuda ki..I will make you pay for it all..NOW lets get going...
Asad's face fell at Zoya's comment but he followed her silently to the car..
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They came back home after 2 hours, Zoya finally calming down, her anger resurfacing as she walked in the house.
Asad-Umm Thank u...
Zoya turned...
Zoya-Jo insaan sorry nahi keh sakta...because of his inflated ego..because of his dillusion that he is always right..uska thank u...koi maayne nahi rakhta...she walked into her room, Asad walking in his, his guilt and haterd for himself eating him up inside.
Zoya walked up to her bed and sat down, breathing a sigh of relief, she was thirsty and as she reached for her glass her eyes fell upon the piece of paper. She saw the blob of blood on it and her heart ached, Asad had come here to put this note, his hand injured. Everything clicked in her head as she opened the note;it read:
I am sorry, I know this word has no value right now, but I will turn that around.
Zoya instantly felt guilty for saying what she said a moment ago, and grabbed her notepad from the drawer to write a response. But as she did, her minds stopped her telling her to not let it go this easy.
Zoya-No Zoya not this time...Mr Asad Ahmed Khan, a sorry wont do this time. And with her new conviction Zoya walked into the bathroom to get ready.
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The family was concerned when they saw Asad's bandaged hand, but soon their anger from last night took over. Najma and Ayaan were the only ones talking to Asad, and while Zoya stayed neutral, Dilshad's anger was prominent. Everytime she looked at Asad she shook her head in disappointment, making him feel more guilty. He didnt even bother to finish his breakfast as he walked out to his room, wanting to get away.
Ayaan followed him in, wanting to talk to him.
Ayaan-Bhaijaan can I come in..
Asad nodded..
Ayaan-Bhaijaan aap theek to hai na??Asad didn't respond..he just stared out of his window..
I..I don't know where to start...bhaijaan..umm I have always looked up to you in every aspect of my life, you are my role model and when...and when I heard about what you went through I was shaken, I could feel your pain, I could see that pain in your eyes, and I felt like cursing myself for crossing my limits and snooping in your room, for making you face your past..I ..I ..honestly wanted you to slap me, I got too carried away in wanting to know your past..Bhaijaan aapka gussa jaayaz tha..but kal jo..I uh..I mean..Zoya ke saath..bhaijaan I know you didn't mean anything..I know you you can never hurt anyone, and never can you hurt the one you love...
Asad..balled his fists when he heard the last line, his eyes brimming with tears, as the events of yesterday resurfaced...He punched the wall in frustration, not knowing what to do, how to make it right...
Asad-Ayaan..I am not as great as you make of me..I am a flawed man, a broken man, I am a man who cannot respect the one he loves, rather than saving her from the dungens of my darkness I dragged her along with me.Ayaan don't talk about love, I don't deserve it, that is the reason why Allah took it away, because I don't know how to take care of it. Yeasterday I fell from my own eyes..for what I did, I broke the person I caimed to love more than myself.Hell Ayaan I am not worthy of looking upto..
Ayaan- Nahi bhaijaan I know you, I knw you made a mistake and I know you will leave no stone unturned to make things right, bas ek request hai aapse..Please try to move forward and forget your past..Allah has blessed you with a second chance so please take that chance and make things right with Zoya..
Asad nodded and took Ayaan for a hug.. he had to make things right, with all of them and he would start with his mom.
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Asad-Ammi mein jaanta hu maine galti ki hai, I regret every word I said to Zoya, I feel like punishing myself for letting myself get to that point where I ..Ammi...his rage resurfaced, not allowing him to finigh his sentence
Dilshad looked at her son and cried, gently caressing his head she made him look up.
Dilshad-Asad what you did was wrong, I never expected you to cross such limits. What you said yesterday to Zoya broke my heart,because Zoya has suffered more than you...kabhi apne aap se tumne poocha hai ki why she took such a step?? Asad looked, at Dilshad his confusion visible in his eyes. Nahi socha naa.If you trust your mother enough than trust me when I say, Zoya deserves a second chance Asad, she deserves your love, the way you loved her when you were married, she doenst deserve what you gave her yesterday. Please if you are my son make it up to her.
Asad nodded, her words sinking in his soul, his mother meant the world to him and he trusted her never to steer him wrong, she would always be the cause of his happiness of that he was sure. He stood up, ready to make things right.
Dilshad-Asad jaane se pehle I need you answer my question out loud..Do you still love Zoya??
Asad no longer allowed the turmoil within to deter from the truth, he turned around and faced his mother, a smile froming on his mouth as he said.
Asad-Yes I love Zoya, more than anything or anyone in the world, there hasn't been a moment in time where I have not loved her, even in my pain I loved her.Ammi I love her very very much, and I promise that I will bring your daughter back, happy and herself. He walked out, unaware of Najma and Ayaan evesdropping...They hi-fied each other hearing their brothers confession.
Dilshad on the other hand couldn't stop her tears, her heart ached with the burden she was carrying, no one allowing her to confess..it seemed that Allah was punishing her for staying quiet for so long,by making her bear this burden upon her.she closed her eyes and prayed to Allah to give her the strength to confess her sins and to give back all the happiness Asad and Zoya had lost in the past 5 years..
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Zoya was lost in her own world, carelessly caressing Mango, as her mind took her form on though to another. She was mad at Asad and wanted to go away, but her heart didn't allow her to even step out of the house. Nothing else mattered, she loved him and despite him being an A*****E she still had faith in him,that he would get past himself and start again..
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Asad walked into Zoya's room not bothering to knock walking straight upto her bed, where she was seated with Mango...grabbed her by her waist and lifted her up in his arms her feet dangling off the floor as he moved away from the bed.
Zoya-What the hell are you doin Asad..let me go..
But he just stared at her the wickedness in his smile confusing Zoya..
Asad- Why didn't you respond to my apology... he looked staright into her eyes not allowing her to look away...
Zoya-I umm..just let me go..she fidgeted.
Asad- First answer my question..I know you read it...he challenged..
Zoya.-Coz that wont cut it...its not enough...for what you did..happy?? now let me go..
But he didn't..instead he squeezed her in closer..making her gasp..
Asad- Well in that case I better start making it up to you.. and with that he closed in the distance between their lips and kissed the living daylights out of her..his lips dominating her senses, making her melt, her anger becoming obsolete.
He let her go sensing her need to breathe, and smirked with satisfaction seeing her flustered.
ASad-So now do you forgive me??
Zoya gawked at him in shock..
Zoya- NO..n what do you mean by that..she pushed him away trying to straighten up.
Asad-Well..you always forgave me..after we..he stopped suddenly registering the missing link..Oh I see I guess I need to go all the way to get your forgivness..he walked towards her, his smile getting wider, his eyes filling with mischief, wanting to close in the distance but her hand kept him at bay...
Zoya- Don't you dare come any closer...and just get out of here Asad...you are not forgiven..she shoved him out the door and made it a point to lock it.
Asad walked away laughing, feeling damn confident in the path he had taken, to get her forgivenss.
SO???..did it get any better??? did u like it??? I guess u know the drill by now... COMMENT & LIKE...simple..hopefully Asad was justified and given the benefit of the doubt.. well tell me what you think..n ya the next chapter will end with them steppin in San Fran..so good times are on its way..n the next chapter will be worth all the tears u guys shed (AWWW for all of u..❤️)..so I am gonna leave now..hoping to wake up to a bunch of comments and likes..
Also PHew I answered to every comment!!!
PS..I still need to know a lot bout u guys..so here's the deal..wen u comment..pls mention where ur from.. simple yet again..
Here I'll start
I am originally from Baroda-Gujarat..As of now from the past 8 years I have been in Canada..so will wait for ur answers!!!
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