KriYaansh OS - Crazy Weird Cute Luv Story

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Posted: 11 years ago
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(Writers Note)
I m a Taarey Fan

but I wrote an OS on Kriyaansh 4 all my KR Frnds

I m not on IF nd my Devil Frnd (who is KR Fan) nd me want to post this OS
so I asked Sunil Bhai to post it
thanking him 4 posting My 1st OS
Okay...

.

I realized that this shot was going really long...

so I converted into a Two Shot...

so I'll give you the next part after some days...

so that the readers dont get bored of the extra long OS...

So guys gear up,
read dis OS nd give all ur positive feedback

So here is d
KriYaansh OS - Crazy Weird Cute Luv Story

Part 1 : Page 1
Part 2 : coming soon


see below post for KR OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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KriYaansh OS - Crazy Weird Cute Luv Story

~*~
She made her way through the massive building which had God knows, never ending floors made of glass, which made the sunlight shine like a big massive diamond.

But the pretty girl had a frown on her face, but she looked cute in that too!

"Ek naya competition...
aur suna hai ki voh America se aaya hai...
iska matlab American market strategies apply hongi...
which can take over my business position in the market...
nahi nahi...
hey Universe Ji...
yeh company number 1 no ho...
meri maa ka sapna hai...
isse tootne mat do Universe Ji..."

Who said that only men could handle huge chain of companies efficiently?

It only happens in India right...
Men greater than Women...
But she' has broken the myth...
Kria Ghai...
a pretty woman who had set up a small company as per her mother's wish...
and now...
she had her won big group of industries whom she handled single-handedly and efficiently...

~*~

He missed it..!!
living in India...
after all he was born here but he had to go to America...
after he finished his studies, it was time to go back to his land, India...
he had dreams of becoming the most successful businessman of India...
India's only business tycoon..!
And slowly yet rapidly, his company started gaining heights because of his new business methods and strategies...
Now nothing could stop him from leading India's economic charts...
except that one woman...
what was her name...
Ghai...
yes Ghai...!!

~*~

And they both never knew when the moderate competition turned into an aggressive one and eventually they started hating each other...
though they never saw each other...

~*~

"Rey Jab se aaye ho...
tab se bas kaam kaam kaam..!
Aaj hum club mein jaa rahe hai chill karne...
thats it..."

Sharanjeet Raiprakash,
in short Sharon,
in her usual dominating told a tired Rey.

Rey smiled at his best friend...

~*~

"Chalo nah Kria...
aaj kahin chill marte hai...
bahut bore ho gaya hoon"

A bored Swayam told Kria as he closed his video game.
~*~



Next part coming soon
all ur Feedbacks r welcome
chk below post
Edited by Suni1986 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Precap:
"Khoobsurat!"

~*~
"Oh man, I love her so much"
~*~
"He's cute..."
~*~
"Shit..."
~*~
"So what...pyaar toh kissi ke bhi saath ho sakta..."
~*~
just guess what wil happen🤣.🤣.🤣
~*~
Edited by Suni1986 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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erghhh...
res 4 d comment
u bandar 😆
my sweet bandar devil🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
pls update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😲RES
Edited by .-Arpita-. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc one dear...

thnks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres...
woohhh nyc start dear...
intersting...
love to read next part...
updating soon...
thnx MD for d pm...
Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc start loved it
oh! kria nd rey rivals
sounds good
kriyam nd sharey bff
precap was amazing
excited for next update
update soon
luv u

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