I Love You For Who You Are On The Inside-|SwaRon Os| - Page 4

Originally posted by: anandita

Unres🤗
Minu see i am here..!!
behna u just rock..!!
and break ke baad bhi ur as amazing as you were before it..!!
it was awesome jaan a totally touching and mesmerizing Os..!
you know what you just stole my heart its just worth alot of comments love and attention..
supalike you are you were and you will be always my totally awesrucking , pagal emotional and lovely behna kum writer..!! i just lived it to the core...i had tears in my eyes loads of them..
seriously chatterbox i was speechless after reading it ..
it was so so beautiful; each and every emotion so beautifully so wonderfully potrayed ur just awesome just like the way ur so beautiful and so pure at heart similar were your thoughts..
it was seriously out of the world what is called true love..
what we want our swaron to actually be..
keeping aside their egos love eachother forever...you just made my day behna...
i love you so very much...
thankuu ..thankuu so muchfor this beautiful present rather surprise..

love you loads and always will..
your behna..❤️

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

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Originally posted by: shardhasingh

Superb OS 👏
Very emotional it bring tears in my eyes 😭
Excellent effort👍🏼
Keep writing

Originally posted by: shweta_garg

Awesome !! 😊
It was so emotional !!!!! 😊
I loved it 😊 Swayam loves her despite everything ! 😊

Originally posted by: -spongy-

Okay !!!

mini so as my very new writing partner 😉

you wanted a detailed analyses main deti hun..

but zyada big nahi hoga as i dont have time 🤔

now from the top..

the title is heavenly and so true 👏👏

the OS really went of well..

the starting was bang on

the concept was hell different

and the monologue / emotions 👏 BRAVO !!

the helplessness you showed in sharon

and swayam always there for her...

the characters were well conceptualized

in short bang on OS

Thanks for the PM partner 😛

do write more

and do PM me and hope to write more OS's with you 🤗

PS.. sorry for the late analyses...

Originally posted by: kamlesh32

Brilliantly written os! It was so emotional and heart touching. Swayam is the best guy any girl can have 😳

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

amazingg concept

really beautifully penned

i really lyked t last line being each othr's srenght wala

t helplessness in sharon was beautifully potrayed

plz write more n dont forget 2 pm me 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Aishaa..

Amazingg OS :)