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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeba702

WAITINGGG
JALDI UPDATE DE
MUJHE SE WAIT NAHI HOTA AUR

mujhe se bhi
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all parts...
amazing. .
maan is really very egoistic n rude..
how can he hit just a five yr old kid vo bhi his own..
geet is melting very easily...I want her to give him hard time..
to win kajal will be the toughest task...
I like Amy. ..
loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part

maan trying to change ... good

kajal hates her father.. of course she will...

maan feeling bad hearing kajal...

thnx for pm dear

cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃UPDATING TODAY 😃
Thanks alot guys for liking my work *love u all*
and for those who have commented thanks alot means alot for me... love u guys
finally updating today sorry for delay
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Posted: 11 years ago
[ MEMBERSONLY ]

Part 14


Y Kajal? You like him isn't it?

No I don't like him I hate him.

She runs into the room leaving geet shocked and confused

And Maan is a tear who was on his crutches standing by the door listening to his daughter words.

Maan went from there and sat on the bed.

He was hurt exceptionally

His own daughter hates him

No it can't be... may be it's just a misunderstanding.

Yes it's a misunderstanding.

A day passed and there was very less communication of geet with Maan and kids were no where seen near Maan.

Maan was depressed now.

He was thinking continuously from last night how to win kk's heart back but now he is blank.

If this continues, I m sure geet will never go back with me. And I will lose kids and my wife.

It was not such that Maan was love over the heels with geet but he was missing her and her wifely duties but geet was stupid enough to feel this is love.

His phone rings again. He cuts the call again.

That was the limit can't this person stop annoying me. Calling me again and again ...

In office.

Geet yar what's this? Y is you keeping him at your home?

Amy yar you know the he is the fathers of my kids and I don't want to deprive my kids from their father's love?

Does he really love them?

Geet lost in thoughts

That the question which answer is still unknown to her

Geet you told me about him having a girlfriend?

Yea.

Is he still related to her?

I don't know but he have came back to must be broken up with her Na. and he is being very soft to me.

Geet was i rude to you in our school days.

What nonsense you were not rude.

I know I was not but imagine if I was rude to you then would you ever helped in my assignments in school?

Off course not. Y would I? Friends are not rude. And y will I help a person who is rude me?

Right. Now you are intelligent enough to understand.

Geet looked at him in shock

Geet you know y I call you an angel?

Y?

Because you are as innocent as angel

A lone tear escape from her eyes.

You have to be strong yar. For kids n for yourself

Amy holds her hand n continue

Let's go out for lunch yar.

I want to go to hospital.

Y? Are you okay?

Yes I want to meet that girl yar... I m kind off missing her

Missing a girl whose is name is still unknown to you. Geet did I missed something?

What?

You are an idiot.

Teri to...

Both laughed.

Amy prayed that her best friends always laugh like this.

And geet wished for a correct life partner for him.

(Hint Mila KIA???? Loll)

Both took leave early and went to hospital.

I want to meet that cancer patient girl

Oh room no XXX

At least ask her name geet.

amy whispered from behind

Just shut up.

They went inside the room and saw her reading comics.

Hi.

Hey aunty...

Amy laughed on aunty while geet glared at him

You paid for my operation Na?

Na...!!!

Lair aunty

I m not aunty call me di yar... I feel like I m old enough.

He he... Okays who is this uncle with you

Aye... watch it huh... its Arman malik.

Haayeee watch it huh its ridhima.

Aye watch it huh its geet!

Trio laughs and quickly clicked together.

After cracking numerous jokes and sharing a fun filling lunch they left ridzy in tears.

Di please doesn't go Na!

I will come back soon to meet you

Geet passed a smile to her.

I don't want to lose my family again.

You will not loose your family.

I m your elder sister only...

Both girls hug each other and tears were continuously flowing out of their eyes.

Enough yar else their will be flood in the room... n poor me where will I go huh?

You will go to god Na then.

Teri to... you want me to die??? That too this soon... I m still unmarried yar...

Amy made a face.

Oh so you are not married uncle

She showed tongue to him

Geet made them finish their never ending fight.

She picked her kids and went to home where Maan was waiting for her in living room

Good evening...

He passed a killer smile.

Evening

Geet replied and went into kitchen.

Maan felt some coldness but ignore because he knows geet loves him a lot.

After some time

Jeh come and opened TV.

Hii...

Jeh looked at him and replied softly.

Hey

Jeh was changing the channel and put on some cartoon much to Maan's annoyance.

Jeh?

Hmm???

He was fully engrossed in doremon.

I m sorry!

Huh!

jeh looked at maan confused

Sorry Jeh.

Jeh looked at him like he has seen a ghost.

Its ok but that was hard.

Does that hurt?

Yea a lot.

But I have heard that

REAL MALE DOESN'T FEEL THE PAIN.

and man doesn't cry

But does that hurt Jeh?

No. I was just kidding. That was nothing.

I m iron man you know.

Jeh and Maan both smiled

Geet gave him the lunch and it was a simple meal.

Mom I want burger yum.

No Jeh finish this.

Geet if he is demanding something to made some Na.

Geet went into kitchen annoyed and brought him the much desired burger.

Jeh look at Maan smilingly

You know...????

What Jeh???

You are not that bad.

maan look at jeh shockingly

Huh! Okay ... umm... thanks.

You're welcome.

Jeh nodded like he has given a big advice to his own dad while Maan was uncomfortable now.

You know you should try it more often.

Often what?

Being good

jeh said seriously.

With this Jeh bit his burger and again was engrossed in TV.

While Maan was shock and was embarrassed by his son only.

Precap- J Maan.

Sorry for the delay.

Happy diwali to all.

Do like and comment

Me planning to update on Thursday if the response is good

Do press like and comment if you want an update.

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Edited by sweetgirls1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part yaar
bht chota update 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow lovely update so cancer paisient is ridhima maan talkk with jey sweatly loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeba702

nice part yaar
bht chota update 😛


naazu ki bachi chup karja 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful dear
i think whatever maan is doing is not for his family he is doing it for himself only
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
liked the last bit very much

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