OS: Always by your side

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My first time writing a story on india forum..hope u guys like it
Jodha woke up from her sleep sensing that someone was in her room.
Jodha: Who is there?
Jalal: It's me, your husband.
Jodha ran to him when she sensed that something was wrong with jalal. She frantically asked him whats wrong?Jalal had his proud head bowed down and he was crying.Jodha was very tensed and worried.She repeatedly asked him whats wrong. But he didnt answer.
He held her hand and led her to the bed and made her sit, then laid his head on her lap and hugged her waist.She was very concerned and tried to comfort him by carressing his hair.
After a while he quietened down and told her
Jalal: Why does everyone i love betray my trust and break my heart. First my mom left me, then Khan baba and now Badi ammi. She never loved me, she used me for her selfish intentions. I feel like no one is going to stay by my side in difficult times
Jodha:( very lovingly) I will always be by your side. Remember our promise to stay together for ever, even after we die. And once our child comes in to the world he/she will always be by your side
Jalal felt his heart beginning to feel light again after hearing jodha's loving words
Now Jodha and Jalal lay on the bed facing each other both smiling and Jodha suddenly gave a soft cry and put her hand on her stomach. Jalal got up startled and asked her what happened.
Jodha: Nothing.Just your child saying hello to his father
Jalal relaxed and laughed. He put his hand on her stomach and could feel their child's soft kicks and smiled happily.
Jodha: So what do you think, will it be a boy or a girl?
Jalal: Im happy whether its a prince or a princess.
Jalal secretly wants a princess just like Jodha. Beautiful, adorable girl whom he can dote over.
Jodha: But i want a boy just like you. Handsome, Brave and Kind.
Jodha and Jalal smiled at each other and embaraced each other and closed their eyes dreaming about their future with lots of kids, happiness surrounding them all the time.

Please forgive any mistakes.


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Paytonlee thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa101

That was such a cute os!


Thank you!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and adorable!!👏👏👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
short and sweet os,very well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a Cute Os😳
lOved it..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!
it's awesome dear
& a cute OS😃
shahbhavini thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Very NICE! Cute ! keep writing dear!
Paytonlee thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you guys for appreciating 🤗
princessSonia thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a cute Os..
sweet one..

loved it..👍🏼
do cont wid more such os's..
n do pm fr d future os's...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very touching and Cute OS!!👏👏👏
Loved it.. ANd you r very talented!!😊😊😊

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