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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

Kiran..all r fabulose..u improvd a lot in siggy making..nw ur wrks reminds me of experiencd makers of A/s forum

thank u so much priya 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: additi11

Kiran..all are fabulose 👍🏼

premeer wedding siggie is my fav
thanx for PM

thank u sana 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks sadi 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

FABULOUSE UPDATE...
Loved it...
thanks You soo much...

thank u tara 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
ur most welcome :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonder what'll you have for next update. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Wonder what'll you have for next update. :)

next update is diwali special...another OS 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Happy Diwali everyone...wish you a very happy and safe diwali..and here is a small gift for you from my side..hope you like it..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

OS-Meri Jaan

Part-1

Heer Juneja layed straight on the bed after having a fabulous love making session with her husband Prem Juneja...wrapped in white sheet Heer closed her eyes breathing heavily..One single strand fall on her face..Prem come up to her...and tugged her strand behind her ear...heer opened her eyes and looked at her Prem...Prem, after giving a romantic look placed soft kiss on her forehead...Heer smiled and cupped his face in her hand kissed him near his lips...Prem smiled and caressing her hairs lovingly...

Heer:- I love you Prem...

Prem:- I love you too MERI JAAN...

Heer and Prem smiled and Prem buried his head in her neck and start placing wet kisses on her neck.

As Prem was busy kissing Heer...Heer starts remembering her first encounter with Prem...

--Flashback--

Heer came downstairs seeing her mother Teji was busy giving instruction to the servants...She looked at Teji confusingly..

Heer:- ma...yeh sab kya ho raha hai...yeh sari taiyariyan..kyun koi araha hai kya ghar pe..

Teji:- arre han tuje to batana hi bhul gai main...wo mera Prem araha hai..

Heer:- apka Prem??? Prem kon???

Teji:- arre tu Prem konahi janti..

Heer:- apne kabhi bataya muje apke Prem ke bare mein...nahi na...to phir..

Teji:- arre Lalit bhaisab haina...tere papa ke dost jo Canada mein rehte hai apni family ke sath...

Heer:- han han..bataya tha papa ne..

Teji:- han to unka hi barda beta hai Prem..to choti si hi thi jab wo log Canada shift ho gaye the..or ab lalit bhaisab apni poori family ke sath India arahe hai..hamesha hamesha ke liye...tere papa abhi unhi ko to lene gaye hai..kuch din wo hamare sath hi rahenge..

Heer:- kyaa..papa ke friend apni family ke sath humare ghar arahe hai or wo log kuch din humare sath hi rahenge or ap muje yeh baat ab bata rahe ho..

Teji:- sorry beta..wo kya haina..lalit bhaisab ka phone raat ko aya tha..or tab tak tu so chuki thi..isiliye tuje bata nahi pai..

Heer:- chalo koi baat nahi..kitne din tak rahenge wo log yahan..

Teji:- zyada din nahi..unka jo ghar haina yahan par..bus uss ghar mein kuch kaam bacha hai..wo khatam hote hi wo log wahan shift ho jayenge...acha sun pls meri thordi help karna beta..wo zara guest room mein jake dekh..Servants ne thik kar diya na

Heer:- thik hai ma..

Heer left from there

Just then landline phone rang..Teji picked up

Teji:- Hello

Balraj:- Hello Teji..lalit or baki sab muje mil gaye hain..main bus unhe ghar hi leke araha hun..wahan sab thik haina..matlab umm tumne Heer ko to bata diya sab kuch..

Teji:- bata to diya lekin sab kuch nahi...meri himmat hi nahi hui..ap jante haina agar Heer ko pata chal gaya hi humne bachpan mein hi uska rishta Prem se jord diya tha...to wo kitna gussa ho jayegi..ap to jante haiana usse arrange marraige nahi karni hai..

Balraj:- thik hai koi baat nahi..hum ghar ake kuch sochte hai..tab tak tum Heer ko kuch mat batana..

Teji:- Thik hai..ap bus sabko leke jaldi se ajaiye..

Balraj:- han hum sab ek ghante mein pohoch rahe hain..

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Everyone was settle in the living room...Heer and Meher was sitting beside gayatri..as she was impressed by Heer and Meher...and continuously phrasing them...Lalit also joined Gayatri and starts phrasing Heer and Meher..

Teji looked at the door..

Teji:- Gayatri yeh Prem or Preet kahan reh gaye..

Gayatri:- wo dono athe hi honge..darasal Prem airport se hi seedha hotel chala gya tha..dekhne ke liye ki wahan sab thik haina..bus athe hi honge..

Teji:- meri to ankhen hi taras rahi mere Prem or Preet ko dekhne ke liye..

Heer (thinks):- huh mere Prem or Preet...itni besabari se ma ne to kabhi mera bhi intazar nhi kiya..or is Prem ne to kuch zyada hi jado kar diya meri ma pe...ab isse milna to kuch zyada hi zaruri hi ho gaya...

Just then door bell rang

Meher:- main dekhti hun..

Meher open the door...and saw two handsome hunks in front of her...Teji came behind Meher asking

Teji:- kon hai meher..

And when she looked at the door...and got excited..

Teji:- Prem!!! Preet!!!

Both Prem and Preet smiled and took blessing from Teji...she hugged them and placed soft kisses on their forehead...Teji asked them to come inside...

Heer's back was facing the door as she was talking to Gayatri...She turned around when she heard her father saying Prem's name..

Heer (thinks):- no doubt both juneja brothers are really charming..but..in mein se Prem kon hai..???

Just then Lalit asked Teji

Lalit:- bhabi apko kaise pata ki in mein se Prem kon...jab hum Canada gaye the tab Prem to bohot chota sat ha or Preet to tab paida bhi nahi hua tha..to phir apne kaise pehchana

Teji (smiled and caresses Prem's cheeks):- bas pehchan liya...

Heer (thinks):- oh ok..not bad..to yeh the great Prem Juneja..jiski waje se mumma ne subha se mere nak mein dam karke rakha tha..mera prem..mera prem..huh...

Prem and Preet took the blessing from balraj..

Meher:- Hi..i am Meher..

Meher forward her hand towards Prem..

Prem gave a warm smile to Meher

Prem:- Hi Meher...nice meeting you..

Meher:- same here..umm ab can I call you Prem bhaiya...

Prem:- ya sure..but Prem bhaiya nahi...you can call me PB..Preet muje PB hi bulata hai...tu PB sunne ki adat hai muje..to tum bhi muje PB bulao..

Meher:- ok I don't mind..

Preet:- but I mind!!

Meher:- kyun tumhe kya problem hai??

Preet:- kyunki PB ko PB kehne ka haaq sirf muje..

Prem:- Preet!!

Preet:- I am sorry PB..but ap sirf mere PB ho..tum PB ko Prem bhaiya hi bulao..

Meher:-to tumhe pasand nahi hai mein inhe PB bulaoun...

Preet:- Yes!!

Meher:- or tum chahate ho mein PB na bulaoun???

Preet:- exactly!!

Meher:-to thik hai..agar tum yeh chahate ho mein inhe PB na bulaoun..to ab se mein inhe PB...HI BULAOUNGI...

Preet got shocked and his mouth was wide open...as everyone was trying hard to control their laugh..Meher turned towards Prem

Meher:- PB ap baithiye main apke liye chai leke athi hun...

Preet was looking at her shocked..

Gayatri:- hahaha Pre miss se mil yeh hai Heer..

Prem turned around to face Heer..and now he can see her beautiful face..Because as soon as he entered the house he was trying to looking at her with corner of his eyes...but now she is infront of him...and he was highly impressed with her beautiful eyes...and his elegant face...

Prem (thinks) God she's beautiful...!!!

Heer smiled at him...trying to be polite with him...because the way he was looking at her was making her nervous...

Heer (thinks):- yeh muje aise kyun dekh raha hai...kya main thik nahi lag rahi hun...wait yeh main kya soch rahi hun...muje kya farak parta hai mein iske samne kaisi lag rahi hun kaisi nahi...

She came out of her thought when Prem brought his hand towards her...

Prem:- Hi Heer...

Heer hesitantly brought her hand towards him and shook hand with him

Heer:- umm hi..

Teji:- umm main kya keh rahi hun..khana bilkul ready hai..or ap sabko bhi bhook lagi hogi na..to aaiye..khana khate hain...han..chalo aao sab..

Everyone left from there except Prem and Heer..Heer was standing there because Prem was still holding her hand..Prem was continuously looking at her passionately...making Heer nervously..Heer was trying hard get off from Prem's tight grip...

Heer:- excuse...can you please leave my hand...

Prem gave no answer to her except a smile...just then..he pulled her towards him making her land directly on his chest...Heer was shocked...

Prem smiled and whispered in her ears...

Prem:- Prem juneja ne yeh hath chordne ke liye nahi pakarda...lekin abhi ke liye agar tum chahati ho to chord deta hun...but only for the time being...

Prem smirk and winked at her and left from there leaving a shocked Heer...

--Flashback End--

To be cont...😳



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Posted: 11 years ago
wow a diwali treat
i m so happy
awesome os
pls update next part soon
thank u for this :-D

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