Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: arshi21
UGH.
I AM SO FRUSTRATED WITH SHYAM AND SHEETAL.

I cannot decide whom I hate MORE. Shyam or Sheetal. I WANT to SCREAM right now.

UGGHHH!!!

WHY WHY WHY. WHY isn't Arnav going? Stupid..STUPID stubborn guy.

I agree drama should be there in the story..and this story comes up with twist every now and then and I LOVE it...ADORE it...but I HATE these two villains.

HATE them.

Can you make them vanish please? I SO want Arshi together. :'(

I loved it waise.. the update..and I felt bad for Anjali..but I loved how you described Arnav's reformation through his family's eyes and I love Nani. I have always loved her.

Please..Shyam aur Sheetal ki shaadi karwa do.

Ha ha ha

You are so right Shreya

Why should only Anjali get a Dr Manav? Shouldn't we get Shyam someone too?

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#782

that's an amazing update

nani bari sayani..😆😆...loved arshi convo...

naniji notice the change in arnav when he's with khushi...

oh gosh i hate sheetal..& she is over confident that arnav can't break their alliance...omg shayam is helping sheetal..

jitne durr utne paas...both r trying to stay away from each other but still both r falling for each other...

ary wah Nk, lavanya and khushi r going coorg but oh no arnav is going with sheetal..plz kavi bring arshi together in coorg..

lovely update..

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#783

I just hope Sheetal's dad sets Arnav free... poor Khushi.. having her heart broken..

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#784

Oh I hate this Shyam... N now Shyam n sheet all together... Nooo... Oh no Arnav is not going to Coorg :(... Nahiii...

Loved the photo scene :D

Edited by luvbug - 11 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#785

good update..interesting..😊

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#786

I hate sheetal and now shyam has joined her. Please Please bring Arnav and Khushi together soon. Cant take this any more. this double dose.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Res

Edit:

Sorry for thr late reply!

The update opened with a scene of domesticity as if Arnav & Khushi are husband & wife and Arnav coming to kitchen to get a cup of coffee! 😉. It felt good to see them conversing almost normally 😛 The small things you add like "Did she think it was just the right recipe?" gives out a lot about how Arnav feels for Khushi 😉 O God if only he tells her!! But before that he needs to be unchained from the woman named Sheetal

Glad, Nani is able to see through Arnav and is seeing what Anjali is unable to see. Even if Anjali sees it may be she has given up knowing how her chotey thinks through mind and not heart O God she knows about Shyam's lustful eye on Khushi 😲

This Sheetal is evil personified 😡 Why the hell can't she get lost with douchebag Sahil, they are made for each other 😡

Loved how you resurrected IPK scene of Khushi teasing Arnav with a photograph 😃

Sheetal's surprise not only ruined Arnav's mood but mine too 😡 She ruined the Janmashtami celebration!! Why Arnav tolerates her and what's with her audacity to arrange a trip for him without even asking him 😡 I thought Arnav will decide to go on the team building trip with his colleagues to Coorg and was happy when he told Sheetal he will decide later. But my happiness vanished in a jiffy in the end 😭

Feeling as miserable as Khushi for Khushi right now 😭

Hoping for some Sunshine, next update Kavitha!! (I feel good to write my own name 😉)

Wish you a very Happy Deepavali!!

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago

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jg12

@jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#788

The way you write is so beautiful that all the characters seem so real. Sheetal is so obnoxious but easily Arnav is controlled by her . arnav seems to be such a meek personality around her. really curious that why arnav gives in so easily to everything she says .

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shree99

@shree99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#789

You are so much more than a wonderful story teller
Have loved your previous work
your arnav and khushi are so well characterised
i laugh with them, feel for them..so so real
so star crossed.. so wonderful
I feel very sad when your stories end.. very very nice