Short poems inspired by Rantara: Abhi toh sone do mujhe updated pg 4

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Ok, these are two short poems inspired by Rantara, dedicated to my yedis. I am writing in Hindi/Urdu for the first time, isliye grammar ko maaro goli, and tell me how it is!😆 Pic credit: Rima:)






Nadi ke uss paar milo

Iss toofan ka bhi koi anjaam hoga,
Iss baadh ka bhi kinaara hoga...
Vahaan milenge hum, nadi ke uss paar,
Mitaayenge inn saare shikwon ko, aur
Poori karenge, inn adhoori khwaishon ko...

Adhoori Khwaishein

Khwaishein toh hai dher saari,
Sab karni hai poori...
Usski aankhon ki aansoo pochne ki,
Usski raahon mein phool bichhane ki,
Usse kiye har vaade ko nibhaane ki,
Uske saath aur haseen lamhe bitaane ki,
Aur un haseen lamho ko jodkar ek
Khwabon ka aashiyana sajaane ki,
Khwaishein toh hai dher saari,
Sab karenge
ek din poori ,
Jab hum milenge, nadi ke uss paar...


---a rough translation for those who don't follow Hindi----

Meet me across the river

This storm shall also pass,
This flood shall also have a shore...
We shall meet there, across the river,
To erase all these complaints, and
Fulfill these incomplete desires...


Incomplete Desires

Desires! Oh, there are so many,
I've to fulfill them all,
To wipe the tears from her eyes,
To spread flowers in her path,
To fulfill all promises made to her,
To live more beautiful moments with her,
And to gather those beautiful moments to
Form a dwelling of our dreams...
Desires! Oh, there are so many,
I'll fulfill them all, one day,
When we meet across the river...
-Harshu😊

Edited by miss_bennet - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is really beautiful harshu! so very apt for them

beautiful beautiful poem 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lekin yeh nadii bhi kamaal ki nikli...
rothe rothe khud beh rahi hai yeh challi,
doobne apne piya ke baahon mein yaar,
aur rasthe mein kardi humko tumse paar!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mi7chimes

lekin yeh nadii bhi kamaal ki nikli...
rothe rothe khud beh rahi hai yeh challi,
doobne apne piya ke baahon mein yaar,
aur rasthe mein kardi humko tumse paar!!


Wow Res! That's beautiful!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u too! beautiful!! i want a poetic session now!! TT
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Originally posted by: mi7chimes

u too! beautiful!! i want a poetic session now!! TT


Shall oblige!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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updated on page 1
Edited by miss_bennet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow you are an amazing poet
loved the poem on rantara
Edited by srujanahpvr - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srujanahpvr

wow you are an amazing poet

loved the poem on rantara

thank you!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow! Its so beautiful...second one brought tears to my eyes..really touching yaar!

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