SS: Some Nights are Blue DISCONTINUED

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am back. This is a beta test to gauge how things have changed around the forum since I left. Hopefully, I will be able to continue without hurdles. Cheers!

Prologue: My Baby Lizard

I tell my Lizard to leave that man. I tell her every day of the week, every hour of the day...I wish he withers away from her sight like the pulsing sore that he is. I tell her to stop visiting him in the prison cell...for I know he is using her. Using my precious babe to keep his sanity, using her to fill the void in his empty heart, using her as the warm body he can f**k once a month and put on show to the guards. Using her to convey that he is still in touch with reality. The truth is far from it. He is swirling deep down his whirlwind of lies and driving Lizard with him. I want to stop him before it is too late. Someone please just tell me how.
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"Visitor No. 41856. Who are you here to see?"
"Rishabh M. Kundra".

"Very well. Name?"
"Madhubala Kundra".

"Relation to inmate?"
"He is my husband damn it! He is my f**king husband! I come here every f**king week and you know this is the time of the month we make love. You think I don't know you're watching? You pervert! Just f**king let me in!"
"It's standard procedure ma'am. The more you resist, the longer it's going to take and the harder it is going to be for your husband on the inside".
"Is this a threat? Are you f**king threatening me? You can't do that. You can't legally hurt him".

Oh my poor Lizard, I told her nothing is legal. Listen to me darling. Pay heed to my givings for I am your only true benefactor.

"Ma'am, I am in control here and I am sure you would not want me to lose it. After all, it is your husband at stake".

"Okay, I am sorry. I am sorry...I just...please let me see him. I won't...I promise not to do this again...I am sorry".

"Good. I understand you are under a lot of pressure. Just know that even letting you visit him once was a privilege not granted to most other families. This isn't the prison of a law abiding nation. We can do things, off the book, that you wouldn't want done".
I exhaled a hot breath as I watched her get humiliated by the guards for the nth time. By now, it had become a routine for her. They would poke fun at her, throw jaded insults, tarring not only her name but her entire existence with their filthy mouths. They would press her constantly hoping she would defect, break down, and give up on that man. And I wish she did! Even if just to get out of this horrible situation. But she kept going...when the whole world was set against them, she pushed through protect him. I wish I could say the same for him. That bas***d doesn't deserve her. I can only watch from the sidelines for so long. If he so much as sends a bad breeze her way SO HELP ME GOD, he will be dead by the hour!
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4ever4love thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK, I am curious! This story sounds very different!!
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Yes! Yes yes yes! You're writing here!
Res! I'm sleeping now, but definitely reading this tomorrow.

Good wala night Jassu! <3

Unresing!

I am probably the happiest person right now because you're back. I'm sure you'll be able to continue! The forum isn't THAT terrible...just ignore some people and all will be fine.

I love your title by the way. Some Nights Are Blue.
The title in itself just makes me want to read this.

Now on to the prologue.

Ooo prison cell. I wonder who 'he' is. And who 'she'/Lizard is. Assuming 'she' is Madhu.

Just read on. 'He' is RK and 'she' is definitely Madhu! I see. I like this.

Okay, this is interesting. They make love in jail. Odd lol.

WAIT. Then who's the narrator?! I am lost. But that is normal for the prologue of any story lol.

I wonder why he's in jail!

This is interesting! I want to read more! I want to know where you're going with this. I'm excited. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrittB

Yes! Yes yes yes! You're writing here!

Res! I'm sleeping now, but definitely reading this tomorrow.

Good wala night Jassu! <3

good night girl :) see you in the morning.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting... Continue it, will b glad to get to read it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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intersting 👏 👏 👏
update soon soon soon 😳


wen will u update unrequited love?? 😭 😭 😭
Edited by war_is_peace - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh jasu u startd writing in ds forum again...
was missing u..
🤗
prologue is very intresting...
am on for d story
.cont soon..
nd pls pls pm me wenever u write anything..pls..
DonnaHarvey thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desire6

Oh jasu u startd writing in ds forum again...
was missing u..
🤗
prologue is very intresting...
am on for d story
.cont soon..
nd pls pls pm me wenever u write anything..pls..

thanks div
I hope you got the PM that I send you this time though cause I did send one.
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Originally posted by: saakhi01

Interesting... Continue it, will b glad to get to read it.

😊

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