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HEY FRIENDS,

I M AMMY. I WROTE FF 1-2 YRS AGO.BUT I COULDNT COMPLETE IT DUE TO TIME PROBLEM.I M DECIDE TO CONTINUE IT.IF U WANT ME TO WRITE MORE PLZ GIVE UR OPINION.

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HERE IS THE PLOT
Ragging-AR FF


Hey guys...Ammy here.. Well i was inspired to write this ff whilst in DMG sid had divorced Riddhima... So this gave me an idea of what to write...Dont worry this is an AR ff and simply based on that... I hope u will enjoy it as i know how much u all love DMG... SO pls like and pls comment n tell me wht u think

Ragging AR-FF




CHARCKTER SKETCH



ARMAAN MALLICK(26)-A HANDSOME, DASHING, CUTE GUY.HE ATTRACTS PEPOLE BY HIS RANDOM LOOK AND ESPACIALY BY HIS OCEANIC BLUE EYES.IN PROFESSION HE IS A DOCTOR.HE IS A SENIOR DOCTOR IN PUNE,SANJEEVANI.HE IS A CARDIOLOGIST.HE IS THE SON OF BILLY & ANANYA MALLICK.MUSKAAN IS HER SISTER.




RIDDHIMA MODI(23)-A CUTE,INOCENT, CHARMING WOMEN.SHE ATTRACTS PEPOLE BY HER FRIENDLY BEHAVIOR.BOYS DROLLS OVER BY HER BEAUTY, HER ALMOND SHAPEGREEN EYE BECOME MAD EVERYONE.SHE IS VERY HARD WORKING BY NATURE.SHE IS DAUGHTER OF DR.SHASANK GUPTA & PADMA GUPTA.SHE HAS A ELDER SISTER & BROTHER RAHUL.RAHUL IS HER TWIN BROTHER.SHE IS MOTHER OF ARAV & WIFE OF LATE SIDDHANT MODI.



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SHASHANK GUPTA(52)-HE IS THE DEAN OF SANJEEVANI,MUMBAI.HE IS MARRIED TO PADMA.HE HAS TWO DAUGHTER'S AND ONE SON.

PADMA GUPTA(51)-SHE IS WIFE OF SHASANK.SHE IS A DOCTOR IN SANJEEVANI.SHE IS THE MOTHER OF ANJALI, RAHUL & RIDDHIMA.




RAHUL GUPTA(23)-HE IS HANSOME GUY.MUSKAAN IS HIS WIFE.HE IS INTERN IN SANJEEVNI,MUMBAI.
HE IS TWIN BROTHER OF RIDDHIMA.

MUSKAAN GUPTA(23)-SHE IS ALSO INTERN IN SANJEEVANI,MUMBAI.SHE IS A CUTE,BUBBLY GIRL LIKE IN DMG.SHE IS WIFE OF RAHUL & SISTER OF ARMAAN.BILLY AND ANANYA IS HER PARENTS.



ANJALI JOSHI(27)-SHASANKA AND PADMA'S ELDER DAUGHTER.SHE IS ATUL'S WIFE.SHE HAS A DAUGHTER NAMED TANI.HER DREAM BECOME DEAN OF SANJEEVANI.SHE IS A SENIOR DOCTOR IN SANJEEVANI,MUMBAI.SHE IS A BEAUTIFUL LADY.SHE SHOWS OVER ATTITUDE.

ATUL JOSHI(27)-HE IS CARING,LOVABLE IN NATURE.HE IS HUSBAND OF ANJALI & FATHER OF TANI.HE IS A SENIOR DOCTOR IN SANJEEVANI MUMBAI.HE IS A PEDICASRICS.








ANANYA(50) & BILLY MALLICK(52)-THEY ARE PARENTS OF ARMAAN & MUSKAAN.THEY ARE BOSS OF MALLICK ENTERPRIES.




SIDDHANT MODI(25)-HE IS HUSBAND OF RIDDHIMA & FATHER OF ARAV.HE PASSED AWAY IN ACCIDENT WHEN HE WAS 25.HE WAS SUCESSFUL DOCTOR.



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SUVARNA MODI(23)-SHE IS SISTER OF SIDDHANT MODI.SHE IS A N INTERN IN SANJEEVANI,MUMBAI.SHE IS A SEXY AND HOT GIRL.

MR ANURAG MODI(54)-HE IS FATHER OF SIDDHANT & SUVARNA.HE IS THE BOSS OF MODI ENTERPRISE.


ARAV-A 4 YEAR OLD BOY.HE IS SON OF RIDDHIMA & SIDDHANT.




ABHIMANYU & NIKITA MODI(27)-ABHIMANYU IS A SENIOR DOCTOR & DEAN OF SANJEEVANI,PUNE.NIKITA MODI IS ABHI'S WIFE & ALSO A SENIOR DOCTOR IN SANJEEVANI,PUNE.SHE IS THE BEST FRIEND OF ARMAAN.

Other charcter will be introduce in the story progressing...

hey friends,plz. do a comment to inspire me...love...

who wants pm send me a buddy request

AMMY
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INDEX

CHARACTER SKETCH-PAGE 1
PART1- PAGE 1

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RAGGING --- BY AMMY

PART 1


Ragging








PART-1

Malaysia is one of the famous place in world.Many of pepole come here
to full fill their dreams.I m one of them.

Hello, i m Riddhima Modi.I came here 5 years ago to complete my MBBS .today I m returnback to india as my brother's request.He is not my
real brother.I consider him as my bro.He offers me to join Sanjeevani to
complete my last internship.my bro Dr.Abhimanyu Modi is the head of
Sanjeevani,Pune branch.In India my family leaves.there are my
father-in-law & sister-in-law Suvarna which more than a lil sis.Im return
back india with my 4 years lil son Arav.

> (this is riddhima's pov.now go to armaan's pov.)


Hi all, i m armaan mallick.i don't like to introduce myself like
gumafirake style.in profession i m a cardilogist.basketball, boxing & bike
race is my hobby.basketball is my hobby bcz its remember me someone special.

Today i m going to sanjeevani, pune as a senior doctor.today i love
mumbai bcz my parents shifted here.my mom always tens(tension) about my
marriage.if she comes here she always force me to marry.all my friends are
married.nearly 2 years after I will met my someone special bcz we had promised each other when she will turn 25 we will meet each other.that day which we promise to meet each other is not so far.its only 2 years.after 2 years I will meet her.that day I will propose her & make her mine..so i am going to join pune .now armaan thought about his someone special.


...flashback

we see a board where write "UNSHINE SUMMER CAMP".It is a summer camp where 7 years To 14 years kids allow to join this camp.the summer camp held at Delhi.its going for 1 months every year.


we saw two lil small kids play with each other.the kids are a boy of 11 years old and a lil girl of 9 years.the girls throws mud to the boy and the boy does the same.they are enjoying each others company.the girl calls the boy "DABOO".the name irritaes the boy but he loved to listen it form the girl his "ANGEL".

Boy:-hi Anjel kaise laga tumhe game?
Girl:-bahoot accha laga daboo.
Daboo:-angel are you love rain very much na?so i enjoy to play this game with u when rain comes.
Angel:-thank u daboo ishliye u are my best friend & world's best best best bestest friend ho tum merey.


About 3 years ,every year in summer camp they met each other and enjoyed their company.
its last year when the met.the boy turn 14 and the girl is 12. and they talks with each other.what they do in future etc... Etc...?

Angel:-"Daboo tum ja rahee ho mujhe chodke hamesha hamesha ke liye?
Daboo:-"nahi angel.hum dubaara milenge.
Angel:-" kaise?
Daboo:-"aise?
Angel:-"bolo na kaise?
Daboo:-"ok baba.tum future mein kya banna chati batao?
Angel:-"doctor.nahi nahi dunia ki best Cardiologist.
Daboo:-"mein bhi india ka best "CARDIOLOST" banunga.
Angel:-"but tum to ek piolet banna chate the na aur kya bike racer phir yeh sab tumhe advantures bahoot pasand hai na.
Daboo:-"tumhare liye kuch bhi angel.tum hi kaheti ho na mein tumhara world ka best best best best bestest friend hoon.tum bhi meri best best bestest friend ho, to kya mai apni friend ke liye itna nahi kar sakta?
Angel:-"ok baba.yeh to batoo hum ek dusre ko kaise milnge.mein tumhe kaise pechanoogi?"

Daboo:-yeh lo meri lucky charm.(ITS A HEART PENDENT WHERE WROTE ARMAAN BEAUTIFULLY).ANGEL TUM ISKO TUMHARI HAR B'DAY PER AND SUCEESSFUL EVENT PER PHENA.YEH TUMHE MERI YAAD AND KAAMIYAABI DEGI.AND TUM MUJHE APNI 25 BIRTH DAY PER MUMBAI KE BEACH PER MILNA.HAAN TUM SAUS WAAL RED GOWN AND MEIN WHITE SHIRT PEHNGE.EK DUSRE INTEJAAR KARENGE TUM YEH PENDENT BHI PHENAA.OK.



Flashback end.

Armaan came from his thought and prepares to go Pune.

Precap:-A new morning & A new begining &kuch naye chehre kai naye rishte.kayi ullji hui sach.

Janne ke liye read the story and suggest me.
LOVE U
AMMY
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HERE GOES THE NEXT PART...


PART 2
Ragging


Armaan and ridhima both were on their way to pune (not together) little they knew that their life will take a new turn.

Armaan woke up coz of the sunlight disturbing him... He was new to pune. He didn't knew anything bout here so decided to have a walk in the near park.



Armaan was out jogging by the park in nothing but his shorts. He was an hour earlier than usual, but he had no choice. He had to report for Sanjeevni so if he wanted his jog it had to happen earlier.He turned onto a different path when he noticed a hot sexy girl jogging in front of him. She had black yoga pants and a pink sports bra on. She was listening to her ipod and had a tattoo of angel wings on her lowerback. She stopped to drink some water and tighten her shoelace.she turned around. Armaan was even more stunned !!!



Armaan was too stunned to speak. Not only was the hot sexy girl with a tattoo, but she also had a belly button piercing. He couldn't take his eyes off her body.
And soon she was out of her sight.



Armaan and Riddhima reached hospital.Armaan is a senior doctor there and he already know the rest of the interns there.

Same day the interns came to know that a new intern is going to join them. and they also know that she is from abroad and this is when their brain worked for no use... They thought as the new interns is from abroad she must not be able to speak or understand hindi.Armaan and the whole intern decided to do ragging of Riddhima..



Rid:- "hey."
Yuvi:- "hey Riddhima."
Naina:- "hey."
JP:-"hey falawar ji!!!!!!!!!"
Rid:- "What????"
JP:- "Kuch nai ji."
Naina:- "Oye jp chup kar issey hindi nai aati."
Ridhima gave them a look.


Naina:- "oh sorry he is mad.."
Rid:- "Okay!!!!!!!!!"
Rid:- "You all are also interns here. If m not wrong????"
Yuvi:- "Yes we too are inters here."
Armaan:-"And I m senior doctor of here. u all have to report to me."
Rid:- "hey this is Riddhima."
Ar:- "hey this is Armaan mallik.(to interns) yahi hai woh new intern jo abroad se aayi hai n hindi nai aati hai????? Issey ki ragging karni hai na?????"
Jp:- "haan bhaiya ji."

Ridhima gave a look "ooo!!!!!!"



Rid:- "can u just help me ?"
All:- "Yes sure tell us.."
Rid:- "can u tell me where will I find the general ward?"
Yuvi (whispered):- "Issey morgue ka rasta bata dete hain."
Ar (whispered too):- "Very intelligent. ok so Riddhima. First u go right n then take a left and the fourth room from right is the general ward."
Rid:- "Wid a sweet smile plastered on her face. Thank u sooo much."
Ar:- "The pleasure is all mine."

This way they always use to irritate her and she always used to smile at their stupidity.Their were numerable times when they used to irritate riddhima by giving her the wrong address and all time she used to enjoy this.




3 months later



They used to irritate riddhima a lot.Nothing changed or changed???? For Armaan. He felt sumthing for Riddhima but always used to ignore his feeling.

They made a plan to go for a picnic.But nobody invited Riddhima. Abhi and Nikki were also invited there.They thought that maybe Riddhima didn't came there on her own will. As she always disliked going to parties and picnics.

At night around 10pm Abhi and Nikki went to meet Riddhima.(Abhi and Nikki are seniors in hospital n relative of Riddhima)


Riddhima loved to be saree at home.She welcomed Abhi and Nikki.






It rained heavily that day. Interns were on their way to their house in their car n Armaan in his bike. Ahead the roads were blocked due to heavy rain.They saw abhi n nikki's car parked near a house.They decided to ask help from them.

They knocked at the door.Unaware of the fact that they are outside Riddhima's house. Abhi opened the door n was shocked to see them there at that too at this uneven time.They told him bout their problem n asked him to help them. Abhi asked them to stay there.Nikki told Riddhima that sum of Abhi's guest are going to stay there as the road ahead is blocked.

Riddhima agreed to this n made food for all like gajar ka halwa, aalo ke parathe, etc etc...


All freshen up themselves n settled to have dinner. They appreciated nikki for the food.


Jp :- "Wah madam ji!!!!!!!!!! App toh bohot aacha khana banati hai."
Naina :- "Sacha mein mam mujhe nai pata tha ki aap itna aacha khana banati hai."
Ar:- "Wah Nikki!!!!! kya baat hai?"
Nikki:- "Break laga... maine nai banaya hai."
Ar :- "Toh kisne banaya????"
Nikki:- "Riddhima."


All were shocked. But they prayed that she would not be the same Riddhima of hospital.


Rid:-"Haan."
Nikki :- "Bahar aa na. Sab puch rahe hai khana kisne banaya?"
Rid:- "Haan Nikki di abhi aayi. Bas 2 min ruk tum."

Then she came out. All were shocked to see Riddhima there in saree and that too speaking hindi.


And about Arman!! He lost his sense to see the most beautiful girl in saree!! The pinkish angel took his breathe in a pink saree and with a charming look!!!!!!!!!





Do comment n hit the like tab

AMMY

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Who wants pm for this ff plz like it here...it become easy for me to pm u..


thanks

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So-so 9ic concept
continue sooonnn... :)
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hey you should definitely continue it. Waiting eagerly to read ahead.
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interesting concept👍🏼...awesome updates😊😊..loved them❤️...waiting eagerly for the next update..continue soon😃
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hey you should definitely continue it. Waiting eagerly to read ahead.
i rember u also strtd it on dmg blog

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