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Thanks. Congrats for the wonderful work once again.
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Originally posted by: Sanjhari
Really nice one. Your story is gluing me up like I was glued up to the serial. Pls add m to your PM list,
Thanks. Congrats for the wonderful work once again.
Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Thanks Raj ! To see how Asad and Zoya next take this up.. Read the next parts...đ
PART 7
Thanks for all your likes and comments.. Do key in your comments for this part as well đ
When Zoya reached home, her parents were eagerly waiting for her...
Zainab : Zoya... kaisa raha safar.. aur Tanveer ka nikaah ??
Zoya : Accha tha ammi..
Gaffur : Zoya.. kya hua baccha ?? Tum pareshan dikh rahi ho.. ?? sab teek hain na ??
Zoya : Ji.. abbu.. safar se thak gayi hoon.. mein todha aaraam karleti hoon...
She freshened up and tried to relax but her thoughts were still revolving around Asad and his family...She remembered the gift which Dilshad had given and hurriedly took it from her bag to see what it was.. and what she saw shocked her...It was her sketch in Asad's arms..
In addition to the pencil sketch, there was a letter as well...
Letter
Zoya beta.. sketch dekh kar naraz to nahin ho na ?? Muje tum bahut acchi lagi.. Mein chati hoon ki tum mere ghar ki bahu bano.. Zabardasti nahin hain.. .. Mein nahin janti ki tumhare aur Asad ke beech kya jagda hua hain.. bas itna keh sakti hoon ki ..He is the World's best son any mother could ask for... !! Mein janti hoon Tanveer aur Shruthi dono tumhare bachpan ke dost hain lekin Asad ko bina jane koi bi raay math banalena... Usse samaj ne ki koshish karo please... Mein itna janti hoon ki woh tumhe bahut pasand karnelaga hain.. Tum jitna chahe utna waqt le sakti ho sochne keliye...!!
Ek aur baath.. shayad tumhare abbu ne tumhe apni behen ke barein mein kabhi kaha nahin hai.. Mein unki behen hoon... Mein isliye yeh sab nahin kehrahi hoon taki mein tumhare decision pe kisi tarah ki dabav daloon... Mein sach bathana chathi thi.. isse pehle tum koi bhi faisla lo..
Tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga.. muje manzoor hogi..
Allah Hafeez
Tumhari poophi .. Dilshad...
After reading the letter, Zoya was even more confused.. Her abbu and ammi had never mentioned about their relatives.. She knew that her parents had shifted from Delhi even before her birth.. She also knew that her grandparents were no more and that Gaffur was the only son of his parents.. but he had never mentioned about his sister...
Zoya's thoughts : Poophi mein sach jankar hi rahoongi... aur mein aap dono bhai - behen ko zaroor milaoongi.. Rahi baath apki bahu ki.. ..aap chinta math kijiye.. aap ki ghar ki bahu mein hi banoongi...and she looked at the sketch and ran her fingers on it.. with a smile on her face...
As she was lost in her thoughts.. she got a message from Asad... : Kya aap Bhopal paunchgayi teek tarah se ??
She replied back with an YES...She now wanted to speak to him and discuss about Dilshad's letter but she did not want her parents to hear anything about her poophi right now.. and so she preferred not to ring up at that moment...
Asad's house
After the discussion with Dilshad, Asad was happy to know that Zoya was already related to him and may be they are destined for each other..but he knew that it was a herculean task now to patch both the families...He ran his fingers on the sketch which his mother had done with a smile on his face...He carefully kept it in one of his drawers.. His mother indeed understood him more than himself and had brought out his heart's desire in the form or her sketch.. His thoughts drifted to Zoya and he messaged her...
Within a few seconds.. he got the reply but he was disappointed looking at it : "YES"
Asad's thoughts... : Sirf YES ?? unhone ab tak ammi ka woh sketch dekha nahin hain kya ?? kaise poochoon is ladki se ?? Agar mein unse kuch zyada poochunga to kahin woh bura na maanle ?? but he had to speak to her ... So after breaking his head with should I or should I not ?? for nearly half an hour, he decided to ring up and called her.. only to be disconnected...which upset him further.. but he got her message...
" Mein abhi aap se baath nahin karsakti hoon.. Shayad kal subah aapko call karungi...!! Ab please kisi bhi baath ka chinta math kijiye.. sab teek ho jayega.. Good Night !! "
He was not able to decide what her message meant.. He finally gave up thinking about it and remembered the snaps which he had captured in his camera...He took it out and looked at all the snaps ..and he also remembered that morning.. and their conversations.. and immediately he noted that there has to be some renovation in his house...
Next Day Morning Asad's Office..
Asad was restless since morning and very frequently he used to look at his watch...He was so upset that he re-scheduled his meeting as well to the next day... It was a big shock in Asad's office for everybody.. A man who had always arrived 3 minutes before any meeting and respected not only his time but also other's time had for the first time cancelled the meeting at the nth moment...
Asad's cabin
Rashid walked in to Asad's cabin and he sensed that his son was not in his usual state of mind...
Rashid : Asad.. kya tum teek ho beta ?? Koi pareshani hain ??
Asad : Abbu mein teek hoon.. !!
Rashid : Asad.. batao kya baat hain.. Tum jante ho ki... mein tumhe hamesha kush dekhna chatha hoon...agar office ki koi problem hain to mein sambhaltha hoon.. tum ghar jana chate ho to jao !!
Asad : Nahin abbu.. office ki koi problem nahin hain...
Rashid : Kya koi ladki ka mamla hain ??
Asad immediately looked at his father..trying to understand if his dad also had caught him like his mother...??
Asad : abbu woh actually... !!
Rashid : Asad.. agar tum kisise pyar kartein ho.. to pareshani ki koi baath hi nahin hain.. mein hamesha tumhara saath doonga.. Tum jante ho na.. ki meri aur tumhar ammi ka bhi love marriage hi tha ??
Asad smiled at his father : Ji abbu.. Abhi nahin abbu.. Mein unse abhi kuch kaha nahin hain.. Mein apko zaroor bataoonga...
As Father and Son were speaking, Asad gets the much awaited call bringing a sweet smile on his face...
Rashid : Ok.. ab to muje jana hi hoga.. Take your time beta.. All the best !!
Asad picked up the call...
Zoya : Good Morning...!!
Asad : Good Morning.. aur pandra minute ke baad Good Afternoon hojata...shukr hain.. aap ko yaad tha ki aapne subah phone karneki promise ki thi...
Zoya : hmm.. to aap mera phone ka intezaar kar rahe the ?? Kyun ??
Asad : Ji kar raha tha.. lekin aapne hi message kiya tha ki aap muje call karegi...isiliye !!
Zoya : Lekin Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan.. apne pehle call kiya tha.. jo mein le nahin payi thi.. to batayiye.. kyun call kiya tha ??
Asad : Patha nahin kahan se shuru karoon... Ammi ne aapko ek paper diya tha right ??? Kya apne woh dekha ??
Asad was tensed asking this question while Zoya had a smile on her face...
Zoya : Ji.. woh to ek letter tha...!!
Asad : Sirf letter.. aapne teek tarah se dekha right ??
Zoya : Ji...
Asad : Accha yeh batayiye.. kya likha hain letter mein ??
Zoya : Likha hain ki.. jab mein poophi se baat kar rahi thi.. tab unhe malum hua ki mein unki Bhaijaan ki beti hoon.. lekin yeh nahin likha hain kyun aur kaise ye dono bhai-behen bichadgaye...?? : Aapko kuch patha hain kya..?? Unhone aapko bhi ek letter diya tha na ?? kya likha tha usme ??
Asad : Are you sure sirf letter tha.. uske saath kuch aur nahin tha ??
Zoya : Ji.. aur kya hona chahiye tha ??
Asad : ji.. kuch nahin..
Asad's thoughts : ammi not fair.. aapne muje to woh sketch de diya.. lekin ab mein Zoya se kya kahoonga aur kaise ??
Zoya : Asad.. aap sun rahein hain na ??
Asad : ji.. and he tells her how Rashid and Dilshad had got married.. and what was the reason for Dilshad and Gaffur's separation...
Zoya : ok.. to yeh baath hain.. isliye muje poophi bahut apni jaisi lagi...accha yeh batayiyen.. in dono ko kaise milathe hain ?? Mein bahut hi excited hoon..
Asad : Phele meri problem ka solution doondne do.. baad mein woh dekhta hoon...
Zoya : Aapka problem ?? Kya hain apka problem ??Office mein kuch problem hain kya?? Ya Tanveer ne phir se call kiya tha ??
She was now driving him crazy... He did not know what to do...while Zoya was enjoying pull his leg all along..
Zoya : Asad.. kis soch mein kho gaye hain.. ?? Lagta hain aap mood mein nahin hain mujse baath karnekeliye.. mein phone rakoon.. shayad aap busy hain...
Asad : Nahin..
Zoya : Kya Nahin ??
Asad : Nahin. Mein busy nahin hoon.. Mein soch raha tha.. kaise ammi aur mamu ko milaye ?? Ek hi sheher hota to baath kuch alag hoti.. lekin hum itne door hain...??
Zoya : Mein ek kaam karti hoon.. Ayaan ke saath ye sab discuss karti hoon.. Muje yakeen hain ki woh muje solid plan dega...
Asad : Zoya.. Mein hoon na.. Aapko yeh sab kisi aur ke saath share karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hain.. Hum dono milke iska solution doondenge...
Zoya : Kyun ?? Ayaan to mera best friend hain.. To mein kyun yeh sab uske saath share na karoon ??
Asad did not know what to reply back...
Asad's thoughts.. : Yeh kyun kuch nahin samaj rahi hain... Mein janta hoon ki Ayaan unka best friend hain.. lekin yeh humara ghar ka mamla hain.. aur mein Ayaan ko Zoya ke nazdeek dekh nahin sakta hoon...
Zoya : aap phir se kho gaye ?? Ya allah aage kya hoga mera ??
Asad : Kya kaha aapne ??
Zoya bit her tongue.. for giving away her thoughts...
Zoya : Mein pooch rahi thi.. ki aap phir se khogaye the kya ??
Asad : Nahin.. uske baad...apne kaha ya allah kya hoga mera ??
Zoya : haan .. to ?
Asad : Iska kya matlab hain ??
Zoya : Dekhiye Mr. Khan.. ab hum dono ko patha chalgaya hain na.. ki hum dono rishtedhar hain.. muje yakeen hain ki abbu aur poophi ki narazgi bhi door hojayegi.. to hum kabhi kabhi milenge .. baath karenge.. aur haan ab hum dost bhi hain.. isliye aise kaha...
Asad : oh Ok... Kya letter ke saath kuch aur nahin tha Zoya ??
Zoya : Nahin.. aap baar baar kyun yahi baath pooch rahein hain ?? Kya hona chahiye tha ??
Asad : kuch nahin.. His voice was now sounding irritated...
Zoya : Accha .. yeh sab chodiye.. aap yeh batayiye.. jab mein Mumbai se nikal rahi thi. .. to aapke ankhon mein ansoo kyun the ??
But before Asad could reply..
Zoya : Sorry Asad.. Ayaan aya hain... Mein aapse baad mein baath karoongi.. bye take care...and she cut the call...
Asad was now upset and also angry not only with Zoya but also with himself.. He kicked the chair infront of him and he knew he would now not be able to concentrate on his work.. So he returned home to work on his plan...
Zoya's House
Zoya was enjoying every minute of her call with Asad.. She was enjoying how desperately he was trying to ask about his ammi's sketch..and each time his conversation was revolving over there itself... She also got a hint of his jealous side.. and how he was being over-protective when she spoke about Ayaan.. but she wanted him to boldly convey his desire and thoughts to her.. !!
As she was speaking to Asad , she saw Ayaan walking in to her house and she had abruptly cut her call with Asad...
Gaffur was out on work and Zainab had also gone out with her friend...
Ayaan : Zoya.. Mein tumse zaroori baath karna chatha hoon .. Chalo chaltein hain...
Zoya : Kya Zaroori baath.. aur tum aaj office jane wale the na ?? Yahan kaise... ??
Ayaan : Zoya.. sab bataoonga.. chalona please...
END of PART 7
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