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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for this super FF... Sweety... 👏
I thought of commenting after reading all the chapters... at a stretch. but couldn't hold on.. 😉
I like the way u describe the scenes, dialogues and the flow... SUPERB... 👍🏼
I am done with 10 chapters so far... quite interesting... will come back after reading the rest of the story and comment...
Keep rocking...
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 31

Karthik, Vishnu, Lakshmi & Raji are returning home back after a beautiful outing at KONE falls. Some melodious music is playing and everyone is quiet. Raji decides to break the silence.

Raji: Vishnu, Lakshmi... Unga rendu peru kitta oru vishayam sollanum. Actual aah oorilirundhu vandha udane solli irukkanum. Aanaa ennamo adhu correct aah amaiyalae...

Lakshmi: suspense venaa... ennannu sollu Raji...

Raji: appa hospital le admit aagarathukku munnaadi naan love panra vishayam avar kitta sollitten...

Vishnu stops the car with a sudden break...

Karthik: dei... parthu daa...

Vishnu: enna Raji... Ippadi shock kodukareenga... karthi yai love panren nu meesai kitta sollitteengalaa?

Raji: mmm hmmm...

Lakshmi: appuram...

Raji: enakku oruthara pidichirukku nnu sonnen... aanaa yaar nu sollalai...

Lakshmi: hey... appa enna sonnaaru?

Raji: un santhosham thaan enakku mukyam nu sonnaru

Vishnu: appo othukittaaraa?

Raji: konjam antha maathiri thaan...

Vishnu: konjam puriyara maathiri sollunga Raji...

Raji: intha maasa kadaisiyile enga ooru amman kovil thiruvizha varudhu... adhukku appa ennoda friends ellaaraiyum koottittu vara solli irukkaaru, avangalodaiye naan virumbara paiyanayum koottittu vantha parthu pesaren nu solli irukkaaru...

Lakshmi: haiyyooo... Ennaala nambave mudiyalai... Appa vaa appadi sonnaaru?

Raji: mmm... (smiles)...

Lakshmi hugs Raji and says "I'm very happy for u Raji..."

Vishnu shakes Karthiks hand and says... "congrats... machaan..."

Karthik: (smiles)thanks... da... Aanaa...

Lakshmi: enna Karthik izhukkure?

Karthik: Raji love panradhu enna thaan nu avanga appa vukku innum theriyaadhu...

Lakshmi: adhukku...

Karthik: naan thaan nu sonnaa eppadi react pannuvaar ne theriyalai...semma tension aah irukku...

Raji laughs...

Karthik: (seriously) nee sirikkaadhe...

Vishnu: dei... summa irudaa... Raji ivvalo santhoshamaana vishayathai ivvalo late aah solreenga...

Raji: appadi illai Vishnu... naama naalu perum onnaa irukkumbodhu sollanum nu ninaichen... adhaan... SORRRYYY...

Vishnu: sari... paravaa illai vidunga...

Lakshmi: ayyo idhai celebrate pannanume...

Raji: poru... innum mudiyalai...

Lakshmi: vera enna?

Karthik: adhu vandhu...

Vishnu: dei... innum enna ellaam maraichirukkeenga?

Lakshmi: adhaaane...

Raji: ayyo maraikkanum nu ellaam ninaikkale...

Vishnu: ippo neenga pannadhukku peru enna?

Karthik: dei... konjam pesa vidu daa... solradha muzhusaa kettuttu naanga pannadhu thappunnu ungalukku thonuchi nnaa ... Neenga enna thandanai kuduthaalum naanga ethukkarom... Enna Raji...

Raji: mmm... aamaa Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: sari sollu...

Karthik: Raji appa ICU le irundhu shift aagara varaikkum bayangara tension aah irundhadhu... Vera edhuvume thonalai... Raji ye adhukku appuram thaan normal aanaa... adhuvum illaama ... Naalu perum onnaa irukkumbodhu sollanum nu nenachi thaan...

Vishnu: OK... Appuram...

Karthik: enga appa vukku Rajiya pidichirukku...

Lakshmi: neeyum unga veeetla sollittiyaa Karthik?

Karthik: illai Lakshmi... naan Bangalore ponappo...

Karthik explains how his dad was fond of Raji and he indirectly stated that he will support him.

Vishnu: super machaan... Idhai yaavadhu en kitta solli irukkalaam ille...

Karthik: sollanum naa... nee enga kooda irundhe?

Vishnu: flight le yaavadhu solli irukkaradhu...

Karthik: nee thaan flight yeri ukkaandha udane thoongittiye...

Vishnu: antha chandru oda suthunathula thookame illa daa... adhaan...

Lakshmi: unga appa kettappo nee yen Karthik Rajiya love panren nu sollalai?

Karthik: modhalla Raji appa othukkattum Lakshmi... Appuram enga veetla sollikkalaamnu thaan naan appa kitta sollalai Lakshmi...

Vishnu: so, kovilpattikku eppo poreenga jodiyaa?

Raji: kovilpattikku naama naalu perum porom...

Lakshmi: OK... done...

Vishnu: Lakshmi ... Intha santhoshathai eppadi kondaadalaam nu sollu...

Lakshmi: enna Raji...

Raji: enna nnaa?

Vishnu: lakshmi ... adhai naama decide panrom... naama enna sonnaalum kekkaradhu thaan ivangaloda thandanai... enna daa?

Karthik: OK daa...

Lakshmi: ok vaa Raji...

Raji: mmm...

Karthik's phone rings... He looks at it and says "dei unga amma call panraanga daa." He answers..." Hello... ammaa... sollunga maa... Vishnu ennoda thaan irukkan maa... nalaikkaa ... OK maa... vandhidarom... Vachidaren maa..."

Vishnu: enna daa?

Karthik: appa etho veetle poojaiyum homamum arrange panni irukkaangalaam... Kaalaile 6 manikkellaam rendu peraiyum veetle irukka sonnanga...

Lakshmi: poyittu vaanga karthik... nalla vishayam thane...

Karthik: ellaarume polaam...

Vishnu: dei...

Raji: venaa karthik...

Karthik: enna venaa?

Lakshmi: yaaru nnu keppaanga illa Karthik...

Karthik: aamaa... keppaanga... naalu perum onnaa ore Office la velai seyyarom... Raji naan kattikka pora ponnunnu solla vendiyathu thaan...

Raji: karthik...

Karthik: aamaa Raji... eppavaa irundhaalum avangalukkum sollanum...

Vishnu: aamaa Raji... parthukkalaam vidunga...

Karthik: sari... vandi edu daa... kaalaile 6 manikku correct aah veetle irukkanum.

Vishnu starts the car and drives back home.


Chapter 32... coming soon...


CHAPTER 32


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweety amazing..
The way KR shared the information to VL and their reaction everything was cute...
So now we get to know Vishnu's parents and waiting for it...
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update sweety...

karthik and raji conveying the news about... they getting their parents approval ...[ partial approval 😛 ]..to laksh and vishnu was so cute..

..natural conversations...enjoyed reading it...🥳

Now they are going to reveal KR love to vishnu's parents
...what about VL love...adha epdi solla poranga...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update sweety.
Finally no secrets they hide from VL.
Very nice.
Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Sweety nice update, I'm waiting for everyone to go to Kovilpati and have fun together. Would we get to see Raji and Lakshmi in half sarees...I'm picturing everything in my mind!
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 32

SUNDAY:

Raji and Lakshmi wake up early in the morning and get ready to attend the poojai at Vishnu's home. Raji wears the peacock blue color saree that karthik bought her from Bangalore. Lakshmi also wears a beautiful lavender color saree. Both of them look amazingly GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!

Raji comes to the kitchen and makes coffee. She rings Karthik and tells him that she and lakshmi are ready.

Karthik comes downstairs and is very happy to see Raji wearing the saree he bought. He comes to her and says "romba azhaga irukke Raji..."

She simply smiles and gives him coffee. He continues to look at her admiringly. She feels a little disturbed and says 'parthadhu podhum... Ennamo ippa thaan pudhusaa parkara maathiri appadi parkare..."

He doesn't answer and continues to stare. She comes near him and waves her hand saying "Karthik"...

He smiles and pulls her towards him and holds her between his arms. She tries to move away but in vain as he draws her still closer. They look into each others eyes.

Raji: vidu karthik...

Karthik: maatten...

Raji: please...

Karthik: mmm...hmmm...

Raji: Lakshmi, Vishnu yaaraavadhu vara poraanga...

Karthik: varattum... Enakkenna bayam?

He shrugs his shoulders.

Raji: unakku konjam kooda vekkame illai... vidu Karthik...

Karthik: en pondaattiya katti pidichikka naan edhukku vekka padanum?

Raji: pondaatiyaa? Yaaradhu?

Karthik: nee dhaan... yen unakkenna sandhegam adhule?

Raji: namakku innum kalyaanam aagalai...

Karthik: aanaalum, aagale nnaalum nee thaan enakku pondaatti. Adhula naan thelivaa irukken..

Raji: adhu sari...

Karthik: Rajiii...

Raji: enna?

Karthik: unnai parka parka...

Raji: mmm

Karthik: ore aasaiyaa irukku...

Raji: adhukku?

Karthik: ore oru thadavai...

Raji: enna?

Karthik: kiss pannidavaa?

Raji: hmmm... venaa... nee modhalla ennai vidu...

Karthik: sari nee kudu...

Raji: adi venumaa? adhu venum naa kudukkaren...

Karthik: helloo... naan enna kettaalum, eppo kettaalum tharen nu promise panni irukke...

Raji: eppo?

Karthik: ey... appa unna pathi enna sonnaanga nnu sonnaa tharen nu sonniye...

Raji: adhu chocolate ku badhilaa vera edhaavadhu tharen nu sonnen...

Karthik: chellaadhu... chellaadhu... nee naan enna kettaalum tharen nu promise panne...

Raji: unnoda vambaa illa pochu...

Karthik: appo ozhungaa naan kettadhai kudu.

Raji: maatten...

Karthik: sari naan tharen...

Raji: venaa...

She tries to get out of his arms but he holds her firmly and sings "ennai vittu odi poga mudiyumaa... adhu mudiyumaa..."

Just then Lakshmi & Vishnu come there saying "aamaa... Mudiyaadhu... " and "konjam kashtam thaan"...

Hearing them Raji pushes him and runs away from there and Karthik says" nallaa iruppeenga rendu perum"

Lakshmi & Vishnu laugh and Vishnu asks "ennadaa nadakkuthu inge?????"

Karthik: onnum nadakkalai... athukulle thaan neenga vandhuttengale... and leaves from there.

Both of them smile looking at each other.

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Nee intha pudavaile romba azhagaa irukke...

Lakshmi: ippo nee aarambikkaadhe...

Vishnu: (smiles) sari vaa polaam.

VISHNU'S HOME:

Karthik, Vishnu, Lakshmi & Raji get down from Vishnu's car at sharp 6 A.M.

Raji & Lakshmi are surprised to see Vishnu's house. It was a beautiful duplex bungalow built with traditional architecture. There was a big lawn in front of the house and a huge marble statue of Goddess Lakshmi in the centre.

Karthik: ulle polaam vaanga...

Raji: enakku bayamaa irukku karthik...

Vishnu: enna Raji bayam? Veetle amma, appa mattum thaan iruppaanga... vaanga...

He walks towards the main entrance. Karthik holds Raji's hand and says "vaa..." and follows Vishnu. Raji turns towards Lakshmi and holds her hand and says " vaa Lakshmi... polaam".

When they reach the main door Raji says to Lakshmi "valadhu kaalai eduthu vachi ulla vaa..."

Lakshmi smiles and says...summaa iru Raji...

Karthik: aamaa Lakshmi... modhal thadavai vareenga... rendu perume valadhu kaalai eduthu vachi ulle vaanga..."

Both of them enter by putting right foot forward.

When they enter the living room Vishnu's father comes from inside and smiles looking at them.

Vishnu's dad: vaanga... enna karthi... eppadi irukke?

Karthik: nallaa irukken paa... neenga eppadi irukkeenga...

Vishnu's dad: naanum nallaa irukken paa...

Vishnu introduces Lakshmi & Raji to his father saying " appaa... ivanga engaloda Office la kooda velai seyyaraanga. Ivanga Lakshmi ... enga Team leader... Ivanga Raji... Programmer"

Both of them fold their hands and greet him "Vanakkam Uncle"

Vishnu's dad: Vanakkam... romba santhosham maa... nalla naal adhuvumaa veettukku vanthirukkeenga... Appuram ennai appaa nne kooppidalaam... karthi maathiri... yennaa Vishnu friends ellaarum appadi thaan kooppiduvaanga...

He turns towards Vishnu and says... amma ulla poojai room le iruppaa... ivangalai koottittu po... Ulle ponga maa... Karthi inge vaa...

Vishnu, Lakshmi & Raji go inside and Karthik comes near vishnu's dad.

Karthik: sollunga paa...

Vishnu's dad: appa, amma ellaam eppadi irukkaanga?

Karthik: nallaa irukkaanga paa...

Vishnu's dad: appa eppo retire aagaraaru?

Karthik: innum 6 varusham irukku paa...

Vishnu's dad: sari... naan poyi ayyarai koottittu varanum... nee ennoda variyaa?

Karthik: illa paa.. naan amma kitta pesittu irukken... neenga poyittu vaanga...

Vishnu's dad leaves and Karthik comes inside and looks for Vishnu.

He finds Vishnu, Lakshmi & Raji talking to Vishnu's mother in the kitchen.

Karthik comes inside the kitchen and stands in front of vishnu's mother and smiles.

Karthik: ammaa... appadi irukkeenga?

Vishnu's mother: Vishnu... avana en kitta pesa venaa nnu sollu... Naan avan mela romba kovamaa irukken...

She turns otherside and starts to make coffee.

Karthik looks at Vishnu and he shrugs his shoulders that he doesn't know what she meant.

Karthik: ammaa... neenga kova padunga anaa enna vishyam nu sollittu ...rendu adi kooda podunga... aana pesa maaten nnu solladheenga maa.. please

She doesn't respond and all four of them look at each other.


Chapter 33... coming soon...


CHAPTER 33


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A very cute romantic part...sweety..
Vishnu's mom ku karthik mela enna kobam...karthik veetuku varalannaa..or raji pathi sollala na...???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice and cute update sweety.
Vishnu' s mom karthik kita Raji ya pathi sollanu kovama?
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Posted: 12 years ago

that is a romantic and cute update ..good one sweety

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