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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread.
The update was awesome.
Sheetal is very much sure that she will marry Arnav, even though she knew how much Arnav hates her. Can't guess her next plan against Khushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratz on new thread

superb update
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FACE FOR YASH KULKARNI
This Update s Dedicated to My MOther India NICKYSWEET who bagged the Runner uo for her FF
THAT ONE MISTAKE😃
MOTHER INDIA 🤗
Happy Reading😃

PART 19

Fortunately or Unfortunately, Rakesh Nanda returned to the Hotel yet with another hooker on the same day Arnav returned from Lucknow. To his amusement, he winessed the encounter of Arnav n Khushi when he came to the garden for smoking. He also witnessed their passionate kiss.

So the next day he rushed to the reception and saw Sheetal chatting with another woman there. He asked for something in reception and turned to Sheetal.

"I dint know that here ladies are available for pleasuring purpose too." He said so openly without any hesitation.

"Hey Mr. mind your language." The other woman warned him.

"Cool down Janus. Its not that everyday we get Mr. Nanda to speak to us." Sheetal said fluttering her lashes.

"So, Mr. Nanda? Whom are you talking about? There is no service here like that." She said turning to him.

"I am talking about the new girl here. I saw her with some men in the garden being so close." He said thoughtfully.

"Oh, so she has gone to that extent. Now I can Trap her" Sheetal thought smiling devilishly.

"Oh Ms. Gupta, Its her private business nothing to do with our hospitality." Sheetal said doing a jig in her heart.

"Oh I see." Rakesh said and went smiling to himself.

Sheetal was happy seeing that her plan has worked.

The New woman looked at Sheetal with a question.

"What?" she asked cocking her brow.

"Nothing, just curious" She mumbled and went.

Sheetal just continued her work with her hidden smile. Aman saw this and understood that something terribly bad is gonna happen.

"Hey Devi Maiyya, ab yeh Sheetal ki dimaag mein konsa kichdi pak rahi hai(Now what is cooking up in this Sheetal's brain)?" He thought.

Devi Maiyya was reading That One Mistake a Fan fiction written by Nicky Saluja in India Forum. As soon as DM heard Aman, she took the remote of cameras placed to Monitor and switched them off.

BJ saw this and chuckled.

"Haan haan laugh now. You created such a defective piece that he doesn't leave me in peace at all. I thought I can read Nicky's story. But no. He is always poking his long nose. Nosy mathur." DM chided and pouted.

BJ laughed at her pout and asked,

"Anything new in Nicky's story?"

"She is the runner up of the FF of Week contest" Dm beamed.

"That sounds good. She deserves." BJ agreed.

"Yeah, next time lets make the winner" DM suggested.

"Ahan. Future are meant to be kept as suspense. By the way there is some commotion in AR, switch on the Camera Devi" BJ said.

"Suspense? Huh" DM shrugged and switched the cameras on and she continued with her reading in Laptop while BJ took a look at the happenings.

Khushi came late to work. She dint sleep even a second the night. The meeting with Arnav's family has stirred up something in her. But Arnav's beahavior towards her was confusing her more. He has a son now, but still he wandering behind her in the name of vengeance. All these thoughts kept on lingering in her mind that she forgot to sleep. The sleepless night took troll on her as her temperature went high badly.

Her head gave her easy jobs rather than heavy ones saving her energy. But Khushi's health condition was beyond that. Still she did her work. During her lunch, Khushi went to the garden area. There she saw Ankit explaining something to his assistant. Without disturbing him she went near the last cottage. But she stopped on her tracks and thought.

"How can you ask about Arnav's wife to his sister? If she asks Y I am asking about her what will I say?" she stood thinking. That time Daijaan came there and called her.

"Khushi bitiya. What are you doing here at this time?" she asked with a warm smile that was reciprocated by Khushi.

"Woh Daijaan, I wanted to ask something." Khushi hesitated.

"haan Bitiya, don't hesitate." Daijaan smiled.

"Daijaan, I wanted to ask about Ansh's mother. I find the whole family here, except for ansh mother and grandmother.." Khushi dragged her sentence.

"You dondt know Bitiya? Tara bitiya, died giving birth to Ansh baba." Daijaan broke the bombshell on Khushi. Khushi's world spinned in front of her eyes.

"It means that, Tara died two years back?" Asked Khushi.

"Yes bitiya." Daijaan confirmed. That time Anjali came out and saw Khushi.

"Hi Khushi ji" she said happily.

"Anjali ji I mean Anjali bhabhi I mean Ma'am.." khushi stuttered.

"Ahan. Khushi ji, pls call me Anjali, or else Bhabhi." Anjali winked.

"But you are my boss's sister" Khushi said politely.

"Haan. But I don't want to be too formal. After all he is out of his mind rite?" Anjali said biting her laughter seeing Khushi's horror face.

"Oh sorry about that. I dint mean to.." Khushi's apology was interrupted by Anjali.

"Leave it na. I know about him. Akdoo kahin ka. So can I call you Khushi?" she asked. Khushi smiled at it.

"As u wish Senior ji" Khushi said and both of them laughed.

"Bua, Khushi"

"Maa, Ushi" kids came running to them.

"Khushi, how is your wound. You still look tired" Ansh asked making baby face.

"Arey haan, I forgot. How are you Khushi? You must take rest na?" Anjali said in a little stern tone.

"Arey Arey, I am fine now. I cannot sit idolly so I came for work"

"Haan we can see that. My butterfly is looking like she is out of her colors" Yash said in sad tone.

Khushi tried hard to stand still but her legs were going weak. She has been getting many shocks since 5 days. Her body was giving up and she fainted to be caught by Yash. Anjali panicked while Ansh tried patting her cheeks.

Meetthi got scared and cried loud.

"butterfly, wake up."

"Khushi"

"Khushi, wake up"

"Ushi ushi"

All these voices faintly reached her head. At that time Aditya and Sanaah reached there.

"Jiji" Aditya ran to her as Khushi steadied herself.

"Nanhe, what are you" Khushi voice was very feeble.

"Jiji, for how many days have you been starving yourself?" both Sanaah and Aditya asked angrily.

"No Nanhe, Sanaah, I am not skipping my meals" Khushi said like a child.

"Mr. Sanak Chinto, stop your interrogations and let her to the cottage. We will make her eat." Yash said and asked Anjali to set the food plate for Khushi.

"Right Yashu bhai, I will bring her in" saying Aditya carried Khushi in his arms ignoring Khushi's protests. Sanaah helped Anjali in setting the plate and dishes.

Aditya made her sit in a sofa and Sanaah brought the food plate. Ansh saw this and snatched the food plate.

"I will feed her. Adi Sanaah go and tell her head that she wont be working today."Ansh ordered leaving the elders to look at him in amuse.

"Ansh, I will eat myself" Khushi protested. But when she opened her mouth to speak Meetthi stuffed the roti piece in her mouth. Khushi made baby faces and started chewing it.

"Ushi, no talk when eat." Meetthi warned her placing her hands on her hips making all others laugh. Yash was enjoying the way Khushi has a special place in Kids heart. All others mentally gave hi5 to each other as their plan was on the right track. Khushi had her food and was taken to her room accompanied by Ansh n Meetthi with Sanaah.

"Jiji, U have some magic or what? Kids are always ready to do anything for u." Sanaah winked.

"Its just Love n affection. That is big magic in the world." Khushi said in a feeble voice.

"If u have so much love, then why did you leave Arnav Bhai?" Sanaah pricked her first thorn.

"That is past, before I was born. But why cant you now stay with us. Khushi I like you so much. I will ask Papa to marry you. Please. Hereafter I will eat, talk politely. Listen to whatever u say. But you please don't leave me" Ansh did his part of job.

"stop it you both. I can go to my room by myself. I don't want to listen to your blabbers" Khushi said angrily and went to her room unsteadily.

Here in the Cottage, Yash and Anjali were playing their part.

"Bhai, You know Chinto is in love."

"WHAT THE" was Arnav's famous reaction.

"What the Nahi jeejaji, Pyaar. Chinto loves someone in AR" Yash said and gave a meaningful look to Anjali seeing Arnav's confused face.

"Saale se Jeejaji?" Arnav asked.

"You will know the reason soon. But do u know Who our Chinto loves?" Yash asked.

"Enough of your Quiz competition. Come straight to the point Pinki n Yash" Arnav growled.

"ADITYA GUPTA" both Yash n Anjali said in Chorus.

"NOOO" shouted Arnav.

"Bhai, that's not fair."

"Pinki, but he is a chef here. Not from a well to do family..." Anjali snapped Arnav.

"Bhai, Aditya n Sanaah love each other n they know to take care of their needs. Moreover Aditya is not the one who turns his face to his love. He doesn't look like one" Anjali kept ranting.

"You never know pinki. It may be hereditary too. When the elder can turn away from its love, the younger can also" Arnav grumbled.

"Did you say anything" Yash asked as he heard what Arnav said.

"Nothing, I will talk to Aditya and then we can come to a conclusion." Arnav declared.

"SORRY I CANNOT MARRY SANAAH"

All turned towards the voice and were shocked to the core.

Here Khushi's mind was replaying Ansh's words. She was really taken aback. She never knew that Ansh was craving for a mother's affection to this level. But if Arnav comes to know all these, He will think that she is trying to trap him through Ansh. She cannot think of going through his hasrness again.She was not able to think straight.

So she decided to go to work so that she can divert her mind. But destiny had other plans and a trouble was waiting for her. DM Grinned widely at Arnav n Khushi.

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What s the trouble? Keep guessing

Helli hi Bye bye


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Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SUPER UPDATE BUT LESS ARSHI SCENE



DM READING NIDI ONE MISTAKE



OFCOURSE NIDI CAN DO ONE MISTAKE VERY WELL.



CONGO NIDI ONLY YOU CAN MAKE MISTAKE ALSO SUCCESS



DO MORE MISTAKE LIKE THIS NOT ONE



TWO KIDS HOW AFFECTIONATE THEY CUTE



POOR ANSH FEELING FOR MOTHER LOVE




KUSHI CONDITION BAD WHEN ARNAV REALISE IT



FINALLY KUSHI GOT ARNAV WIFE CONDITION



ADI DON'T WANT MARRY SANAH Y



DON'T KNOW WHAT PLAN GOING



AND THE STUPID SHETAL AND NANDHA DON'T KNOW WHAT NEXT



ME WAITING DUFFER DO IT SOON





Edited by vijiasr08 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
awesome didu👏👏
oh soo its abt past before they born abb mystry solve bhi kardo didu😃
abb aage kya hoga cliff hanger par kyun chodti hoo😡😡
updt soon😃😃
Edited by ARSHIANDI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
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nice one👏
omg khushi is so bad at health🤢 🤢 🤢🤢 🤢
hope arnav understands her soon😳 😳 😳 😳
now adi is going crazy😕 😕 😕😕 😕
y s he saying he cant ary sananh😕 😕 😕 😕😕
Hayee cutie pies ansh n meethi are😳 😳 😳😳
well ansh is aching fr a mother😭 😭 😭 😭
poor lil guy😭 😭 😭😭
waiting fr some cheap act by nanda😡 😡 😡😡 😡
Edited by Rami92 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh no how can i missed reading this update
I am at cloud 9


I m so shocked u dedicated this chappy to me😲

I m so surprise..DM is reading that one mistake and again noisy mathur irritate her
He always need help at wrong time
Meenu i love u yaar i love u a lot..thanks for coming in my life.
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i got so emotional now



Khushi came to know ansh being arnav father and now he also want khushi marry his father are wah ye toh kamaal ho gaya


Now waiting for their plan to work
Update soon me waiting




Edited by Nickysweet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what the!! chappy suru hua k nahi kameena rakesh ka darsan ho gaya..disgusting maan he witness da encounter of arshi nd wanted khushi for his pleasure..saale kameene khushi k taraf dekha na to tera medak jese ankhe notch lungi ( kutte kameene me tera khoon.. eww..chi chi..nahi piungi)
lo naam liya aur agaee kameene k piche piche dayan shit-all..chodo ja dayan tujhe to mere haath he marna hai..lol..uchal le..jitna uchalna hai..ishki shaitan dimag me kuch to chal raha hai..hmm..isspe nazar rakhni padegi..
(haye sanki k story k to sabhi dewane hain to devimaya kanha dur rehpati..hamari sanki hai he ese...love u re)
hmm..so khushi was shocked by da revelation dat ansh is arnav's son nd tara died two yrs back...upar se bichari ka haal he bura hai..high temp..ho gaee behos..thank god all r der for khushi...
wow ansh singh raizada order khushi dat he gonna feed her..hmm..akdoo ka beta hai attitude to hoga he..i truely adore da bonding of meethi nd ansh with khushi..so cute..
hain..why aditya said no to marry sanaah??
uparse khushi was worried as ansh said her dat he gonna tell his father to marry her..paar iss Akdoo singh raizada ko kaun samjhaye..wo samjhe tab na..
shyamji jaldi sab kuch thik kijiye(itni jaldi bhi nahi warna stry khatam ho jayegi..lol)
ullu ki taraha egarly waitingwa for nxt updatewa..
continue soonwa..;)
Edited by arshi_sush - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab update
Kids love khushi too muxh
Wht sheetal is planning

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