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Posted: 11 years ago

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Karinaaa we want an UPDATE ...PLEASE!

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808226

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

WE MISS UR UPDTS...PLEASE BE BACK WITH A LONG UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

I WANT LIL JEEVIKA TO COME SOOON!

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Riddhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

Missing Zaaine...!!😭

Update Soon!!! 😃 ❤️

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Kays94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

chapter 47

The next morning Zaaine was awake early as he had gone to bed quite as soon as he came home. He went to his bathroom to brush his teeth and then went downstairs to find his parents. There was no one there. Then he went back upstairs and opened his parents bedroom to see them both siting in their bed watching tv and sipping on their coffee.

j - "Goodmorning my Zaaine"

z - "Goodmorning mommy" he said climbing on the bed.

He got right in the center of his parents. Viren and Jeevika both took the blanket and covered him up also.

j - "Someone fell asleep really early last night"

z - "I missed my bed mommy"

v - "Are you still sleepy or you fine now?"

z - "Fine daa. Daa me wanna see new home"

v - "Yeah we will go see it in a few hours"

j - "OMG Viren"

v - "What, what happened?"

j - "The baby just kicked"

v - "REALLY?" he said getting out of bed. He quickly went to the other side and sat near the edge of the bed next to Jeevika. He placed her hand there and felt the kick.

j - "Zaaine you want to feel it?" she said excitedly

z - "Yeah"

Viren made him put his small little hands on Jeevika's small bump.

v - "Did you feel that?"

z - "No"

j - "She's not kicking anymore. Maybe later you will feel it"

z - "Mommy make sure my sisters room is right next to mine please"

j - "Okay Zaaine. Will you check on her like a good big brother every night?"

z - "Yes and in the morning also"

v - "Promise?"

z - "Pinky Promise"

v - "Okay shall we go shower and eat breakfast now?"

z - "Yes, me really really hungry"

v - "Oh yeah you didn't have dinner last night either. Okay let's go eat downstairs"

j - "You guys go, I'm gonna stick around here"

v - "Aren't you hungry?"

j - "Yeah but I don't wanna get out of bed"

v - "Do you want breakfast in bed too now?" he said smiling

j - "No its okay. I'll take a nap and come down. You both go eat"

v - "Okay, lets go Zaaine!"

After breakfast, the three of them got ready and were heading out to check a few houses near their neighborhood. Viren drove to the first home that he was the most excited about. He really hoped Jeevika would like this house, or actually love the house as much as he did. The agent was standing outside the house waiting for Viren and his family. They got out and went inside the beautiful house. Jeevika was quite mesmerized by the outside of it even. She loved the huge trees near the garage and from the outside the house seems huge. As they went inside, they started walking through a large corridor. Jeevika was astonished at how beautiful it looked. There was a large stairway to take them upstairs.

agent - "This is the leisure area on the first floor. The owners right now have kept a pool table and a mini movie theatre with a large flat screen and recliner chairs. The entry to the backyard and to the pool is through that door" he said walking ahead.

Viren and Jeevika followed with Zaaine right behind them.

v - "This looks amazing" he said looking at the huge pool outside. "Do you like it Jeevika?"

j - "Yeah its really nice"

agent - "Now I'll take you upstairs"

As they went upstairs to the second floor, they saw a huge kitchen with a beautiful family room nearby. Jeevika walked to the kitchen to get a feel of it. She loved it so much especially because she could see the view of the ocean from the windows. Then they saw the two guest rooms on the second floor which had a decent size. Jeevika loved the open feel to the new house and how it was surrounded with windows and there was so much light passing by everywhere. She and Viren then went upstairs to see the third floor. This was where the master bedroom was along with two rooms which would obviously be for their kids. While Viren and Zaaine went to see his potential room, Jeevika went inside the master bedroom and wanted to buy the house instantly. She loved how big it was, and everything was so cozy about it. From the fireplace, to the walk in closet everything was just perfect. When Viren walked inside the room he could tell she was very excited about the house.

v - "So how do you like it?"

j - "Absolutely amazing! Viren I really love this place"

v - "So one yes down... one more to go. Zaaine did you like the house?"

z - "Its okay Daa. I don't like the stairs"

Viren and Jeevika laughed knowing how much Zaaine hated stairs now after he injured his head falling from them. And now since the house was three stories high, he was a little more petrified.

v - "Zaaine don't worry. The floor on the ground you won't have to go to a lot. Its just the second and third floor"

z - "Okay"

j - "But Viren can we afford this house? I mean its location is great, and its so huge"

v - "Jeevika the both of us have been working our asses off the past 8 years. This is when our hard work pays off finally. Don't worry about that" he said kissing her forhead

j - "This is like a dream come true Viren. I'm so so soo excited"

v - "I know that. Okay now I'll go talk to the agent and start finalizing the details"

The three of them went back downstairs and the agent knew this family was convinced of getting the house.

v - "I think we'll take it" Viren said excitedly to the agent.

a - "Great. We can start the paperwork right away"

v - "Sounds good. Jeevika why don't you take Zaaine and go home or maybe shop around for sometime. I'll call you when we're done and then you can pick me up?"

j - "Okay, I'll see you guys later"

Jeevika and Zaaine left the house and walked to the car.

Sara see I updated 😆!!!

Would appreciate some constructive criticism/advice/appreciation 😛 Do hit like and comment pleaseee!!!

Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago

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kryanjivifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Superb I just loved it u r a superb writer

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Krystlektacker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

finally ! updated thank u so much ...virika owns new home waiting to see the real excitement ...zaaine was really cute by his talk want more and zaaine..waiting for the new baby...