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loved it

kya awsm update tha
really wonderful
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Swaron version

In few days he had made my every family member his friend. I don't mind that much but he irritated me a lot. I(look) walked down the stairs to dinning table where my mom was preparing lunch, "Maa your always busy in work at least take rest for a while."

"Its fine beta in two days your brother is getting married I need manage it well. You leave that and go to Swayam's room to check everything is fine there?"

"Maa, I don't wanna go to his room plz that monkey man is really irritating and Bhai ki shaadi hai uski nahin." But she was stern at her voice. "I said go, he is our guest and really sweet boy. You'll like him if try to be polite with him." I had to go Now... Errr he and sweet My foot. No one was there in his room and it looked no less than garbage house.

"Eww what the... err is this... I had only heard that people from Mumbai don't bath... today my eyes approved that fact... Bhai had told he is very organized.. huh Organized hoga meri balah se.. for me he is a villager... infact our cows and buffaloes are more organized atleast where ever they sit firstly they clean the place with their tails... Yeh I don't know kahan ka janwar hai... Stupid... " I blabbered while cleaning his room.

I searched him in a full mood of fighting and he was in my dance room performing his work out which increased my anger more. "Oh hello Mr. Tourist what are are you doing here? This is my dance room and no outsider is allowed here."

"I was just..."

"Chup... beech main mat bolo. Tumne mere equipments ko haath kaise lagaya? Kaisa lagaya haath?"

"Good question... aise" He took my ghungroo's from the shelf and made a sound from it. "Haww! Except me no is allowed to touch them." He kept my ghungroo's back. "This is it, What do you think of youself? Im quietly working out here."

"What do I think? What do you think of youself? Cool dude of mumbai?"

"Wo main hoon." He really thinks that way... "Oh yeah aur na jaane kitne dino se you haven't bathed."

"Isme bathing ki baat kahaan se aah gayi?"

"In your room your clothes are lying here and there. Your stuff is in a condition of more like kisi bhains ka gobar and smell... Wo to bilkul waise hi aah rahi hai gobar jaisi. You are at some one's place so be little organized but no tameez to hai hi nahi tum main."

"Tum mere room mai bina meri permission se jati ho and you call it tameez. You check my personal stuff and you think its tameez. Mind blowing, Have you ever behaved with your so called tameez and all? You Manner less"

"Haha...Manner less? I'm manner less?"

"Yup"

"You called me manner less?"

"Bilkul, tumhe hi kaha manner less aur kaun yahan hai? Kisse bolunga? And That morning also I had told remember? In my room... On my bed... aur tum sharma ke bhag gayi thi... kuch yaad aya?"

"Shut up! Now just wait and watch.. What I do with you? Agar maine tumhe yahaan se seedha Mumbai nahi bhagaya na to mera bhi naam Sharon nahi... huh.."

"Alright.. just goo... buzz off."

_______________

After lunch we had planned to go to Devka beach. Janvi di, Karan and Perneet bhabi were seated at the back seat. "Janvi di drive kaun kar raha hai?" I asked taking the front seat. "Sharon" I immediately got down. "I'm not gonna sit with her?"

"Kyu tum darr gaye?" Sharon(look) appeared from behind. "Huh darr n tumse... Nahi. Its just that I don't trust your driving skills and yeh kya pehen rakha hai?"

"Isme kya kharabi hai? Beach pe saree pehen ke aaun?" She tautned back. "You don't have any other option Swayam so plz baith ja" Perneet bhabi said. "Bhabi only for you sake Im sitting with her."

Beach was fun I ran into the water taking a deep dive in it. My clothes were all drenched when I was out, Sharon laughed. "What is it? Laughing so hard?" She laughed more loud. "Nothing, I just saw a buffalo taking bath after so long."

"Ohk... but wait a minute buffalo? Uh called me buffalo?"

"Oops sorry Bull."

I ran behind her, finally caught through waist water. I twirled her around tickling her, "Haha Swayam, hahah plz plz Chodo." She pleaded. "Chod dun?" She nodded. I left making her fall in water. "What was this?"

"Areey tumhi ne kaha chod do to maine chod diya."

She splashed water on my face, "Okay sorry, get up." I forwarded my hand, but instead of getting up she pulled me in water. "No problem... I was already drenched." I said. She giggled splashing water.

Next evening it was Mehendi ceremony, I came down dressed up in black Suit. There was still some time in ceremony to start, she was arranging flowers in the Thaali. "Hey... Yeh kya hai?" she said. "Kya Kya hai? My new suit."

"That I can also see but why are you wearing it right now?" I gave a puzzled look, "What you want I should remove this and come in shorts?"

"Shut up, I guess someone never informed you that black clothes aren't allowed in a festivals or weddings. Its not considered a good sign." Janvi di came from behind. "I know, I look hot right? And you are just not liking that..." I said.

"No Swayam shez not lying. Black isn't considered good for Indian festivals or ceremonies." Janvi di said. "Is it?"

"Ya now go and Change. Looking hot.. hahaha my foot." Sharon said. I went to my room and threw my coat, "What is wrong in black? I look so handsome in black. What to do now? Hmm What to wear?" I talked to myself when some one knocked.

"Who is it?" but again a knock. I opened the door, it was Sharon and I closed the door on her face. "Wat d... such a weird fellow? Dekhte hi darwaza band kar diya. Open the door? I said open the door?"

"Uh have irritated me a lot saying black black. Now what is it? What uh want?"

"Im not here to take something, Im here to give you clothes otherwise Im not interested in seeing your face. Ab tumhe nahi chahiye so I'll go and Maa ko keh deti hoon that her sweet boy refused to accept clothes sent by her."

I immediately opened the door, "What's going on? And what has Smriti aunty sent for me?" She made a cute weird face. "Arrey abhi to kaha yeh clothes bheje hain maa ne. You'll look human."

"Haha... that last line *You'll look human* was added by you right?"

"I know words are mine but Maa must also thought the same dats why she sent you clothes. Now you don't care about yourself so we thought we should care about you afterall you are our guest and we cant allow you to go infront of Perneet bhabi's family like this in shorts.. Hahahah"

"Chup... zubaan sambhal ke. You know whom you are talking to" I ran my hand through my hair saying "Humse, Swayam Shekhawat se..."

"Tum apne yeh kapde sambhalo." She threw them on my shoulder."Hmm if aunty had sent they would be good. I'll wear them by the way aunty ne hi bheje hain na?"

"Haan bilkul, wear them."

"Yahan khade khade pehnun? Go from here.. badi aayi." I shut the door.

_______________

He came down handling his sneekers and dhotti which was worn in wrong style. Everyone laughed on him even I(look) did. My sweet revenge of suggesting Maa for giving him dhoti as he for irritated me alot. It was just Part one my revenge was to be completed with Part two. Mehendi ceremony began and he sat in corner.

My mom went to him and corrected his dhotti. He kept his head on Mom's shoulder. Mom caressed his hair and talked to him. I don't know what they both said, I was too far from being heard maybe buttering my mom. After some time mom came to me.

"Sharon, take this plate for Swayam. He must be hungry." She said.

I took the place, did my mischief and then moved to Swayam. "Hey Swayam, Mom has sent this plate for you." He was looking a bit sad but when I took mom's name a smile spread on his face. "Oh! You know I was missing my mom and your mom is so caring. She came to me, corrected my dhotti and now sent food. How sweet of her."

I guess it wasn't right time to play prank with as he was homesick. "Arrey plate do na?" he said. "Nahi, I'll get you another one."

"Kyu? Aunty ne bheji hai so give it." He took the plate and gulped the food down. The food had excess chilli powder added by me but still he was gulping it down. "Swayam plz stop. I had added chilli powder to it, I'll get uh another plate." He didn't stop eating. I tried to hold his hand back but he threw my hand.

I quickly got him some water, "Swayam plz have water." He shoved off my hand. I pleaded a lot but no use. When he finished he kept the plate aside and went to his room.

I felt so guilty after he left, in taking revenge I forgot he could be in a good mood. I went to his room with a small bowl of ice-cream. The door of his room was slightly open. He gently folded his clothes given by my mom and was there in his all time favourite shorts suffering from after effects of having chilli.

He kneeled on bed covering his mouth. I went to him, "Sorry, sach main I wasn't knowing that you were not in a jovial state."

I forwared the spoon with ice-cream, he moved my hand away. I moved my hand two or three times and alast he threw the bowl from my hand. It broke down on floor. He looked here and there trying to avoid me. I cupped his face.

He coughed a bit. I ran my hands through his hair and placed my lips on his falling back on bed. He left my lips after few minutes pulling the dupatta off from my shoulder and nuzzled on my throat. I just moaned on his actions.


KriYaansh Version


In few days he had made my every family member his friend. I don't mind that much but he irritated me a lot. I(look) walked down the stairs to dinning table where my mom was preparing lunch, "Maa your always busy in work atleast take rest for a while."

"Its fine beta in two days your brother is getting married I need manage it well. You leave that and go to Reyaansh's room to check everything is fine there?"

"Maa, I don't wanna go to his room plz that monkey man is really irritating and Bhai ki shaadi hai uski nahin." But she was stern at her voice. "I said go, he is our guest and really sweet boy. You'll like him if try to be polite with him." I had to go Now... Errr he and sweet My foot. No one was there in his room and it looked no less than garbage house.

"Eww what the... err is this... I had only heard that people from Mumbai don't bath... today my eyes approved that fact... Bhai had told he is very organized.. huh Organized hoga meri balah se.. for me he is a villager... infact our cows and buffaloes are more organized atleast where ever they sit firstly they clean the place with their tails... Yeh I don't know kahan ka janwar hai... Stupid... " I blabbered while cleaning his room.

I searched him in a full mood of fighting and he was in my dance room performing his work out which increased my anger more. "Oh hello Mr. Tourist what are are you doing here? This is my dance room and no outsider is allowed here."

"I was just..."

"Chup... beech main mat bolo. Tumne mere equipments ko haath kaise lagaya? Kaisa lagaya haath?"

"Good question... aise" He took my ghungroo's from the shelf and made a sound from it. "Haww! Except me no is allowed to touch them." He kept my ghungroo's back. "This is it, What do you think of yourself? Im quietly working out here."

"What do I think? What do you think of yourself? Cool dude of Mumbai?"

"Wo main hoon." He really thinks that way... "Oh yeah aur na jaane kitne dino se you haven't bathed."

"Isme bathing ki baat kahaan se aah gayi?"

"In your room your clothes are lying here and there. Your stuff is in a condition of more like kisi bhains ka gobar and smell... Wo to bilkul waise hi aah rahi hai gobar jaisi. You are at some one's place so be little organized but no tameez to hai hi nahi tum main."

"Tum mere room mai bina meri permission se jati ho and you call it tameez. You check my personal stuff and you think its tameez. Mind blowing, Have you ever behaved with your so called tameez and all? You Manner less"

"Haha...Mannerl ess? I'm manner less?"

"Yup"

"You called me manner less?"

"Bilkul, tumhe hi kaha mannerless aur kaun yahan hai? Kisse bolunga? And That morning also I had told remember? In my room... On my bed... aur tum sharma ke bhag gayi thi... kuch yaad aya?"

"Shut up! Now just wait and watch.. What I do with you? Agar maine tumhe yahaan se seedha Mumbai nahi bhagaya na to mera bhi naam Kriya nahi... huh.."

"Alright.. just goo... buzz off."

_______________

After lunch we had planned to go to Devka beach. Janvi di, Karan and Perneet bhabi were seated at the back seat. "Janvi di drive kaun kar raha hai?" I asked taking the front seat. "Kria" I immediately got down. "I'm not gonna sit with her?"

"Kyu tum darr gaye?" Kria(look) appeared from behind. "Huh darr n tumse... Nahi. Its just that I don't trust your driving skills and yeh kya pehen rakha hai?"

"Isme kya kharabi hai? Beach pe saree pehen ke aaun?" She tautned back. "You don't have any other option Reyaansh so plz baith ja" Perneet bhabi said. "Bhabi only for you sake Im sitting with her."

Beach was fun I ran into the water taking a deep dive in it. My clothes were all drenched when I was out, Kria laughed. "What is it? Laughing so hard?" She laughed more loud. "Nothing, I just saw a buffalo taking bath after so long."

"Ohk... but wait a minute buffalo? Uh called me buffalo?"

"Oops sorry Bull."

I ran behind her, finally caught through waist water. I twirled her around tickling her, "Haha Reyaansh, hahah plz plz Chodo." She pleaded. "Chod dun?" She nodded. I left making her fall in water. "What was this?"

"Areey tumhi ne kaha chod do to maine chod diya."

She splashed water on my face, "Okay sorry, get up." I forwarded my hand, but instead of getting up she pulled me in water. "No problem... I was already drenched." I said. She giggled splashing water.

Next evening it was Mehendi ceremony, I came down dressed up in black Suit. There was still some time in ceremony to start, she was arranging flowers in the Thaali. "Hey... Yeh kya hai?" she said. "Kya Kya hai? My new suit."

"That I can also see but why are you wearing it right now?" I gave a puzzled look, "What you want I should remove this and come in shorts?"

"Shut up, I guess someone never informed you that black clothes aren't allowed in a festivals or weddings. Its not considered a good sign." Janvi di came from behind. "I know, I look hot right? And you are just not liking that..." I said.

"No Reyaansh shez not lying. Black isn't considered good for Indian festivals or ceremonies." Janvi di said. "Is it?"

"Ya now go and Change. Looking hot.. hahaha my foot." Kria said. I went to my room and threw my coat, "What is wrong in black? I look so handsome in black. What to do now? Hmm What to wear?" I talked to myself when some one knocked.

"Who is it?" but again a knock. I opened the door, it was Kria and I closed the door on her face. "Wat d... such a weird fellow? Dekhte hi darwaza band kar diya. Open the door? I said open the door?"

"Uh have irritated me a lot saying black black. Now what is it? What uh want?"

"Im not here to take something, Im here to give you clothes otherwise Im not interested in seeing your face. Ab tumhe nahi chahiye so I'll go and Maa ko keh deti hoon that her sweet boy refused to accept clothes sent by her."

I immediately opened the door, "What's going on? And what has Smriti aunty sent for me?" She made a cute weird face. "Arrey abhi to kaha yeh clothes bheje hain maa ne. You'll look human."

"Haha... that last line *You'll look human* was added by you right?"

"I know words are mine but Maa must also thought the same dats why she sent you clothes. Now you don't care about youself so we thought we should care about you after all you are our guest and we cant allow you to go infront of Perneet bhabi's family like this in shorts.. Hahahah"

"Chup... zubaan sambhal ke. You know whom you are talking to" I ran my hand through my hair saying "Humse, Reyaansh Singhania se..."

"Tum apne yeh kapde sambhalo." She threw them on my shoulder."Hmm if aunty had sent they would be good. I'll wear them by the way aunty ne hi bheje hain na?"

"Haan bilkul, wear them."

"Yahan khade khade pehnun? Go from here.. badi aayi." I shut the door.

_______________

He came down handling his sneekers and dhotti which was worn in wrong style. Everyone laughed on him even I(look) did. My sweet revenge of suggesting Maa for giving him dhoti as he for irritated me alot. It was just Part one my revenge was to be completed with Part two. Mehendi ceremony began and he sat in corner.

My mom went to him and corrected his dhotti. He kept his head on Mom's shoulder. Mom caressed his hair and talked to him. I don't know what they both said, I was too far from being heard maybe buttering my mom. After some time mom came to me.

"Kria, take this plate for Reyaansh. He must be hungry." She said.

I took the place, did my mischief and then moved to Reyaansh. "Hey Reyaansh, Mom has sent this plate for you." He was looking a bit sad but when I took mom's name a smile spread on his face. "Oh! You know I was missing my mom and your mom is so caring. She came to me, corrected my dhotti and now sent food. How sweet of her."

I guess it wasn't right time to play prank with as he was homesick. "Arrey plate do na?" he said. "Nahi, I'll get you another one."

"Kyu? Aunty ne bheji hai so give it." He took the plate and gulped the food down. The food had excess chili powder added by me but still he was gulping it down. "Reyaansh plz stop. I had added chili powder to it, I'll get uh another plate." He didn't stop eating. I tried to hold his hand back but he threw my hand.

I quickly got him some water, "Reyaansh plz have water." He shoved off my hand. I pleaded a lot but no use. When he finished he kept the plate aside and went to his room.

I felt so guilty after he left, in taking revenge I forgot he could be in a good mood. I went to his room with a small bowl of ice-cream. The door of his room was slightly open. He gently folded his clothes given by my mom and was there in his all time favourite shorts suffering from after effects of having chili.

He kneeled on bed covering his mouth. I went to him, "Sorry, sach main I wasn't knowing that you were not in a jovial state."

I forwared the spoon with ice-cream, he moved my hand away. I moved my hand two or three times and at last he threw the bowl from my hand. It broke down on floor. He looked here and there trying to avoid me. I cupped his face.

He coughed a bit. I ran my hands through his hair and placed my lips on his falling back on bed. He left my lips after few minutes pulling the dupatta off from my shoulder and nuzzled on my throat. I just moaned on his actions.


Sorry Guys ending this chapter on cliffhanger. Sorry my mistake... This was the second last one.. last chapter will be posted soon. but do tell hwss dis one... by ur lykes n reviews...



Edited by K.R_ackraal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
reswa
unres. . .
Awesome chapter. . .
Loved their pranks. . .
Isse kehte hai pranks. .
N mumbai. . .ki people nai bathing. . . Abhiii. .he he. .
Whole chappy is beautiful. .
Update asap. .

P.s. I love uh so much. .
Edited by sanju_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
edited
Awesome update 😊
Sharon irritated with Swayam
Both playing pranks with each other😆
Sharon guilty of her prank
Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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res..
unres..

awsum update dii..!!
loved it..
haye kya prank tha..mast tha..
loved it..
mumbai ke peps bath nhi karte..dii..ye apko kis ghade ne kaha..??
mujhe batao me uski tang tod ti ho..dii specify karo mumbai ke boys nahate nhi hai..
girls nahate hai..me bhi mumbai ki ho..so plzz
anywayz
haye ye end me kya tha..??
ese clif hanger par ending nhi karte di..
jaldi se update karo..
me waiting..
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
read all parts in one go
really it's awsum
first chap was very emotional
d way u described der feelings, i loved it
second chap was indeed amazing
kria's dance nd KR's meeting scene was well written
this chappy was wonderful
loved all d pranks of kria
nd der kiss scene reminded me of ramaiya vastavaiya
loved it to d core nd plz update soon
Edited by Neha_KR - 11 years ago
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res,,,

unres


aswom update...

kya likhti ho yar bechare ko sari mirchaiya khila di...

wo ro rha ha...
love it update soon

Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago
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res

unres...

omggg!!!!!!!! wat an ending!!⭐️
it was.. *ahem ahem*😳
aryuuu... gr8 job dear..👏
whole part was awsmm.. their fight was as usual my fav.. fully entertaining..😉
end mein u reminded me of hum dil de chuke sanam.. it was one of my fav scene..
juz loved it aryuu.. update soonishh..😃

nd chollyyy for ds super late...
main bhool gayee thi..
cholly aryuu..😭
Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago
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Arya!! I wonder and feel sad that I missed a fab writer like you!! will be reading all soon..
and coming to this SS!! I am highly thankful to you!! I love these kinds of concept and the way your write.. it seems so calm and peaceful yaar!!

I am totally in love with this story!!

Please can I get the last part soon?? like really soon??😳
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awsome update
kriyansh's noak-jhoak was too gud..
aur jab romance start ho raha tha u ended d update ye to galat baat h..
do update soon...

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