ArHi FF:8:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

very nice update..good going...interesting...please do continue soon..😊

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MEsw

@MEsw

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Thank God you are back...

thanks for the update.

when a bud opens up in to the flower, we say ' flower is beautiful'. it is hard to go on describing beauty of each and every petal.

your chapters are the opening petals which are going to reveal the beautiful flower...the bud, the petal and i know , i can see...even the flower is beautiful...

cares and concerns of the lordy lord are buried under the hotheaded ness and the ego, so only sharp words are making its way...to her ears...
though for her the gifts and the encounter were the time when the heart peaked from the layers of those heavy layers.

waiting to watch the lordy learning few lessons...

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Sigh...
Its amazing...
Lovd it so much..
Its time to teach some lesson to lordy..
Cnt wait for nxt part..
Plz update soon..

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

GENERAL!

*Edit 1

Yes. Oh yes. *wipes tears of joy*

After so long. Linnie, I hope I didn't trample on the hem of your gown in my hurry to end up right beside you. *grins foolishly in utter joy*

*Edit 2

Oh sweet Lightning. Oh, I would have wept so if you were shot! There was a scream of "Nooo!" building up in my mind as I read and slowly understood what was about to happen.

Linnie, I swear I would have stopped reading if something bad happened. But I am SO glad it didn't. The way the General has his life stored within her, seriously, it is touching.

His mother, she must have died a terrible death, for him to see her pain-wrought face on the visage of a dying man, who has a sword run through him. Mysteries, mysteries.

But why? Why is Khushi out of reach? The General will return to the Castle now, isn't it? Just because she is someone else's, it doesn't mean the General cannot bring her to cure him. Or is it the soldier's honor acting that he will not bring himself to the level of wanting another's woman to cure him?

The girl. The curious girl with the aged eyes and the evil smile. No, certainly such a being would not carried by pure Lady Anjali. And the General, too - he isn't evil. So who is she? And what is she? Is she another form of the Lady with the Hood? She isn't a hallucination, we know that now, if Lightning could sense her too.

Ah. More. I want more.

Edited by maverickmartin - 12 years ago

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

chalo at least he has some dignity left. unlike our shyam, he is looking for a cure for his ailment and hence his obsession with khushi

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

Aww he left the army for lightning that right there is true love
Wonder what Khushi does to Arnav

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

Wow...General shyam has a soft side.. he is faithful to those who are faithful to him. And what happened to his mother???

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

unres..

Lovely update... I missed general.. Beautifully portryed general's skills in war...

A horse's point of view.. awesome, thinking...

This chapter helped me knowing the general in a better way...

He left battlefield and his position as soldier, now what is he going to do!!!!

I only felt bad, coz he not for once thought about his to-be-born child and his wife...

too occupied with his curse to think anything else...

This is the difference between first lord and the general...

while the former doesn't give a hoot to his curse and is enough responsible not to hurt anyone coz of it, the later is too self centered to only think of getting rid of his curse and forgetting his near n dear ones in the process...

Wonder, wats happening in the castle...

Edited by rockingsoni - 12 years ago

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dimishra

@dimishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#720

what the... another update! am i hallucinating? nah, just read the first few lines and found myself in the dearest category, i m not dreaming; eh?

well, this is my first reaction seeing ch 197.now going to read it.no disturbance all arshians, me reading peacefully :) ( as if they'll ask me to supply more chocklet liquor 😉😆😆)