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Posted: 11 years ago
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I wrote a story in school. Wanna share it with you =)
I didn't finish the story. Please finish it :D
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When I left my house last Saturday mornig, I felt really happy.
"I have all the day with my boyfriend,"
I thought.
The first thing that went wrong was that my bus was half an hour late. While I was in the bus, the weather changed and it started to rain. Then the bus stopped suddenly and I fell and hurt myself. So I wasn't happy when I got out of the bus.
I noticed that I forgot my umbrella and it was raining badly. It took 15 minutes will I arrrived at my boyfriend's house. When I arrived there his mom opened the door. She looked tensed. I asked her what happened? She told me that his son went for serach at me. She tells that he was really worried about me and tried to call me but my phone was switched off. I asked her where he could be now. She said that she doesn't know and she is worried about him. It was still raining. I said that I will search for him...
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Please do finish the story and tell me how it is =)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice post naz... nice story👏
sry naz... very bad at writing...😳
Edited by kiranjas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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naz in India wen we r at school we usualy dnt hv any bf 😕😆..its only in colg that sum mite hv bf ask jas if she evr hd any1?🤣

ok jas sory hope u didnt mind?😃

bt anywaz let me try..d grl gts tensed n starts smsing n calling d boy..bt network unreachable so she panics..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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JMS: I didn't start the story dear.. I wrote more than 80 words.. how the teacher wanted :DDD The sotry was already written on the book but we had to finish the story. isliye this "boyfriend" 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naz_YuvReen

JMS: I didn't start the story dear.. I wrote more than 80 words.. how the teacher wanted :DDD The sotry was already written on the book but we had to finish the story. isliye this "boyfriend" 🤣



naz i wd like to know ur story..i mean wat u wrote?tel na plz?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I wrote this one :
I noticed that I forgot my umbrella and it was raining badly. It took 15 minutes will I arrrived at my boyfriend's house. When I arrived there his mom opened the door. She looked tensed. I asked her what happened? She told me that his son went for serach at me. She tells that he was really worried about me and tried to call me but my phone was switched off. I asked her where he could be now. She said that she doesn't know and she is worried about him. It was still raining. I said that I will search for him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nobody wants to finish the story ???

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