SwaRon FF ||Gamble of love|| ch9 pg41

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

nice update..
Flashback part was cute..

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

awesome update ... loved it

i will prefer 2 option...

update soon

thnx for pm

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

nice update...

luvd the begining*that sharon part*

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

last 3 chapters together...

they r awesome...

loved them...

thnx for pm n sorry for late comment...

chapter 5 par my ike tab not working so include my like too..

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Param Para Param Para...

Okay, seems like i missed lot of it..

But, reading three parts in continuation was a treat!!

so, this was it?

i mean, dat was really smalll..

What you call it 'Chinni Sized update'

wasn't expecting such short update from u yaar..

after all ur the greatest Shahnaz Khan, who always gives long LONG updates..

Oops! Sorry i totally forgot Joking wasn't done with u, sorry!!

Now comiingg to the update..

Well,

Lemme Think about it..

ugh! i dont think i should review it at all..

As u already know ur works are fab!!

par akhir swayam ne kiya kya ha??

Ohh, accha, swayam likes to have his 'Large' mug of coffee..

And sharon wanted to share it..

i tell u,

that was real cute!!

Then the next part, Rihan And Tina! awww!!!

Im Loving them..

I mean seriously..

Oh, so miss tina got 'The-Angry-Young-Man' rihan smiling for the very first time,

and he was amazed too..

Kyun na ho? akhir esii 'Namuni' ne jo smile kara di mister,uh,

What u call it? han, Mister Stubborn ko..

Tina seems Full of life, and rihan seems so intriguing..

Now coming to last chapter..

Woah!

u Got me man!

Sharon tutoring?

good good..Karte raho..

Raat ke 9 baje tak? vo b spex me 😲😲

I actually expected something else over there.. 😉 😉

par chalo koi nai..

Rihan liked sharon??

Oh no, this isnt done han..

Mister Rihan, ur meant to be with 'Tina', usi me khush raho..

hahahaha..

Sharon ko laga ki Raat ha. vo bhi late..!!

hahaha..

anyways.. mujhe nai laga tha ki koi party ka bhi scene hoga, really..

par it was nice! 😊

As a matter of fact, i really loved these three parts..!!

Amazingly written, but i want more of Rihan-Tina, they're you know, so cutee types..

Bechara Lachar Swayam, Sharon Kabhi usse bolne hi nai deti..

aww, how cute rihan-sharon, reminds me of Rey-Sharon...

Tranformation toh dekho madam ka, swayam pe chillaing, aur rihan se itne pyaar se baatein ho rahin hain..

ikdum 'Diva se Devi' 🤣 🤣

as u know, i dont like SS much, but this story is FAB!!!!

Loving it..

Please Continue sooonnn..

And dare u not PM me this tiiimeee...!!

P.S- Only that i commented doesn't mean that m not angry, i'm hell angry, samjhe?? and well, i only commented bcuz u said u wanted my cmmnt on it, chahe kitna b late ho..

P.P.S- And akhir me aapka gussa aapke works par kyun nikalun? will keep commenting, chillax! (as though i can hold back without cmmnting, i love dem all so much)

now u know what i want, dont u? (COT)

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

awesome... 😊update soon n pm me...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

i just read now all this chapter it was fabulous and amazing...
continue soon and pm me...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Thank You Note:

Thanks for all the lovely reviews. Its been due to time constrains that I was not able to reply any. But I surely have read all. And all I can say is keep reviewing, that's only what makes me put up all the efforts and present an update to you all.

Note regarding next update:

PM will be sent out later. and I wont update until and unless all the reserved comments get unreserved. I know one or two who genuinely review and unreserve their comments but due to busy schedule delay the procedure, I can spare them but not all. So it's upto you all how soon you want me to update.

And updates would be on fort-nightly basis, ie., by or after 15 days with one Swaron update and one KriYansh update. No changes with this. I might delay in updating but this would mostly be followed.

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Reserved. =)

I am reserving and i will take 2-3 days but i will edit, i promise. :*

You know the reason why i am not doing things on their proper time, right? : <

By the way, i have not yet read the chapter or note or whatever it is above. I will read soon.

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