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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taareylover14

Wao nice updatee...

But the endingg ...
Nw i cnt wait to knw k taani india kab ja rahi ha ;-)

Nd taayam r so cute.nd am glad taani is nt thaat much hurt..
I jst cnt wait for taarey to be togther.

thanks abrish..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhi_taarey

just read both of ur ch. it was just damn amazing

awesome concept really realistic nd new
i m loving each nd every part of it
liked the bond of taayam saw them after such a long tym!!
plzz update soon nd pm me once u do!

thanks dear..
your comments mean a lot to me..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

That was amazing <3

taayam 😃
shivam ke main point pe kick🤣
and you stopped at such a good time
Note the big fat sarcasm -______-

update soon Mrs *ahem*

-Mrs Niall Horan

yes i did notice it..😆
thanks..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

it was really nice .excited for swayams condition and really waiting for taarey to meet. pls update soon

thanks..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priyal_TaaRey

awesome update 😊

taayam 😛 😃
update soon 😛

thanks priyal..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

Totally TAANYAM updte...
Shivam ka bachha betraying taani haan...
Swayam shekhawat ki bhen...
Loved taanyam convo...
Swaron tok ws swt...
Taanyam bond olwyz lub dem olwyz..
Missd rey

thankyou so much dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: QTPie99

arre star
loved the update yaar
so perfect
swayam beating shivam wow
Taayam scene was adorable cute waw i'm in love with them
swaron convo was also cute
Taayam r the best
n kaise end kiya tune plz ab update soon
main maare jaa rahii hun to no k wat will swayam say...
wen wil our Taarey meets???
jaldi unko meet karwao...

thanks roshni..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05

Amazing update😛

Omg fighting scene was superb
Loved d kick😆
Thank god Taani is nt much attached to shivam
Taayam convo was so sweet
Aww...Sharon changed d angry young man to Majnu😳
Loved d update
Update soon !!!!
Waiting !!!!!

thanks..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Holla guys... so how are you all..?? ya i know must be wondering itni jaldi kese aagayi me..??😆 right guys..?? haw..ab aise mat dekho i can read

this much from your expressions yaar..itna underestimate mat karo mujhe..!! ok so here you go with the update..

Recap: Swayam: ok then..meri condition hai ki..

Taani: aapki condition hai ki..??

Swayam: tum mere sath Mumbai chal rahi ho humesh ke liye..!!

Taani: what..???? kya kaha apne..??

Swayam: mene vahi kaha jo tumne suna taani..

Taani: me or Mumbai..??

Swayam: han taani tum or Mumbai..

Taani: no ways bhai..!! i'm not coming with you at any cost..!!

Swayam: fine then i am not going to forgive you and remember that you're breaking your promise..

Taani: bhai aap ache se jante hain why i don't want to go Mumbai..phir bhi..??

Swayam: han taani..janta hun par kab tak..?? kab tak apni feelings se muh modogi..?? unse bhagogi..one day you have to face it taani..so why not now..?? he said holding her shoulders..

Taani: nahi bhai..itni himmat nahi hai mujhme...un feelings ko feel karke kamzor nahi hona chahti hun bhai..she said turning away..

Swayam: kamzor please taani you know unse bhaagti hui tum or kamzor ban rahi ho..

Taani: par bhai..

Swayam: nahi taani you have to face it..!! face karna hoga mom dad ki memories ko..tumhe sabse ache se janta hun taani..2 saal bloody 2 years have passed since our parents died in an accident just because they were driving fast and leaving us all alone in the world to survive just with their money..and after that we were broken me to kisi tarah se sambhal gaya but tum...tum bilkul meri tarah thi..apni feelings ko akele me face karna chahti thi isliye yahan aa gayi...but kya me tumhe nahi janta..?? jitni strong dikhti ho or dikhati ho usse kahi zyada weak ho andar se you're broken from inside taani..and you don't want to face it..kyun..?? one day you have to face it..i know bahut difficult hai tumhare liye but please taani..let us cherish the memories of our parents please..??

Tears were continuously flowing from taani's eyes remembering her parents...the only reason she didn't wanted to live in Mumbai in that house were her parents..she didn't wanted the memories of her parents to threaten her..and now swayam is telling her to face them...but this time she cannot deny it...

Taani: fine bhai...if you want me to face it...i will face it..

Swayam took a sigh of relief...and hugged taani assuring her that he's always there...and taani hugged him back...

Here in Mumbai..

Everyone was in vp sir's cabin waiting for him to arrive as he has a breaking news for them..

Bharat: abe bhai log lagta hai ye budha satak gaya hai..itti der ho gayi ye aayaich nahi...

Nilesh: han yaar bharat tu sahi keh raha hai yaar ab to isse resign kar hi dena chahiye..

Amar: pal eta tau a ti utne ume taha bulaya..?? ( par aisa kya hua ki usne hume yahan bulaya..?? )

Everyone : kyaa...????

Bharat: abe ye keh raha ki aisa kya hua ki usne hume yahan bulaya..??

Everyone: ohh...

Vicky: arre rey tujhe to pata hoga na...tu to GS hai..

Rey: guys me GS hun vp sir ka P.A nahi jo unke peeche punch (tail) banke ghumu taaki mujhe sab pata rahe..

Boys had a hi5 listening this and were laughing when vp sir entered..

Vp sir at the entrance of his room: students..!!

Suddenly there was a pin drop silence in the room..but then rey spoke up..

Rey: good morning sir..!!

Everyone : good morning sir..

Vp sir entering his room : morning..

Rey: sir aisa kya hua ki apne hume classes ke bichme bula liya..??

Vp: ok..hmm..actually baat yeh hai ki you guys are invited for dance camp..

Rey: what..

Everyone was hugging each other and hooting but vp sir said..

Vp: guys pehle puri baat sunlo..

Everyone: sorry sir..

Vp sir : better..so to participate in dance camp you guys need a 12th dancer..!!!

Everyone: what..?????

Rey : 12th dancer but sir we have tried it before also but there's none in the college who knows dance well even they don't want to learn..

Vp sir: i know that but that's the condition put by dance camp authorities for every college there has to be 12 members..

Rey: but sir..

Vp sir: me kuch nahi janta rey i want you to find a 12th dancer for your team anyhow...i don't want to take the chance of missing dance camp..it'll be a success stone for our college..ok..??

Rey: ok sir..

Vp sir: now you may take a leave..

Everyone went out with sad faces and went to the rehearsal hall..

In rehearsal hall..

Sharon: guys now what..?? 12th dancer kese find Karen..??

Rinni: aasman se to nahi milega...

Everyone had a facepalm..

Simmi: shut up rinni..!!

Aashi: guys ab kya types karenge hum..

Rey: pata nahi yaar..kahin se to 12th dancer lana padega..and vp sir ki special demands hain that the dancer should be a girl..crap..!!

Vicky: han yaar..guys i really don't wana miss dance camp..

Neha: babu saying right is..missing it not we are..

Sharon: ok guys lets pack up for the day kal subah milte hain for the random rehearsals and then lets rest a lil vese bhi kal Sunday hai..

Everyone headed to their homes and slept thinking about the 12th dancer..

Here in London..

Swayam booked the tickets and the flight was in 5 hours..he came to taani and started telling her about his gang..

Taani: bhai stop fooling me around tell me about each and every person with their pics..

Swayam: ok fine meri maa..

Taani: bhai..!!

Swayam: ok fine nahi bulaunga..

Swayam: dekh ye hai bharat..

He doesn't know English and his main dance form is B-Boying..

Yeh hai amar..

He is very good in tutting and has lisping problems..

Yeh hai Vicky..

He is the prankster among all of us..he is good in jazz and is very friendly..

Yeh hai nilesh ..

He is a rapper mainly but a dancer too..

And yeh hai rey..i mean reyaansh..

The lead dancer of our team in short our hero.. and my bff..

And now time for girls..

Yeh hai aashi..

An awsum dancer and types queen..

Taani: types queen..??

Swayam: hmm..iske har sentence me types word aata hi hai..

Taani: ohh..next..

Swayam: ok..

Yeh hai simmi..

A lil rude from out but very friendly if you once gel up with her..dancer of course..

Yeh hai rinni..

The non-sense queen..iska har sentence non-sense hota hai but not everytime sometimes sahib hi hota hai..

Yeh hai neha..

The English queen..she doesn't know hindi and English both thik se and her sentences are jumbled..

And Yeh hai..

Taani: Sharon..??

Swayam smiled and said yup Sharon..

Sharon rai prakash..the diva of st.louis college..awsum dancer and ..

Taani: your girlfriend urf my sweet bhabhi..

Swayam: sweet..?? well taani you gotta see that how sweet she is..

Taani: kyun..??

Swayam: she's sweet but yeah if you talk bullshit infront of her you will see te worst side of hers..whether its her friends or anyone..

Taani: even you..??

Swayam: yeah sadly even me..* cute but sad pout *

Taani: hahhahaha bhai..you so cute..pulling his cheeks..

Swayam: no ways i'm not cute..!!

Taani: aww really bhai..??

Swayam: han really..c'mon now paqck your bags we gotta leave soon..

Taani: whatever..

They were packing their bags when swayam's phone rang again..

This time taani had a smirk on her face knowing who could the caller be..

She quickly ran and took swayam's cell and swayam was throwing deadly glares on her..

Swayam: taani phone mujhe do..

Taani: no ways bhai..me to bhabhi se baat kar rahi hun..

Swayam: no taani she doesn't know you..

Taani started running all over the room in order to escape his bhai but atlast had to give up cause of swayam's pleadings..here swayam picked the pone but as per taani's condition phone should be on loudspeaker ...

In call..

Swayam: hello..

Sharon: what the hell swayam how long did you take to pick my phone han..?? she shouted..

Taani was giggling watching her bhai's expression..and her bhabhi's dialogue..

Swayam: Sharon please na..

Sharon: huh..?? kya please..??

Swayam: please don't shout..

Sharon: kya..?? me shout kar rahi hun han..??

Swayam seeing taani said yes..

Sharon: ok fine..thik hai me phone hi rakh deti hun..

Swayam: aree nahi nahi Sharon i was joking..

Sharon: oh really..??

Swayam: ya really..

Taani was thinking its their personal convo left the room and swayam took a sigh of relief..

Swayam: Sharon whatsup you seem tensed..

Sharon was shocked how could swayam sense that when she didn't told him about anything..

Sharon: tumhe kese..??

Swayam: c'mon Sharon i love you..kya hua hai batao mujhe ab..??

Sharon: nothing tum vapas aao tab bataungi..

Swayam: arre par Sharon..

Sharon: no swayam..

Swayam: ok fine..so how was your day without me..??

Sharon: without you..umm best day ever..

Swayam: kyaa..?? ye kab hua..??

Sharon: aaj hi to hua..

Swayam was in shock and here Sharon started laughing hard knowing how would be swayam's reaction..

Swayam: sharonn..tumhe to me vahan aake dekh lunga..

Sharon: pehle yahan aake to dikhao swayam..

Swayam thought acha bachu kal batata hun...i was planning to tell you that i'm coming tomorrow but no way kal raat tumhari window se jump karunga..now see Miss.Sharon Rai Prakash Mr.Swayam Singh Shekhawat se panga lene ka matlab kya hota hai..!!

Sharon: hello..hello swayam..??

Swayam: h...han Sharon bolo..

Sharon: kahan kho gaye the..??

Swayam: kahin nahi..just aise hi..

Sharon: acha..apni behen se mile..??

Swayam: han mila..

Sharon: chalo then i'll talk to you later..byee..

Swayam: ok..bye..

They hung up..

Swayam went out and calls taani..

Swayam: taani..taani kahan ho..??

Taani: ji bhai yahin hun boliye..??

Swayam: packing done na..??

Taani: ya bhai..

Swayam: chalo then lets get ready..

Taani smiled and went away..in her room she was taking her personal diary..she smiled seeing it..every feeling of hers was written in this diary..it was really close to her heart..she packed it in a secret place too..TaaYam got ready and left for airport..

Taani's dress..



In the airport they did all the necessary verifications and sat into the flight..

Taani: bhai..

Swayam putting his hands around her shoulders giving her a side hug..

Swayam: bolo sissy..

Taani: bhai you know na i hate sissy name..aisa lagta hai ki pressure cooker ki seeti ho..

Swayam giggled seeing taani's reaction and taani gave him murderous looks..

Swayam: ok fine baba bolo..

Taani: ye pyaar kya hota hai..??

Swayam raised his one eyebrow and looked at taani suspect fully taani rolled her eyes and said..

Taani: bhai..c'mon general question hai..

Swayam: ok fine..whatever..

Love its the most beautiful feeling in the world in which we never realise what we are doing we just know that we're in love..and we can do anything for the person we love..our reputation , surroundings never effect us when we're in love...the only thing matters is the happiness of our beloved..we start to get lost in the eyes of our beloved..when he/she is infront nothing matters to us other than that person..we just think about them whether its day or night even in our dreams we only see them imagine them..

Taani: arre bas..ye to bohot badi definition ho gayi..

Swayam looked at her shocked and asked : definition ...??

Taani: or nahi to kya..??

Swayam: when you'll fall in love you'll automatically give this definition to me without learning..i hope you never fall in love before marriage..jo me hone nahi dunga...

Taani: why..??

Swayam: me tumara bhai hun taani i wont accept your boyfriend or anything..!!

Taani: bhai switch off possessive mode now..!! she closed her eyes and laid back in disbelief..

Swayam rolled his eyes..

After many hours they reached Mumbai..every guy was staring at taani in the airport with open mouths..which was making swayam uncomfortable but there was no difference for taani she was smart enough to handle all this..

Swayam: taani kal se tum college me ye sab nahi pehnogi..

Taani: what yeh sab..??

Swayam: these short dresses..!!

Taani: bhai this is my life..!! moreover i can handle all this what you're talking about..!!!

Swayam: par taani..

Taani: no ways bhai..!!!

Precap: TaaYam's parents memories , swayam in sharon's house from window and taani's first day at college maybe..

So here i end guys..i hope you all are satisfied with this chapter..if not then please tell me..

P.S please add me in your buddy list if you want pms..

Thankyou..

Love..

Nikki aka Mrs.Reyaansh Singhania..

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum stry .. 👏
luvd taani's character ..
shivam is so cheap .. 😡
swayam, rey n gang's part was gud .. 😆

shivam n swayam's fyt waz superb ..! 🤣

swayam ka possesive bhai mode har jagah tapak jaata h .. 😆

swaron wer vry cute .. 😳

excytd 4 nxt update .. 😃

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

PS - em 1st .. 😃
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