SS : ZOYA ' Asad's Dream Girl !! - (FINAL) PART 11 UPDATED - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago

Epilogue

Thanks everybody for all your wonderful comments and likes... A couple of them felt that the ending was abrupt.. and wanted me to pen down the Epilogue of this story... So here I go... ...Hopeit brings a smile on your face... !!

After 3 Years, CITY HOSPITAL, Mumbai

Razia was shot down by the police and she had passed away during her next attempt to escape from jail 2.5 Yrs back. Gaffur had ensured that the police had kept her on strict vigilance...

Dilshad constructions was now famous not only in Mumbai but also in Bhopal, Pune, Delhi and many more cities in the Northern part of India after completing successful projects over there due credit to the 2 Directors of the Company - Mr and Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan...It was decided between the Father and son that Saturdays would be a day exclusively for their spouse and on Sunday the whole family would spend time together...and Weekdays.. their office hours strictly committed and dedicated to "Dilshad Constructions"

Ayaan and Humeira were waiting along with the entire family with their 1 Yr old daughter.. Gaffur was sitting on one of the chairs in the hospital with a worried look on his face.. Najma and Imran were also waiting with their 2Yr old son...

Rashid and Dilshad were along with Asad trying to give him strength... Asad had been patiently waiting for the last couple of hours.. to meet his Zoya.. He saw the nurse coming out ...

Nurse: Sir.. Congratulations... !!

Asad : Beti hain na ??

Najma : Nahin.. Beta hain na ??

Nurse was amused looking at theway the family was responding...

Nurse: Congratulations again .. Beti aur Beta dono hua hain !!

Asad : Kya ??

Nurse: Ji sir.. Twins hain..

Ayaan and Najma : WOW !! congratulations Bhaijaan and they hugged their brother wishing him...The whole family was wishing and congratulating each other...

Asad to Nurse : Kya mein meri wife se mil saktha hoon ??

Nurse : Ji sir...bus do minute mein unhe ward mein shift karenge.. mein apke dono bacchon ko bhi wahi lekar athi hoon..

Asad was the first to enter Zoya's room... Though she was looking tired.. the angelic beauty had not diminished...

Asad : Congratulations.. Mrs. Khan...

Zoya smiled at her hubby : congratulations to you too Mr. Khan...

The entire family walked in to wish the couple and the babies were given to them... After their round of cuddling the babies..Zoya handed over one of the baby to Dilshad and another one to Rashid...

Zoya : Ammi..meri beti apki responsibility hain.. aur abbu beta apka.. woh dono aap dono jaise banna hain... aur mein is bacche ko sambhal thi hoon.. looking at Asad...for which the whole family had a hearty laugh...

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Posted: 11 years ago
This was so cute

Loved the last lines the most

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...thats a cute ending!"Mei is bacche ko sambhalta hu *looking at Asad*"...Happys endings😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Once again you have succeeded in making me gush and go all mushy. The epilogue was fantastic and I'm glad to see how their relationship has progressed in the next 3 years, personal and professional.
The last line made me smile like a maniac: "aur mein is bacche ko sambhal thi hoon" AAWWW!!! Are you trying to kill me with cuteness overload?!?
Just watch me come back and read it all from the beginning. So await my comments again, and again, and again.
🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow thats a cute ending
It was really fabulous
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! What a cute ending. Last line "aur main iss bachche kn sambhal thi hoon" is epic. Nice ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful epilogue. Was so cute. Thanks for the pm
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Lovely epilogue! Loved the last punch line: "aur mein is bacche ko sambhal thi hoon.. looking at Asad"! Super cute!! 😃
Only one thing I found a bit weird: I know in India parents-to-be are not told the sex of the child, but they would be told if they are having twins. Mom has to take extra care in case of twins! But a little bit of creative license is allowed I guess! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats really cute
tnx for epilogue
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