OS- 'Love is in d rains'

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Hello frnds😛
i am writing my first OS evr n tht too inspired by u alll...

Jodha - Jalal in Amer for Sukanaya's wedding...its heavily raining...

Jodha - "Sukanya..its raining...lets go outside..."

Sukanaya - "I knw jiji..u like rains alot...bt"

before Sukanaya cud say further, Jodha steps out and starts getting drenched...Sukanaya too joins her...😛

Both are enjoying alot minus all the worries...😊

N there is someone watching all this from afar...n it is none other than...but our very own Jalal...

he's enthralled by Jodha's beauty ...he's just lost in his own thoughts...☺️

just then Maasa comes - "U two come inside..it quite late now..."
n .they go. inside unwillingly but cant do anything as its their Maasa's orders...😳

Jalal sees Jodha leaving n he's smiling all by himself...just then, he steps out
He's enjoying the rains n there he notices Jodha standing near the window...

Jodha - "this is a new avatar of shenshah.." she strts laughing...

n to her surprise, Jalal smiles back...Jodha is surprised with this...both are lost into each other...an eyelock😉

Jodha turns back to her room...

Jalal - wat am i doing here...i dnt like rains at all..thn why am i suddenle enjoying rains...

Jalal goes inside and encounters with Maham...

Maham - "Jalal..wat is this...u r thoroughly wet..."

Jalal - "hmmm...".(he hsnt hve any answer)

Maham (in angry tone) - "does someone did this deliberatley?"

Jalal - "actually badi ammi..i ws enjoying the rains..so ..." he stops midway

Maham - "wat??? but u never like rains...then...how come this sudden change..."

Jalal doesnt d reason himmself and then wat he shud tell his badi ammi...😕

Jalal comes to his room...😛

Jodha - "u r completely wet...chnge ur clothes..othrws u'll get fever.."

"Jalal is all stunned...n why not? this is the first time, his jodha begum is concerned fr him..."

this is my first attempt...sorry for any mistakes inclding grammatical errors...

i hope u all like it..

Thnx😛





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arnavkushibest thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vey very nice😛
i like it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnku frnds.. fr likin it...its my frst attempt...so thnx🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnx sonia...fr ur feedback...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: naneta

thnx sonia...fr ur feedback...👍🏼

🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz tell me..whether i shud update this further...or nt...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnx @daisydee🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well, my dear Naneta,

This is quite the shortest OS I have ever seen, and I must say it is compact and it makes a point. So it is a very good beginning for your writing career!

Shyamala Aunty

Hello frnds😛
i am writing my first OS evr n tht too inspired by u alll...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful sugar😛👏👏👏😛 I love this!!!
Awesome OS... Wish it was longer though😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

Well, my dear Naneta,

This is quite the shortest OS I have ever seen, and I must say it is compact and it makes a point. So it is a very good beginning for your writing career!

Shyamala Aunty


thnx aunty🤗
call me Nancy😛

oh i hvnt written any OS or FF before, so i have no idea abt the length..bt thnku fr ur awesm feedbk..i will keep it in mind fr future OS n FF's...😛

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