A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: saakhi01
Awesome update

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#132

Originally posted by: ...anju...
AWESOME.
LOVED IT LOADS.

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#133

Originally posted by: huma12.
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#134

Originally posted by: annabh
hey
Hey...

how are you

I am good... What a you... 😊
i hope your wounds are healed up by now

They are completely healed up...
please do take good care of your health

and yes all the best for your examination
They are over... infact I have got my result too... But anyways thanx...

i am really greatful to you for updating

my one of the fav ss inspite of so many personal problem
There is no need to be greatful...

the chapter was just AWESOME

Thanx...😊
i loved each word all emotions are described so nicely
I am glad you liked it...😊

loved a possessive uday

Me too...😉
only if he had known that the trap
of love he has set for manyata
would get back fired on him
and manyata is really a free sole
Yup... she is...

love her spirit and she is so sweet
i cannot wait to read further
Even I can't wait to read your comments...

but wonder why did you make the changes
I myself don't know... Maybe I thought that the royals would be more influential if they are in India...
anyway it was awesomehugss
Thanx again... 🤗 Hugs from my side too...

anni
res for second part

Thanx for the lovely comment Aneesha... 😃

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#135

Originally posted by: Rashmi_pari
awesome, loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Hey Nitya,
Hey.. Navina...😊

how are feeling now?

I am completely fine...

Update was awesome!

Thanx... 😊

Manyata disturbed poor Jai and Jaggat😆 - that was cute!

Glad that she had to travel with Uday in his car😳.

Too bad the journey became a silent one!

I am sorry... Actually I was not able to come up with any good dialouges...

Hope u continue soon😊!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Karkit
Wow awesum update
superb
uday manyata scene ws so cute

Thanx a lot...😊

jagat manyata scene so funny bichara jagat
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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Hey di
How u? 😊
Sorry for replying soo late
Wow di, amazing update 👏
Loved it ⭐️
Plz do pm me 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

hai its a nice ff .manyata bahuth cute hai...continue soon...

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CHAPTER 6(2)

I am sorry guys I know I am very late but this time don't have any excuses too... Its just that I have been really busy... Theres one more thing.. Jaggats pic in the CSis somehow not showing.. I'll tell you who he is.. Its Vivian Dsena..

Manyata turns...

Manyata: Ab kya hua...

Uday: Main soch raha tha.. tum aaj raat ko mere sath date par chologi... You know dinner and date...

Manyata (puts her arms on her waist): tumhe kya lagta hai...

Uday: Hume lagta hai tum aaogi...

Manyata: Aur tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai...

Uday: Kyunki hum jante hai... tum apne bhai ki koi baat nahi talogi...

Manyata: Main tumhe sirf apne bhai ki wajah se bardasht kar rahi hun...

Uday: Matlab tum aaogi...

Manyata stomps her feet and leaves...

After attending their classes all (Manyata, Uday, J, Unnati, Vijay, Jaggat) of them were sitting in the canteen...

Manyata: Karan kaha hai... class mein toh tha... abhi kaha gaya... bataya bhi nahi...

J: Pata nahi jiji... mujhse bhi aaj subah se baat nahi hui...

Manyata: Main poochti hun...

Manyata calls Karan..

Manyata: Hello Karan.. kaha ho tum..

Karan: Main Alisha ke sath hun...

Manyata: Who chudail...

Karan (laughs at Manyata's antiques): Haan wahi.. par abhi who chudail nahi meri

girlfriend hai...

Manyata: Haan haan janti hun tumhari do din ki girlfriend... Chalo tum raho usi ke saath... Bye..

Karan: Bye..

They cut the call

Manyata: Who Alisha ke sath hain...

J: Arre.. jiji who sab chodiye.. Aapko pata hai... annual dance ke naam aagaye hain...

Unnati: Aur hamesha ki tarah dance ke lead pair Karan aur Manyata hi honge...

J: Actually Unnati.. is baar who log sirf dance nahi ek musical dance drama karenge..

Uday: Par tumhe kaise pata...

Unnati: Dada who college ki cultural head hai... Anyways J tum kuch keh rahi thi... musical dance drama matlab...

J: Arre.. Dil toh Pagal hai dekhi hain na...

Manyata: Haan afcoure dekhi hai... toh..

J: Toh jaise usme Shahrkh khan ka group songs aur dance ke through ek story potray karte the waisa hi is baar yeh log kar rahe hai...

Unnati (in a full dramatic tone): Ohh... phir toh pucca yeh ek love story hogi.. aur iski heroine hogi humari Manyata aur iske hero hoga humara Karan...

J: Nahi Unnati is baar Manyata toh hai par Karan nahi hai...

Manyata (in a scared tone): Toh phir kaun hai..

J: Uday

Manyata (in a shocked tone): Kya..

J: Haan

Manyata: Main nahi karne wali koi dance wance iske sath...

J: Par jiji..

Manyata: Nahi j end of discussion... chalo ghar chalet hai...Gadi main chalaungi Vijay bhai..

Uday (with a laugh): Tum.. tum gadi chalaogi..

Manyata: Kyun main gadi nahi chala sakti..

Uday: Sirf tum hi nahi koi bhi ladki achi tarah se gadi nahi chala sakti..

Manyata: Aisa sirf tumhe lagta hai... Vijay bhai Jaggatjijusa aap bataiye..

Vijay and Jaggat: Uday sahi keh raha hain Manyata..

Manyata: Hhh... Aap sab ek jaise hote hain...

Uday: Chalo ek race karte hain.. Pata chal jayega ki kaun acha hain aur kaun bura...

Manyata thinks about it..

Uday: Kun darr gayi..

Manyata: Rajkumari Manyata kisi se nahi darti... Challenge accepted.. Lekin ek shart hain agar hum challenge jeet gaye toh tum humse yeh dosti ka natak aur nahi karvaoge..

Uday: Theek hai.. lekin agar hum jeete toh tumhe humare sath annual dance mein part lena hoga..

Manyata: Theek hain..

The girls sit in one car and the boys sit in the other...

They had a race till the Raj Mahal...

And the winner was...

Precap: The winner is announced... Manveer go on a date..

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Edited by nityatandon - 12 years ago