A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16) - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annabh

WHERE IS THE UPDATE???


I am really really sorry Aneesha... Actually I met with an accident yesterday evening... I had written half of the update but was not able to complete it... becos of he accident... I will update as soon as I recover...
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER- 6(1)
Hey... everybody... I know I have not update since ages... But I had a really awfull time for the last two weeks... Firstly I met with an accident then I got fever and then now I have my exams going on... This is the first part of the chappy... The next part would be posted during this week... One more thing I have AGAIN changed a thing in the story... I know I change a lot of things every now and then... But can't help it... Ok so basically now Everybody is living in Mumbai except Raj... He lives in US... and Uday has also come from US... And Jagat is introduced in this chappy... Please refer the CS for his character...
Next day everyone gathered on the breakfast table? Manyata was still not there? Everybody thought that she still is recovering from yesterday's shock?. But to everyone's surprise? she walked down the stairs with her cute chirpy and bubbly side? her hair was still a little wet? Water droplets were making their place on her face? Uday's gaze was fixed on her? She came and sat between J and Unnati? and in front of Uday.. She came and greeted everyone.. and the first thing she asked was?

Manyata: Where is Karan?.

None of them was surprised, they both were always like this? inseperable? But to a person it irked a lot? But he himself din't knew why? Yes it was Uday?

After that she started talking to her girl gang (Aditi, Unnati, J)?

J(in a sweet teasing way): Kya baat hai Manyata jiji aaj badi saj dhaj ke aiyi hai?

Manyata knew to what J is referring to?

Manyata: J vaise tu bhi kuch kam sundar nahi lag rahi?. Ohhoo? Main bhi kaisi behen hun?. Bhul hi gayi aaj toh Jagat jijusa wapas aa raha hai?

At the mention of Jagat J starts blushing?

Suddenly everybody hear?

Jagat (standing at the door): Humari hone wali sali hume yaad kare aur hum na aaye aisa kabhi ho sakta hai?

Everybody looks at the direction of the voice? It was Jagat? Everybody stood up from their chairs?

Brij: Arre Jagat beta tum aa gaye?

Giri: Haan hume bata diya hota hum gadi bijhwa dete? (interrupted)

Vijay: Who sab chodiye? yeh bataiye trip kaisa tha?

Jaggat (walking towards the dinning table): Arre ek minute ek minute? Aap log humein kuch bolne denge toh hum bolenge na? Brij uncle Giri uncle hum aap logo ko takleef nahi dena chahte the isliye nahi bataya? Aur Vijay banna trip acha tha aur deal bhi ache se ho gayi?

Manyata: Deal toh ache se ho gayi? par humare liye koi gift laaye? Dikhaiye kaha hai humara gift?

Brij: Arre beta pehle unhe breakfast toh karne dijiye? Who bechare itne lambe safar se aaye hai? Unhe baithne toh dijiye?

Manyata: Theek hai bathiye lekin breakfast ke baad hume apna gift dekhna hai?

Jaggat was just seeing J and both were lost in each other? He goes to sit beside J when Manyata suddenly sits on the chair?

Manyata: Yeh humari jagah hai jijusa aap samne baithiye?

Jaggat while moves his hand in his hair and makes a puppy face and goes and sits beside Uday and in front of J?

Manyata was continuously talking to Unnati and in between pulling J's leg?. Uday was watching all this? Jaggat and Vijay were talking and as "they" thought Uday was also a part of their conversation?. But it was not so? He observed the way her lips were forming a huge smile whenever Aditi told her something about Raj? the way she made a fake sad face when J refused to pass the juice jug to her? the way her lips were telling every word she spoke?. He din't had to hear words from her mouth he could easily tell what she was saying by just observing her lips? How badly he wanted kiss them? to claim them?

Uday's POV

Get a control over yourself Yuvraj Udayveer Singh? What are you thinking? Why are you craving to kiss her? You have kissed a hundred girls? It would be just like one of them? And why were you getting jealous when Manyata asked about Karan? No I was not getting jealous?Don't be so emotional? Love is not your thing? Remember you are doing this marriage just for the sake of your family? So what if she doesn't likes you now?. Very soon she would fall for you?.

But what he din't knew was that kissing would not be the same? It is jealousy?The marriage which he is now doing for the sake of his family? later he would do it for his love? In the process of making her fall for him? He would himself fall for her? And then it would not be just mere kissing but passionate love?

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Everybody ate their breakfast and were heading to the hall?. J was walking behind everyone? suddenly someone pulled her towards a corner and pinned her to the wall?

J: Tum? Main toh darr hi gayi thi? Par aisa karne ki kya zarrorat hai?

Jaggat: Ab kya karun sabke samne toh tumhari behen kuch karne nahi deti?

J: aisa kuch nahi hai?

Suddenly Manyata shouts: Jijusa kaha reh gaye aiye na?

Jaggat (to J): dekha? (to many Manyata, shouts): Aa rahe hai ammaji?

They all sit in the hall? Jaggat gives gifts to everybody?.

Jaggat: And this was the last gift? ye lo J?

Manyata: Aur mera..

Jaggat: Arre? sorry Manyata tumhe toh main bhool hi gaya tha? Koi baat nahi agli baar jaunga to le aaunga? theek hai..

Manyata makes a sad face?

Jaggat(smiles): Arre itna dukhi hone ki koi zarrorat nahi hai? ye lo? and hands her the gift?

Manyata hugs him and thanks him?

Giri: Acha ab aap sab jaiye? Aap logo ko college ke liye late nahi ho raha?

Aditi: Haan haan tumlog jayo? vaise hi der hogayi hai tumhe?

Unnati, Vijay, J, Uday, Manyata and Jaggat left to where the cars were parked before Manyata could sit in Vijay's car everybody else sat there? Vijay sat on the driver's seat? beside him was jaggat? behind jaggat was j and behind Vijay was Unnati?

Manyata: Ab main kaha baithu?

Unnati: Tum dada ki gadi mein aa jao..

Manyata: Unnati, tum Uday ke sath chali jao na?

J: Jiji, aap janti hai na? (referring to Vijay and Unnati)? Aur phir aap hi ne toh kaha tha ki aap Uday ke sath friendly behave karengi?

Manyata (frustrated): Ok fine?

And she goes and sits in Uday's car?

Uday: Toh akir khichi chali aayi hi na humare paas?.

Manyata: Ohh? please? main ya tumhare liye nahi aayi hun? Haan Nahi Toh?

Uday: Humein ek baat samagh nahi aati? tumhe hum pasand kyu nahi hai?

Manyata: Kyunki tum ek no. ke halkat vede khasmanukhane ho?

The rest of the drive was silent? They all reached the college? Manveer got down from the car? Manyata was walking when Uday call her?

Uday: Manyata?.

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Edited by nityatandon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww
awesome update
superb
jagat nd manyta convo gud
uday nd manyta so cute
aur
plzzz
upadte jaldi se dedo
aur wait nahi ho raha
seriously awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME.
LOVED IT LOADS.
CONTINUE SOON.
PLZ PM ME NEXT TIME.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey
how are you
i hope your wounds are healed up by now
please do take good care of your health
and yes all the best for your examination
i am really greatful to you for updating
my one of the fav ss inspite of so many personal problem
the chapter was just AWESOME
i loved each word all emotions are described so nicely
loved a possessive uday
only if he had known that the trap
of love he has set for manyata
would get back fired on him
and manyata is really a free sole
love her spirit and she is so sweet
i cannot wait to read further
but wonder why did you make the changes
anyway it was awesome
hugss
anni
res for second part
Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome, loved it
do continue soon
also plz pm me if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Nitya, how are feeling now? Update was awesome!
Manyata disturbed poor Jai and Jaggat😆 - that was cute!
Glad that she had to travel with Uday in his car😳.
Too bad the journey became a silent one!
Hope u continue soon😊!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nyc FF :)
loved it
do pm me from nxt tym
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesum update
superb
uday manyata scene ws so cute
jagat manyata scene so funny bichara jagat
do pm me n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: serat

wowww

awesome update
superb
jagat nd manyta convo gud
uday nd manyta so cute
Thanx...😊
aur
plzzz
upadte jaldi se dedo
aur wait nahi ho raha
I'll try...
seriously awesome
Thanx again...

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