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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: ri.mn
Just a few questions that i
would like my readers to answer.
Did you like the way i wrote?
Yes
Was the concept good enough?
yea
Was it well executed?
yes
Are you disappointed the way it
ended?
yes...aisa q kia..if possible change it..
Should i write more
Yes and that too very soon

Okkk i'll try

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Irum.

@Irum.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Faria.

i dont hate u dear and i cant. but yah i m angry on u for this update. Dil tod diya..
though it was nothing but a story but u know na how much we r connected to Mayur. so cant see such a sad ending on my fav. hope u understanding
and i m waiting for ur dhasu comeback
all the best for ur board exam.

I agree with Faru.

I m not liking the ending.

Actually mayur are so close to our heart even after many years of MJHT ending , bt our love for mayur is still blossoming ,We cant see them apart .

Plz ager ho sakey tu change the ending.

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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Irum.

I agree with Faru.
I m not liking the ending.
Actually mayur are so close to our heart even after many years of MJHT ending , bt our love for mayur is still blossoming ,We cant see them apart .
Plz ager ho sakey tu change the ending.

ok i'll change by sunday

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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

chapter 27

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Since most of u wanted me to change the end so i have done it guys. I hope you all will like it 😊

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They both headed towards Mayank's house and on reaching Samrat said

"I hope sab theek hojaye Nupur. Handle the situation well Nupur shayad Mayank kuch react kare par tumhe samjhne hoga."

"Tum fikar mat karo Samrat. Sab theek hojaega. This time I wont let anything wrong happen."

"Jao Nupur bas mujhe ek call kar dena."

"Ofcourse Samrat and thank you warna main kuch samjh hi nahi pati."

"Shhhshhh.. Nupur go make things perfect for yourself."

Samrat just smiled and left the place.

Nupur with a smile playing on her lips went towards Mayank's room.

Samrat had requested the maid to let Nupur go in when he gave him a call.

Nupur stood by the door of his room. She could see him standing there near the window.

She could see the dark side of his life when she saw his room. Nupur felt guilty on seeing his condition because she knew she was responsible for it.

As she made entry in his room she saw a big picture of herself hanged on the wall. She felt really numb after seeing it she could feel herself breaking down somewhere but she silently moved towards him.

She took a deep breadth and kept her hand on his shoulder. Mayank slowly turned around to see who it was.

As he turned around Nupur could see his red puffy eyes.

"Nupur tu yahan?"

"Haan Mayank mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai."

"Nahi Nupur aaj mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai isse pehle tum kuch kaho. "

"Par Mayank..."

Interrupting in between and holding her hand he said

"Nupur aaj sunna hoga tumhe. bohot sunlia maine."

"Mayank mujhe lag raha hai."

"Laga toh mujhe bhi bohot tha Nupur jab tumne meri koi baat nahi suni thi."

Nupur releasing her hand said

"I am sorry Mayank maine tumhari koi baat nahi suni par mujhe ab sab pata chal gaya hai and believe me I am guilty. Please i am really disappointed with myself. That my faith wasnt enough in you but Mayank tum toh jante ho situation kaisi thi."

She said with tears i her eyes.

On hearing her words Mayank took a deep sigh while a lone pair of tear made its way towards his cheeks.

"Nupur tumhe sab pata chalgaya kaise."

"Samrat mere office aya tha"

"Nupur i am really sorry ki maine uss samay hi react nahi kiya par Nupur ab apologize kar ke kuch to nahi hoga. I am just happy that you know what the truth is aur ..."

"I love you Mayank."

She said interrupting him.

"I love you too Nupur."

Saying this both of them hugged each other and broke after quite a long time.

Nupur on seeing his guitar said

"Mayank please ek song play karo please Mayank."

"Nupur maine salon se kuch nahi bajaya."

"Come on please Mayank."

"Ok ok."

Saying this he went to bring his guitar. The duo sat on the bed and Mayank began

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de

Chahun main ya naa

Apne tu dil ka pata de

Chahun main ya naa

Mayank sang while looking into her eyes while Nupur continued

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de

Chahun main ya naa

Apne tu dil ka pata de

Chahun main ya naa

Mayank smiled on hearing the song from her mouth

Itna bata doon tujhko

Chaahat pe apni mujhko

Yun to nahi ikhtiyaar

Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne

Ab jo laga hoon milne

Poochhu tujhe ek baar

He sang while engaging himself in playing the guitar.

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de

Chahun main ya naa

Apne tu dil ka pata de

Chahun main ya naa

Aisi kabhi pehle hui naa thi khwaahishein

O.. kisi se bhi milne ki

Naa ki thi koshishein

Uljhan meri suljha de

Chaahun main ya naa

Aankhon aankhon mein jataa de

Chaahun main ya naa

He said while going close to her and making her blush. Seeing that it was the perfect time he kissed on her forehead slowly.

Mere chhote chhote khwaab hain

Khwabon mein geet hain

Geeton mein zindagi hai

Chaahat hai, preet hai

Abhi main na dekhoon khwaab woo

Jin mein na tu mile

Le khole honth maine

Ab tak the jo sile

After getting something really precious and finding it really pure and divine Nupur sang all that her heart wanted to convey,all that she couldnt express through words.

Mujhko na jitna mujh pe

Utna iss dil ko tujh pe

Hone laga aitbaar

Tanha lamhon mein apne

Bunti hoon tere sapne

Tujhse hua mujhko pyaar o o..

Poochungi tujhko kabhi naa

Chaahun main ya naa

Tere khaabon mein ab jeena

Chaahun main kyun naa!

While singing she smiled and gave him a small peck on his cheeks and they hugged each other with smile on their faces.

While hugging him Nupur silently whispered