SS : ZOYA ' Asad's Dream Girl !! - (FINAL) PART 11 UPDATED - Page 22

Originally posted by: latanzia

this was a fantastic SS read it in one go , even though i had to run it throug my language sofwear since i did not understand some of the words in the first part, but not to worry i got it now.

I must say a fantastic story i love the flow and feel of they story, so Zoya love Asad since she was a child even though she never met him. WOW beautiful.

I can't wait for your next update

Originally posted by: zoyaah

nice update soon

Originally posted by: AAK0007

Awesome update. Love it. Zoya loves asad so much that she decided in past that if asad married someone else before meeting her she never married. This is depth of zoya love. Asya conversation about asad past is so good. Love the way zoya assured asad. Ayesha and zoya bonding is also good. Gafur lied this is amazing. Asya last convo is also good. So razia escaped now i think i get another mangalpur. Thanks for pm. Update soon

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Thanks a lot Linsie !! I have seen such people who are selfless and work towards their loved ones.. and so thought of writing in that angle...I am glad you liked it..

PART 11- FINAL PART

Thanks a lot for all your likes and wonderful comments... It kept me motivated to continue writing for better..

Note : I had stopped writing since many years.. and after getting addicted to QH and later to IF, was very impressed with Ankie's (Miss Humpty Dumpty IF) posts.. Her Os & SS motivated me to start writing again.. Would like to dedicate this part to her.. Thanks Ankie !!

Gaffur was really worried thinking about Razia's escape.. He did not know if he had to disclose it to Asad or not... Police were not able to trace her so far.. so he very well knew that Zoya's life was under threat..but as days passed by and Zoya was busy with her exams, he was relaxed thinking that may be she was not after Zoya...He had however kept calling up the police for regular updates if any...

It was the day of Zoya's final exam.. She had told Asad not to pick her up on that day since she wanted to spend time with her close buddies for an hour or two ... Asad and Zoya had plans to return to Mumbai the next day...

After escaping from jail, Razia had sold her diamond earings and had cash in hand... to execute her plans.. She had initially found out about Asad and Zoya's visit to Bhopal.. Though she was angry with everybody, her main target was Zoya.. She felt that it was because of Zoya that Gaffur had drifted away from her and also cursed Zoya for her current situation.. She had hired 2 goons to tag Zoya and inform her every day.. It had been impossible to reach Zoya since Asad was always with her either dropping her to college or while picking her up...Ayaan had gifted a brand new car - a white Hyundai Verna to Asad and Zoya .. Ayaan had told that he would love to see them visit Bhopal frequently along with Rashid and Dilshad.. and the car was a small token of his love so that they did not find any difficulty to roam around whenever they visited Bhopal...

On that day, the goons were very excited to see Zoya out with 2 of her girl friends.. They were heading towards near by Pizza Corner..The goons immediately called up Razia to inform this and to get instructions for their next actions...

Zoya called up Asad : Hello Mr. Khan.. aap kya kar rahein hain ??

Asad : Apka intezar..

Zoya started laughing hearing this

Asad : Yeh kya baat hui.. Mein aap se itna serious baath kar raha hoon.. aur apko hasi aarahi hain ??

Zoya : Accha laga.Isliye hus rahi hoon... Mein apni friends Sadia aur Ankita ke saath yehi paas mein pizza khane ja rahi hoon.. Shayad do ghante mein ghar ajaoongi..

Asad : Teek.. hain.. lekin aap muje phone kijiye.. mein aajatha hoon pick up karne keliye...

Zoya : Asad.. please.. mein bachi nahin hoon.. aajaoongi..

Asad : OK Allah hafiz.. Take care !!

Siddique Mansion

Gaffur : Asad.. aaj tum Zoya ko pick up karne nahin ja rahe ho beta ??

Asad : Mamu.. woh actually apni saheliyon ke saath pizza khane gayi hain.. do ghante mein aajayegi...

Gaffur : Nahin...

Asad : Maamu .. Kya hua ??

Gaffur : Asad.. please jao beta.. tum abhi jao.. Zoya ko lekar ajaoo...

Asad got worried looking at Gaffur getting tensed... : Kya hua mamu.. batayiye please??

Gaffur informed him about Razia's escape and also told him that he is worried about Zoya's safety.. Asad immediately rings up Zoya.. but she was not answering her call which got worried lines on Asad's face as well..

Asad : Aap please Ayaan aur Imran ko phone kijiye.. aur police ko bhi inform kijiye. Mein jatha hoon..

He rushed out and drove as fastly as possible and he kept on trying to reach her but there was still no response...

Pizza corner

Zoya, Sadia and Ankita were having pizza and since they did not know when they would meet up again, they had decided to keep their phones in vibration mode and in their purse.. and were happily chatting...and discussing about their future.. As they were enjoying cheese crust pizza, a little bit of cheese fell on Zoya's shirt ...

Zoya ..: Ankie.. mein zara wash room jake athi hoon...

It was now nearly 20 minutes and there was no sign of Zoya and as Ankitha and Sadia got worried and were thinking of checking out for her, they saw Asad rushing into the Pizza corner...

Ankitha : Asad.. aap yahan ??

Asad : Zoya kahan hain .. please batao.. aap ke saaath kyun nahin hain ??

Ankitha : woh actually wash room gayi thi.. lekin itni dher hogayi bahar hi nahin aa rahi hain.. isliye mein abhi ja rahi thi.. dekhne..

Asad : Hurry up please...

Ankitha being best buddy of Zoya knew about what had happened recently in Zoya's life and so she understood that something was wrong and so she chose not to ask any questions..and rushed to the wash room...

There was no sign of Zoya.. which got Ankitha also worried equally...She rushed back to Asad...

Ankitha : I am sorry.. woh wahan bhi nahin hain...

Asad : Damn it.. and he hit the table hard.. which made all the people in the pizza corner look towards them...

Asad : aap please yahi rukhiye.. agar kuch patha chalega to muje phone kijiye and he gave his number to her.. .

Sadia came with Zoya's purse and phone and handed it over to Asad...After coming out, his eyes scanned the entire road hoping to see his Zoya.. He had lost his cool by now.. He did not know what he was doing.. He shouted ZOYA...ZOYA.. in the road.. which just made passers by look strangely at him thinking he had gone mad...

Ankitha came running : Please calm down Asad.. Zoya ko kuch nahin hoga..

Asad : Thanks.. !! and he excuses himself and rings up Ayaan as he walked back to his car...

Asad : Ayaan.. Zoya ka kuch patha chala ?? Please kuch karo.. Meri Zoya ko kuch nahin hona chahiye..

Ayaan on phone : Asad. .please...relax.. Zoya ko kuch nahin hoga.. Mein abhi commissioner ke paas ja raha hoon.. aur Imran mamu ke saath doondne gaya hain..

Asad :Mein yahan pizza corner mein aya hoon and he tells what Ankitha told.. and how they did not know where Zoya is now ...

Asad took out his mobile and he showed Zoya's snap to people around the pizza corner asking if anybody saw her .. but unfortunately none of them had seen ... He gets a call from Ankitha...

Anktha : Asad.. yahan Pizza corner mein ek back door bhi hain.. Ek cleaner ne kaha ki .. ek aurat jeans mein thi.. aur behosh hogayi thi.. aur ek admi usse utha kar back door se gaya.. poochne par kaha ki woh unki patni hain aur isliye doctor ke paas leke jaraha tha...

Asad returned back to the pizza corner and on equiry again with the cleaner boy there was nothing else which he could extract from since the boy had not seen the lady's face..

It was nearly 3 hours and Asad was running around in the streets like a mad guy asking everybody if they had seen Zoya.. Finally, he decided to go home and have a discussion with Ayaan and others at home to see what best they could do next...

Zoya's Location

Zoya was lying on a bed when she woke up... Her head was feeling very heavy and she was facing difficulty to open her eyes as well.. She slowly opened her eyes and looked around to see where she was...It was looking like a familiar place.. but she was not able to immediately recognize it.. She shook her head hardly and rubbed her eyes.. She could see a wash room opposite to her bed.. She managed to reach it and splashed cold water on her face continuously... trying to wake her up and bring her to full sense...

Zoya now looked around : Ya allah yeh to humara farm house hain.. mein yahan kaise pounch gayi.. aur kisne muje kidnap kiya hain...She trried to remember how she landed here ??

Flash Back

Zoya was enjoying her pizza along with Ankitha and Sadia.. and she had gone to the wash room to clean the cheese which had fallen on her shirt.. As soon as she came out of it, somebody had sprayed sort or of a strong smelling liquid on her face and after that she does not remember anything...

Back to Present..

She was not tied.. so does that mean anybody is doing this for fun to just scare or fool her... but none of her friends knew about this farm house.. It belonged only to family members.. and they use to come here during holidays to spend 2-3 days quiet time ...she realized that her mobile phone was missing.. She ran around and saw that the front door and also the back door was locked from outside.. That means she was all alone...She however heard a liitle sound outside... scaring her ... She ran towards her room upstairs... and she locked it.. She tried to push the table and sofa against the door.. so that the intruder would take time to break open the door and reach her...

Since it was her room, she had Asad's childhood snap in her room.. She looked at it...hoping to gain strength from it...

Zoya's thoughts : Allah please meri madath kijiye.. muje Asad ke paas wapis jana hain..She looked at her watch.. It was now more than 3 hours .. Asad ko shayad patha chalgaya hoga ki mein missing hoon.. lekin woh Ankitha aur Sadia ka number bhi nahin janthe hain.. kaise muje doondenge...?? She realized that there was landline in the farm house.. and one in this room as well... She happily ran towards it...

Siddique Mansion

Asad entered the house .. His eyes were red and he was looking very tierd and pale.. Ayaan and Imran had also returned including Gaffur...

Asad : Mamu.. please sochiye.. Razia kahan le ja sakti hain Zoya... itna waqt bhi hogaya.. allah unhe mehfooz rakhein.. warna mein apne aapko maaf nahin karpaoonga.. aur na hi aapko.. and he was so angry that broke the glass table in front of him.. hurting his hand...

Najma : Bhaijaan please.. apne aapko sambhaliye.. Humeira.. please first aid kit lekar aao...

Ayaan : Asad mein ne police commissioner se bhi baat karli hain.. Please mera yakeen mano.. Zoya ko kuch nahin hoga.. woh zaroor humare paas wapis aa jayegi...

Najma cleaned Asad's wound and bandaged it.

Humeira cleaned the broken glass pieces.. and as she knew her Khala very well, she started thinking about the places where she could have possibly hidden Zoya.. She hoped Zoya was safe...

Humeira : Ayaan.. aap please ek baar farm house pe phone karke dekhiye.. kahin khala ne Zoya ko wahan lekar to nahin gayi hain..??

Ayaan immediately rings up but unfortunately he got the message that the phone was not working...

Asad: Humein wahan chalkar dekhna chahiye ek baar.. Please chalo... Imran.. tum yahin par ruko Najma aur Humeira ke paas.. aur maamu aap police ko lekar wahan par jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi pounchiye...

Farm House

Zoya picked up the land line and she noticed that it was completely dead.. The wires had been chopped off...

Zoya : Ya allah.. koi janbujkar is wire ko katke rakha hain...ab mein kya karoon.. Lekin mein Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan.. harne wali nahin hoon. socho Zoya.. socho kya kar sakti ho ??

Just as she was thinking all the power was cut.. It wa now pitch dark.. Though she was feeling scared, she tried to be strong.. .. she heard foot steps outside.. which made her shiver...She had only 2 names in her thoughts.. allah.. meri madat karna.. aur Asad.. please.. kisi tarah muje doondlo.. muje dar lag raha hain idhar..

After waiting for couple of minutes also there was nobody trying to force into the room.. and she was wondering what was the person up to... She got her answer.. in the form of smoke which was gushing in through the gap below the door.. It now dawned upon her.. that the house was on fire.. She got her answers on why the person had not attacked her..

Her mind was racing to find a way out.. The only option was balcony.. She rushed opening the door.. All she could see was that the ground floor was already on fire and there was flames reaching higher and higher.. and down there she saw the person who had planned all this RAZIA...!! With a deadly look and evil smile on her face...

Zoya : Aap .. !! Yeh sab aap ne karvaya ?? Kyun ?? she shouted...

Razia : Nafrat karti hoon tumse.. Meri zindagi barbad hogayi.. sab tumhari wajah se.. aur tumhe dekh kar unke bewafai yaad atha hain.. chali jao.. tum bhi apni ammi ke paas..

Zoya had tears in her eyes...

In the Road , near to Farm House :

Ayaan was driving the car as fastly as possible .. He was scared to give the car to Asad in that condition.. Gaffur and the police team were also behind them...

Asad : Ayaan aur kitne door.. Tez chalo.. please...

As they were approaching the farm house, they could see that it was on fire.. and huge smoke was coming out of it...

Ayaan : Ya allah.. Asad.. lagta hain farm house mein aag lag gaya hain...

Asad : No.. aise nahin ho sakta.. Mein zinda nahin reh sakta hoon Zoya ke bina...

As soon as Ayaan stopped, Asad rushed in... His heart sank looking at the fire.. He saw Razia first.. She was looking up.. He just pounced on her and held her neck...Razia who was not aware of Asad and Ayaan suddenly got startled...

Ayaan : Asad.. chodo unhe...

Zoya : ASAD !!

Asad immediately .. There she was in the balcony.. He felt as though his life was back.. He wanted to somehow reach her.. He tried to see if he could somehow reach the balcony...

Razia started laughing loudly.. : Woh bach nahi sakti.. tum chahe kitni bhi koshish karlo...

Asad shouted : Shut up !! so loudly that it scared Razia as well.. Ayaan went and stood near her fearing if she would try out anything...

Asad : Zoya.. Jump.. Mein tumhe pakad loonga. Jump karo...

Zoya : Nahin.. Asad.. mujse nahin hoga.. and she had tears .. He could see that she was very scared and her body was shivering as well...

His only thoughts was to save her. He immediately tried to get into the house by kicking the front door... but more fire flames came out.. trying to engulf him also in fire...

Ayaan : Asad.. nahin.. please.. andhar mat jao mere bhai.. please...Zoya.. please.. tumhe jump karna hi hoga.. Asad keliye tumhareliye..

By now the police team and Gaffur also reached.. They arrested Razia who was still having that evil smile on her face and looking dangerously at Zoya..

Asad came back and stood just below the balcony.. The fire from inside was now soon reaching the balcony door...

Asad : Zoya.. please..bharosa hain na mujpar.. mein tumhe kuch hone nahin doonga..

Zoya : Bacha lo Asad.. Bacha lo muje..

Asad : Zoya.. ankhe bankaro aur khudo..JUMP !! Now !!

Zoya could also see the fire approaching her.. She just closed her eyes and jumped down.. reaching safely in his strong arms.. She was happy that she was now safe in his arms.. where she belong.. She was still closing her eyes tightly...

Both of them had tears in their eyes.. Asad slowly bent down and kissed her on her forehead..

Asad : Zoya. Ankhe kholo.. please.. Are you ok ??

Zoya slowly opened her eyes.. Though she had tears in her eyes.. , she smiled..

Zoya : Muje yakeen tha ki aap muje zaroor doondlenge.. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH Mr. Khan.. !!

Asad : I LOVE YOU TOO ZOYA !! I LOVE YOU TOO !!

Gaffur and Ayaan were happy that they had reached on time.. and thanked allah for saving their Zoya and also Asad..

The farm house was fully burnt down in the next few minutes.. Ayaan had called up the fire engine and instructed them to but down the fire and clear out all the mess...

Rashid and Dilshad had also got the news of Zoya's kidnapping and they had also rushed to Bhopal immediately..

On the way back, Ayaan was driving and Gaffur was sitting along with him in the car.. while Zoya was still in Asad's arms in the back seat.. She rested her head on his shoulder and he had held her tightly all through the way... once in a while kissing her forehead again and again and with the other hand wiping his tears which were not stopping...promising himself.. that he will never ever allow her to go through any such nightmares...!!

The END

Originally posted by: suganti

Awesome ending 👏