||When Eros Overcame Nemesis|| [Ch3 @ pg21]

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Checkmatee

@Checkmatee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Prologue : interesting to see all the different thoughts
Chapter 1 : nice intro to Adi, I hope he remains a positive character!
Chapter 2: Khushi and her dad are so sweet!
Chapter 3 : Boy, Arnav needs to be less harsh!

Nice updates, good style of writing, looking forward to future updates! :)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Interesting concept...Im curious about Arnav's past ... there has to be a reason behind his behavior... especially the way he talked to Mandira... Also was he the man who wants to destroy Adi's comapany?

Khushi seems like smart and sweet girl... Loved her and Adi's friendship...

Cant wait to fins out more... especially how its all connected to the prologue...

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

can't wait to see what is really happening here

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

interesting ah arnav is a dark character here

continue soon 😊

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

arnav's intro was nice.. ruthless as always.. wats it wid him not accepting his mom.? really interesting... plz pm wen u update,..

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Loved it

Adi is sweet

khuhsi is smart n confident n crazy to

Arnav's introduction is so intriguing.

you portrayed between Payal and Akash here. A typical married couple...very much in love. :)

Richa is a bit weird when someone doesnt like u y hang on to him

N who wants to destroy Adi n his F*Ly

Can u plz PM me

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Sandhya

@cindistan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

i just came across this FF and read all the chapters..and loved it absolutely...very interesting indeed...arnav is ruthless to the core and khushi too is a smart businesswoman...this plot is really interesting...looking forward to the updates to see how their paths cross and affects their lives...I have sent you buddy request..do accept and PM me as and when you update...tx a lot.