Game of destiny- A KR ff ( CH 13 UPDATED)11.09.14 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha


Anu.. Tune finally ek update unres kiya. . .



itna shocked kyun ho????? 🤣 🤣 haha

:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64

Rey ki haalat to psychiatrist ke paas jane vali hi hai... 😆

Itne nightmares rohan ke... & top of that kriya ke sath hona ...

Rey abhi bhi uska bday celebrate karta hai... how sweet... bhai ho to aisa...🤗

Ye rey ko kriya se love kab hoga aakhir... meera bhi carefree hogi fir toh...😛

Rofl... cockroaches... vo to hote hi hai horrible... eeeww 😵

Kriya ko kahin sab kuch toh nhi yaad aa gaya... aur bas pretend kar rahi ho...😆😉

Yup.. bhai hai toh aisa hi hona chahiye.. IS STORY MEIN I LOVE REY'S CHARACTER MORE. .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha

vahan.. wait karke help karo. . .


dii..ye toh difficult hai..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvkriyansh-anu



itna shocked kyun ho????? 🤣 🤣 haha

:)

Shock hogi na.. tumhari b'day keliye dedicate kiya jo update hai voh bhi tu abhi tak unres nai kiya...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kria_reyd3

awsume updte yar
Sry pehle vale parts ko rpy nhi de payi but they were fab
Really excited for your next updte . . . . . . . 👍🏼

thanx. .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_anisha

i know m late.. had been busy wid exams!

dint check for a long tym...

still, lovely upd!
that cockroach part was really funny..😆
upd soon!

hmmm u r too late.. but its okk i know it..
n thanxx
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha


Shock hogi na.. tumhari b'day keliye dedicate kiya jo update hai voh bhi tu abhi tak unres nai kiya...

oh yeah...

:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sohad3fan

Chapter 4


Sorry..I know I m very late..
The update was damn good..
Ur writing style is just Awesome..
Sorry again..I m giving short comments as have a lot of updates to go through..

thank u. . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter-7

Kriya got into the car n sat next to rey who began driving into the hall.

"Rey, please tell atleast now. . . Whose birthday is it?" she asked while checking out her reflection in the mirror.

" I told you na. . its one of my friens's"

"I am asking you What's his name? Doesn't he have any name?"

"Does it matter?" he asked while stopping at the red light.

" Ofcourse. . it does. We are going to celebrate someone's birthday party n I don't know even his name. Moreover we should get a card or gift for him", she stopped looking at him with a hope that he would tell that name.

Rey looked at her and frowned.

"He doesn't need a card" she looked at him confused.

" Remember, I have told you he's not here. . Now will you please stop asking questions" Kriya kept quite this time n looked out of the window. .

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Soon they arrived at the venue.. Kriya followed Rey to the hall. Rey was greeted by some guests who she didn't know. She looked all around the places,ther were balloons n banners which was written Happy birthday' but still there is no name of the person whose birthday was celebrating there. She was confused as to why rey was celebrating someone's b'day who doesn't even present there. What might be the relation between these two people? Kriya wondered while gazing around n finally she spotted a cake in the middle of the hall. She glanced over rey n found him talking with some friends. She slowly made her way towards that cake.

"Happy Birthday Rohan", Kriya read off the cake. Finally She got what she wanted. She got the name for which she was waiting till now. "But Who is this Rohan?what is his connection with Rey?". . she wondered.

Suddenly something struck in her mind. Is this the same Rohan whose name rey chanted during his all nightmares, but exactly who might be him?. . . Before she could think anymore she felt two strong hands slipping around her waist.

"Kriya, What are u doing here alone. . come meet our friends"

" Rey, I don't know anyone of here. . If ur friends are here then why did you bring me here?",she asked with a cute pout on her face.

"You are going to cut the cake. . I have already told u na..n you knew him before accident n u even knew these guys too.. So now common.. Lets meet them"

She nodded n walked along with him to meet the guests. She looked at each one of them trying to remember whether she knew them but all her tries went in vain.

"Lets cut the cake" Rey led her to the table n handed her the knife. She took it n cut the cake n everyone clapped. She fed rey with a piece of cake n allowed him to feed her a small piece.

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It was clearly visible from Kriya's face that she was feeling out of place n rey knew it very well. But he couldn't celebrate Rohan's b'day without her. Rey looked around the whole place. ., some old memories of him with rohan came in his mind. He really missing those days. Rey sighed n closed his eyes, a tear dropped down his cheek but he brushed it away as he saw kriya approaching him.

"Rey, Lets go.. home.. Its so boaring here" she said while resting her head on his shoulders.

"Not yet Kriya, Stay here some more time then we can go home. Now Lets go to have some drinks" Kriya nodded her head n headed towards the bar along with rey. His friends were already present there. Rey asked a bottle of champagne. He poured a small amount of drink to each glass n gave it to his friends. And he took one for himself n handed a soft drink for kriya too. She sipped the drink while Rey gulped down it in one go.

Kriya was smiling at him,he was all happy today.She poured some moe drink n made him drink that too. Today she would let him drink as much as he wanted because there was no other way she could get her hand on the key unless he was drunk.

She went over to him n placed her hand on his shoulder.

"Kriya, You know what I am so happy today"he said while hugging her.

"I Know Rey.. you have been saying this for a long time. I think we should leave now." Rey nodded n kriya held his arm n led him outside. As she knew that he couldn't drink in this condition,she seated him into the passenger seat n got into the driver seat n started driving.

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She parked the car in the driveway and got out of the car. She opened the door of the passenger seat n helped rey out and then locked the car. She opened the front door n took him inside n made him lie on the sofa. He was blabbering something or other. She sat on the chair next to him n looked at his face n slowly patted his cheek. . .

It wasn't before he fell asleep,she jumped up n went to him. She kept her hand on his chest feeling the rhythmic heart beats. Then moved her hands towards his neck n felt the coldness of the key. She grinned widely n began undying the clasp. Soon It was in her hands,she looked at the key n at rey.. she felt guilty on doing so. She knew she was doing wrong but do wanna see what's in the room that rey hiding from her n this was the only way to reach her destination.

She didn't wait anymore n headed upstairs. She stood infront of the door and slide the key inside n soon unlocked it. She pushed the handle and opened the door. Taking a deep breath she took her first step into the dark room. She reached out her hand for the light switch n put her fingers on the switch. She was about to press it when she found a hand on her hand. She gasped and turned around to face a angry rey with full of anger visible in his eyes. The key dropped down from her hands while she was gasped wondering what he was going to say and what she would answer to him. . . . .

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Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres..

yupiee...!! me agn 1st..!!
yayayayayay...!!
sanju diii...!!🤗
haye atlast aapne update de diya..
me super kush...😃
haye dii kya update tha..
awsum..👏
loved it..
haye kitna caring bro hai rey..😳
feeling bad fr kriya..itne mushkil se key's mili..😔
nd rey udhar aya..
bt rey was drunked na...?? toh kese aya..??😕
bichari kriya aab kya karegi..??
haye ese cliff pe kyu end kiya..??
jaldi update karna nxt part..abhi toh PC bhi aagya..😉
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 12 years ago

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