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Posted: 11 years ago



A/N : Thank you to all my readers for supporting me and for your valuable comments. It really means a lot to me!
A big sorry for delay in updates as I am very busy with certain issues. I have replied to some comments for Part 50 A and B and will soon reply to all the remaining ones😊
But I have read all your comments

Thank you so much
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Geet's plan and Maan's reaction u will get to know in this update and I hope you guys like it

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Deejagi - Geet's plan u will know in this update and Maan's project is on outskirts of Delhi and Maan will be driving down there.

Ritzy - Hope Geet's plan hasn't disappointed u😳







Part 52








KHURANA MANSION




[Geet's POV]



Maan was hovering over me just like a fierce lion and I felt like a trapped lamb beneath his mighty being. He carefully lowered himself not putting any pressure on me. I closed my eyes smiling to myself even in such a state when I had troubled and tortured him so much, he was more concerned and protective for the baby and me. PROTECTION the word rung in my mind and I at once opened my eyes.


'Geet yeh tu kya kar rahi hain...itni mushkil se yeh mauka mila hain...Its now or never! Bewakoofi mat kar Maan iss waqt teri har baat maan lenge bas plan par dhyaan de!'


That was the plan, to seduce Maan and then in the most vulnerable moment to make him agree to not go for the land deal. I knew it was wrong on my part and I shouldn't do this but for him and his safety I had to!


Maan inched closer to me to close the distance between us I immediately put a pillow between us. His expressions were worth watching just like small kid whose candy has been snatched away from him. Controlling myself and putting up a stern face.


"Nahi..." I announced but it came out like mere whisper. He looked at me like I spoke alien. Gathering all my control over my betraying body and my pregnancy hormones doing overtime I spoke with a determined voice.


"Pehle mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hain."



"Geet" He growled and my heart beat started rising. He looked dangerous!



"Maan aap ko mujhse promise karna hoga ke..."


Before I could complete my sentence in one quick pull the pillow was thrown somewhere in the room and the next moment my dress was reduced to shreds and what followed I had no clue...







[Maan's POV]



Geet's behavior from past two days was confusing me and todays blitz was shocking!


I looked down at my innocent seductress who lay on me all marked by our love covered in a sheet pouting, absolutely miffed and angry on me as I had ruthlessly ruined all her planning. even in her messed up form she looked gorgeous!




But now was the time to do some little damage control. Though I very well knew it wasn't gonna help much.



"Toh yeh plan tha tum girls ke late night secret discussions ka, hain na?" She glared at me.



"Tumhe kya laga mujhe pata nahi chalega! Geet main tumhe tumse zyaada jaanta hoon aur yeh bhi, ke yeh kiske dimaag ki upaj (idea) hain. Agli baar Annie ki help lene se pehle do baar sochna. Maan Singh Khurana ko trap karna itna aasaan nahi!" I smirked seeing her face which had turned pale of being caught red handed and their plan had miserably back fired.



"Chup kariye aap...abhi kuch der pehle toh mere ishaaro pe naach rahe the aur ab style maar rahe hain." She burst out.



"Ab jaal itna tempting ho toh koi paagal hi hoga jo usme phasna na chaahe, jab saamne yummy dessert rakha ho toh koi khaaye bina thodi reh sakta hain." I proudly announced.



"MAAN..." She whined hitting me, her touches arousing me again but I had to control as she seemed tired after our passionate love making. She needed rest and even I had to sleep for few hours before leaving.



Not trusting myself I told her to get dressed immediately as it was getting really hard for me to control. Her reaction to my statement was worth watching not taking a risk of an action replay she scurried away to the washroom with her night wear.



She came out and settled herself on me, dejection still evident on her face. Feeling guilty to have not given her chance to put forward her request I hugged her tight and queried.



"Ok...ab batao kya baat hain." She at once stiffened in my arms which alarmed me. She slowly urged not meeting my eyes.



"Maan aap please kal mat jaayiye, mera mann bahot darr raha hain!" She confessed.



"Geet usme darne ki kya baat hain main jaldi vaapas aa jaaunga."



"Maan aap kisi aur ko bhej dijiye na..." She tried again.



"Geet tum jaanti ho naa yeh Dadaji ka sapna hain aur unhone bade vishwaas (trust) ke saath mujhe saunpa (handed over) hain. Main ab peeche nahi hatt (back out) sakta." I asserted.



"Theek hain toh main bhi aap ke saath chalungi." Now I hadn't expected this.



"Geet tum mere saath nahi aa sakti!" Before she could debate I continued.


"Woh jagah shaher se bahot door, remote areas mein hain aur raaste bhi acche nahi hain issliye aisi haalat mein tumhaare saath aane ka to sawaal hi nahi uttha! I promise main jaldi aa jaaunga." I rested my point.



"Maan..."



"Geet...raat bahot ho gayi hain ab hume sona chahiye, baby bhi thak gaya hoga...baaki baat baad mein!" Hugging her tight to me I switched off the lights leaving no room for further argument.








I tried hard but couldn't sleep a wink. Suddenly too much was happening around which was confusing me. Geet's recent behavior and then all this planning and then her fear for me everything was hinting otherwise. I can't buy the fact that all this was due to her pregnancy mood swings.



Something was fishy!



I glanced at my watch it was nearly time. I slowly placed Geet's head on the pillow and slipped out of the bed. Turning the alarm off I headed to the washroom for a quick shower.




I knew once Geet wakes up it will be difficult to persuade her so its better we leave before she wakes up. She will be unhappy but to avoid any further arguments it seemed the best option. I didn't want to take any chance with Geet's vulnerable state. I had already informed Aadi of the change in the plan.









[Geet's POV]


"Maan please meri baat suniye, mat jaayiye...please Maan..."


"Geet main theek hoon...main jaldi waapas aa jaaunga..."


"Maan...please..."


"GEET...GEET..."


"MAAN...kahan hain aap...please saamne aa jaayiye ...dekhiye aisa mazaak mat kijiye... MAAN...MAAN..."


I was in my Maan's arms and Maan was right here beside me but suddenly everything became dark, I felt someone was pulling me away from Maan and then Maan disappeared leaving me alone. I looked around frantically for him, called out to him but he was gone...




"MAAN...MAAN!" I got up with a start.


Placing my hand on my rapidly beating heart and catching a breath! I looked around to see Maan rushing towards me from the dresser. He was all ready to leave. I just pulled him to me and hugged him hard to make sure he was safe with me...and that was indeed a terrible nightmare!



"Geet kya hua tum aise neend mein kyun chilla rahi thi? Main yahin hoon tumhaare paas daro mat." He comforted me in his embrace. His presence, his words, his touch acting as a balm to my disturbed self.



Getting grip on myself and breaking the hug I looked into his eyes and spoke with determination.



"Maan aap kahin nahi jaayenge, chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye." He stiffened immediately hearing my declaration.



"Geet tum ne neend mein ek bura sapna dekha lekin dekho sab theek hain...main theek hoon. Tum bekaar hi pareshan ho rahi ho, just relax aur phir se sone ki koshish karo, itni jaldi uthne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. Mujhe der ho rahi hain main chalta hoon tumhe beech beech mein call karta rahunga. Promise!" He firmly stated and got up making his way towards his bag.



He was taking my fears very likely but I couldn't give up, not this time!



I jumped out of the bed and the sudden noise made him turn and on top it all my careless stunt of jumping off the bed triggered his temper.



"Geet..." He frowned.



Ignoring him completely I made a dash to his bag before he could get hold of it I threw it down on the floor scattering all his stuffs around. If looks could kill I would have been dead this very moment. He was seething with anger would be an understatement!!!!!



"GEET..." He roared. Luckily the door of our room was closed so his high pitched tone wouldn't echo in the house.



"Tumhara dimaag kharaab ho gaya hain ya phir tumhe iss waqt mazaak soojh raha hain, bachpane ki bhi hadd hoti hain! Kuch din se mujhe pareshan kar rakha hain tumne, jab dekho utt-pataan (tantrums) cheeze karti rehti ho. Har cheez ki hadd hoti hain aur mere bardaasht ki bhi!"



"Ab tak toh mujhe lagta tha ke yeh tumhaari pregnancy ke mood swings hain lekin nahi yeh kuch aur hi hain. Geet iss waqt mujhe der ho rahi hain wapas aa ke baat karenge, tumhaare bekaar ke darr ke liye main apni trip cancel nahi kar sakta. Samjhi tum." He burst out on me and started gathering his stuffs and dumping them in the bag again. Seeing him all set to leave once again and my fear taking over me...




"Bekaar ka darr nahi hain mera, aap samajhte kyun nahi aap ki jaan ko khatra hain, main itne din se koshish kar rahi hoon ke main aap ko safe rakh saku aur aap..."



I closed my eyes in regret, I had blurted out the truth and as expected in an instance he marched towards me like wounded lion. His eyes boring into me, he pulled me hard to him, his fingers digging into my arms but he was not bothered...My behavior, my plans, my tantrums, my statement and my fear all made sense to him now.




I looked in his eyes which displayed both anger and hurt ! The fact that I had hidden something so important from him had infuriated him and hurt him too. He didn't utter a word I knew he was waiting for me to own up my folly. And I obliged, narrating all about the anonymous call, the threat and all that which transpired post the call. Not having enough courage to meet his eyes anymore I looked down in guilt waiting for his reaction.




"Aur tumhe ek baar bhi yeh mahsoos nahi hua ke mujhe yeh sach batao...kya laga tumhe, tumhaari inn bachkaani (childish) harkaton se sab theek ho jaayega...Do you even realize how dangerous it is! You have put all our lives at stake by hiding such an important and serious fact."



He was agitated but spoke intently his each word clearly reflecting the seething anger which he was trying hard to keep in check. He at once left me turning around running his fingers in his hair trying to come in terms with the sudden development.



"Maan..." I rued.



"Not a word Geet...not...a...word..." He cut me off as he staunchly continued.



"Jitni bewakoofi tumhe karni thi tum kar chuki ho. Now listen to me carefully jab tak main wapas nahi aata tum iss ke ghar ke bahar nahi jaaungi. Am I clear!" He finished.



"Maan khatra mujhe nahi aap ko hain aur main aap ko nahi jaane doongi!" I tried again with determination.



"Bas..." He raised his hand signalling me to keep shut.



"Iss baar tumne jo kiya hain uske baad aaj, mujhe rokne ka haq tum kho chuki ho." He stated adamantly.




"Main bhi dekhti hoon aap kaise jaate hain, iss baar main bhi peeche nahi hatungi (back out). Aap nahi jaayenge yeh mera faisla hain aur aap ko isse maan na hi hoga warna..."




"Warna...warna kya Geet?" He towered over me trying to dominate me with his mighty being and on a reflex I too started walking backwards.




"Ek toh tumne, mujhse itni badi baat chupayi aur ab bekaar ki zidd kar rahi ho...lekin tum shayad bhool gayi ho ke main aaj bhi wohi Maan Singh Khurana hoon jo naa kisi ke zidd ke aage jhukta hain aur na hi kisi ki dhamkiyon se darta hain. Main apne faisle kabhi nahi badalta!" He proclaimed.









"Maan iska anjaam accha nahi hoga." I too lost my cool seeing his indifference.



"Tumhe jo karna hain karo, main jaa raha hoon." Before I could react or formulate my words he rushed out of the room banging the door close. I tried to open the door but he had locked it from out. I called out to him in vain and he replied walking away that Nakul will open the door once he leaves.




Dejected I sat down by the door praying to Babaji to keep my Maan safe.







I didn't realize that I had cried myself to sleep but constant ringing of my cell broke my sleep and I rushed to the phone hoping its Maan and he changed his decision but it was that call which I was fearing. The caller laughing out loud on my failure and his victory!



He disclosed to me that now Maan is entirely on his mercy and told me that he had a surprise for me and cut the call. But the very next second I received a message which contained photos of Maan and Aadi.



He was indeed stalking them!



He again called me but didn't let me speak just threatened very soon Maan will be... and the line went dead.




Shocked by the revelation and danger looming over my Maan I had no idea what to do now, how to save him. I tried calling him but his phone was out of coverage area, every passing moment was scaring me. Just then Annie, Pari and Meera barged in my room.




"Geet maine suna Bhai chale gaye, kaise...plan kamyaab (successful) nahi hua kya?" Annie inquired.




I nodded in negative and burst out crying hugging her. Meera and Annie comforting me while Pari got a glass of water for me, making me sit on the bed they asked me about the events and I disclosed to them how I blurted out the truth unknowingly and Maan was livid with me and left ignoring all my attempts.




"Uss aadmi ka phone aaya tha abhi aur yeh photos bhi bheje hain...woh Maan aur Aadi ka peecha kar raha hain...unki jaan khatre mein hain...mujhe bahot darr lag raha hain...ab kya hoga?" I spoke between my sobs.




"Mujhe lagta hain hume ghar ke bado ko bata dena chahiye, yeh baat ab bahot serious ho gayi hain. Jab tak Maan Veerji ghar pe the tab tak theek tha, lekin ab kuch bhi ho sakta hain." Meera spoke out.




Before we could decide how to go about Mom walked in my room all dressed like she is going out. She narrowed her eyebrows surprised to see the girls up so early. I quickly wiped my tears not wanting to scare Mom and smiled at her. She came up to me caressing my head and spoke.




"Main jaanti hoon tumhe Maan ki yaad aa rahi hain, hain na. Isme rone ki kya baat hain Geet woh jaldi wapas aa jaayega. Tum fikar mat karo." She assured me.



"Aap kahi jaa rahi hain Mom?" I asked her.



"Haan main tumhe yehi bata ne aayi thi ke main Pahadiwale mandir jaa rahi hoon, Mata Rani ke darshan karne, bahot maanyata (belief) hain uss mandir ki, kehte hain wahan ki gayi prathna (prayer) kabhi khaali nahi jaati, har mannat, har manokaamna (wish) zaroor poori hoti hain." She divulged and like Almighty was showing me the way to ensure Maan's safety.




"Mom kya main bhi aap ke saath chal sakti hoon, mera bahot mann hain wahan darshan karne ka." I pleaded.




"Lekin bete wahan bahot saari seediyaan (steps) hain, aisi haalat mein tumhaara wahan jaana theek nahi hoga, main tumhaari taraf se prathna karungi."




"Please Mom mujhe bhi le jaaye na, main aaraam se chadungi, apna poora khyaal rakhungi...please."




"Theek hain tum taiyaar ho jao main abhi aati hoon." She agreed reluctantly not having a heart to deny my plea. She left the room while I rushed to the washroom but not before instructing Annie to immediately disclose the truth to all once Mom and I have left.




I had to go to the temple any how and if the truth was out now than nobody would have let me go...








[Arjun's POV]



"I don't believe this! Tum logo ko sab pata tha aur hume bata na zaroori nahi samjha, what is wrong with you all. Uss din hotel mein itna samjhaane ke baad bhi tum log...You people are just hopeless."



I couldn't control myself anymore. Annie had called my to Khurana Mansion early in the morning, she sounded very worried so I hurried here only to see the girl gang standing in the hall with teary eyed with their head hung low. They narrated all the events shocking us all.




"Arjun bhai inn logon se koi bhi umeed karna bekaar hain. they will never understand." Vicky was enraged on their stupidity to handle the situation themselves thereby putting so many lives at stake.




"Issiliye Geet, Aparna ke saath mandir jaane ke itni zidd kar rahi thi, Annie bete agar tum pehle bata deti, toh hum unhe jaane hi nahi dete." Dadimaa rued.




"Woh Geet ne kaha..." Annie tried to justify.




"Geet ne kaha aur tum logo ne maan liya aaj agar kuch bhi hua toh iske zimmedaari kaun lega? Tum logo ke bewakoofi ki wajah se Maan aur Aadi khatre mein hain." Yash furiously added.



"Yash the damage is done ab chillane ka koi faayda nahi." I composed him.



"Mujhe toh Aparna aur Geet ki bhi fikar ho rahi hain." Rajiv uncle added anxiously.



"Vicky, Arjun, Yash...waqt bahot kam hain...we need to act fast." Dadaji ordered.




We nodded and started make arrangements for Maan's and Aadi's safety and also send some additional guards for Aunty and Geet. We had to make sure that all were safe and also had to hunt for the culprit who had been calling Geet and threatening her.






SITE (out of Delhi)




[Maan's POV]



I shouldn't have behaved like this with Geet, she was just worried for me and I just burst out on her. I know she hid such an important and serious fact from me but still I should have handled the situation more tactfully and calmly. She must have cried her heart out and even now she would be weeping and worrying for me. Let me call her and speak to her assuring her that I am fine.



I looked at my phone, 'Damn no network'



I have to even inform Arjun and Yash to trace the anonymous phone calls to Geet and to increase the security of all. I can't take any chances. Looking over to Aadi I spoke.


"Aadi I need to make few calls but..."


"Maan don't worry there is a small town ahead I'm sure there won't be any network problem and we would be able to make calls once we reach there." He asserted.



"Hmm" I nodded.






I was elated as my motive for coming here was fulfilled! We had successfully managed to buy all the land which I was keen on buying for the project. Khurana Constructions and Dadaji's Goodwill enabled us to finish off the work in just a couple of hours.



Now I can rush back to my Geet and apologize to her for behaving so rudely and badly with her. I grabbed my phone to call Geet to give her the good news that I will be back soon. I hadn't been able to get through her earlier due to bad network but now I will ease out her worry but before I could dial her number I received a call with private number flashing on my screen. I at once picked up the call and the news that was broken to me snatched the ground beneath my feet.





"Maan Singh Khurana bahot jaldi hain apni biwi se baat karne ki, kuch baatein humse bhi kar lo, kaafi dino se issi din ka intezaar tha aur dekho aaj mauka mil hi gaya."



"Kaun ho tum aur chahte kya ho, himmat hain toh mere saamne aao auraton ko kya darate ho?"




"Not bad Khurana, toh tumhe pata chal hi gaya...Chalo lets get to the point then...Maan Singh Khurana ki sabse badi kamzori hain uski biwi Geet...jo ab mere kabze mein hain...khatra tumhe nahi khatra toh usse tha, jo woh bechaari samajh nahi paayi."



"Tch...tch...tch... Mere agle call ka wait karna aur bilkul bhi apni smartness mat dikhana, ab tak tum samajh hi gaye hoge ke main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...kuch bhi! Tumhaari Maa, tumhaari biwi aur Khurana khaandaan ka waaris teeno mere paas hain safe bilkul safe...Lekin tumhaari sirf ek galti aur game over!" He cut the call and it felt like someone snatched away my life



"GEET..." I cried.







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Edited by heytal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

first of all a big apology for being so late

secondly wish you and your family a very happy and prosperous Diwali
I loved the update...In a way it showed flaws in everyone and i think all of them were wrong.
Geet for hiding such a serious matter but Maan does not look after himself and hence her reason for worry which led to this
Maan for still ignoring her and going away...why did he leave when she was clearly scared and worried...wasnt it more important to stay back and get proper security sorted
Annie and Meera for being dumb
Vicky and Arjun for shouting at them and making them scapegoats...maybe it is this attitude which makes them keep the problems to themselves rather than talking it through...
Now Geet has been kidnapped along with mom and Maan is very worried...I just hope once this is resolved they understand each other a little bit more...
waiitng eagerly to read more
Edited by ritzy09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

res

will read and comment later



Happy Dusshera Ritzy
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
geets outburst n maan s anger
evrything is r8 at their place
geet is kidnapped
now what will maan do
who is the kidnapper..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update !!!!!
Is geet really kidnapped ...😲 or that phone caller is playing again some game ...
hope maan saves geet ...
waiting for nxt update cont. soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Huh! Girls gang is such a dumbo...

Nw geet,maan's mom n baby in danger...

Maaneet's 1st fight...


So much in one part.


Conti soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh o!
Yeh kya hogaya?

poor Geet desperately trying to save Maan aur khud jaal mein phas gayi..

Thank God ki Annie ko akal aa gayi and she confessed to the others😲

Maan aa raha hai Geet ko bachane👏

kiski shamaat aayi hai jo Maan ki Geet ko ussein alag karna chahta hai😡

lovely dhamakedaar update Heytal👏

Awesome, loved it

Happy Dusshera to you too😃
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Is it Dev? or someone else.. Geet's life in danger...😲 Wel i won't say Geet's stupidity.. but she was worried for her Maan.. N enemy has taken full advantage of it..
Excited for next part..

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Posted: 11 years ago
one of the stupid character is always geet she never thinks from her mind never ever hence lands herself in problem always
she shudl have informed abou the call when she got to known about it but now she didnt did it
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Posted: 11 years ago
grt part
who is he
ab kya hoga
just cant wait to read more

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