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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 8:


"sohum" was the word spoken by Rajji wen she felt some soft and chill hand touching her hand and that hand is removing the tie in her hands after hearing his name sohum was near her and their eyes meet and it had lot of fire work in the name of happy reunion tears and then gently he touched her cheeks and wiped her tears. By telling each other's name tey both hugged. She stated to cry very hardly by telling his name repeatedly. "Don't cry Rajji everything is over, i am here oly don't worry i will not let anything happen to u" by telling that he lifted her face and told "i am sorry Rajji" she was confused by his words and she looked at him with the confusing face and it was looked like a little girl who was having a mouth full of chocolate and this made sohum to smile. He cupped her both cheeks and told "i am really sorry for not understanding u for these many days and putting fight with u" then he pushed her hair back off and told the 3 magical word "I LOVE U, i love u Rajji" after hearing those words she smiled and hugged him very tightly and said in teras"don't leave me and go sohum, i can't live without u for a second also". Sohum can understand her fear and he gently rubbed her back to make her comfortable and said softly "don't worry my love, i will not leave u, i will be with u forever and ever Rajji" then he lifted her face and gently kissed in her fore head. Rajji told in btw her tears"I LOVE U sohum, i love u more than my life". Sohum smiled and said "i know it" then he took her in his arms and walked to ter home. Sohum entered with Rajji in his hand and with lots of love for each others. He made her to lie on the bed and he made the dressing for the wound all the way Rajji was seeing him with love in her eyes and smile in the face. Suddenly she remembered about Randeep and asked "sohum wat u did to him??" with the question eye. "Oh my dear wife doesn't worry too much and strain ur self, all will be fine, wat he did that same thing he will also get. Ok now take rest" by telling that he made to rest her head in his chest and after a long 9t of her life and a fight for it and achievement of her love made her to sleep soon in the heart of her love.

He was thinking wat he did to him, the evil dog. He drove the car very fast and rashly, he dashed the car to a tree in a deep forest there was a no sign of ppl for so long time. He then dragged him out of the car as he did to Rajji. Sohum took the rope from the car back seat which he came to know while searching Rajji in car. He climbed up of the tree with him and tied him in the top of the tree branches so that all the birds can see him but no human beings can see him nor can hears his voice bcz of the sound made by the trees in air, the sun will burn him and from now on he is food for many birds. He closed his mouth with cloths so that he can't shout for help. He also tied his legs with other branches, wen air blow the branches will dance and he will also dance with them. Suddenly Rajji moved her head and made her more comfortable in his chest this made her to look like a sweet little child and sohum kissed her in cheeks "from now on ur my sweet little child" Rajji respond to him in sleep by hugging him.

Next morning he woke up late and by closing his eyes he searched for her sweet little angle by using his hand near him but she was missing. He got feared and opened his eyes and jumped from the bed and after smelling the sweet tea which is been done by his wife he got relived. He slowly moved out if the room and searched for her, he heard the sound in the kitchen and slowly moved towards her without making any noise. "sohum wat ur trying to do" by telling that Rajji turned and faced sohum with the police look. Sohum was in a shock by seeing her wife's smartness and he blabbered on and on. Rajji stopped him and asked him to take bath 1st. sohum with the sad face went to bath room and he smiled to himself after i come out no one can stop me.

Sohum came to the kitchen with the wet hair and he hugged her from the back and shaked his head like a shabby dog all the water droplets from his head were on Rajji. Rajji poured water on her dress by the shock made by her husband but 1st she was anger and then she enjoyed romance by her husband. Then he turned her to face him, Rajji turned with the bend heads he lifted her head and place a smile kiss in her nose and then he saw the rosy lips. He touched the lips with his wet fingers and felt like touching the rose petals. Rajji blushed and pushed him away and ran out from sohum by telling "i will bring towel for ur wet hair". "Hey..." before he could say anything she ran away. He looked those lucky fingers and smiles to himself, "go, inside a surprise is waiting for u" he moved out from the kitchen and sat in the sofa. Rajji entered the room and found 3 gift boxes, she looked totally confused and slowly she opened one by one. The 1st box contains beautiful orange color kanchipuram pattu silk saree. The sun light from the window was falling on the saree and the room was glittering in gold color. The next box she opened it contained the designer purple color saree and the other one was also a saree of Mumbai type.

Rajji was speech less for a mint and also touched by her husband love for her. After few mint the door opened and Rajji came out by wearing the designer saree. She looked like a film actress who is ready to woo the hero. Sohum, who was sitting in the sofa, was now standing like a stachu by seeing his wife's flawless beauty. He came near her and she started to move back. He locked her to the wall and she pushed him away by using her hands in shyness.

She took the towel in the hand and asked him to sit. But he refused to do and he stretching his head high as much he can. Rajji asked him to sit through her eyes but he refused by shaking his head, she turned back with the dull face. Sohum smiled and bend down to lift her wife above his head. Rajji was suddenly surprised and had a cute eye contact with sohum. Tey were standing like that for 10min even after the reaching of Angad and simran also tey were doing the romance. Simran was happy for her sister Rajji, she made a small cough to grab ter attention but it was no use. The Angad and simran came closer and pinched sohum harder, sohum left the grip of Rajji and she landed safely to the ground. Rajji hide herself in the back of sohum in the shyness and sohum was rubbing the pinched area and smiling wider. Angad was thanking the god for giving happiness to ter family, he came near sohum and said with the laughing face "we both were coming to give surprise to u both, but u both gave bigger surprise than us". Sohum and Rajji were confused by the words of Angad and then he explained it by looking at simran"we are expecting a baby". Rajji went near simran and hugged her and teased her in the ears. Simran graphed Rajji ear and told "not oly me, i think u also going to tell the sweet news soon. Am i right sohum???" sohum was blushing and gave some stupid excuse to escape out. Rajji and other two were laughing, laughing ter whole heartily with the joy in the heart and life. Rajji and sohum were sitting near the lake side and enjoying the stars in the sky and cool breeze. He made her to sit more close to her and suddenly sohum spoke with little emotion "Rajji, i need a girl baby" rajji lifted her head from his shoulder and saw his eyes ter was a pure love in it. " who have to be like u, the same glittering eyes and the same soft skin" he touched her cheeks and she smiled "ya and i need the same smile in her also and i am sure i will bring her up as mischief girl oly" by telling that now he also had the smile. Rajji buried her head in his chest and nodded her head as an answer. Then tey both saw a falling star and made a wish for each others in ter hearts.

After few years:

Angad and simran were blessed with a boy baby and Sohum and Rajji were blessed with girl baby SO-O-RA (SO for sohum and RA for Rajji) the name choice is by our hero oly. Soora is the naughtiest girl in the town and of course she was her dad's pet. Rajji and sohum had a fight every day but it's all about each other carringness and love. Love in ter life increased day by day bcz tey both fought the battle all alone and true heartedly and this time tey both succeeded in it.


Quotes of the day: We should fight for our love till the last with full hope.


Note: pls tell me if u like it or not and press the like button without fail. Tell me which part or line u liked the most😳


Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


I am really happy my dear frnds, thanx for ur support and encouraging me...i love u all😭😭😭



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Posted: 11 years ago
hewwy..u stopped it so soon...

why yaar...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HemaG

hewwy..u stopped it so soon...

why yaar...



ha ha ha šŸ˜† tis is my 1st longest ff...i thought its too big so oly. did u like it 😲?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
šŸ‘...šŸ¤—..wow wow wow...😳..loved it completedly...😃
expecting more FF's akka...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: poorvika

šŸ‘...šŸ¤—..wow wow wow...😳..loved it completedly...😃

expecting more FF's akka...😃



thank u dear 😃 lets see now i am really hating this current track in the serial šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prabha.abha



ha ha ha šŸ˜† tis is my 1st longest ff...i thought its too big so oly. did u like it 😲?????


wahts the ques..i like it so much...

ll read the last part soon..

and how about mine,...did u like it???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HemaG



wahts the ques..i like it so much...

ll read the last part soon..

and how about mine,...did u like it???



wen ever i read others os or ff its encouragre me more and more, and ur's is the one dear. Ya i am tamil oly 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing
thanks for the pm

ennjoyed reading it

many many congrats
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ramasuresh78

mindblowing

thanks for the pm

ennjoyed reading it

many many congrats



thank u dear šŸ˜›

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