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Posted: 11 years ago
part 12
nice part...
lovely...
the narration was too funny...
poor Maan...
he has told her the truth...
the satyagrah part was damn hilarious...
Geet Gia ke saath bhi fight karegi...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 13

Meera comes with Gia...

She finds Ranno in the kitchen...

Ranno: hare, aao Meera

Ranno is making pakoras...

Meera: toh aunty function katam ho gayi?

Ranno: nahi , mein jaldhi aagayi, mujhe patha hotha ki tum log aarahe hai toh mein nahi jaathi

Meera: koi baat nahi, Geet ne humme bahut achcha khana khilaya tha

Ranno: kaise achcha khana? Ye maggi, iss ladhkki ko kuch bhi banana nahi aatha

Meera: kyun pareshaan hothe hai aap? Meinne bhi shadhi ke badh hi seekha tha

Ranno: tum bahut achchi ho

Meera: aunty icecream melt ho rahi hai, pehle khalo

Meera takes the family pack and serves it ...

Ranno: Geeet

Meera: ussko kyun disturb karthe hai aap? Ye lijiye pehle khana phir kaam

Meera takes it out for the others...

Maan doesn't eat ice cerams ...

Geet Gia ke saath competition lagakke kathi hai...

Maan just keeps looking at her and her antics...

Finally she won...poor Gia is no match for Geet...

Ranno brings the garmagaram pakode...

Geet is the first one to reach out for it...

Ranno hits her hand...stops her...

Ranno: Geeet

Ranno offers it to Maan...

Geet: koi faida nahi, unkko fried food pasand nahi hai, mujhe hi dedo

Meera: haan Geet teek kehthi hai

Ranno: aaise kaise? Ye hummare damadji hai, unko chodkke tum bhi nahi kha sakhti

Geet: kya? ye kaise baat hui?

Ranno: aaisa hi hai, pehle unkko khilao, phir tum kha sakthi

Ranno leaves...

Geet is confused...

Why should she mind whether he eats or not?...

But this Ranno has said that in front of Maan...

If she eats now what will he think?

She keeps looking at them desperately...

Gis: Geet, bahut ahccha hai, tum bhi khalo

Meear: haan haan Geet, just like my mom makes, crisp and with a lot of onions

Jaise Geet ko pasand hai...

Geet looks so disappointed...

Maan couldn't control his smile looking at the faces she made...

Maan takes one and pushes the plate to her...khalo...

Geet is happy...

She grabs the plate...

Maan ko bhi bahut pasand aatha...

He reaches out his hand for one more...

Geet: nahi nahi, ye bahut oily hai, dekho

Ranno conmes with fresh pakode...

She gives it to Maan...

Maan looks at her...ab kya karoge?

Geet tries to snatch it from him...

Maan gives it to her himself...

Meera stops Geet...

Maara: hare, aur kitna kaoge? Aaise hi kahti rahogi toh moti ho jayegi

Dev: Meera, apna fitness ghyaan apne paas hi rakho

Meera: ye Indian girls na, never care about their health, aajkal ki ladhkiyan toh shadhi tak hour glass figure maintain karthi aur shadhi ek 4 saal badh dekho toh wall clock lagthi, itna mota, and they balme the delivery for that, silly, hania?

Geet look at Meera and is shocked...

Meera: kya dekhhti ho? tum toh shadhi tak ghar pe rehkke aaise kathi raho toh shadhi ke din Maan bhi tumme pehchaan nahi payega

Maan nods his head as if Meera is right...

Dev: Meera, this is too much, tum usski saas nahi ho, samji

Meera: hare, I'm just telling her that it's important to look good, khaas karkke shadhi ke badh, haina?

Meera sharmathi...

Dev is embarrassed...

Meera: mera matlab hai, hummare kandhaan mein ek ajeeb riwaaz hai, shadhi ek badh ladhka ladhki ko apne ghar ke andar kudh utakke le jattha, haina Dev?

Dev: haan haan

Meera: ab kaho, tum aaise hi kathi toh Maan tumme kaise utayega?

Maan: what? I can lift a hundred kgs easily

Meera: toh utakke dikhao

Maan looks at Meera...

Meera's eyes are on Geet...

Maan: are you sure?

Meera: come on, Maan

Dev: don't waste time, aaise moka dubara nahi milega, jaldhi karo

Geet ko kuch samaj mein nahi aatha...

Suddenly Maan steps forward and and looks at Geet...

Geet: what?

Maan just lifts Geet...

Geet: babaji?

She closes her eyes...

Geet is stunned...she feels like flying high in the sky...

After wandering in the clouds she comes back to earth...

Poor Maan just keeps looking at her and just wants to run away with his Dulhan anytime...

She slowly opens her eyes ...

she looks at Maan ...she is a little scared...and embarrassed too...

Meera had pulled Dev out...

Maneet eyelock...

Maan keeps staring her...

Their eyes do the talking...

Geet pleads him to let her go...

But Maan is stubborn...no...you are mine...tum meri ho...

Ranno just comes but gets back to the kitchen without disturbing them...

Let them have some fun...achcha hua ghar pe koi nahi hai...

Preetho just enters and is shocked to see Maan carrying Geet...

Preetho: Geeet

Maan lets her down and Geet moves back...

That night Brij pulled his back trying to lift Preetho...

Najaane kahan se ye baat isski dimag mein aayi? Koi nayi film ka trailor dekha hai kya issne?

After Maan left, Geet went to Ranno and asked about Maan's parents...

Ranno is happy that Geet talked to her...

And is interested in knowing about Maan...

That's very good...so my little daughter is getting ready for marriage...

Ranno wanted to tell Geet the whole story before itself...

She was just waiting for the right time...

Achcha hua Geet ne kudh poocha...

Ranno tells the truth...she felt Geet should know everything...

Ranno asked Geet not to ask Maan about this for she had heard that Maan never wanted to talk about his parents to anyone...not even Dadi or Kiran...

Geet is surprised...how come he told her about them?...

Geet asked ranno why did she wanted Geet to marry while Geet wnted to study further...

She wanted her mother to support her and she is disappointed...

Ranno said that marriage is not the end of one's pursuit for knowledge...

Marriage is just another phase of life...

Padayi ke liye koi umar nahi hothi...

Geet would get better choices in Delhi...

Geet felt ashamed that she ahted her mother...

So MSK is right...her mother loves her so much...

Geet goes and hugs Ranno...

Ranno: tere papa bhi itne bhure nahi hai

Geet: woh toh mein nahi jaanthi, par aap bahut achche ho

Ranno: waise sab tere kushiyan hi chahthe aur kuch nahi

Ranno told Geet that she believes taht Geet won't regret this decision...

She will understand that her parents are right oneday...

Ranno warned Geet that she should not try her stupid darna with Maan...

The last thing Maan would want is neglect...neglect by some one he loves...

He had endured this neglect all his childhood and he doesn't deserve it in future...

Geet ko bhi yahi sahi laga... She will never do this to him...

That night Geet thinks about what happened that whole day...

Maan's visit...his chat with Geet...

His passionate eyes...her feelings for him...

Ranno's advice and everything...

Geet thought of Maan and his troubled past...

Geet always liked challenges and this marriage is not less than any challenge...

So she takes it as a challenge...so babaji ka maaana hai ki Geet iss Maan ki zindagi mein kushiyan wapas la salthi...if that's so them Geet is also ready, it's good to be loved and even better to love someone...

Geet: babaji, agar aap yahi chahthe toh teek hai, mein bhi tayaar hoon

Geet decides that she would give him so much love that he would never think about his loss...

And moreover there is no saas to share Maan's love , she can have it all for herself...

Past is past, but she can make a difference in his future...

Make it bright and happy with all her love and care...

So what's the first step?...

she should talk with him now...

Geet is reminded of Maan's words...

Missed call bhi chalega...

She decides to give a missed call...

It's already 11...

Maybe he is sleeping?

But Maan is also thinking about Geet only...

How could he sleep after lifting her and is yet to overcome that trance...

Maan hears his phone ringing...

Iss waqt pe kaun haoga?

Maan tried to ignore it but the call ended...

Missed call? Mishty?

Maan jumped over the bed and reached his mobile within seconds...

Yes yes yes it's Geet...

Maan didn't expect this so soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
finaly geet give missed cal to maan
nxt on nxt pt
amazing pt
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Posted: 11 years ago
haye im junping over the moon right now hun.. maaneet romance all thanx to deveera.. nice.. the pics just gave us a better view of ur update ;) lol cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww pakora scene was nice.Maan lifts geet lovely scene :)finally geet shaadi ke liye maan gayi ;).your ss is very lovely and funny :) and i m loving it :) Thanks & continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice loved it thankz for updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 13
excellent...
so lovely...
arey waah Geet in just one meet is giving him missed call...
very good...
the scene was funny though in the middle...
shes too cool and adorable...
not sharing with Maan and Maan liking it...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
loved it so much!!!!!!!!
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Part - 14

Maan calls back...

Geet picks up the call and remains silent...

Maan: Geet

Geet: sogaye?

Maan: kaise sotha? Tumme bhi neendh nahi aayi haina?

Geet: hmm

Maan is so happy...

Ab mein bhi akela nahi hoon...mere batein sunne ke liye bhi koi hai...

Maan: toh itne jaldhi meri yaad kaise aayi?

Geet: woh...aapne kaha na, issiliye meinne missed call kiya, warna aap gussa karthe, haina?

Maan: kya?

Geet: apne kaha na? aapko bahut gussa aatha, meinne bhi dekha hai

Maan: tumne kab dekha?

Maan has tried to be nice with her all the time...

Geet: woh...jab pehle bar meinne aapko dekha tha, uss summer class, aapko yaad nahi?

Maan kaise bhoolega?

Toh Geet ko bhi sab yaad hai...

Maan aur kush ho jaatha...

Geet thought that what's there to talk with Maan, after all he told her everything he wanted to tell her then itself and Geet too told him everything...even her fight with her family...

Now what's there to talk?

Slowly they began to talk...

Started with good morning , what's the dinner?, Good night...

Is it raining in Delhi? Hoshaiarpur mein barish ho raha hai...

But to her surprise they had a lot to share...

They kept talking every night...

Kabhi kabhi Maan gusse bhi kartha...

Geet gets used to it...ye aaisa hi hai...

Geet: aap meditation try kyun nahi karthe?

Maan: what? I'm not that old, aur mein Vivekananda nahi banna chahatha

Geet: aap ko Vivekananda ki asli naam patha hai?

Maan thinks for a while...

Ye kya hai? isse hummare marriage ka kya lena dena?

Maan: nahi

Geet: kya? aap ko ye bhi nahi patha?

Maan: Geet, ek business man ko history se kya lena dena?

Geet: Narendar Nath Dutta hai

Maan: teek hai, ab tum meditation ke barein mein baat kar rahi thi?

Geet: haan, kehthe hai usse aap gusse ko control kar sakthe

Maan: meinne bhi suna hai

Geet: toh phir try kyun nahi kiya?

Maan: zaroorat nahi padi

Geet: kya?

Maan: ab toh mujhe apne gusse ko control karna hi padega, mein kal hi isske barein mein patha lagatha hoon

Geet: aur ek baat

Maan: kya?

Geet: aapka GK bahut weak hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: mein aapko swami Vivekananda ki biography bhejthi hoon, aap zaroor padho

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aap mere liye ye bhi nahi kar sakthe?

Maan: teek hai, bhejdho

Aaise shuru hui batein ...

Maan joined a meditation class...

Geet actually sent the book...

Maan kept it safely in his drawer...

Geet may come and ask about it , what if he lost it?

Better keep it safe...

Maan told her aboput his jungle camps...how he roamed about in the jungle carefree without any fear...actually he never cared for his life much...

His encounters with the animals...

And how once he had to face a single elephant all alone...

That was considered to be the most dangerous encounter to come across in a jungle...a single tusker...

Maan thought that it's the end of his journey and he was ready to die...

he had nothing to lose, no one to care whether he is alive or dead ...

He just remembered Dadi, but Kiran will take care of dadi...

He told Geet that he would be careful in future...he has this new responsibility...marriage?

Maan also told about Sameera...

Geet inturn told about how she was attracted to one Rahul in a train journey...

That was when they went to the southern states in the college days...

This Rahul had three four degrees to his credit and could talk about anything...just anything...

He talked about Vivekananda...and a whole lot of socialists...

The flaws of Nehru...the current politicians greed...

About Mother Teresa...she came from a foreign land and sacrificed her life for the people of Kolkotta...

But Indian girls are only concerned about marriage and are good for nothing...

Geet felt insulted at this remark...it's only the men who want to enslave women in the name of marriage...

He was from Bengal...and is on a journey all over India...

He is now going to kerala for the Pooram festival...he visists every state...

Kite festival in Gujarat...Rajasthan and even Kashmir...

Geet ka sapna toh yahi tha...

She told Maan that if she had been a boy she would have gone with that Rahul...

Maan said that he was lucky that Geet is a girl...

Now he understood why didn't Geet have a crush on MSK...while so many girls drooled and wanted to marry him...at college...just like Sameera...

Maan never had this interest in girls but for his Mishty...

If it isn't Geet then Maan would have remained single lifelong...

Sagaayi ho jaathi...

Next week...after the sagaayi...

Maan had this urge to meet his Mishty...

Just talking over the phone is not enough for Maan now...

He wants to get closer, you know chat with her live...

No more wireless contact...only actual contact...

Maan decides to go and meet Geet...alone...

Maan ko akhele dekhthe hi sabko patha chal gaya ki woh yahan kyun aaya hai...

As usual he had come to see his mishty...

This time since everything is finalized they let him meet Geet in her room...

Geet is playing catch catch with Gia...

No one bothered to inform her...

Since Gia was with Geet they directed Maan to her room...

Maan waits for a minute and knocks...

Geet thinks that it's Preetho...

Geet: andar aao

Maan enters and finds Geet playing ...

Maan keeps staring her...

Geet senses that it is not Preetho but some one else...

She turns back and finds Maan...

Maybe her imagination...

She continues playing...

Maan gets near and snatches the ball...

He is standing very close to her...

Geet gets goosebumps...

Ye toh sach mein Maan hai...

Maan gives a chocolate to Gai and Gia is busy eating it...

Maan has access to his Mishty now...

Geet is still recovering from the shock...

Aaisa koi kissi ladhki ke kamre ke andar aatha hai kya?

Maan gets closer and Geet steps back till she hits the wall...

Maan is almost touching her...

He just pushes her hair aside to look at her beautiful face...

Just that mere touch turns her on...

Geet ko bahut kuch hotha hai...

They are lost in themselves and little gia just finished her chocolate...

Gia: Geeet

Maan steps back...

Time's up...

Preetho comes with snacks...

But she leaves immediately...

Maan knows that he has to leave now...

He just starts to move towards the door...

Geet wanted to talk with him but couldn't...

She felt so shy...

Gia: unlce

Maan stops...

Gia: aap Geet ke saath nahi kheloge?

Maan: zaroor, par ye chote bachchon wale khel nahi...

Maan gives a dirty look...

Geet apna nazar jhukathi...

Maan: apne bua se kehna ki tayaar rahe, mere saath khelne ki

Geet blushes hearing that...she also had a little smile on her face

Maan: chalo tumne hastho liya, aaj issi se kaam chalatha hoon, magar agle bar aaise nahi chalega

Maan winks and leaves...

After sagayi Meera is very busy shopping and helping Geet get ready for marriage...

She visited Hoshiarpur often and Geet too bonded very well with Meera...

She was like an elder sister to Geet...

Meera also tells about Maan and how he hated marriage before he met Geet and how he automatically agreed for the marriage seeing Geet for the first time...

How would Meera know about Maneet previous meetings?

Geet also didn't tell anything about her knowing Maan much earlier...

Meera said that Geet is so beautiful and as Maan said Geet doesn't need extra make up...

And also Maan hates artificial make up...why go for fake looks? You are what you are? And the one who loves you won't mind your fake looks...one who minds your fake looks won't realy love you...

And she had some tips for Maan too...nowadays even men go to the parlour...Maan won't agree for that, atleast he can maintain his good looks, haina?

Meera asked Maan to stay out of the sun as he is no match for Geet's fair skin and wanted him to atleast look a little fairer...Dev suggested Maan tried some men's cream...

Maan is annoyed...for some reason Maan is upset for the past one week...

What happened? Shadhi ki tension?

Ya phir se shadhi mein interest nahi hai?

Aaise nahi ho saktah...Maan loves Geet, haina?

He is worried about Geet...

She has not talked to him properly since last week...

Maybe sagaayi ki tension...

But now that it's over she should start talking with Maan, but no, no call from her...

Whenever Maan calls she just answers in a yes or no...

This is not his Mishty...something is wrong...

Yes, there's trouble...

Geet had over heard buaji demand dowry, 10 lakh, 10 lakh ki gadhi...

Darji accepted her demands happily...

Aap fikar mat kijiye...hum bhi aapse kuch kam nahi hai...

Ye ladhkiwlae bhi peeche nahi hai...

They also spend a lot...this is the time to show off their riches...

That's why. Fat Indain Wedding!!!!

She is dead against dowry, that too aaise demand?

Meanwhile Maan had booked a foreign car and that had arrived...

Maan wanted Geet to see it...after all it's for her...

He goes to see Geet...he also wanted to know why she is not talking with him...

But that was not a good idea...

Geet thought that's the 10 lakh gadhi...

Maan takes Geet for a ride...

Geet is very angry...

Maan ko patha nahi kya baat hai...

Geet: aapne Indian gadhi kyun nahi liya?

Geet thinks...Indian gadhi sastha hotha haina?

Maan thinks that she is angry that he didn't consult her before booking it...

But what does Geet know about cars...she has only seen her Darji's ambassidar ...

Silly girl...still believes in the Indian cars...

Then they had to pass thru a kacha lane...

Maan hesitates...his foreign car is not ready for that bumpy ride...

He stops the car...

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: kyun na hum isske aage phaithal hi chalein?

Geet: issilye kehthe hai ki Indian car chahiye, Indian roads ke lie wahi best ahi

Maan parks the car...

Geet: aap aarahe ho ya apne gadhi ki guard bankke yahi rukhthe ho

Maan gets out and walks alongside Geet...

If it were some other day Maan wouldn't have keft his car parked near that so called play ground where future men in blue were busy with their net practice without the nets...

Geet ka gussa abhi bhi hai...aur usski satyagraha bhi jaari hai...

Maan knows that it's no use arguing with her now...

Maan would also get angry and that is not going to help...

Chalo, ussko thoda time detha toh Geet kudh apna zidd chodke batein karne lagegi...

Pehle shadhi hone do, phir dekthe hai ki ye mujhse dhoor kaise rehthi?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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