MG FF- Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan. /th#2 added - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab update
Geet to angry to face Maan n rightly so when he made her feel work was more important than her
Glad he apologised though n she finally showed her emotion to him
1 minute countdown will they wish in time
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8
aww their past moments were so cute n romantic
ab toh jaise poor babies ko time nhi milta
i love my naughty n teasy maanu
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 9
aww get so angry as maanu came late
hona b chahiye
in past
really maanu giving his more time to his work than geet
its wrong haina
he should give more time to geet
bt maanu toh manu hai usko kon bataye uff
waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Awe... In their bickering they are going to miss wishing each other. Hope they talk after this. That is what they need desperately

Waiting eagerly for next update. Hope she starts behaving like before

Loved the update


thanks dear😃😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Grrr

beech me hi rok diya.kam se kam meri update ke barabar to diya kar

agar agli baar itni chhoti comment di to mujhse maar khaayegi

update was cute. I loved Get ka gussa
She was waiting for him and maan ka manaanna
lovely update
but meri warning ko dhyaan me rakhna😆😆


😆

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi dear! Fab update! Past well incorporated! They are nw arguing! hope they will be able to celebrate! update soon, well written



thanks dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 10

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Maan : geet tum yaha aa rhi ho

Tumne mujhe bataya

Geet : wo toh baki sbka plan tha

Hamari anniversary ke liye

Dad ne kaha tha who aapko bata denge

Both see together towards watch.



Time: - 11:59 p.m


Maan & geet both wish together.

*********

Ab bhut late ho gya hai

Chlo so jaayo

Aryan : chahcu bs thodi aur der

Vicky : Baki ka doreomon kal dekhenge

Aryan : chachu

Vicky : no

He switched off the TV.

Vicky : ab so jaayo

Mehak : story to sunao

Vicky : what

Aryan : ha

Sunao na

**********

Both hugged each other.

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''I Feel you entered in my life like an Angel ,When you spend time


with me, I Feel i have no sorrows in my life, time is spent as fast

as blow of wind '

**********

Daadimaa : vicky ye dono abhi tak soye nhi

Aryan : badi daadi, chachu hume story sunane wale hai

Daadi : schi

Mehak : ha

Vicky : pr maine kb kaha

Daadi please aap in dono ko smbhailye

Mein toh chala

Aryan : chachu

Vicky : kya huya

Aryan : mujhe aapke pass sona hai

Daadi : Aryan , mehak aaj aap dono hmare pass soyenge

.

Chachu ke pass kal so jaana

Aur wo aaj hi aaye hai

Aur kaafi tired bhi hai

Aryan : thik hai

Good night chachu

*********

Both are feeding to each other.

Maan : bs geet

Geet : maan aap apna bilkul dhyan nhi rakhte hai

Maan : tum ho na

Geet : par har waqt toh nhi hoti na

.

.

Aap itna jyada busy rhte ho

He takes her hand on his hand.

Maan : geet mein jaan buzkar toh asa nhi krta

Kya karu kaam jyada hai aur waqt km rh jaata hai

She placed her hand on his.

Geet : maan jaanti hu

Aur smjhti bhi hu

.

Isliye toh kuch khti nhi

Maan : aur khud ko takleef deti ho

Geet : nhi wo

Maan : sshhh

Geet

His phone buzzed.

He check the cell and said " ghar se phone"

Geet : maan uthaiye na

Maan : hmm

.

Daadi : maan bte

Maan : ha daadi

Daadi : zaraa geet se baat karwaiye

Maan : ji

Geet : ha daadi

Daadi : bte Aryan to so hi nhi raha hai

Wo baar baar aapke pass aane ko kh rha hai

Geet : daadi aap phone speaker pe kr dijiye

Daadi : hmm

Geet : kya huya mere bte ko

Aryan : mama mujhe aapke pass aana hai

Geet : phle apne aansu pucho

Aryan : hmm

Mehak : mom ye bilkul cry baby hai

Maan : kya huya

Geet : ek minute

She also opens the speaker, now from this maan also listen the conversation.

Geet : mehak asa nhi khte

Aapka chotta bhai hai na

Chlo ab dono late jaayo

Mama aap donmo ki fav. Story sunayengi

Aryan : pakka

Geet : ha

Ab bilkul nhi rona

Daadi hai na aapke pass

Aryan : hmm

Geet : toh phir.

Geet narrate the story & now both children slept peacefully.

************

Geet : kya huya maan

Maan : kuch nhi

Geet : ab bata bhi do

Maan : both children ask about you, but no one ask about me.

She pulled his cheek.

Maan : geet ,

He glares her, for pulling his cheek.

Geet : mama unki favorite hai na

Isliye

Maan : hmm

Geet : jealousy ho rhi hai

Maan : no way

balki acha laga

mein unhe waqt nhi de pata

pr tum har pal ho unke sath

.

Unki chothi chothi baaton ko bhut achi tarah smjhti ho

.

Geet in pichle panch saalo mein, mein aapne parivaar ko wo waqt nhi de paaya

Jo mujhe dena chaiye tha

.

Kyi baar lagta hai, pata nhi dad sb kuch itni achi tarah se kaise manage kr lete hai

Aur mein nhi

Geet : sshhh

Asa nhi hai

You are best husband and father too.

.

Aur aap hum sb ka pura dhyan rakhte ho

Smjh aaya aapko

.

He pulled her towards him and encircled his hand around her waist, locking her in his embrace.

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Maan : acha tarah smjh gya madam

She slides her hand around his neck & His fingers teasing her back sensually.

Geet : good

He slammed his lips on her, both kissed each other passionately. He picked her in his arm and put down her on bed.

**********

Aryan : daadi daadu kaha hai

Daadi(maan mom) : wo bs aa rhe hai

Vicky : daadi daadi

Daadi : hum to nhi jaa rhe hai

Tum sb jaayo

Shweta : maa aap kyun nhi chl rhi

Aapki tabiyat toh thik hai na

Daadi : hum kya karenge

Vicky : daadi swimming karenge

Aap aaj bhi unti hi hot lagti ho

She caught his ear.

Vicky : daadi chodo

Daadi : badmaash

Vicky : daadi dard ho rha hai

Daadi : acha hai

Vicky : sorry

Ab to chodo

Daadi : hmm

Mehak : hmare sath maa aur papa nhi aayenge kya

Shweta : nhi

Hum sb hai na sath

Bhut enjoy karenge

Aur saare jhulle bhi jhulenge

Mehak : hmm

***********

She made coffee for him and enters into bedroom. She sits on bed and ruffled his hair.

Geet : maan uttho na

Maan : umm

.

Geet : maan coffee thandi ho jaayengi

He came near to her and placed his hand on her lap.

Geet : maan

Maan : jaan sone do na

.

Asi subh ab har roz nhi milti

.

Tum yu meri baho mein ho

Geet : acha

.

Par ab mil jaayengi

He snuggled close to her and making pattern on her back.

Geet : maan subh subh badmaashi

Maan : badmaashi nhi jaan

Pyaar kaho

He pulled her head down to make their lips meet.

geet : ma..an..

He softly kissed on her lips & slowly they were lost... he unpin her pallu...

In this between, his phone buzzed.

Geet : maan phone uthaiye

He sits on bed, she try to stand but he pulled her, she fall on him.

Maan : tumhe bhut hassi aa rhi hai

He rolled her, now he above on her.

Geet : nhi

Maan : really

Geet : hmm

He starts kissing on her neck. She lost into his touch.

**************

Hit like button and do long comment.

@rashmi dear i hope now its ok 😉

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was amazing priyanka. i loved it so much. maan was feeling very bad when children didn't asked about him. but he is happy because geet is giving her whole time to children. after a long time maneet are spending quality time with each other. i am so exited for next dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovlyyy update do update soon :)

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