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Posted: 11 years ago
Last part was really heart touching. Can't wait to see how hard he is going to regrade for his action. I feel like i'm now in Astha's mentality. Like totally lost. Keep up you good work. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
red ol d parts in a go!!!!!
oh damn awesome story so far!!!!
how can shlok be soo cruel!!
I hope he regrets it n tht too badly...
let it be... im waiting to see how d story progresses!!!!
please please continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi dear ... Am waiting for d next update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: latha_555

its a bit sad that he has no feelings for her whatsoever, in the real show we at least see him torn and having some feelings, but this story shows just revenge...it would be so nice if you could add a bit more emotion from shlocks side...

hope to read more soon

Just wait for tomorrow sweet heart. ..et him properly loose astga...he us still taking her granted...doesn't know what she matters for him...'
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks guys for your feedback...I will just say wait till tomorrow. You will get all answers. ..he miss her or how will astha react...if he will show some feelings or not...everything. .just tomorrow..and ya he is going to regret badly and will defo pay for that...just wait...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...šŸ‘


Next Part update it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz update fast...waiting for it dear..
great going...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks guys for such a beautiful response...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-16

Astha... Beta, control yourself... Her ayii was trying to control her while she was breaking everything in her room...

No ayii...I want to finish everything related to Shlok in my life...I don't want to live in this room anymore...she was crying badly...

Her ayii held and hugged her tight while his baba was looking at them with tears in his eyes... he was getting angry at her daughter's condition but could do nothing as he had nothing to argue with...

He moved ahead and put his hand on astha's head... Astha looked towards him and hugged him...Don't worry Astha, forget everything... We are always with you... Just think he was like a black shadow in your life that has gone now...

How can I baba? When I have lost everything to him... everything... Thought Astha hugging his baba...

He and kalindi held astha and took her to another room...

After some time Astha gathered herself and wiped her tears...when all family members came to her...her ajju sat next to her ... Astha put her head on her shoulder... and she caressed her back...

Don't worry beta... forget everything whatever happened... and start new life... I have been transferred to Delhi, just tomorrow we will leave for there... soon you will forget him... Avdhoot spoke...

Astha nodded in yes...but suddenly she remembered something and ran to her room...all followed her in hurry... there she opened the cupboard and was shocked on reading the agreement she had signed with Agnihotri Group...

She sat on the floor all shocked... Mujhe nahi pta tha shlok can be so low just for revenge of my rejection to him...

Avdhoot held papers from her and was shocked...

Kya huya ? kalindi asked...

This is a surety bond... Astha will have to work for him for next two years or she will have to pay 30 Lakhs...

I am sorry baba... I trusted him and didn't read the papers...Astha broke down...

Now I understand... My transfer is also their planning... infect this promotion and transfer is done with the approach of Niranjan Agnihotri...He wants to break Astha. But I don't worry Astha, I will collect money and we will pay the bond, but you are not working for Shlok... he spoke Shlok with all the hatred in his heart...

No baba... Astha stood up and wiped her tears... Nothing will change... You will take the promotion and I will continue the job... I just want to see how low he can go now... When already nothing left...

But Astha, how can we leave you here alone? Avdhoot asked...and what if he tries to take advantage... He left sentence incomplete...

Don't worry baba... I will handle...Now Mr. Shlok Agnihotri see what real Astha is... She looked towards her baba and hugged her ayii wiping her tears...

Avdhoot had to bend against her wish... and finally Avdhoot and Kalindi had moved to Delhi while Astha was staying here with her ajju...

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Astha was wearing a beautiful red Sari standing in Shlok's room... while Shlok was seductively moving towards her... held her from her waist pulling closer and crushing her into himself and taking his lips closer to her...

Shlok, you need just one thing from me... Astha spoke with fake anger pushing him away... To which Shlok smiled..

Ok, this time, I am not going to kiss you... It will be you who will come to me...and he gave him a puppy face look and turned away from her...

When Astha held his hand...itna gussa? You never leave me with any other option...Astha ran to him and placed a kiss on his lips...

Shlok was smiling while dreaming about Astha in his room when his phone rang... he picked the call and spoke with closed eyes...

Good Morning Sweetheart... Am missing you too jaan...(as per his daily god morning routine to Astha)

I am...sorry sir, I think you were expecting someone else's call...his PA's voice brought him to reality...

I am sorry...Suresh... something urgent? He came back to reality

Yes sir, just wanted to inform, your plan worked, Astha is going to join the office...

OK. all Shlok said coming back to real world from his dreamland, in the world, where he had pulled himself too away from Astha...

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Astha entered the office just as if nothing had happened and went to her seat...she tried to bury her head in the files to forget everything... Her tears were finished, her eyes were red and dry. She just wished Shlok should not visit her... But all wished don't get fulfilled...

It was late evening, when peon called her... Astha Mam... Sir had called you in his cabin...

Astha took a long breath.. and thought to herself... No, Astha you are not going to be weak... you have to stand strong... you have to show him... He dumped you but you give him a sh*t... control yourself... and she went to his cabin...

May I come in Sh...sir? She asked without looking towards him...

Yes come in... he spoke with a smirk... So how are you feeling Astha?

Am fine sir... she spoke with a stone face... you called for some work?

Ya... infect... he stood form his chair and moved towards Astha slowly... reached ta just inches apart from her...Astha wanted to run away but she decided to see what can he do max...without even changing her expressions, she stood there standstill... He moved closer and closer just few millimeters apart from her face...that Astha could feel his breath on her face... but today that was increasing hatred in her heart...he slowly lifted his hand and moved towards her waist.. Astha was still standstill...

So my closeness doesn't matter anymore to you sweety? Even you are not afraid of this closeness knowing what can I do? Shlok smirked...

Astha looked into his eyes with hate... Darte wo hain Mr. Shlok Agnihotri jinke pass kuch khone ko hota ha. I have already lost my everything. ? Now what can you get from me? She too smirked...

Making him much more irritated...he held her waist and pushed her back...anger of his failure was quite visible in his eyes, he wanted to see a broken Astha requesting him to accept her but this was another one.. a stronger, a bolder and more confident(at least visible, no matter how much broken she was from inside)...

Give me the initial plan of the anniversary of baba and Mrs. Agnihotri within two hours... He spoke rudely...

Astha checked the time, it was already almost five... But she spoke... Ok, sir...and left the room...

He sat on her chair, thinking about the place and arrangements... noting down on the paper...

After one an da half hour, she knocked at Shlok's cabin...

Come in... He said...

Here is the plan... Sir... she said...

Ahaan... Before time? He smirked...

I already knew the venue and requirements Sir... Thanks to you... She spoke...

Shlok got irritated on remembering the moments, he had passed with Astha...without properly checking, and he folded the paper and threw in dustbin...

What is this crap? You are being paid as event manager... prepare a plan like event manager, not like an assistant... I need proper plan indicating sitting arrangement, food arrangement, wedding arrangement and all... In next two hours...

As the phewed and got up to leave the room...

Where are you going now? He shouted...

To prepare next plan ... Sir... she spoke...

Sit here and start... So that I may make changes wherever needed...

she knew, he was doing all this purposely and she cannot let him win this time... she had called at home she will be late.. so she sat again in making plans...while he was continuously looking at her... she was feeling his gaze at her face,

Suddenly Shlok saw a hair flick falling on Astha' face and disturbing her in her work... A soft smile appeared in his eyes, he lifted his hand slowly and moved towards Astha's face... He held the flick and tucked it behind her ear brushing her face with his hand... Astha looked upward as he touched her face...her eyes met with his eyes and both were lost in each other's eyes... his hand softly moved on her face and he caressed her lips with his thumb which sent goose bumps in Astha's body, she closed her eyes, but his betrayal was all she remembered at the moment...she immediately opened her eyes, shrugged his hand away from her face and shouted...

Be in your limits Mr. Shlok Agnihotri... Don't try to move closer...

She threw the papers on his face. This is the initial plan. My duty hours are over, I am leaving and if you still need any other change, you may tell tomorrow... Saying she left the room... while Shlok was sitting there confused at his own feelings...


I hope this part will show some feelings of shlok too.infect till now he was just thinking about revenge but now he will know what she matters when she will be away from him...

do leave your feedback...good or bad everything accepted...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Bechara shlok...šŸ˜†
Apne trap me khud hi fas gaya...samaj me nahi aata uski situation pe hasu ya rou...
Awee my aastha darling...she is aaj ki naari...
Destiny's fault samaj k baithe rehne wali me se nahi hai...she fights back...go girl go...šŸ‘šŸ¼
Great update jeenia...Aastha jaasi ki raani bann gayi hai...šŸ‘

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