my first os ( LAFZON MEIN KAH NA SAKOO) part 4 end

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CHARACTER SKETCH -
SAME AS SHOW

'' ETF WAS GOING THROUGH A very hectic schedule there was a very high work pressure on everyone the seniors ordered that the etf status and case rport to b handeled them within 2 days
SREE- are yaar i hope aaj koi case na aaye warna mera to bharta ban jayega kaam krte karte
chotu - haan yaar itna work load badh gaya hai k 11 :30 wali ko theek se dekh h nahi pa raha hoon
ayesha - jab bi hum ye sochte hai us din to definately koi na koi case jaroor aata hai waise sakshi i hope u have completed ur reports
sakshi ya ! i,ve compled my reports

ALL OF SUDDEN ARJUN INTERRUPT THEIR CONVO.
Arjun - guys their is case so v all have to go
after saying this he left the office as he left the place
chotu to ayesha - tu na kuch na bola kar agar tri kah hui baat sach ho jati hai
shee and sakshi said together accha ab jhagna band karo warna tumhara kya hoga ye tum samjhe ya ...
after 1 hour they reached the crime spot
shree ladki ka naam Ravi Ahuja hai mumbai music acadamy ki student hai
liza sir isspe kisi shar object se waar kiya gaya hai .

precap '' ye mr khadoos rawte itna accha gata hai ...


sorry guys i have to go i will update soon as soon as possible but please tell whether i should cont or not
please post ur comments







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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi
nice start 👍🏼
precap mein kya tha...arjun & singing 😕 😆
plz update soon 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one...👍🏼
Do continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maitrey beautiful
interesting start
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RECAP - liza - ispe kissi sharp object se war kiya gaya hai

Arjun - thik hai liza body ko jaldi lab le jao aur pustmortem ki report jaldi dena bahut pressure hai humpe keep that in mind

then he interrogate some people after this he asked about the information with ayesha chotu & shree meanwhile sakshi was writing all the information
sakshi isn't it something strange that ye ladki ki koi missing report nahi karvayi kissine and iske family ...
arjun shocked by her words and said her - aajkal aap bhi dimmag laga rahi hai
shakshi was completly irritate after hearing this - tum kehna kya chahete ho ki main ...
arjun ignore her and ask shree - pata lagao iski family aur friends ke bare mein ..
sakshi in her mind mujhe pehle bomb se bachte ho phir ignore karte ho man to karta hai tumhara koi secret jaan ke tumhe blackmail kar sakun ..
ayesha - kahan ho gayi sakshi

in etf conference room
shree - raavi anath hai aur iske jyada koi friends bhi nahi hai last year hi graduation complete kiya hai aur music acadamy ke hostel mein hi rehti hai aur sikhti thi she was the one of the best student of acadmy
ayesha - yes sir humne uske friends se puchtach ki they said that she was very introworld
sakshi -aise ladki ka kaun dushman hoga jo itni brutaly iska murder karega
arjun - dushman koi bhi kisika ho sakta hai anyways where is the pustmortem report
then liza entered the confrence room - sir kafi interesting baat pata chali hai khooni ne kaafi acha suraag choda hai hum logon ke liye usne apne baal ka tukda chod ke gaya hai
arjun -thats great hume jald hi uske friends aur acadmy ke logon ki DNA test karvana hoga
after all the test they found that her best competetor has killed her to participate in the national singing competition asusal arjun had give her lecture on humanity after all this everyone has lft the acadmy except arjun
while on the way to office
sakshi- oh! no ive forgot my phone in the acadmy main jati hun aur leke aati hun
shree - par raat mein akele chlo main tumahare saath chalta hun
sakshi - nahi mai chali jaungi
everyone stops her but she doesn't listen of any one
after half an hour she reached on her destination as she was on the way of auditorium she listen a very melodious voice...
someone is singing her favorite song ...

precap -( once agin the same ) ye MR khadoos rawte itna acha gaata hai


ok abhi ke liye itna hi and pleaseee😳 post ur comment
please forgive me for any grammer nd spelling mistake
Edited by maitreypandey - 11 years ago
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thnx please post more n more comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful dear Pm me next time u update ab ye Samjhi ya sanjhaoo 😆😆
Anyways interesting
Mr. Khadoos rawte singing 😲
ye to sach main shocking hai
Continue plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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both parts are soo soo nice maitrey!! I loved it!
hmmm khadoos gaata bhi hai?? Would love to know ke kya gaa raha hai, air aage kya hoga!!
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RECAP SHE HEARD A MELODIUS VOICE

SHE entered in auditorium and completely stunned for few seconds she was completly blank after seeing that ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE IS SINGING HER FAVRIOTE SONG :
lafzon mein kef na sakoon bin keh bhi reh na sakoon
nasha hi nasha raat din hai na poocho yeh kaisa pyaar hai
lafzon mein...

flash back
few hors back when every one has left the acadmy he was the only there he can't stop himself for to sing his favriote song it was very long tome when he sing a song last time he sung for his preety wife roshni after her death he never looked at his guitar and towards singing ( flash back ends)

halki si barsaat mein pehli mulakaat mein pehli hi baarr mein dil ko mere le gai
chahat ke ikrar mein anjana gam de gayi
aayi jab saamne jane kyun wo dar gayi pagal mujhko kar gayi janeman janeja
na jane kya baat hai lage ki din mein raat hai
nayi hai subah to nayi sam hai ajab haal mera yaar hai
lafzon mein...
mera dil meri jan main yahan tu hai kahan
main dekhun mudh ke jidhar aaye mujhe tu nazar
kehti hai chahte deewana main ho gaya teri chahet mein najane kab yeh ho gaya
yeh kaisa hai asar kab jaga kab so gaya janeman janeja
lafzon mein ...

outside of the auditorium
sakshi - ye mister khadoos rawte itna achha gata hai omggg
all of sudden she heared arjun's footsteps she thought she has to ranaway from there before arjun 's come

precap how will sakshi react

please forgive me on any spelling mistakes
and post ur comments

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
want to know sakshi's reaction eagerly
continue soon

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