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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

lovely update...

it was only manveer update...yipee
M forgave Uday...and and and waitin' for nxt update...
cont soon and am hopin' ab rajdeep kamina bech mein apni taang na fasane aa jaye...fngrs crsd...


thank you so much
yes only manveer update
arre no he is playing a cameo nothing else

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Annesha! I read all parts of bleeding heart and Phir Suno today and they are super duper awesome!!!
I mean ,how do you write so many amazing FFs and SSs at onc e!? Yaar,plz give a happy ending to bleeding heart. It is very amazing.And could you list all your FFs and SSs below? Would be a great favour for me.
Update soon :D :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar4eva55

Hey Annesha! I read all parts of bleeding heart and Phir Suno today and they are super duper awesome!!!
I mean ,how do you write so many amazing FFs and SSs at onc e!? Yaar,plz give a happy ending to bleeding heart. It is very amazing.And could you list all your FFs and SSs below? Would be a great favour for me.
Update soon :D :*


hey
omg since when did you start reading dear
by the inspiration i get by such comments
i am not sure will try
ok it beauty and beast
lost love
phir suno and
bleeding heart
will surely try

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Posted: 11 years ago
The pain manveer have to go through because of uday's past I just hope it sorted out soon god now this rajdeep wants manyata... Lol y can't anyone leave out manveer alone... I hope he is not able to separate them please update soon and thanks for the pm
Ps:sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oops missed part 17... Loved it I'm glad uday's mum hears everything and gave an advice to manyata and happy she is pretending to be angry with uday... Lol manyata always brings out the wild side out of him now wonder what's gone happen in the car ;) please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

The pain manveer have to go through because of uday's past I just hope it sorted out soon god now this rajdeep wants manyata... Lol y can't anyone leave out manveer alone... I hope he is not able to separate them please update soon and thanks for the pm
Ps:sorry for the late reply


it is sorted out already jiji
do not worry he play just a cameo
awn it was my duty
it is ok jiji

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Oops missed part 17... Loved it I'm glad uday's mum hears everything and gave an advice to manyata and happy she is pretending to be angry with uday... Lol manyata always brings out the wild side out of him now wonder what's gone happen in the car ;) please update soon and thanks for the pm


she does not want her son to have the same fate
aha something very unexpectable
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
great update...i am happy that uday finally told truth to manyata...i know it will take time to became everthing normal...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 18

The weather outside was turning harsh but inside the car it was steaming hot, her moans aroused him even more. Tonight he was in his worst form, he had turned into an animal, he wanted to hurt her that way she hurt him by all the words she spoke sometime earlier. He was mad and nothing but his possessive love was in her mind. He tore her mercilessly and toyed with her body that night. After hearing those words from her mouth his anger knew no bounds all he wanted was to make her his and make the point realize to her also that she was only his. His possessive mad love was recognized by her, she knew that her words had aroused his love for her. She did not reject him instead she too accepted his love that night. After climaxing for the fifth time she lay there looking out in the sky as she watched him sleeping beside her like a small child. She caressed his hair as he mumbled something in his sleep. She pulled herself closer to him and slept in his warmth that night.

Both the ladies looked outside, every now and then it was midnight and the storm outside was getting worst but both of them had not returned yet, menuka was too tensed as suddenly her heart missed a beat when she heard a knock at the door. Ds looked at her as she rushed to the door but on opening it she found a stranger as she asked being taken aback

MENUKA: who are you?

The person was none the less but akash as he touched her feet and said

AKASH: your son

Menuka felt herself frozen on the spot and the words as she said

MENUKA: mera bacha come inside or you will catch a cold

He hugged her as they both cried there heart out, ds understood and felt proud that menuka had finally forgiven and accepted her son. As she hugged him. They sat and chatted for long hours about their life, menuka was scattered to know that her husband was no more, but then akash was the one to help her regain her strength. The night passed as they sorted all there complains and problem menuka had longed for him as she too regretted treating him in a way like that she knew that at a point her husband did not intend to spoil their life it was a mistake and he was regretted and she should have forgiven but now no more she was determined to set them together as one big family.

The morning came with a new hope of life, as he spread his arms to watch his wife peacefully sleep beside him. He kissed her cheek causing her eyes to wake up their eyes were locked with each other. But suddenly his eyes fell on the marks he kissed it softly and said to her

UDAY: I am sorry wifey and this time I promise I will spend my life only with you and I will never cheat you

MANYATA: I have forgiven you uday as to me nothing more than confession matters, I know that we all committee mistakes but the point is do we regret or confess or apologies, trust cannot be made again but can be build a new right, and when you really love a person and care for that person than all this trust and ego should not come in between. I can leave with a person who had broken my trust for once but can't leave with the regret that I had never forgiven that person

UDAY: I love you wifey and I am really thank full to god to bless me with a wife like you

MANYATA: now we shall leave mom and ds must be worried

He kissed each other as they got dressed and drove away in the early morning sky towards their home. As they entered the house they was shocked to find it shocked but in the dining room they found ds, menuka along with akash. Menuka was feeding akash as both stood rooted to their ground and manyata said

MANYATA: aryaan what are you doing here?

Uday looked at her and felt it necessary to correct her and said

UDAY: his name is akash and he is my boss

Menuka was about to open her mouth as akash stood up and said

AKASH: can I talk to you both for sometime

They did not know what else to do and shook their head in a yes, as they trio was now in uday bedroom as akash began to narrated his tale

AKASH: I am your brother uday, yes I am your step brother, the son of your father and that lady for whom you had to stay away from your father. And manyata I am sorry to lie to you I am akash not aryaan. Now there are lot more of thing you need to know uday whatever jai did to you after marriage was all our plan I loved manyata and at any cost I wanted to ruin your life ruin your happiness and take away manyata

She glanced at uday his hands turned into a fist and his eyes were filled with anger as akash continued

AKASH: after you and mom left dad blamed me I too was deprived of my father love uday even in his last days he carved for you and that why I wanted to defeat you and win over manyata but it was jai who made me realize that real love is to let it go if it comes back then you can win it if not then it was never yours and I realized manyata was nothing but just like bet for me which I needed to win but jai she was the one I loved , I came back here to ask for forgiveness to my mother and brother ...uday and manyata I am sorry for what I have done to you I know for me you had to face a lot of problem but I am really regretting will you not forgive me

She watched uday as she said to akash

MANYATA: it is ok akash now we can all start to leave together like a family

She looked at uday he stood there and looked at uday, his face still reflected anger and hatred towards akash as he clenched his teeth together and said in cold and curt tone

UDAY: If you are done you may leave our life forever we do not need you akash

MANYATA: uday...

AKASH: it is ok manyata if this is what he wants I will do so

He bide a last bye to all the family member and left the house. Uday marched to his room followed by manyata as she screamed at him

MANYATA: why did you not forgive akash?

UDAY: he broke my trust manyata

MANYATA: so did you, but still I forgave you I did not bring the ego in middle of our relation and you should not bring it either

As she lowered her voice, caressed his face and spoke in a soft tone

MANYATA: you both are brother uday and it is our duty to forgive our family please uday he really regrets his actions and moreover he was also the one to suffer

For some time he stood there like a statue, and then leaving a quick peck on her cheek he rushed out of the house. With little information from the neighborhood he realized that he was in the station. He rushed by akash and said almost huffing and puffing

UDAY: where are you going?

AKASH: somewhere very far from you all and do not worry the company is yours and so is the bungalow and car after all it was all your dad and you have the right on it not me

UDAY: OUR DAD AKASH

He looked at him as the uday pulled his brother in his embrace and said

UDAY: We will forget everything and start out new life

AKASH: yes bhai finally my dream is coming true only if

UDAY: only if what?

AKASH: I wish jai was with me

UDAY: you love her

AKASH: more than anything in my life

UDAY: Then we are going to Mumbai to win back your love

They laughed the way back to their home as the son adored this pair of siblings


done with the update

i am sorry if i offended any body

please hit the like button and no res box

hugss anni

Edited by annabh - 11 years ago

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