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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

CONGRATULATIONS!!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿฅณ


For new thread Sandi.. ๐Ÿค—

thanks viru๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Nice preview...yeh kaisi kaisi situation create ho rhi hai... ๐Ÿ˜”

haan daal toh di..abb pata nahi kaise bahar nikalu๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

CONGRATS! for the second thread, I wish you to create many more threads in future๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜Š โญ๏ธ

thanks jinnie๐Ÿ˜Š...I will complete this story in this thread only๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

first of all congtaz on new thraed aur bhi zayada kholna is FF k liye
Previwe
ab main kya kahun kya dhasu Previwe de diya yaar... Priya ki musklian suljane ki jagah par aur bhi ulajhti hi ja rahi hai... i know Shipra wants divorce of RaYa so she can get property from Ram in name of kids so cheap lady maa hai ya dayan... waise use bhi gayi guszri hai kyunki Dyaan 7 ghare chod k vaar karti hai yeh toh apni hi beti ki zindagi barbad karna chahti hai so sad aur Rajat k pereants ready ho gaye to accept Priya with her kids???? dal puri kali hi lag rahi hai anyway do update next soon...
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thanks leena...I will complete this very soon๐Ÿ˜Š
koi kuch bhi karne ki koshish kare Ram kuch hone nahi dega๐Ÿ˜†...abhi silent hai aur har baat maan raha hai but jald hi apna sahi roop dikha dega
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for all comments๐Ÿ˜Š
Here comes the next part.
 
Please Don't look laws and ethics in this FF.
 
 

Part- 21

 

Priya entered in her room after seven years. Everything is changed. Earlier it belongs to her and Ayesha, now Karthik is using that room.

When she enters all memories of her past came in front of her. She is touching everywhere and feeling everything.

She saw a photo frame of a girl kept on the table. She takes it and caresses when Karthik entered and said "Nandini".

Priya had tears.

Karthik:- Rajat ke ghar par hai...abhi usse pata chal gaya hoga ki aap aa gayi hai..woh aati hi hogi...

Priya:- bahut badi ho gayi hai...bilkul apne mummy par gayi hai...

Saying this Priya had tears. She is missing her kids badly.

Karthik:- Di...mein abhi mera samaan yahan se shift kar deta hoon...

Priya:- rehne de...kuch bhi karne ki koi zaroorat nahi...abhi teri shaadi nahi hui , mein tere saat room share kar sakti hoon.

Both were talking when Nandini entered with Sudhir.

Sudhir:- Priya ...pehchaana isse...

Priya goes near her and hugs her and kisses on her forehead and said "kaise nahi pehchaanungi..Nandini ko

Nandini smile.

Priya:- muje pehchaana

Nandini:- haan...aap Priya maasi hai na...aap kaisi ho

Priya:- mein bilkul teek hoon.

After sometime everybody left. Sudhir notice that priya is disturbed...he entered and put his hand on her head and said "tum teek toh ho na"

Priya said in nodding her head in positive.

Sudhir:- dekh beta muje pata hai ki teri ek alag zindagi hai...pati hai, do bachhe hai...tu unhe chodke eisa yahan hamesha ke liye nahi aa sakti. Lekin yeh bhi sach hai ki yahan bhi teri kuch responsibilities hai...mein bass yahi chahta hoon ki jab takk yahan sab kuch teek nahi ho jata hai tu hamare paas reh...uske baad chahe toh tum Ram ke paas chale jana...

Priya:- Papa mein janti hoon Rajat ko Rajat ke gharwalo ko meri zaroorat hai...lekin mein Ram se aur bachho se alag nahi reh sakti...

Sudhir:- mein janta hoon bachho se dur rehna kitna mushkil hai...tum kahe toh mein ek baar Ram se baat karke dekhta hoon.

Priya:- Nahi papa...mein Ram se dur aayi hoon abb mein bachho ko Ram se alag nahi karna chahti...

Sudhir:- achha teek hai...abhi chalo...pehle kuch khaa loo.

Priya:- aap chaliye ...mein aati hoon.

 

In the evening,

All went to hospital. When priya entered the room, she saw Rajat in the hospital bed. She saw Rajat's parents are sitting beside her.
Priya slowly walk towards them. Rajat's mother saw and goes near her and hugs her.

 

R's Mother:- dekh beta...kya ho gaya tere Rajat ko...tum nahi thi issliye abhi takk soya hai...abb tu aa gayi hai na...abb sab teek ho jaayega.

R's mother hold her hand and goes near Rajat and said "Rajat Beta..dekh kon aaya hai...dekh teri Priya wapas aa gayi hai...abb yeh tumhe chodkar kahi nahi jaayegi. Aakhen kol beta.

 

R'mother then looks at Priya and said " Priya beta kuch bol na Rajat se...bol na ki tu wapas aa gayi hai. uska pyar uske paas wapas aa gaya hai"

Priya becomes worried. She doesn't know what to say, what to do. She is confused. She cried and came out from the room. She sat on a bench.

 

Sudhir came and sit beside her and caresses her head.

Sudhir:- Kya hua beta...Rajat ki mummy ko hamne abhi takk kuch nahi bataya hai...Rajat ki mummy ne tumpar bahut aas lagaya hai beta...unhe nirash nahi karna beta...

 

By then R's parents came out along with Shipra. Sudhir takes everybody out and priya entered into the room. Now, she is alone with Rajat. She goes and sits beside him. She puts her head down on the bed and mistakenly Rajat's hand touches her head.

 

On the other side Sudhir said all truth about Priya which shock R's parents.

R'smother:- eise nahi ho sakta...Priya hamare ghar ki bahu hai...woh aaj bhi hamare bte ki biwi hai. usse Ram ko chodna hoga

Shipra:- dekhiye humne Priya ko samjaya hai...issliye toh woh hamare paas aayi hai. muje yakin hai ki woh hamari baat zaroor maanegi. Hum Priya se Divorce ke liye baat karenge.

 

R'smother:- Jab Ram aur Priya ka rishta hi galat hai toh divorce lene ka kya matlab

Shipra:- haan yeh baat hum bhi jante hai...lekin Priya ko do bachhe bhi hai...unke liye yeh zaroori hai ki hum legally Divorce le aur bachho ki custody Priya ko de de.

R's father:- achha aap log Priya se baat kariye hum kal lawyer se baat karte hai.

 

At night,

Priya called Ram

Ram:- Kaisi ho Priya...

Priya:- muje bachho se baat karni hai...

Ram gave phone to pihu. Priya talk with her and promised her that she will back soon. After that pihu gave back phone to Ram

 

Ram:- Priya...kab aa rahi ho...bachhe tumhe yaad karte hai...unhe handle karna mushkl ho raha hai...Dhruv tumhare bina bahut roo raha hai

Priya:- Ram...yahan situation uthni achhi nahi hai...muje aane mein waqt lagega...mein bachho ko apne saat rakna chahti hoon.

 

Ram:- Aur kitna waqt Priya. Tum abb sir fuss ghar ki beti hi nahi ho..Maa bhi ho...tumhare bachho ko tumhari jyada zaroorat hai. ...Aur haan priya..bachhe mere paas rahenge...aur tum jitni jaldi ho sake wapas aa jao

 

Priya:- It's not possible. Rajat ki mummy ko abb bhi yahi lagta hai ki mein hi hoon jo Rajat ko wapas laa sakti hoon...mein unhe eise chodkar nahi aa sakti...

Ram:- toh kab tak rehne ka irada hai...tum bhool rahi tumhare do bachhe hai...aur tumhe kya yakin hai ki Rajat wapas aayega...

 

Priya:- Ram aap bat ko samaj kyun nahi rahe...hamari shaadi zaroor hui hai..lekin aaj bhi mein Rajat ki biwi hoon.

Ram:- So Priya tum wahi raho...Rajat ki biwi banker...mein apne bachho ko sambhal lunga

 

Priya:- Ram bachhe mere bhi hai...aur muje bhi uthna hi haq hai jitna ki aapka

Ram:- Priya...muje tumhari baato se saaf saaf lag raha hai ki tum mere paas wapas aana nahi chahti...tumhe jahan rehna hai raho, jitney din renha hai raho , lekin mein apne bachho ko tumhe kabhi nahi de sakta...

Priya:- agar eisi hi baat hai toh abb hum court mein hi milenge...

Priya cuts the call and cry desperately.

 

Shipra overhears the talk. She thinks it's the right time to talk about Divorce. She entered in room. Priya is crying putting her head down. Shipra caresses her head. Priya lift her head and hugs her and cry bitterly.

 

Shipra:- Roo...matt beta...meine sab sun liya ...sab kuch teek ho jaayega...hum kuch karenge...bachhe hamare paas hi rahenge.

Priya:- Ram kuch samaj nahi rahe...muje mere bachhe chahiye..mein nahi jee sakti unke bagair...

 

Shipra:- meine kahan na bachhe tumhare paas honge. Tum unki maa ho Ram tumhe bachho se milne ke liye nahi rok sakta. Hum court jaayenge bachho ki custody ke liye. Hamne sham ko aate waqt wakil se baat bhi ki unhone kaha ki aaj bhi tum Rajat ki biwi ho aur iss naate Ram se tumhara koi rishta nahi banta lekin bachho ko nazaandhaz bhi nahi kiya jaa sakta issliye pehle tumhe Ram se puri tarah se alag hona padega aur itna hi nahi...Ram ko apni property ka aadha hissa bhi tumhe aur bachho ke naam karni padegi. Bachhe chotte hai issliye unki custody bhi tumhe hi milegi.bas ek baar Ram ko tum Divorce de do sab teek ho jaayega.

 

Priya wipes her tears and asked "yeh aap kais baat kar rahi hai...mein Ram se alag ho jaau..nahi maa.yeh nahi ho sakta. Mein Ram se pyar karti hoon. jab yahan sab kuch teek ho jaayega mein wpas Ram ke paas chali jaaungi. I really don't care court kya kehta hai. mere aur Ram ka rishte ko lekar kya sahi hai kya galat. Na Ram mere past ke baare mein jante the aur na muje kuch yaad tha.

 

Shipra:- lekin beta...

Priya:- Bass Maa..mein aur iss baare aapse koi baat nahi karna chahti...Hum apni problems khud solve kar lenge. Aur kal mein aunty se kehne wali hoon saari baat ki mein abb unke bte ki biwi nahi hoon. mein Ram se pyar karti hoon aur wahi mere sab kuch hai.

 

Shipra:- Beta...tumhe kuch dikkayi kyun nahi de raha Ram ne tumhare saat dhoka kiya hai...usne tumhe hamse door rakka, usse aur uske dost ko sab pata tha ki tum shaadishuda ho,phir bhi yeh baat tumse unhone itne saalo tak chupayi rakki.

Priya:- Nahi maa...Ram ko iss baare mein kuch nahi pata tha...

 

By then Sudhir also entered...

Sudhir:- haan beta...yeh baat sach hai..vikram hamse saat saal pehle milne aaya tha...phir bhi usne yeh baat tumse chupakar rakki...beta mein janta hoon ki tum Ram se pyar karti ho..lekin yeh bhi sach hai ki Ram ne tumse sachha pyar nahi kiya. Ram ne jaanbhujkar tumse saari baat chupakar rakki.

 

Priya does not believe what she hears. She is in shock.

"yeh baat sach hai ki meine hi Ram se meri pichli zindagi ke baare mein jaane ke liye mana kiya...lekin kya unhe sach mein pata tha ki meri shaadi ho chuki thi.

 

Shipra:- haan beta...Ram ke pyar mein sirf uska matlab tha...woh janta tha ki tum akeli ho...tumhare baare mein poochne wala koi nahi aayega. Agar Ram tumse sachha pyar karta toh woh tumhe bachho se milne ke liye nahi rokta...

Sudhir:- Beta...Ram achhe se janta hai ki tum bachho ke bagair nahi reh sakti issliye woh tumhe bachho ke naam par wapas aane ke liye blackmail kar raha hai.

Shipra:- Priya beta agar tum Rajat ke paas wapas nahi aayi toh Rajat ke gharwale Nandini ko hamse hamesha ke liye dur kar denge. Mein apni beti kho chuki hoon...mein apni beti ko Nandini ke aakho se dekhti hoon, hame usse alag matt karo beta.

Priya is shattered. She left from there.

 

Next day,

Shipra again started on the same topic. She insists Priya to give Divorce to Ram. By the continuous drugging against Ram, Priya sign the Divorce paper in the hope she can at least stay with her children.

 

Natasha started living with Ram. She takes cares of Dhruv and Pihu but Dhruv continuously asked for his mamma. One day Dhruv's condition gets worsen and Ram decided to bring her back and also ready to give divorce.

 

Rajat's parents wanted priya to stay with them but Priya refuses. Priya went to meet Rajat every day without fail. She spent full time in hospital and in the evening she came back.

 

 

Flashback ends

 

Ram came out from his thought. He open the side cabin of the bed and taken out the divorce paper. By then Priya also entered into the room. Ram gets up from the bed and went to close the door. He knows very well that Shipra is watching them from outside.

Priya turns and asked "Darwaza bandh kyun kiya

 

Ram goes near her and priya walks backside and at last hit the wall. Ram kept his both hands on the wall blocking her and bends towards her.

Ram:- kyun?????muj par itna yakin bhi nahi hai...tumhe mujse darr lagta hai

Priya:-  Nahi...Ram...mere kehne ka woh matlab nahi tha...

 

Ram release his hand from there and show paper to her.

Ram:- yeh sab kya hai Priya...Yeh Divorce...eisa kya ho gaya hamare beach mein ki tumhe muje divorce dene ki itni jaldi ho gayi...

Priya puts her head down.

Ram:- bolo Priya...I am asking u something...meine eisa kya kiya tumhare saat ki tum mujse alag hona chahti ho...

 

Priya kept silent. She could not meet her eyes with Ram. Her silence is killing him, he raise his voice.

Ram:- Priya...dammit mein tumse kuch pooch raha hoon...jawab do... Wahan jaakar Rajat mein eisa kya dekh liya ki tum mujse alag hona chahti ho.

 

This time Priya looks at him.

Ram continue...

Muje lagta hai abb tumhara mann bhar gaya hai mujse issliye tum apne purane aashiq ke paas jana chahti ho...

Priya cuts him in between..and said "just stop it Ram...mein yeh soch bhi nahi sakti ki aap mere baare mein yeh sab soch sakte hai"

 

Ram:- Why should I stop it...koi wajah hai tumhare pas mujse alag hone ki. Pata hai...Zindagi mein hamesha mere saat dhoka hi hua hai...issliye mein kisi se pyar karne se darta tha...kyunki muje pata hai...meri khushiyaan sirf kuch hi palo ki hoti hai...(Ram had tears)...lekin meim jiyunga...apne bachho ke liye, unki khushiyon ke liye...aur agar mere bachho ki khushi umki maa se hai toh mein unhe who khushiyaan zaroor dunga.

 

Saying this he rips the paper into pieces and throws it.

Ram:- tum jo chahe kar lo Priya...mein tumhe mujse alag hone nahi dunga... ...kar lo Priya jo karna hai. Tum abb mere saat rahogi...mere paas. Tum meri biwi ho...jao aur jakar apni maa se keh do ki agar woh yahan issliye ruki hai ki unki beti unke saat wapas jaayegi toh apna time waste na kare aur chali jaaye.

Ram stares at her angrily and left from there.

 

 

Very soon I complete this FF๐Ÿ˜Š

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sorry for the mistakes.

 

Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was nice one continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...
ye shipra ki to ๐Ÿ˜•
shipra k sath sudhir ji bhi lag gye ram ka band bazane๐Ÿ˜ก
ye priya ne divorce paper sign bhi kr diya
ram ji to angry bird ban gye yaar๐Ÿ˜†
ram ne paper ka jo haal kiya usse dil garden garden ho gya๐Ÿ˜†
Yaar yhi haal shipra ka bhi kar do๐Ÿ˜†
Bhoookad hmesa usko propert ki padi rehti hai๐Ÿ˜ก
kya yaar ye rajjjo aur uski family ki to๐Ÿ˜ก
priya ko rajjo k sath rukne bola๐Ÿ˜ก
chalo priya nhi ruki badiya hai !!!!
oye ye ff bhi end kr rhi ho ๐Ÿ˜ญ
continue soon sandy๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks for pm๐Ÿค—Edited by Mini1991 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar sandhya kitna complicated banaya hai isse๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
do do villian ab toh ships ke saath sudhirji bhi?๐Ÿ˜•
Pati-patni ke relation mein kaise MUs laaya ja sakta hai isska udharan hai ye .well done.
Priya is very clear in mind she wants to be with ram n her kids though she cares nandini.
Shipraji ko toh bacchoan se zyada property ki padi hai. Mujhe nhi lagta usse rajat ki fikr hai ya priya ki. unhe to bass property ki padi hai apni pyaari poti nandini ke saath.

Oye rambabu , kya yaar aise kaise bol sakte hai apne aashiq ke paas, dil bhar gaya mujhse , ussme kya paaya jo mujhe mein nhi  very bad๐Ÿ˜ญ. Gusse mein aadmi ko sahi galat ka ehsaas nhi hota  hai uska saboot hai ye, kya bole jaa raha hai. Pati hai toh kuch bhi bolega kya , itni harshly OMG.hatt
aur ye priya bhi itna vishwas hai ram pe to ek baar pooch hi leti confirmation ke liye  b4 signing.๐Ÿ˜ก
Final mein acchi si dhamki de diya ram ne keeping his-her n kids well being. lekin ab toh mamla aur bigdega yaar, priya bhi agar gussa hogai toh.  I think this is how marriages break generally, main kuch kahoo, tum kuch kaho hogaya kalyaan.๐Ÿคข
dekhte hai how they handle , bcoz they are something different after all sorry kab kaam aayegi.๐Ÿ˜›
Thx for the PM.๐Ÿ˜Š



Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful...!!!โค๏ธ
shipra ki toh...๐Ÿ˜ก

sudhir ji ko kya hua yaar...y is he takng evrythng wrng...???๐Ÿ˜•

good to see priya back in her mansion...๐Ÿ˜Š
ab bche bhi happy...!!  aur hum bhi...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

had tears fr ram...hes so upset...!!


contn soon...
thnx fr the pm..๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG...Ram in RB mode.  Priya shld have enquired him about her doubts.  Without doing that she signed the divorce papers.  Very bad.  I want Ram to get Priya back from the money minded people and from her own foolishness too

Please continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.