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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for super late comments
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Part 7

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BANNER CREDIT GOES TO CUTETOMMY



Present...

Maan closed his eyes as if in pain, his love, the one he considered his life had gone through so much and he was busy sulking. He had vowed to teach mohinder handa a lesson, but in the process of doing so he had hurt geet the most. Mr handa still remained very much unaffected, even his daughter's grief couldn't touch him. What a tyrant! He still remembered how geet had fought all along, went against his wishes to be with him. Geet who until maan walked in to her entity had been a perfect daughter, always obedient, calm, cool, the perfect hostess to her father's parties had actually defied her father.

He turned to the next page only to find another entry that said...

They all said

One day your prince would come and would sweep you off your feet

He will love you

Pamper you

Make promises to you

Would lead you through the doors of love

Where you would experience the ultimate bliss

Yes I did

He came

He swept me off my feet

He loved

Cared

Worshipped

Nurtured me

And then a violent storm struck

Storm of destruction

Of desolation

Of desertion

Of jealousy

There was a tussle between power and love

And love lost...

I lost

He lost

We lost...

Now here I am

Waiting

Waiting to be loved again

To be cared

To be nurtured

To be pampered

Again

But but prince refuses to return

He refuses to love me

Refuses our love

But am confident

He would return

And when he does this time

I would experience

Paradise

I know...

------------Geet handa---------------------

Maan's eyes stung with tears, but he didn't cry, he was trying to feel the same pain that geet had gone through in all these years that had made her write all she had written.

She stood transfixed once she walked in to the living room, maan was standing there with her diary in hand, his eyes were closed and she could understand that he was waging a battle with his feelings, emotions. She called out to him but her words stuck in her throat refused to come out, slowly placing the tray on the centre table and went and touched maan on his shoulders.

"maan it's ok" she muttered

And the very next moment she felt herself engulfed in the powerful and strong hold of maan.

Why" he whispered

"why couldn't you tell me? I know I had been difficult, rigid, bust sulking, I had behaved like a total a** but yet you could have tried geet, why" maan whispered in pain

"Because I too was living a lie maan" geet replied and at that very moment maan felt geet had gone rigid.

"what!" maan was flustered at her anwer, what did she mean by lie? What was she referring to?

"maan dad never wanted us together, everything was a hoax, him coming to our place, apologizing for his behavior, accepting our marriage it was all a part of his plan to extricate you from my life. But he did it quite skillfully, why not? After all he is such a skilled moneyman to him everything revolves around profit and loss our relationship was a total loss for him, his social status would have been hurt and then when he found out that I was pregnant he was livid, he had to get rid of you, so he played a nasty game, a game that had no boundaries, no limits" and geet broke into tears.

Though maan's heart pained to ask her the question, yet he had to ask it, "what happened to the baby? Did your father...?

"no!" geet screamed " No!" "I know my dad can be cruel but he isn't heartless, though he detested you but he couldn't have hated his granddaughter" geet replied and she felt maan breath in a mouth full of air. It had completely missed her mind that maan until now had not known about the gender of the child. Their baby, thei tamanna, that's what they had named her even before her birth, as if they knew from before that it would be a girl. Maan had always wanted a girl. She remembered how ptrified she had been when she had found out and how calm maan had been rather elated, so happy and her thoughts wandered back to the fateful day...

Past...

Since morning she had been restless. She wanted to tell maan as soon as possible. What had happened was not right, she should have at least been sensible. How could she? No! What if her dad comes to know about it? No! it can't' be. He was no doctor. But then he had noticed and had commented last night while they were at dinner that for the past few days she had not been keeping well and had insisted on taking her to a doctor. The very thought of doctor and that too their family physician had made her frantic and she was quick to make an excuse that she had already spoken to doctor manchanda and he had prescribed certain drugs which she was regularly taking . at this very moment the one man she needed most and who was absent on pretext of work was maan. Oh how she was dying to share the news with him. But then ominous thoughts lingered into her mind regarding his reaction,

" what if he got angry? If he deserts me? What if he blames me entirely for the fiasco! No but it wasn't a fiasco! It was all a beautiful moment when we made our baby! Our baby" a slow soft smile touched her lips everytime she thought about being a a mother and she was pregnant with maan's child, that thought made her elated but she still didn't know as to how maan would react and that made her anxious. Today he was due to return from his business trip and she was looking forward to as well as dreading to see him at the airport. Off course she was happy that he was coming back but then she knew that once she meets him she would have to tell him about the child and then what would happen was a matter of concern for her. She just didn't want maan to think it to be a mistake. She hoped and prayed while she drove towards the airport where the love of her life, father of her child was waiting to be received, with that thought she turned right towards the domestic arrival.

Maan since he saw her at the airport felt that something was amiss. She was not her usual self. Though she tried to keep up the easy conversation yet she failed. There was hesitation in her eyes and she had been avoiding eye contact. They were seated at an open air coffee shop near his apartment.

"maan isn't the weather great! See its gonna rain, the breeze is so soft and I love it before its rains" geet blabbered on without realizing that she was being scrutinized by maan.

"hmm, you look lovely, glowing absolutely have you done something for it" maan replied not taking his eyes off his lady love

Geet had not expected such a repay but maan's very compliment caught her off guard, indeed she was glowing and it was not because of nay beauty treatment but because of the small life she was nurturing within. Now she had to tell maan. She had tried to delay the moment but...

"I asked you something, did you go in for some beauty treatment while I was away because if you have I can see the effect, you look fresh and resplendent and radiant, I think you should tip your beautician since she has done a hell of a a job" maan joked making light of the situation

"in that case I should be tipping you" geet replied listlessly

"what do you mean?" maan at once went stiff

"I mean that this glow, this radiance that you see is because of you" geet replied

"oh! I get it, my love makes you radiant and glowing is that it" maan said

right and wrong at the same time" geet said

Maan quirked his brows at her answer and asked, "How so?"

"yes your love makes me radiant and glowing especially when its growing each day inside me" she replied.

Her words went flying off maan's head and somewhere he was exasperated at her behavior. Since the time she met him at the airport she had acted strange, fumbled and stumbled over her words. She tried in vain to keep her engaged in a futile conversation like discussing the weather and how his trip had been whether the venture went well. She was pensive and maan could see that she was trying to hold back herself, she was talking in riddles which she had never done before so he confronted geet.

"what's with you geet? Whats wrong? I have been noticing you since air[port, uyou are not the one I left here a week before I went for my business deal. Are you angry for me being not there for over a week? You how these business meetings are like, they can stretch forever sometimes but I called you every day any free time that I got I called you then why this cold behavior..." even before he could finish geet butted in, " to prepare you for the shock"

shock! What shock!" maan asked alarmed

"am pregnant" she replied with a calm demeanor though underneath it was a whirlwind of emotions.

For a minute or two there was silence.

When geet could no longer take it, seeing maan stunned, she began, "see maan I know it must me so sudden for you, so was it for me when I first found out but then I became happy once I realized I have life growing inside me, your baby, the thought that am carrying your child made me smile and am so happy please don't think it as a mistake, it was all a beautiful moment neither you nor me were at fault, its our love growing inside me" she blabbered along and still when she failed to get any response from maan sh e burst into tears and said meekly, "please don't leave me"

Geet's very public outburst had men and women at the various tables of the coffee shop turn their side and maan instantly was at her side soothing her running his hand up and down hr back while he hugged her sideways kissing her. She was murmuring something which didn't register geet's mind until she paid attention but when she did she heard and she couldn't believe her ears, he was saying,

"geet you are my life and I can never leave you and how could you think that I would be mad at you am so happy get, I actually can feel my feet above the ground, you have made me into a happy fellow, I am going to be a father! A father! Wow am so happy! If it hadn't been in public I would have picked u up here and twirled you around and around and around, am so happy geet so happy"

"you are?" geet asked stunned?

yes I am" maan said with love in his eyes and then he said something that melted geet into his arms and she held him tightly as if he were her life, "and geet you made a mistake" when geet looked up to give him a quizzical expression he kissed her on her forehead and keeping his hand on her tummy protectively said, "its not a I am pregnant but you should have said, we are pregnant, after all am going to be a parent too! Isn't it?" he said

"yes" replied geet

Precap: more on maneet past and present











So that's part 7 for you all hope you all like it. A lot of hardwork goes into writing updates and when I see less likes and its very disheartening, I know many of you must be having very tight schedule and am thankful to those who regularly comment and like. I love reading your comments thank you so much to each of you for support. A big quishing hug to all my readers.

This update is dedicated to my friend sweetsampa39, it's a belated birthday gift from me to you hope you enjoy it. I know I have been a lousy friend not to wish you on your birthday but please forgive and thank you for the lovely long comments.

Many of you requested for a quick update one of whom is revsacdd so I tried to update as soon as possible

@ appy thank you for the lovely poem, it portrayed the feelings of geet so well, please write me some more my dear soul sis and am thankful to you for one more reason that is you were first to suggest me to start writing so all my stories are a result of your egging me to write

And guys if you have any requests feel free to shire them with me am all ears

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Wish I could reply to each of you personally but my tight schedule holds me back from updating as well as replying but it's a real treasure to have you all as readers.








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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first
Awesome update
Loved the update
Edited by ambeern - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
u di'nt told me before updating.. dats y i m 2nd!😡

pr update achha dia islie maaf kia tmhe! warna regarding updates i dont trust you at all😆

i just loved it when maan said
"its not a I am pregnant but you should have said, we are pregnant, after all am going to be a parent too! Isn't it?"

aww.. dats so sweet..
i loved this whole part.. pls update soon.. nd ofcourse i m gonna give u many more poems ahead..😳

gr8 work👏
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesme update
love it
eagerly waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
simply perfect amazing update
geet was afraid of maan reaction
maan gave positive reaction
past present both awesome
thx fr pm conti soon soon
actually i was surprised to see pm so early
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet kept on blabbering n here maan was so happy...
Der lil world n love
Destroyed by her dad...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haaaiii Buddy,
Thanx a ton sweety for d wish😃And dont call yourself lousy 😡 All my frnds are sweet,sweet enough too dedicate a full update for me 🤗 Isse achcha gift aur kya ho sakta hai,so thanx again.

Now coming to d update.God yaar,half d update I was crying.The poem in Geet's diary made me cry and then when Maan hugged Geet asking 'Why',tears were continuously flowing fm my eyes.I stopped reading,removed my tears unless smbdy sees me.Then d part about Tamanna,how much both love her and yet the angel is deprived of her father's love.


The past was so cute with Maan being so happy about Geet's pregnancy,that he even called himself pregnant.Loved d part completely.Too emotional.



Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
superb part
loving it
pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
thank you for pm

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