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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: -shenz-
The craziest Devil...

chal anyways I gtg.. bye...

and haan I will comment tomorrow if in any case you update today 😉

and tera long comment pakka... Bye 😃

Mera khatm ho gaya hai. Just about to update now. Help me. meko first post par karna tha and aapne comment kar diya. Ab page finish karvao.

Edited by Flame.Of.Rose - 11 years ago

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: -shenz-
that means thats my res 😛

nae hai aapka res.😆

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

okie... lag jaa kaam pe

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

reserved.

Now I am running to go.. bye...

I will unreserve tomorrow... pakka.. long one 😉

*********

Finally.. here I come..
tell me one thing.. whats just happening?
I know you that you are aware about the confusions you have created in the heads of the readers... but I am one amongst them...

Okay lemme start from the start... I loved the way you have described the helplessness of the person who is dying... the kinda things that goes into ones head when they find their lives ending... Thats something I adored this peice of work... your style of writing... Lovely way..

Oh hello.. abhi khatam nahi hua... that was the emotional feelings that one goes through.. abhi the other part.. theres someone who makes them alive.. gives them their lives back... and that again.. is beautifully penned..

Now this is shocking.. doctors find people mysteriously gaining their senses.. but that black magic thing.. wow that made me rofl.. seriously.. manh..thats hillarious.. are people that insensible...

Okay this is all I could say.. ab isse bhi bada expect karna is your fault.. not mine...
Dont give me that look... Ab jab tak kuch clear hi na ho toh banda ya bandi kya karega.. aur toh aur ismein Krisha kahan hain... and can I hope for any KriYansh or Swaron.. ya nere armaano pe pani ferne ka iraada hai...

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

res

unres

superb update

seriosuly

this is getting more interesting

and you are right yet again a confusing update 😛

but age samajh aa jayega

please update soon

and do PM me

thanks for the PM 😳

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

See, I was correct. There's black magic related to it...at least that's what I and those people think :P :D

Awesome update anyways...loved it...iske alawa no comments...mere palle kuch nahi pada -_-

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BedOfRoses

@AwesomeSauce.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Flame.Of.Rose
In your dreams!

Wait and watch! 😈

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BedOfRoses

@AwesomeSauce.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Flame.Of.Rose
How do you know that? 😲🤣

Baby that was just a wild guess! 🤣 😳

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Res!
Um..am not a D3-ian. I have watched the show but not regularly so this would be my first ff on the show.
Honestly am confused. And I would wait for your next update *not so patiently so update soon* to know more. I liked your writing pattern. The people died are not the same after they become alive. One confusion by the last para did u mean they die, then become alive and then again die??

Edited by Chipmunks. - 11 years ago