Swaron Os- Taare Zameen par..

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hello everyone..i am up with another Os..this is a small fiction for my school presentation..😛😊
hope aapko pasand aaye..😳
sorry can't help it..school presentation without swaron..😆
IMPOSSIBLE

Swaron Os- Taare Zameen par..

In life No one is fully content , No one is perfect sabko sabkuch nai milta, even the richest and the most beautiful persons born are filled with some flaws which haunt them kill them each and every second, some people work day and night but unhe 2 waqt ki roti bhi nai milti , kuch log aise hote hai jo mentally or physically unstable hote hai but does it mean they are not worthy to be called as human beings they can't do anything in their lives they can't shape their careers follow their dreams and if we go near us it will affect our dignity ? No it is not at all like this it totally depends on the will of each and every person and those who think that they have the rights to make decision for someone else's life well they are totally wrong and their thoughts totally inhuman..and my fiction today is totally based on this theme.."Disabilities are not a flaw they are just a wrong belief .."




It was time ..the most awaited moment by the citizens of Mumbai..the day on which the first children to the two leading business tycoons of Mumbai are to be born ..Both the Families the Raiprakashs and the Shikhawats were excited as well as tensed..In the hospital both the mens admitted their wives and nearly after 1 hour the good news arrived..To the Raiprakashs a beautiful baby girl was born and to the Shikhawats a handsome baby boy..!! Both were extremely happy but the nurses who handled the babies to their dads had a dreadful expression on their faces ..both the fathers asked -"is everything alright nurse" but received no reply..they were totally terrified and after a lot of interrogation by the fathers the nurse turned and said-" I am sorry your child is mentally disabled sir". Both the fathers were shocked as well as shattered after listening the news but it was not because of the problems which their children will have to face in future but because of the thought that will happen to their reputation...

Later on when the mothers became conscious and they asked for their children they were told that they gave birth to a dead child and were left totally helpless and shattered ..Both the ruthless fathers bribed the staff and asked them to do this sin..and the corrupt staff agreed but as it is said that-"when there is no-one by your side God is there for you" even in that corrupt staff there was a unfruitful lady who considered the two children as the almighty's angels and accepted them as their own children..she asked the fathers and took them home..she brought them up with a lot of love and care ..and named them Swayam and Sharon. She took care of all their needs and interests and considered their dream as hers...and pledged to make her mentally disabled children the perfect creations of god..

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5 years later..

Swayam and Sharon went to school ..their first day in school was amazing..both made a number of friends and their upbringing and their loving and caring nature inculcated in them by their mother became their strength their most effective reason by which people were attracted to them..even thought they were weak at studies and did abnormal things they were loved by all..Swayam and Sharon cared a lot for each other they never considered each other as brothers and sisters but they loved each other since childhood..As we say matches are made in heaven..they are born together broughtup together and they always wanted to be together ..Once swayam even asked her mother-"maa shaadi kya hoti hai?" maa said-" kyun aap ye kyun puch rahe ho beta?" Swayam said-" maa meine raste mein jaa raha toh meine suna jin logo ki shaadi ho jaati hai who hamesha ke liye saath rehta hai" maa smiled said-"hmm..kyun" Swayam said-" maa meri aur sharon ki bhi shaadi kara do..mereko usse kabhi nai chodhna..uske saath rehna hai" to which maa smiled and said -" hmm abhi nai hota ye sab beta , par aap jab badhe ho jaoge then aap kar sakte ho..abhi jao jaa kar padh lo ."
Swayam and Sharon both of them loved each other and their mother a lot..whatsoever happened her wish is their command and her wish is to eliminate this disability of their children from their lives forever..and to this aim of hers ..she gave her best..She tried every possible way to eliminate this weakness of heir children without letting them even know about this..She consulted all the best doctors and did every possible treatment of them not only this she always let her children follow their dreams and their interests she gave her best and tried to polish the talents of her children.."
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Years passed and with each passing year her children overpowered their disabilities..
soon Swayam and Sharon were no more mentally disabled but they became very intelligent..they became the toppers of their school and gave their best in every field they were now considered as allrounders by the people who considered them as loosers..!!And the news went to Mr.Shikhawat and Mr.Raiprakash too..they became extremely happy and went to that lady...they tried to bribe her but she ignored all the ways they tried to pamper her..they even approached Swayam and Sharon but they refused to believe them..

One fine Sunday..Swayam and Sharon were sitting with their mother in a small house..they are 20 years old now..Swayam came on her bed where she was reading something and layed his head on her lap..She smiled and caressed him when a knock was heard on the door..Sharon went and opened the door.. the two same people who approached them were standing there..with a lawyer. Maa and Swayam came down..
Mr.Raiprakash said-"Swayam and Sharon you are our children ask this daughter did she give birth to you.." they looked at maa with questioning eyes and she said with tears in her eyes-" I am sorry I didn't give birth to them ..but I was the one who brought them up cared for the loved them when their own fathers left them in the hospital because they were mentally disabled and told their mothers that they gave birth to dead children.. And now I won't let anyone take them away from me..because they are my children they are my life and I love them alot.." and she broke down..Mr Raiprakash said-" very well see you in court then.."

After hearing this swayam and sharon were shattered but they were mature enough now to decide who is actually their parent..They hired a lawyer and stood by their mother's side the case was heard the verdicts were presented and finally the truth won and Swayam and Sharon were lawfully declared the children of this selfless lady..!! Swayam and sharon became very good artist professionals in dance renowned all over the world they got married and continued to love and take care of their maa..

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So this is it..i know this is really very lame...but thanxx for reading it..😊 and Yaa i forgot to mention this Os is dedicated to kshitija di..



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res:)
edited
k m i now supposed to comment on this..i wont be able to seriously speaking..
Earlier i was proud of u on seeing the presentation..but now m just rendered speechless anandita!
U have no idea that u just wrote a touching emotional stuff which u dared to call lame..
Some guts u have..along with a golden heart!
The os just complused me to comment at 1:30 AM.
The intro..i have read it before..but reading it here made it completely different
disability wali line..its just perfect..just like the bonds r not made by blood wali line which is not mentioned here..
Coming to d swaron unique story..i loved hw u incorporated d love stuff in here..
About d rest..
I have no rights to be a judge of remaining stuff
so hats off miss writer..

PS -on a lighter note..m not sure hw this cmnt became so long :P
still love u...and tune yeh di ko dedicate kiya :)
-veronica
Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U know Wat i literally have tears in my eyes..
Dis was so so touching..
I don't think any word can describe d feeling after reading dis os..
All i can do for u is dis
👏 👏 👏
👏 👏 👏
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Os 😊
Beautifully penned
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a different,
pure and a complete inspiration!!!
pls keep writing!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what an amzing os
just superb
beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i cant describe how much i loved dis os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Comment edited at 1:45AM 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No words to describe this is...BT want to say just one word " khoobsurat"
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such an beautiful os..
so emotional n hearttouching..
totally loved it..
thanks for the pm..
n do write more..

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