love always find a way...42 part updated page no 67

deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
nice update yar!
let's c nw wat happened happens in the party!
update soon

thank u n party is a suspense 😆

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: tinadreamzyland

thanks for the PM😳,

this is interesting...!!😉u r indeed a good writer...!!👏

still reading the previous chaps,

do PM me the updates...!!😳

thank u for taking interest in my story n do read chapter n Tell me do u like it or not! 😊 n thank u once again for calling me good writer 😊 ya sure I defiantly pm u!!! 👍🏼

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Humairaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Hi
How you? 😊
Wow, amazing, superb update 👏
Loved it ⭐️
Wonder what Yuvraj is upto
Plz update soon 😃

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Hi
How you? 😊
Wow, amazing, superb update 👏
Loved it ⭐️
Wonder what Yuvraj is upto
Plz update soon 😃

hello I m fine u tell me?? BTW thank u!!

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Panther_panja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: deepsoul
thank u priya for taking interest in my story 😎

you are most welcome 😃

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

34 part!!!
Scene starts with a resort where all enjoying party some is enjoying in swimming pool ,taking drinks etc...

Rani n vijay entered n get shocked to see vijay ask" rani tum sure ho ki yeh hi jagaey hai?" Rani say" Han vijay Bhai address tho yeh hi tha?" Vijay say" par yeh kisi bhi angle se charity party nhi lagti hai?" Rani say" par ESA kese ho sakta hai? ek min rukey hum raj ko call kartey hai" she call but his phone is not reachable rani say" uska phone tho not reachable hai" vijay ask" tho ab hum kaya karey?" Rani say" chaley vijay Bhai ab hum chaltey!" N when she look back she get shocked to see Nandani n say" Nandani yaha kaya kar rahi hai?" Vijay is also confused to see Nandani .Nandani looking for yuvraj rani go to her n ask" Nandani tum yaha kaya kar rahi ho?" Nandani also got shocked to see her n ask" tum yaha kaya kar rahi ho?" Rani say" wahi tho mai puch rahi hoo?" Nandani say" yuvraj ney humhey invite kia hai! Par aap yaha kaya kar rahi ho?" Rani say" humhey tho raj ney invite kia hai for charity party key liye!!" Nandani laugh n say" jiji lagta usney aapko Galt address diya hai kuyki jara dayan se dekhiye yeh kisi bhi angle se charity party tho nhi lagti hai!" Rani angry n say" tum shai khe rahi ho humhey bhi ESA lagta hai!" Nandani say" humhey lagta jiji aapko yaha se chaley Jana chaye kuyki yeh party apki types ki nhi hai!" Vijay got angry try to say something but rani stop him n rani try leave but yuvraj come n say " tum thik khey rahi ho Nandani yeh party tho srif hot n happening people key liye just like us!" rani n vijay got shocked to see yuvraj behaviour but rani ignore him n try leave but again got shocked to see raj n ask him" raj aap yaha par aap tho charity party key liye bulya tha na? Aap yaha is party mai kaya kar rahey hai?" Yuvraj smile after that rani understand everything n say" ohhh!!ab samjhi mujhe yaha dokhey se bulya hai saram nhi ati charity ke naam par u cheat kartey Huey! Ab tho mai yaha ek min nhi ruk sakti hoo!"rani turn her face Yuvraj say" Han Han jao wase bhi tum yaha fit nhi hoti ho kuyki tum boring ho!" Vijay got angry n say" aap humari bhen ke sath ese behave nhi kar saktey hai!" Rani stop vijay n say with angry face" tumhey kaya lagta hai ki ese traey key behaviour se hot n happening lagtey hai? Tho yeh sab tho mai bhi kar sakti hoo!" Yuvraj say"acha kar sakti ho tho WO archery game dekh rahi ho use khel key dekhao?" Rani say with attitude" han use mai kaya hai chalo!" N every body goes their rani is sacred little bit but she take bow string n fix one arrow in it seeing the target yuvraj standing back to rani n comment" nichana abhi thik nhi hai!" Rani say" tum chup raho mujhe pata hai mujhe kaya karna hai!" Then she release arrow but she slightly miss the target everyone start clapping yuvraj comment" dekha humney kha tha na target pe nhi lagega!" Rani say with attitude" ek bar nhi laga tho kaya hua dusri bar lag jayega!" Nandani thinking" ek bar nhi laga tho dusri bar kaya lagega?" Vijay say" yes come on rani u can do it!" N clapping for her. Rani take again an arrow n aiming to target again yuvraj see from back side n comment" abhi bhi shai nhi hai!" N come close her n hold it from back helping her in targeting aim n blow the arrow right on target n every body get amazed to see that here Nandani feeling jealous rani feel insulting walk out from there n yuvraj give evil smile. Nandani come to yuvraj n say" yuvraj man gaye apko aap tho kamal shooter hai!" Yuvraj say" thank u princess" Nandani hold his hand n say" kaya aap humhey bhi archery sikaye gey?" Yuvraj remove her hand from his hand n say" sorry princess humarey pass time nhi hai fir khabhi?" N leave from there.Nandani give evil smile n say" ana tho humarey pass hi hoga jaigradh ke yuvraj!"
Rani is going in anger suddenly music start rani stop n look back yuvraj with Mike n singing

(My desi girl

My desi girl
Girl... girl... girl... girl) "- 2

Jhumka gira de
Jo milale agar woh nazar se nazar mein taale
Nachke dikade,
Sabki dhadkan mein kadam se kadam milale
Lehron si chaal pe chaal bichade
Dil ko yun behaal bana de
Par deewane mane
Na dekhi koi aisi girl

(Na dekhi koi aisi girl)

n also invite raj in it n both start dancing n singing

Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Ain't nobody like my desi girl
Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Sab toh soni saadi desi girl
Who's the hottest girl in the world?
My desi girl
My desi girl
Thumka lagaike she'll rock your world
My desi girl
My desi girl

My desi girl
My desi girl

Pade kamar pe jo nazar
Saare sapno mein rang bhar jaaye
Jo tham le woh haath toh
Hus ke hi aashiq mar jaayein

Dhoondon jahan mein chahe kahin
Na tumko milegi koi aisi girl

Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Ain't nobody like my desi girl
Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Sab toh soni saadi desi girl
Who's the hottest girl in the world?
My desi girl
My desi girl
Thumka lagaike she'll rock your world
My desi girl
My desi girl

My desi girl
My desi girl
Girl girl girl...

try to convince rani but rani didn't listen but they force her dance n everybody enjoying it then vijay also say her to dance after that rani also start dancing

Jahan jahan bhi jau main
Saari nazrein toh peche peche aaye
Ruku zara mein jo yahan
Thandi thandi saari saanse tham jaye
Sabki nigahon ne hai kaha
Ke khwaabon mein hai dekhi meri jaisi girl
Meri jaisi girl

Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Ain't nobody like my desi girl
Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Sab ko soni lagthi desi girl
Who's the hottest girl in the world?
My desi girl
My desi girl
Thumka lagaike 'll rock your world
My desi girl
My desi girl

here Nandani feel jealous n her anger got brusted n she couldn't bear it n leave from there in anger but rani see her going out n she also go after her. here everybody got busy in dancing n Rani searching Nandani but Nandani already leave n here rani searching but couldn't find her. Vijay feel that rani is not here n the leave dance floor n he also go out after rani here suddenly rani saw her dad brijraj is going with some lady n she got shocked to see then vijay come n ask" kaya hua rani tum yaha kaya kar rahi ho?" Rani is so confused n say" hum tho Nandani key peechey aye they par humney datta ko dekha kisi aurat ke sath!" Vijay also got shocked n say" kaya brijraj mama yaha kese ho saktey hai? Jarur tumara vahem hoga!" Rani say" sayad aap thik khey rahey ho vijay Bhai humara vehem hoga!" Vijay say" chalo party mai tumara mood thik ho jayega!" Rani say" nhi vijay Bhai humhey ghar Jana hai!" Vijay say" thik hai hum ghar chaltey hai!" Here yuvraj also feel that rani is not here n he also come out but he saw that vijay n rani is going in a car n feel anger

rani n viajy reached mahal but still rani feel tensed n vijay see that n ask" kaya hua rani tum ab bhi pareshan ho"rani say" vijay bhi jo hum ney party mai dekha wo sach tha ya spana?" vijay say" wo bas tumara vaham tha ab uskey barey mat soch" after that one srevent come n say" yuvrani saa in papers par apkey signature chaye: rani say : thik hai hum dekh le gey tum jao" rani look at papers n get shocked!

To be continued...

Edited by deepsoul - 11 years ago

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: Karkit
Nice update deeps...
Love it...

don't read soon dear I have to updated from lappy as my bro take my internet cable 😡

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Kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: deepsoul
don't read soon dear I have to updated from lappy as my bro take my internet cable

ya im wating to half update pls update fast n do pm me...

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

hey
the story simply mind blowing
i have read all the chapters in a go
it is different and sweet and romantic
what to say
it has all element in it
please do pm me next time
hugss
anni

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Panther_panja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Aha nice twist in the story very interesting. Your story is going great. 👍🏼 ⭐️

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