!!!!!LAUT AOO ANANDI !!!!! ansh FF *(part 7& 8 pg 9&10)updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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( rishty bharose chahat yakeen bg tune )

anandi was still in disbelief
how could her family do this to her
how could her shiv do this to her

as the bus was moving forward towards bilaria , her mind was getting crowded with the past thougts


( kesar bagh )

alok " ira , sanchi kaha hai ?"
" apne kamre me aur kaha hogi meri bacchi , jabse uske sath ye sab hua hai , usne to jaise jeena hi chod diya hai "
" ira , hume use thoda waqt dena hoga , waqt sab thik kar dega "
" ye aap kaisi baate kar rahe hai alok, kya hum apni beti ko waqt par chod de ,
us jagdish aur uske parivar ne jo kiya hai , use bhulana itna asan nahi hai .
aur mai bhi un logo ko itni asani se ye sab bhulne nahi dungi"

shiv " ma , mai office ja raha hu , mera tiffin de digiye "
" shiv , ye raha apka tiffin "
" ma , mai raste me kuch kha lunga " he ignores anandi and walks away
" shiv muze apse kuch bat karni hai "
" muze jaldi hai "



at the same moment
khajan " gadi khamba , kavarsa , aur app sab logo ko bhi mhara namaskar "
all the people coldly excepts his greeting
shiv " muze office me kuch jaroori kam hai , mai chalta hoo, pls aap khana khake jayiye ga "
he walks away

khaian senses that some thing is not rigth

"bapu " says anandi in shaking voice and hugs him
" kaise hai tu lado "

alok " aap bathiye na , khade kyu hai "

ira , rudely " ji kahiye kaise ana hua "

khajan ignores there rudeness
says happily " wo mai phicle mahine gujrat gaya tha , to waha se kuch bhet laya hu ap sabke liye "
ira excepts the gift coldly
anandi knew , her father has sensed something wrong , she pretends hard to be happy

" ye lehenga waha ke karigaro ne khas banwaya hai , mhari taraf se sanchi bitiya ko shadi ka tohfa"

ira fumes up " ye kya majak hai "
khajan " mai kuch samjha nahi "


" itne bhole banane ki koi jarurat nahi hai , app aur apki bati acchi tarah se ajnte ha ki kya hua hai
bhir bhi aap hamare jakhamo pe namak chidakne aa gaye "



anandi remembered every word ira said to her father who was constantly begging them to forgive anandi's fault
after some time even sanchi joined her and every other family member was just being a mute spectator

but for how much time a daughter can see her father getting insulted
she spoke in protest and they banished her from the house , no one stopped ira and sanchi

NOT EVEN HER SHIV , he didnt even gave her chance to her to tell about there future " CHILD "

anandi was completely broken from inside , she was just crying silently on her fathers shoulder , her only support


her array of thoughts were suddenly broken by a huge THUDDD SOUND
" bapu ye kay ho raha hai "
before khajan could answer there bus was fallen deep into the river !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


pls send your reply , should i continue :)

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Supriyaa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice keep writing
😉
but write regularly because if u r regular it will affect reader's curiosity and there will me more expectation from ur story
Edited by supriya8877 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one and plz write regularly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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everything is good
but plz do not throw bus in river.

no more torture on anandi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...plz plz continue...and also mention that this is an os in the topic 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wht does OS and FF stand for
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gud start 👏
hopng to see more of this plot 😊

1 suggestn
--- plzzz do mentn on d title abt FF or SS...or its vry confusng n more viewers wont attract

FF- fan fictin
OS- one short story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aakanksha_7

gud start 👏

hopng to see more of this plot 😊

1 suggestn
--- plzzz do mentn on d title abt FF or SS...or its vry confusng n more viewers wont attract

FF- fan fictin
OS- one short story



thanks for the advice di
next time se dhyan rakhungi 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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( the same night )


( ansh bedroom )
shiv was looking towards the empty space besides him
" god , i am missing her like hell "
" why coundnt i speak up when she was leaving the house ,
was i so blinded by my sisters love
i knew anandi was not at fault , oh my god i have made a huge mistake "
" i can not let my anandi go , i must bring her back , i am going to bilaria tomorrow "


next day

" papaji, alok nashta tayar hai "

" shiv tum bhi aa joa " ira said

" ma, mai wo ..."
his phone rings "

" hello , shivraj shekar hear "

( a police inspector ' sir kal rat ko yaha nadi ke pas bilaria jane wali ek bas ka accident ho gaya hai ,
jisme kuch log mare gaye hai aur baki logo ko pas ke hospital me le gaye hai , sir yaha par bohot bheed
jama ho gayi hai , sir pls app jaldi ayeye')

shiv was stunned ...
as if the time stopped for that moment

ANANDI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he cried

whole family was shocked
" shiv kya hua ?"asked ira
" shiv beta bolo na kya hau " everyone was woried

" ma , ma wo..."

" shiv bhaiya batiye na kya hau ?"

" ma , ma wo anandi "
" kya hua anandi ko ?" choti ma asked with a frigthned face

" ma , kal anandi jis bas se ja rahi thi us bas ka accident ho gaya ?"
he finally blurted out

everyone stood still

" ma, us hadse me kafi log mare gaye " finally tears rolled down his eyes
" ma , meri anandi , ma use kuch hua to nahi hoga na , ma use kuch ho gaya to mai mar jaunga ma
sab meri galti hai , sab meri galti hai , maine use aklele kaise chod diya "
he fell down and started to cry like a child


"shiv sambhalo apne app ko , kuch nahi hua anandi ko , suna tumne , kuch nahi hau use "


( police insepctor ' sir , sir app thik to hai na , sir app aa rahe hai na ')

alok pick u the phone " ha wo aa rahe hai "


" shiv , chalo hum waha ja kar dekte hai , hume humari anandi jarur mill jayegi"

" nahi papa , meri waha jane ki himmat nahi ho rahi hai "

" shiv ase himmat har ke kuch nahi hoga , chalo hum waha jake anandi ko dhund layege "

" alok mai bhi chalti hu " ira said

" nahi ira , tum ghar par he ruko , waise bhi ye jo kuch bhi hau hai usme humara bhi dosh hai "

" alok????"
ira watched them as shiv , alok and daddu left home .

to be continued...

Edited by keelabc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...awesome dear...
and hope nothing happens to anandi...

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