ManVeer OS The Journey Called Life

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Everyone I wrote a Manveer OS its quite long, I hope you guys enjoy it, after my FF Unwanted I havent wrote anything else on Manveer so on Vibha request I wrote a OS hope Vibha likes it and all of you do to.

ManVeer OS- The journey called life- where some things are just not meant to be

It is a beauitful Sunny day the sky is blue the birds are humming we see a big Mansion, we see a girl getting ready for college "what shall I wear the blue salwaar suit or the red salwaar suit? why are you always so confused Manyata? I will ask the fashion diva Preity!!!!! Preity!!!!!!" Just then 16 year old Preity woke up "What is it Di?" Manyata excitedly showed Preity two dresses "now my sweet sis fashion diva of our house tell me which dress is better, the blue salwaar suit or the red salwaar suit, tell me quickly I need to get ready for college Uday is waiting for me."

Preity put both dresses against Manyata"my beauitful Di looks best in the red salwaar suit now go get ready, my to be Jiju must be waiting so come on Di get ready fast, by the way Di you look good in everything Jiju is already impressed he loves you like mad, so lucky Di does to be Jiju have a little brother? " Manyata started smiling "I know I'm very lucky to have someone like Uday who loves me so much, my dear sis you have long way to go no Uday doesn't have any little brother just one little sister. Preity I'm going to get ready you go to I will meet you at the breakfast table"

Manyata got ready ready quickly and went downstairs to the dinning room "Good Morning Mama, Papa and my Baby sister" Manyata Mom Komal quickly got up to serve breakfast to her daughter "Good morning here is your cornflake and orange juice" Manyata happily ate her breakfast. "Manyata how are your studies going?" Said Brijraj in a stern voice he was very strict and angry person always in a bad mood "there good Papa I got the highest marks in the last semester I'm doing very predicted A*, dont worry I will make you proud you will be very happy with my results" replied Manyata confidently. Brijraj wasn't too convinced "I hope so or else it wont ge good for you".

Just then Manyata phone rang it was Uday she couldnt anwser it, Brijraj didn't allow anyone to touch their mobile phone while they were on the dining table eating. "I'm done now bye Mama, Papa, Preity, Baby, I'm going college" Manyata happily went to college she was very excited to see Uday after 1 week.

Manyata reached college went straight to the second floor Business and Management building, Uday wasn't there "where is this Uday? he told me he would be on the second floor where are you Uday? maybe hes in the canteen" Manyata went to the canteen she finally saw Uday she quickly went and covered his eyes. Uday touched her hands "who's hands are these? let me guess Tina, Pooja no no definately Tia". Now Manyata was very angry "Uday it me Manyata you jerk you didn'r recongnise my hands, who are these dumb girls? huh I'm going to their murder how could you say their names in front me" Manyata got upset with Uday. Uday started laughing "Manyata you know I was joking I wouldn't even think about anyone else, I have the most beauitful girlfriend in the whole wide world who not only has beauty but brains too, I was joking wanted to see your reaction but I'm convinced now you are very possessive about me and I know you love me a lot".

Manyata was even more angry now she started beating Uday with her business book "Uday you liar all this drama just to see if I'm posessive or not, you got your anwser now dont do this again or else I wont talk to you".

Uday made a cute face he apologised to Manyata holding his ears "I'm sorry Manyata I wont do it again, look I'm holding my ears now to forgive me please". Manyata started smiling and she hugged Uday, Manyata couldn't stay upset with Uday for too long she loved him a lot. Uday hugged Manyata and kissed her forehead "I love my princess very much no one can take your place" Manyata said "I love you too Uday!!!".

Just then Manveer friends came Arjun and Alishma "Love Birds we were finding you everywhere". Uday wasnt very happy "why do you guys always come on the wrong time?" "we came on wrong time hello it's time for lecture and Princi is doing rounds if the baldy collins comes you guys will get in trouble, now lets go to lecture then after we are going valentines shopping, now lets go" said Arjun and Alishma.

Manyata just remembered she has an Accounts mock test " OMG!!!! I have an Accounts Mock Tony is going to kill me, I have to go Uday see you at break" Manyata hugged Uday, Uday wished Manyata "lots of good luck my Princess will ace the test as usual straight A*" Manyata smiled happily "I hope so Uday Thanks for the good luck I need it bye" Uday said "Bye Manyata see you at break". Both Manveer went to their lectures both went same college but done different courses, Manyata done Business and Management, Uday done Engineering.

Manyata finished her Accounts Paper and was waiting for the bell to ring, just then Tony caught two people cheating in the exam, it was none other the bad boy in the class Samransh, who always caused trouble and he had secret crush on Manyata. Tony threw them both out of class.

After a few minutes the bell went Uday was waiting outside Manyata classroom he saw Samransh outside with one of his friends. Samransh and Uday hate each other very much Samransh had a huge crush on Manyata, she didnt like him in that way she loved Uday, ever since that day Samransh and Uday always have fights when it comes to Manyata or anything related to her. "Udayveer your blocking the corridor Manyata is not a baby she can come herself, so you and your gang stay away from our floor or else" Samransh was very angry it was petty thing he just hated Uday so he always fighted with him. " Samransh Manyata is my baby, my girlfriend if your forgetting me and Manyata are a couple, so I can wait for her anytime I want and this college is not your so dont act like it is, keep your comments to yourself use your little brain in doing some work, maybe then you wont get kicked out of lessons " replied Uday.

Samransh was very angry he grabbed Uday collar both Uday and Samransh started a fight, Manyata and Arjun stopped their fight "Uday leave him please dont fight you promised you wouldn't fight" said Manyata. Uday was very angry "it was him he was again talking rubbish he strated the fight". Tony the Accounts teacher came she gave warning to both Uday and Samransh and told them both to leave.

Now we see Manveer shopping for the valentines day party in Touchwood Shopping Centre, Manyata was tired of trying all the dresses on Uday didnt like any of them "Uday you dont like any of these we have to get back to college as well, so please hurry up and choose my dress, so then I can choose yours".

Uday chose Manyata a red dress "this is the last one promise" said Uday "it better be or else we are going" said Manyata. Manyata came outside wearing the dress "how is it?" Uday was mesmerized "you look beauitful this is perfect" said Uday. Manyata was really happy " Thank You, now we are done now my turn I will choose your clothes"

Manyata chose a black suit with a red tie for Uday "this is perfect you will look so handsome in this we will be colour coded too" Manyata said happily. Uday was very happy with Manyata choice now we see both Manveer back in college.

Two weeks later it was the Valentines day Party Uday and Manyata were both dancing to Tumhi Hi Ho from Aashqui 2. Both Manveer were very happy, they hugged each other at the end of the dance. They even won Mr and Mrs Valentine title they were the cutest couple of their college always together, both always were happy whenever they had disagreements they dealt with them straight away by communicating effectively. Communication is very important in every relationship.

At the end of the dance both Manveer hugging each other and talking "Uday I dont know why but I feel as some as someone is watching us" Uday looked around he couldnt see anyone" Manyata no one is here beside that Samransh he really needs to get a life, you relax no one is there" Uday hugged Manyata.

After a few mins the driver had come to collect Manyata and Udayveer and they both left in their respective cars, as soon as they got home it was world war 3. Komal and Brijraj questioned Manyata regarding Uday and in Uday's house Giriraj had decided to move out of Solihull and go to London forever. Uday told Giriraj he wont leave Solihull, he has college, his friends and Manyata he doesn't want to leave them. Trishna agrees with Giriraj she emotionally blackmails Uday and convinces him to go to London.

Manyata confessed to her parents about Uday Brijraj was furious he almost slapped Manyata but Komal stopped him, she explained to Brijraj Manyata is at this age where these things happen if we shout she will turn rebellious we need to explain to her nicely. Brijraj told Manyata he has fixed an Alliance for her in India and as soon as her studies our over she will be going there to marry, she will have to forget Uday.

Manyata shouted and said she would never marry in India let alone India she wouldnt marry anyone other than Udayveer, she loved him too much. Uday also loved Manyata but he had to listen to his parents.

The next day Uday told Manyata what his parents said to him that he will beleaving Solihull and college he will be going to London "Manyata I know this is a big decision but I want to say no matter where we live I still want to be with you, I will come and visit you and everything will be ok after 2 years we can get engaged then married"

Manyata didnt want Uday to go but she knew he had to go end of the day she couldnt seperate him from his parents "Uday I will miss you we will stay in contact" Manveer hugged each other. Few Months went by Uday kept visiting every week to see Manayata, everyone was fine.

One more month went by Uday parents had pressurised him to get engaged to the girl of their choice, Uday refused and left London. On the other hand Manyatas Mom was diagonised with Cancer, Manyata pefect world was falling apart, Brijraj had pressurised Manyata to forget about Uday and agree to the India Alliance.

Manyata had become really depressed and upset, she met Uday after a few weeks before she could tell him what happened at home Uday tells her his decision "Manyata I know we are too young only 18, our parents wont let us be together we can only be together if we elope, my parents have fixed my engagement it's in a few weeks then after Univeristy marriage, I have saved up enough we can get away from all this and live our own lives together, end of the day our parents have lived their life so why shoudl they rule our life."

Manyata was shocked hearing all this "Uday you are saying all this we should elope what the hell is wrong with you? cowards run away we are not cowards our love is true so why should we run away, I can't Uday I love you a lot but even before you I love my Mama I cant leave her when she needs me the most. Uday you always said running away is wrong we should take parents blessing for everything, if they love us they will come around maybe they will come around it will take time."

Uday disagreed with Manyata "I did think that but my parents have lost it they have planned everything I dont even have a say that's why I'm telling you all this, otherwise I would never say it".

Manyata was really upset she hugged Uday "I love you Uday a lot but I love my Mama more she has Cancer she needs me more, Dad is being so nasty to her, I'm the eldest of my siblings I have to set an example if I run away with you what kind of daughter am I, our parents gave birth to us grew us up, we are just going to leave them so we can live our own life, be selfish no I'm not selfish enough to do that. I'm sorry Uday I cant my parents were here before you I cant leave them, what kind of future will we have disappointing our families, no one can stay happy making their own parents upset" Manyata is in tears she was going to lose Uday the love of her life but it was for the best.

Uday was really upset and shocked "Manyata you didnt even tell me about Aunty's condition I would of came earlier if you did you alone handled everything" Manyata told Uday "I have to learn to handle things alone now Uday I'm old enough to handle everything". Uday told Manyata "dont wory Aunty will be fine we have advanced treatment here, she will get cured dont worry dont lose hope".

Both Manveer knew it was the end of their relationship but still they werent letting go of one another. Uday went back to London he tried to explain to his parents but they never listened infact they blackmailed him more and made things worse.

The week after Manveer met again for the last time to break their relationship, both wished each other happiness "Manyata I dont ever want to see anymore tears in your eyes and I'm sorry I couldnt do much for us, but I wish you get someome who is more better than me who will keep you happy, soon you will graduate and be an Accountant, it's my bad luck that I'm losing someone so special as you " Uday was really upset Manyata consoled Uday "I will marry whoever Mama says I will stay happy dont worry Uday you tried your best to keep us together, but somethings are just not meant to be, I wish you lots of happiness and no more tears ok you will get amazing life partner, just becuase I wont be in your life doesn't mean your life stops, life goes on I want you to do well graduate get an amazing job, your dream car and everything you want"

Both Manveer tried to console each other

Uday wiped Manyata tears "no more tears you good smiling not crying"

Manveer hugged each other last time and went their seperate ways

Four years late

Manyata was now 22 years old she has graduated and was working as an Accountant all these years she concentrated on her education and family, after Uday she never went into an relationship again. Brijraj was hell bent on getting her married off a good Alliance had come this time Brijraj emotionally blackmailed Komal to speak to Manyata. His theory worked Manyata had agreed to get married.

Preity came to talk to Manyata " Di, I think it time to let go of old memories all these years you had kept all of these things in the box, Di if you dont get rid of it you wont be able to move on"

Manyata knew Preity was right "yeah it time to let go when the truth is I had let go four years ago" A few tears fell out her eyes Preity couldnt see her sister cry she hugged her "I'm sorry Di please dont cry the sooner you get rid of all these things you will feel better"

Manyata nooded her head she went to the garden got some wood threw all Uday memories inside it the gifts, cards, valentines dress, and all photograpghs, messages, saved convesations that she had in her USB stick, she threw everything she was in tears but its best to cry for once and then never think about the issue again, she finally got the match and lite it and everything got burnt.

Komal felt very bad she came outside to console Manyata she told her it was all her fault if it wasnt for Komal illness maybe Manyata would of chosen Uday, but Manyata told her even if there was no illness she would never choose Uday over her parents. "Mama this isn't your fault please dont be upset for my family I can sacrifice 100 Udays, my parents and family comes first I love you guys more". Komal was very proud of Manyata"I'm so proud that you are my daughter, people say they should have sons but I'm glad I have a daughter like you what you do and have done no son could do". Brijraj had heard all the conversation he was very happy his daughter had that kind of thinking mentality where family comes first and everything else after.

Few weeks later Manyata was happily married to Armaan he was a lawyer.

Uday was also happily married to Shilpa.

Two year later we see Manyata and Armaan shopping in Asda for groceries and there little baby girl is in the trolley also, on the opposite side Uday and Shilpa were coming with their little boy. Both Manveer went past each other without talking to one another, Uday saw how happy Manyata was with Armaan and vice verca Manyata saw how happy Uday was with Shilpa.

Both Manveer live happily ever after with their respective partners.

The End

The moral of the story is life goes on even if you don't get the person you love, the truth is they weren't destined for you. You just have to be strong enough to face the truth ,although we say becuase of situations and certain people we couldn't get the person, but in reality they weren't meant for us.

I know I will get a lot of chappals for this because Manveer dont get together in the end, after a long time I wrote something on Manveer its sad, but what to do I loved the concept had it in mind for ages but didnt get a chance to write it.

Do like, comment and criticise also if you want

Thanks for reading😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey anam nice story pr end acha nai tha.Aur yr FF Story liko manveer plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Anam... Beautiful OS.

Even though i love manveer together i liked d message u want to give us through dis story.

i have read ur FF unwanted.its first time commenting on any of ur masterpiece.plz Anam write more.keep it up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all a big Thank you for writing this OS at such short notice...we discussed it just last night and you wrote it so fast...very brilliant di👏👏👏
ofcourse i loved it and like i told you everyone will like it 😃

it was sweet story di...i loved how Manyata chose her parents over her love...
its a nice message...every daughter should keep her parents first,😳 whom she has spent life time with..
and also nothing is permanent in life...and it doesn't go often the way we want it...in the end what matters is whether we are happy and truthful...
loved the ending di...😳
once again a huge hug for writing such a beautiful piece of work🤗
Thank you for PM😃
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hai, its a different story. Nice one. Thank you for writing an os.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is an amazing story and the moral is good. We should learn to let go of things and not become obsessed. We have to choose one thing over anotherin life. And to choose parents over a lover is the better choice because they care about you and love you more. Anyways enough of my blabbering.
Thanks for having this concept and presenting it in a wonderful way. Loved your writing. Also your fanfic unwanted. You are an amazing writer.
Best wishes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey anam jiji,
how are you?
woa it was such a pleasant surprise
the os was awesome
at first i felt it so perfect and so romantic
the way uday always stood by her side
and they stood against all the opposition
was just so great
i too at a point feel we should take
our parents decision and follow them
as they always love us and care for us
even if they married each other
they would still feel discontent
at a part as their parents was not with their decision
and even at then end they found love
thanks for the pm
hugss anni
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its a lovely os anam. Good to see u write again. Do write more na. I really loved ur concept. Its totally different.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh anam ur finally back after so many days
u donno how much I missed ur writings
loved it loads yar!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey!
awesome os dear
It's an amazing os, and the moral is good
i just loved the concept

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