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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 12 years ago

#971

Hi Kalyani,

I stumbled upon this story while going through the FF awards thread and the prologue intrigued me. I started reading yesterday and Voila! I am done with what you've written so far😛

I feel sad that I couldn't read the parts you've removed and while I would love to read them, I respect your decision as it is your story :)

The story is extremely well written but for me the aspect which makes it one of the best ones I have read is the fact that it is sort of close to reality.

I have read my fair share of the dream come true fairy tale stories and I love them all for their sweet ness and brilliance but, its refreshing to read something thats sort of practical.

On the one hand I am sad that I missed so many parts, as in, am so late in reading, and on the other, i m happy because I know I am so impatient for updates😆

I am already sort of restless and eager to read the rest of the story...On God! Who am i kidding? I wannna read it all NOW! NOW! NOW!😳

Hope to be able to read further soon :)

Thanks for spending time to share such a beautiful story with us.

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#972

When is the update due...it's been a week already

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rajvta

@rajvta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#973

Apologies for late comments.

I see growth in khushi, she is developing so much understandig in handling Arnav's anger. That was a beautifully written scene on how they make up.

Arnav dude, you really need to control your anger and irrational jealousy. He is turning out to be a man of extremes - too much love, too much understanding and then veering to these extreme flareups and meanness - but then irrational anger is one emotion that will always defines who he is. Hopefully Khushi will be continue to handle him similarly.

Dadi, no words to describe her manipulations, still cannot help but being in awe of her, she is one smart villian, playing all her family like puppets on a string. cant nderstand why Ajit still cant stand up to her.

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socrazy

@socrazy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#974

another grt update. Glad she is going to tell A about his grandmothers visit.

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

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Posted: 12 years ago

#975

Hi Kalyani,

Unable to read after chapter 77, am dying to read further. Don't know if my pleading wud matter...have mercy pleeeaaassseee

Regds
Sarjac

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twinki

@twinki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#976

Hey kalyani read ur story until chapter 78 in one go
I really like ur story
I want to read it further is there any way that I can read ur ff
I love this story
Do reply
Regards
Twinki