MJHT Season 2..Mayur SS 2/4... last chapter.. - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: shimu1

Plz Do cont next part soon
I m loving it



i wil try n update soon
thanks alot



thanku




Originally posted by: tasnim.

OMG APIII
u started MJHT season2 ki Mayur ki new story
wow Api- i m really very happy
Thank you so much API
i loved it
Please API jaldi update karo



yes i did yes i did
im lad ur happy abt it
will try n cont soon
thanksa lot

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: drfizaahmed




lol.. mjhy se itna tension kyun lati ho bhai... why u get so scared...😆


Jo log dil ka karib hta h inki bt zada effect karti hna islya..apko koi bt buri na lg jai ya ap mujhe attention na do to mujhe tension ho jti h...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for amzing respones.. have rplyd to u all


Chapter: 2

NUPur..

Me who use to think can't live 3 mins without him... lived 3 long years without him. Things have not been easy without him, I lost my support .. he is my guardian from all the troubles, from all my stupid fears and all the talks tht evry body around me do..

I never told him , and maybe his idea of no video call helped it so much... one look at me and he would have know tht wht are things troubling me... Tht I m not happy and next moment I know he would have done everything to either make me cum to him or to left everything there and cum back.. but I donot want to be a hurdle in his success, his ambitious.. The dreams he has always weaved... I donot want him to regret tht love took away his chances of growth ..our sudden wedding made him to wht he doesn't want to... he has always done wht had made me happy, or was required for the best of us ... today whn he wish to do for himself I donot want him to stop... plus I want him to flourish us to flourish... He n maa has struuglled so much in his life.. I want peace now for him..

But people here had made things so worse for me... my dad always taunting me tht mayank has left u... he will never return... the moment he said he is staying one year more.. was the moment I completely broke down... I was scared so much... I was frighten ... I cant think of not having mayank beside me...

Bauji never trusted mayank, sumwhere I felt tht in his misery my father get peace.. and life has also provided him evry thing to taunt on Mayank.. and his one year extension make him say the worse that I couldn't hold myself...

Bauji: kya hua .. woh tu anay wala tha.. nhi aya nah... mein ny khaha tha woh khabi nhi aay ga... chor diya hai us ny... woh tha hi asa.. larkiyana bhagany wala ...bara khata tha apni zemdari khud uthay ga... bhaghora...

Nupur: bus bauji.. mjhy samjh nhi ata jab ap ko mera itna sa bhi kayal nhi hai tu ap mjh se baat hi kyun kertay hain... mein yaha bui se milny aai thi...

Bauji: mjhy tera kayal na hota tu yeah nah khata...

Nupur: yeah sab ap apny apko bara sambit kerny ko kha rahy hain aur kuch nhi... agar apko mera kayal hota tu mjhy se pyar se baat kertay... mjhy tasli dayty .. kahty k us ny thik kiya... Is mein best hai humaray future k liyan... na k meray liyan aur muskil bharaty... ab ap bhi dekhaiy ga... jab woh waps aay ga tu... ap sab dekhy ga... bus sirf ek saal ki baat hai.. ap sab ko jitna bolna hai bolain... ek saal baa dap sab ki shaklein dekhny k intezar hai mjhy... jab woh wapas aay ga,..

The day when I cried so much ...I was missing him so much.. his scolding of why I talked to bauji like this.. he is rite at his place n bla bla.. his strong hold his head on my head.. but the next day I received a beautiful bouquet... with a pouting teddy... and I was surprised .. and I laughed... Mayank Sharma doing so cheesy things waoo.. he going out of his comfort zone for me has always so overwhelmed me and with tht it had a letter...

" aj k din 2 saal pehly mein ny tum ko apna pehla job letter diya tha... ek aur day raha hoon... aur is baar us ko aram se read kerna.. jis date ko yeah contract khatam horaha hai us k dosray din tum mjhy apny pass pao gi... ek bhi din aur yaha nhi guzara goo.. i promise.. chahy mjhy duniya ki kitni hi bari amount offer hojay... kyun k is se zayda mein bhi yaha nhi rah sakta... Ab aur mjhy se bhi nhi hoga..

Happy Valentine's day Mrs Sharma... I love you...n I will always just love you.. meri biwi k kayal rekha kero ..lagta hai aj kal loog us ko bht tng ker rahy hain.. any do mjhy waps sab ko dekh log ga... Sab ko moo band ker do ..

Apka

Sadu"

I touched the card to my heart and let my tears flow down from my eyes.. but with a smile gracing my lips... I cant even think of doubting him it just I wnt to show and answer evry one tht my love there our love is right... the person siting miles away can guess wht is troubling me ...loves me tht much...nothing can be more amzing than tht... I know it must be troubling him more... yet he has this amzing way of making me smile even in our misery...

Shilpa: aray yeah kya hua... Kya kiya is naliaq ny ab ... phir rolaya meri beti ko..

And with tht I hugged mom.. I know he did this.. asking maa to get a transfer and shift to Delhi with me... he is all alone there yet has giving me mom..with her I can share my pain and together we can miss you so much... So mom lives with me from past an year now...

Nupur: nhi woh sadu ko lagta hai waha achy se training mil rahi hai... pata kerna peray ga ki sk sath rah raha hai.. dekho tu kitna romantic hogaya hai... she said wiping her tears and than opening the job letter..

Where he has highlighted the end of the contract date... she can hear her heart start counting days...

Samrat and gunjan are given all the freedom.. I just at times laughed at my father ..wao .. mayank was never given a chance and samrat who has all the reason not to trust has given a full flash not only chance but all he wants... why so unfair to him.. just because mayank obey his wish and respect him so much... its not tht I am not happy that gunjan has her love with her... cause I know she will never be able to fight for herself for her love... but than atleast bauji can be little nice with us too.. anyways the wait is almost over... 2morow I m going back to Mumbai for evry.. and he will be there too.. the thought is giving me Goosebumps I just donot know wht I will do when I will see him, feel him..

It sumthing I have been waiting since three years...evry morning I wake up and feel disappointment the only thought tht made me feel a bit oky is tht u will be cuming back soon.. and when this soon has just arrived ...

Shilpa: uffu akelay akelay kyun muskura rahi ho.. kayalo mein kaun sa romance chal raha hai hm..

Nupur: maaa...

Shilpa: kya maa... ab tu kayalo se bahar reality mein plan kero...

Nupur: ab k beta aay tu phr woh bhi kerlain ga...

Shilpa: acha.. aur kya kya keray ga

Nupur: per ap mjhy batao k ap meray sath kyun nhi chal rahy ho...

Shilpa: tu mein ajao gi na ek din baad ...

Nupur: tu abhi mein kya masla hai

Shilpa: mera beta kahay gay aay hay agai kabab mein hadi... mjhy pata hai us k iraday naik nhi hongay...

Nupur: maa.. un k khataranak irado k ap se kya taluq hai..

Shilpa: lo bhi.. mama k woh America se araha hai ..per sansakri hai.. ap k UN k irday poray kasay hongy aker mein hongi tu

Nupur: maa ap asa kyun bolty ho...

Shilpa: uffu... dekho mera bacha.. tum dono saalo baad mil rahy ho

Nupur: ap bhi ...

Shilpa: chup.. yeah waqt tum dono k hai... samjhi.. ksis k bhi nhi.. ek dosray se baat kero.. apna akelay pan share kero... samjhi... pata hai na woh kitna bara sadu hai.. ksi se baat nhi kerta.. per tum tu janti ho na niklawana us se.. hum sab ass pass hongay tu tum dono ko khabi bhi waqt nhi milay ga ek sath.. aur mein dosray hi din ajao gi... koi fikar kerny ki zaroorat nhi hai... samjhi...

Edited by drfizaahmed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Beautiful update. Plz continue soon. Plz plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Very nice update...u described their emotions. .feeling very well...

U know api i just hate this "first expressions is the last expressions" Thing ..matlb ap kese ko b ek bar me nhi jan skta..bhauji na mayank ko jin cirumstansces me dekho uno na oski galat imgine bna li ek bar b osa chance nhi diya apni bt kahna ka n samrat sa jis halat me unki mulakat hui osper itna turst kar liya..I just hate this thing but 90% reality me b yhi hta h... . Now I m eagerly waiting for seeing bauji reaction when mayank comeback...uno na hamesha mayur ko bura kaha but mayank na kbi nhi kaha kuch b n I know wo ab b kuch nhi kaha ga jisa bauji ko bura lga...

N shilpa aunty to best mom h ..she understand their childrens so well..ek din bd a rhi h q ka una pta h Mayur ka yeh wakt sirf un dono ka h..sirf ek dosra ka sath..seriously love u shilpa aunty..
Api plzz update soon ..ab to humse b intezar nhi ho rha dono ko bas mila do jaldi sa..
Continue soon.
.love u..tc
Edited by rimshazeb - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Amazing update...
This is exactly the same that I felt...
Samrat and gunjan are given all the freedom.. I just at times laughed at my father ..wao .. mayank was never given a chance and samrat who has all the reason not to trust has given a full flash not only chance but all he wants... why so unfair to him..
I so wished k Mayank bauji ko dekhaye that he is the best... And I know this will happen in ur story... luving ur story alot ❤️ Waiting for the next part... continue soon
And one more thing I just luv ur writing style 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Fiza
Such a beautiful update...😊
I had always loved the way of ur writing...😃
wished they could have shown this track rather than the accident one...
Gauri
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvArTi4ever


Amazing update...

This is exactlythe same that I felt...
<font color="#990099" size="3" face="Georgia">Samrat and gunjan are given all the freedom.. I just at times laughed at my father ..wao .. mayank was never given a chance and samrat who has all the reason not to trust has given a full flash not only chance but all he wants... why so unfair to him.. </font>
<font size="2">I so wished k Mayank bauji ko dekhaye that he is the best... And I know this will happen in ur story... luvingur story alot ❤️Waiting for the next part... continue soon</font>
<font size="2">Andone more thing I just luv ur writing style 😳</font>
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Totally agree with u kiran..islya kise ko b ek bar me judge nhi karna chahiya ..
Our rhi bt scene k to CV na to nhi k wish pori humari. .per humari janu api hna ..n yes she is best writer
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome updt fiza
this is what i want to see in mayur story after their marriage ..understanding & trust for each other
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update.
Thanks for the pm dear.

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