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As expected...this was coming...as inmy yest post..I had said..he just wanna scare aastha...annoy her intimidate er...but just as he hadnt expected the moon feelings...so had he hadnt expected the much more magnetic pull and manly feelings sharing the room with her...so the seducer becomes the seduced...a fight starts between the man shlok...andand the mr..shlok agnihotri...the past and the present colliding..the fight between the man who is attracted towards astha and the man hecwas before he met astha...so
Lets begin with room entry...astha very uncomfy..shlok watching her like a hawk..she's feeling an unknown sensation...a fear creeping somewhere...she's both avoiding andand hating his intense gaze trying to read whats in them...her one mind apprehensive..they say girls sixth sense...and other mind still not accepting fear and heart..feeling safe...just watch Astha her expressions.l
She cant beleive that she can be attracted to this man or she sees the same heat in his eyes..she doesnt trust him and herself ahdvwants to run away...basically from her growing awareness of him...shlok..hes confused...thiscis what he wanted...to scare her..annoy her...but hes cheated by himself...he was enjoying her discomfort till he heard her her papa and then a sudden relaxation on her face..telling no she's fine and safe...dont worry papa...it strikes...hes howcome she be safe with him..hes confused as to one moment she was scared and the other she's putting up a brave face relaxing her parents...he wants to intimidate her and not feel her safe...she has to be afraid...
Haha and soon the brave face goes as she again watches him intentionally...the uncomfortable silence..is wearing off on them..comes the next part now...to show his concern he tries to open the door and declares its not opening...astha is fired..shevalready has strange feelings which she's unable to comprehend...and the jammed door...she bangs and shout. ?.she is raging now with a fear of awareness...with a fear of those intense and strange bold glances thrown at her by shlok...her warning antennae in motion...she's beating, hitting shouting...strange..shlok is dumbly watching..hes confused of his own unexpected reactions...this was not what he tht he woukd behave like..getting a grip on his strange conflicting feelings and unwanted reactions...he gets back into the character...lights gone..and call connection gone..but notice this time therevis no smirk on his face or eyes...its plain confusion and blankness...as to y he isnt feeling the way he wanted...seeing asthabcrying...seeing fear in her eyes...yes this was wat he wanted but hell no..he isnt liking it one bit..the way her eyes pleading...the panic..the lines she's too scared of dark...its changing him..hes now unable to connect to his plan...but how can he give up...he cant care facade comes up...he cant take anymore of her crying and that..shhh...moment. ..like a child astha slows down her hysterics..doting her eyes on him with so much trust as if beleiving he would save her again..that she coukd never expect anything to happen to her with him along...
Huh..the candle...liggt in the dark..hes already not able to face her hor himself for his gameplan...seeing so much trust in her eyes...and then he sees her...the women aastha...the innocent and pure beauty...the beauty which is luring him to no extent...the beauty with which the present shlok entrapped in..the real shlok who didnt expect to be affected by any girl...cant take is eyes of her and for first time realises that astha too is responding as a women to him unknowingly. ? ?.hell...he cant take his eyes off the beauty...then realises his situation..and hers and gives her that sari...she's shocked again atbhis truthfulness. ? And accepts the sari..here shlok is in debating mode...her nearness is making him mad...very uncomfortable. ? He wanted her to be uncomfy..but he sees she's so innocent and feeling so safe with him...she isnt fearing himand bamm astha comes in looking like an angel in that saree...she's epitome of beauty and hes smitten completely..she's feeling strange herself..so much smitten and so much want...she made him feel that he was lonely soulindeed...that he could feel as if she was pure soul and dare he dream if she could be his...sge was like a opeace a balm to his lonely soul...how he wanted to feel her that even the burning wax couldnt make him feel the burn...and then sge runs to help him...thats it...its breaking him making him feel ..
His lonely heart is daring to dream...her breath was working like oxygen for him...reviving of life in him ...but the bangles. ? They make a lil sound...the trance broken.the demon rared...the witch appears making everything dark snd invisible. ? Cursing him..
Mocking him for daring...to dream, want, laughing at him and bang...he loses it...its not astha hes lashing at..its the witch whise stopping himfrom moving on...whose killing his soul again..he wants to feel, break free..but she isnt letting him...he wants to punish the witch..hurt her the wau she's hurting him...wants her to go away and leave him alone...hurts astha in process...this is furst time hes speaking his heart his fear his want...his pain...he thinks hes hurting the witch...and then leaves her rudely..hes uncaringvraging demon...astha...she picks up the broken peices just as she will pick up the peices of his life...put it together...she says they r broken u cant mend them...similar will be her situation...he will set her free the way he broke the window since door not opening...and push her out...but ..then am sure he will be the one mending and thand replace the broken bangles with newone..there by replacing old feelings with newone ajd accepting astha in his life..yupp..thts it..andvthisvgirl boy thingbis big facade masks he wears to hide his vulnerability and his real feelings..he hates it when astha says she doesn't even want to see his shadow..it hurts his souk to no end...shlok today showed that hes too dark...cold...lonely...and a very deeply volatile chracter...u cant predict what hes gonna do coz he himself doesnt no it...astha is his mirror...
Note..but I nowhere buy this abuse...astha as a female shld stand-up against this violence...and shoukd give it back...this is pure physical harassment...shlok has to be punishes...this 7s resorting to physical abuse...i abhorr itt in a big away...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is maarz ko mian kaise sahoon😆
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Originally posted by: Heavens_Kiss


Is maarz ko mian kaise sahoon😆

darde dil darde jigar dil mein jagaya aapne 😃
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She needs to slap him like madhu did to rk
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Originally posted by: khanrocks

She needs to slap him like madhu did to rk

yupp but she isnt doing that..its a shame...
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Nice post⭐️...

As expected...this was coming...as in my yest post..I had said..he just wanna scare aastha...annoy her intimidate er...but just as he hadnt expected the moon feelings...so had he hadnt expected the much more magnetic pull and manly feelings sharing the room with her...so the seducer becomes the seduced

Can't say i didn't love that😉😆😆



...a fight starts between the man shlok...andand the mr..shlok agnihotri...the past and the present colliding..the fight between the man who is attracted towards astha and the man hecwas before he met astha...

In all this poor astha got manhandled but i know it will take him eons to get over his past, so we have to bear with it😔



so
Lets begin with room entry...astha very uncomfy..shlok watching her like a hawk..she's feeling an unknown sensation...a fear creeping somewhere...she's both avoiding andand hating his intense gaze trying to read whats in them...her one mind apprehensive..they say girls sixth sense...and other mind still not accepting fear and heart..feeling safe...just watch Astha her expressions.l
She cant beleive that she can be attracted to this man or she sees the same heat in his eyes..she doesnt trust him and herself ahdvwants to run away...basically from her growing awareness of him

Of course, his eyes were burning holes in her, no wonder her torn clothes were causing her discomfort but then she changed into sari which made the situation more intense, i am begining to believe shlok wanted to see her in saree because that frock was coverng lot more than that sari


...shlok..hes confused...thiscis what he wanted...to scare her..annoy her...but hes cheated by himself...he was enjoying her discomfort till he heard her her papa and then a sudden relaxation on her face..telling no she's fine and safe...dont worry papa...it strikes...hes howcome she be safe with him..hes confused as to one moment she was scared and the other she's putting up a brave face relaxing her parents...he wants to intimidate her and not feel her safe...she has to be afraid...


you are right. shlok is slowly realizing what a caring daughter she is and a good human being which goes against his personal experience.

Haha and soon the brave face goes as she again watches him intentionally...the uncomfortable silence..is wearing off on them..comes the next part now...to show his concern he tries to open the door and declares its not opening...astha is fired..shevalready has strange feelings which she's unable to comprehend...and the jammed door...she bangs and shout. ?.she is raging now with a fear of awareness...with a fear of those intense and strange bold glances thrown at her by shlok...her warning antennae in motion...she's beating, hitting shouting...strange..shlok is dumbly watching..hes confused of his own unexpected reactions...this was not what he tht he woukd behave like..getting a grip on his strange conflicting feelings and unwanted reactions...he gets back into the character...lights gone..and call connection gone..but notice this time therevis no smirk on his face or eyes...its plain confusion and blankness...as to y he isnt feeling the way he wanted...seeing asthabcrying...seeing fear in her eyes...yes this was wat he wanted but hell no..he isnt liking it one bit..the way her eyes pleading...the panic..the lines she's too scared of dark...its changing him..hes now unable to connect to his plan...but how can he give up...he cant care facade comes up...he cant take anymore of her crying and that..shhh...moment. ..like a child astha slows down her hysterics..doting her eyes on him with so much trust as if beleiving he would save her again..that she coukd never expect anything to happen to her with him along...
Huh..the candle...liggt in the dark..hes already not able to face her hor himself for his gameplan...seeing so much trust in her eyes...and then he sees her...the women aastha...the innocent and pure beauty...the beauty which is luring him to no extent...the beauty with which the present shlok entrapped in..the real shlok who didnt expect to be affected by any girl...cant take is eyes of her and for first time realises that astha too is responding as a women to him unknowingly. ? ?.hell...he cant take his eyes off the beauty...then realises his situation..and hers and gives her that sari...she's shocked again atbhis truthfulness. ? And accepts the sari..here shlok is in debating mode...her nearness is making him mad...very uncomfortable. ? He wanted her to be uncomfy..but he sees she's so innocent and feeling so safe with him...she isnt fearing himand bamm astha comes in looking like an angel in that saree...she's epitome of beauty and hes smitten completely..she's feeling strange herself..so much smitten and so much want...she made him feel that he was lonely soulindeed...that he could feel as if she was pure soul and dare he dream if she could be his...sge was like a opeace a balm to his lonely soul...how he wanted to feel her that even the burning wax couldnt make him feel the burn...and then sge runs to help him...thats it...its breaking him making him feel ..
His lonely heart is daring to dream...her breath was working like oxygen for him...reviving of life in him

I think he simply lost control. if he hadn't started shouting. he might have done something inappropriate😳

...but the bangles. ? They make a lil sound...the trance broken.the demon rared...the witch appears making everything dark snd invisible. ? Cursing him..
Mocking him for daring...to dream, want, laughing at him and bang...he loses it...its not astha hes lashing at..its the witch whise stopping himfrom moving on...whose killing his soul again..he wants to feel, break free..but she isnt letting him...he wants to punish the witch..hurt her the wau she's hurting him...wants her to go away and leave him alone...hurts astha in process...this is furst time hes speaking his heart his fear his want...his pain...he thinks hes hurting the witch...and then leaves her rudely..hes uncaringvraging demon...astha...she picks up the broken peices just as she will pick up the peices of his life...put it together...she says they r broken u cant mend them...similar will be her situation...he will set her free the way he broke the window since door not opening...and push her out...but ..then am sure he will be the one mending and thand replace the broken bangles with newone..there by replacing old feelings with newone ajd accepting astha in his life..yupp..thts it..andvthisvgirl boy thingbis big facade masks he wears to hide his vulnerability and his real feelings..he hates it when astha says she doesn't even want to see his shadow..it hurts his souk to no end...shlok today showed that hes too dark...cold...lonely...and a very deeply volatile chracter...u cant predict what hes gonna do coz he himself doesnt no it...astha is his mirror...

so true, he likes her unintentionally... somewhere deep inside his primitive core there are some volatile emotions which he feels for her and that very part which likes her cannot take her rejection as well.

Note..but I nowhere buy this abuse...astha as a female shld stand-up against this violence...and shoukd give it back...this is pure physical harassment...shlok has to be punishes...this 7s resorting to physical abuse...i abhorr itt in a big away...

i agree

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Originally posted by: khanrocks

She needs to slap him like madhu did to rk

though I loved rk but I never supported what he did and ibwas very happy when madhu came in revenge mode...loving a fiction doesnt me we support it in real
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Thanx a lot razia...I hope I did well with analysing ashlok...but it doesnt stop my gutter mind at all..from feeling shloks feeling...and about that saree...well I will soon run with ny gutter thts in my gutter thread..lol

Originally posted by: Razia_sultana



<font color="#0000cc">Nice post⭐️...</font>

As expected...this was coming...as in my yest post..I had said..he just wanna scare aastha...annoy her intimidate er...but just as he hadnt expected the moon feelings...so had he hadnt expected the much more magnetic pull and manly feelings sharing the room with her...so <font color="#ff0000">the seducer becomes the seduced </font>

<font color="#0000cc">Can't say i didn't love that</font>😉😆😆



...a fight starts between the man shlok...andand the mr..shlok agnihotri...the past and the present colliding..the fight between the man who is attracted towards astha and the man hecwas before he met astha...

<font color="#0000cc">In all this poor astha got manhandledbut i know it will take him eons to get over his past, so we have to bear with it😔</font>



so
Lets begin with room entry...astha very uncomfy..shlok watching her like a hawk..she's feeling an unknown sensation...a fear creeping somewhere...she's both avoiding andand hating his intense gaze trying to read whats in them...her one mind apprehensive..they say girls sixth sense...and other mind still not accepting fear and heart..feeling safe...just watch Astha her expressions.l
She cant beleive that she can be attracted to this man or she sees the same heat in his eyes..she doesnt trust him and herself ahdvwants to run away...basically from her growing awareness of him

<font color="#0000cc">Of course, his eyes were burning holes in her, no wonder her torn clothes were causing her discomfort but then she changed into sari which made the situation more intense, i am begining to believe shlok wanted to see her in saree because that frock was coverng lot more than that sari</font>


...shlok..hes confused...thiscis what he wanted...to scare her..annoy her...but hes cheated by himself...he was enjoying her discomfort till he heard her her papa and then a sudden relaxation on her face..telling no she's fine and safe...dont worry papa...it strikes...hes howcome she be safe with him..hes confused as to one moment she was scared and the other she's putting up a brave face relaxing her parents...he wants to intimidate her and not feel her safe...she has to be afraid...


<font color="#0000cc">you are right. shlok is slowly realizing what a caring daughter she is and a good human being which goes against his personal experience.</font>

Haha and soon the brave face goes as she again watches him intentionally...the uncomfortable silence..is wearing off on them..comes the next part now...to show his concern he tries to open the door and declares its not opening...astha is fired..shevalready has strange feelings which she's unable to comprehend...and the jammed door...she bangs and shout. ?.she is raging now with a fear of awareness...with a fear of those intense and strange bold glances thrown at her by shlok...her warning antennae in motion...she's beating, hitting shouting...strange..shlok is dumbly watching..hes confused of his own unexpected reactions...this was not what he tht he woukd behave like..getting a grip on his strange conflicting feelings and unwanted reactions...he gets back into the character...lights gone..and call connection gone..but notice this time therevis no smirk on his face or eyes...its plain confusion and blankness...as to y he isnt feeling the way he wanted...seeing asthabcrying...seeing fear in her eyes...yes this was wat he wanted but hell no..he isnt liking it one bit..the way her eyes pleading...the panic..the lines she's too scared of dark...its changing him..hes now unable to connect to his plan...but how can he give up...he cant care facade comes up...he cant take anymore of her crying and that..shhh...moment. ..like a child astha slows down her hysterics..doting her eyes on him with so much trust as if beleiving he would save her again..that she coukd never expect anything to happen to her with him along...
Huh..the candle...liggt in the dark..hes already not able to face her hor himself for his gameplan...seeing so much trust in her eyes...and then he sees her...the women aastha...the innocent and pure beauty...the beauty which is luring him to no extent...the beauty with which the present shlok entrapped in..the real shlok who didnt expect to be affected by any girl...cant take is eyes of her and for first time realises that astha too is responding as a women to him unknowingly. ? ?.hell...he cant take his eyes off the beauty...then realises his situation..and hers and gives her that sari...she's shocked again atbhis truthfulness. ? And accepts the sari..here shlok is in debating mode...her nearness is making him mad...very uncomfortable. ? He wanted her to be uncomfy..but he sees she's so innocent and feeling so safe with him...she isnt fearing himand bamm astha comes in looking like an angel in that saree...she's epitome of beauty and hes smitten completely..she's feeling strange herself..so much smitten and so much want...she made him feel that he was lonely soulindeed...that he could feel as if she was pure soul and dare he dream if she could be his...sge was like a opeace a balm to his lonely soul...how he wanted to feel her that even the burning wax couldnt make him feel the burn...and then sge runs to help him...thats it...its breaking him making him feel ..
His lonely heart is daring to dream...her breath was working like oxygen for him...reviving of life in him

<font color="#0000cc">I think he simply lost control. if he hadn't started shouting. he might have done something inappropriate😳</font>

...but the bangles. ? They make a lil sound...the trance broken.the demon rared...the witch appears making everything dark snd invisible. ? Cursing him..
Mocking him for daring...to dream, want, laughing at him and bang...he loses it...its not astha hes lashing at..its the witch whise stopping himfrom moving on...whose killing his soul again..he wants to feel, break free..but she isnt letting him...he wants to punish the witch..hurt her the wau she's hurting him...wants her to go away and leave him alone...hurts astha in process...this is furst time hes speaking his heart his fear his want...his pain...he thinks hes hurting the witch...and then leaves her rudely..hes uncaringvraging demon...astha...she picks up the broken peices just as she will pick up the peices of his life...put it together...she says they r broken u cant mend them...similar will be her situation...he will set her free the way he broke the window since door not opening...and push her out...but ..then am sure he will be the one mending and thand replace the broken bangles with newone..there by replacing old feelings with newone ajd accepting astha in his life..yupp..thts it..andvthisvgirl boy thingbis big facade masks he wears to hide his vulnerability and his real feelings..he hates it when astha says she doesn't even want to see his shadow..it hurts his souk to no end...shlok today showed that hes too dark...cold...lonely...and a very deeply volatile chracter...u cant predict what hes gonna do coz he himself doesnt no it...astha is his mirror...

<font color="#0000cc">so true, he likes her unintentionally... somewhere deep inside his primitive core there are some volatile emotions which he feels for her and that very part which likes her cannot take her rejection as well.</font>
<font color="#0000cc">
</font>Note..but I nowhere buy this abuse...astha as a female shld stand-up against this violence...and shoukd give it back...this is pure physical harassment...shlok has to be punishes...this 7s resorting to physical abuse...i abhorr itt in a big away...

<font color="#0000cc">i agree</font>

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You know Ana I can go on and on and on and say what SHlok did today was deplorable..but it is not going to change the situation right? I think what is more important is how they approach it from here and how the character progresses from this violent man to a man of love😳
Edited by Heavens_Kiss - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heavens_Kiss


You know Ana I can go on and on and on and say what SHlok did today was deplorable..but it is not going to change the situation right? I think what is more important is how they approach it from here and how the character progresses from this vioent man to a man of love😳

right ani...and I think cvz of this show have planned all..they have a proper script at hand...I feel they have generally not left left any reasoning out...I am loving this shlok...but he his actions remind me a lot of rk...I cried for rk..
Though he was bad and I think I am feeling for shlok as well...cvz here have surelydone their homework and they surely will cover up well

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