Love or Attraction...A Taarey ff...( chapter 4 up page 41 ) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: --Suhani--

Amazing concept :D
Waiting to read it!!!
Continue soon :D

thanks dii..😊
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Originally posted by: premlata

interesting and lovely concept

cs awesome ...update soon ...

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Originally posted by: priyal_TaaRey

Amazing concept
continue soon 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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weelll its superb n damn intrestin :)
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Hollaa guys..!! remember me or not..haww mujhe itni jaldi bhul gayee..han..?? chalo koi baat ye dukh bhi has has ke sahenge vo kehte hain na.."jitne bhi tu kar le sitam has-has ke sahenge ham ...ye pyaar na hoga kam sanam teri kasam" hahaha😆 bhot hasi nahi aa rahi na..i know bad joke..i am very bad at cracking jokes..to kaam nahi chala sakte kya..?? han han update pado meri bakwas nahi lol..😆..

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In London ...

In a big room a girl was trying someone's number but the person was cutting her calls constantly..( yes the girl is taani and the person is shivam..)

Taani's pov: why the hell is shivam cutting my call..?? he very well knows i can't tolerate ignorance from anybody and specially from my friends and he's my boyfriend still..ugh..my head pains like hell if i see anybody ignoring me..what should i do..?? it's already night maybe he slept that's why cutting my calls but he informs when he sleep and usually he sleeps late then howcome today so early( its 8pm there but i am sorry i don't know the time difference so will write randon timings..)..?? taani leave it you can talk to him tomorrow also..ya but..chal it's ok..sleep now..goodnight..with this she sleeps without even noticing that her cell needs charging..within next minute it got switched off...

In India

Here in st.louis college boys locker room a boy was trying his sister's cell but it was switched off..he was pacing around the locker room trying to call again and again as if measuring the length of the locker room..just then a handsome hunk entered the locker room and curved his brows looking his best friend so worried and trying to call someone very important..(yes the guy calling is swayam and rey just entered the locker room)




Rey: swayam whatsup dude kise call kar raha hai..??

Swayam: rey thankgod tu aagaya..dekh na yaar taani ka cell switched off aa raha hai..

Rey: taani..?? kon taani..??

Swayam: arre meri baby sister..

Rey: what..baby sister..vo to teri mom ke pass ghar par hogi na..toys ke sath khel rahi hogi..

Swayam: what..toys..oye chup kar..me taani matlab meri 20 years ki behen jo ki London me rehti hai uski baat kar raha hun..

Rey: what to use baby sister kyun bula raha hai..simply call her taani na..

Swayam: arre vo chod yaar dekh na uska cell switched off aa raha hai..me kya karu meri usse 3 months se baat nahi hui pata nahi kesi hogi..kuch khati hogi ya nahi..

Rey was a bit shocked by swayam's reaction and possessiveness about his sis..

Rey: arre to London jaake usse milke aa na..

Swayam thought a lil and then suddenly hugged rey ..rey was taken aback with his reaction..

Swayam: thankyou rey thankyou so much..itna acha idea tujhse hi expect kar sakta tha..

Rey: yaa yaa..your welcome..

Just then our boys team entered locker room and saw reyam hugging and were looking at them suspect fully ..bharat said: abbe bhai log mujhe in dono pe shak horela hai..

Nilesh: tu sahi keh raha hai dude..when swayam saw them he broke the hug with rey and proceeded towards the boys for hi5 but they all stepped back..and Vicky said: durr reh swayam..hum sab tumhare jaise nahi hain..

Swayam: kya..?? tum log kese nahi ho..??

Rey: exactly kese nahi ho..??

Bharat: abbe vahi jo ladke ladko ko pasand kare..

Reyam: what ?? shut up guys..

The boys talked for a while but swayam went and booked his tickets to London..

He left for London in an hour only after informing Sharon..

In the airport..swayad passed all the verifications and was sitting in the flight..and was thinking..taani i am coming to meet you..i hope you are fine..the flight took off and he reacher London in some hours..( when swayam reached it was night in India and day in London)he again passed all the verifications and took a taxi and headed towards taani's house..

Here in a big mansion a beautiful girl was sleeping when sunrays were disturbing her up by its light..some strands of hair were on her face..making her look like an angel..pissed of with the sunrays she woke up..and silently prayed to her krishnaji just then her servant knocked on the door..and she said come in..servant handed her the landline and said its her best friend's phone..she nodded and the servant left..

Taani: hello..

Piya: taani sun voh actually..

Taani: arre piya kya hua saans to le..

Piya: time nahi hai..you be in college in next 30 minutes fast..

Taani: but hua kya..??

Piya: tu aa na me batati hun..vo actually shivam..

Taani: stop..i am coming..30 me nahi 20 me..bye see you in 30 minutes..

Piya: ya ok..fast..

Taani got freshed and left for college without having breakfast..and informed kaka that she's going for college..


taani's dress..

As soon as taani left after 5 minutes swayam came home..rang the bell..servant opened the door and was happy seeing swayam there..

Servant: swayam baba..aap yahan achanak..

Swayam: ji kaka..vo taani se milna tha..kahan hai vo..??

Kaka: vo to abhi college ke liye nikal gayi..aap vahin kyun nahi chale jaate agar kuch zaroori hai to..

Swayam: nahi kaka..me college jaata hun..kuch theek nahi lag raha..aap ye saman(luggage) rakhiye me jaata hun or taani ko lekar aata hun..

Kaka: ji swayam baba..

With this swayam left taking car keys of another car with him..

Here when taani entered college she saw piya pacing around..she ran to her and asked kya hua piya why ypu called me here..??

Piya: tu woh chod go to the abandon class room now..rush there..

Taani: arre but..

Piya: tu jaa bas..mujhe vp sir ne bulaya hai..i was waiting for you..rush there..me jaake aati hun..

Taani: ok fine..jaati hun..

Here taani started running towards the abandoned class room..and swayam reached college..as soon as taani reached the door of abandoned class room she got the biggest shock of her life..shivam was kissing her enemy divya..she was about to break down..but then she remembered her promise to her brother to never break down..she got the courage and went inside with a jerk..here swayam reached college and was asking for taani..one of her friend said that se went to the abandon class room and told him the direction..swayam headed towards that direction..and was about to go inside but wait..he should know whats going on out there so he remain at door..listening to their conversation..

As soon as taani entered with a bang shivam and divya broke the kiss and looked at the door and found taani fuming with anger..

Taani: what the f**k shivam how could you...how can you cheat me..??tumne aisa kyun kiya han..?? she shouted..

Shivam: oh come on taani..this is so normal..tum the most popular girl of the college jiska boyfriend me hun..fame to apne aap milti hai na..as simple as that..

Taani: what the hell..you are so cheap shivam..

Taani slapped shivam hard on his face,,the marks of her fingers were visible on his face..

Shivam: you bloody s**t how dare you..?

he holded her hairs tightly and was about to slap her when..

Someone: stop..!!!

Taani somehow freed herself and turned and got another shock..shivam was confused to see an unknown person in college stopping him..

Swayam: he moved towards taani holded her hand and dragged her behind him and..

Ok guys so here i end..it was an introduction chapter so please bear with it..

precap: shivam and swayam fight..

Please hit like and comment big..

Love..

~Niki~

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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

res/unres
nikzz bapz...
u know wat...its damn good..!!
i mean yar the 1st chap u just banged on..
u proved dat u r d best baby...
u just nailed it!!
starting from the first scene to the last..
brilliant... 👏
dat bloody cheevam...😡
bloddy jerk!!
he used her idiot...
anyways glad that swayam was there..
love swayam...
update soon...!!
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urgh shikha di hate u took my place..😡
but still i m 2nd...🥳
Edited by reet_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
interesting concept and awsm update
pls cont soon
Edited by khyati2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
RES/UNRES

*EDITED*

Awwwsum part nikz

Shivam is a jerk..

Reyam n boys part was hilarious..

Swayam concern towards taani was sweet

Waiting for shivam n swayam fight

Updt soon n PM me
Edited by -Sweet_Soumya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
huh!!oh shivam toh😡😡😡nd ilve swayam nd rey scene,loved it ,update soon as possible😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Dat shivam is bloody loser...anyways d 1st chapter is a success grt...loved it n ya update soon😉

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